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A Long Vernal Season

1: Prologue: Return

2: Chapter One: Hermione’s News

3: Chapter Two: An Unusual Invitation

4: Chapter Three: St. Giles Clinic for Magical Maladies

5: Chapter Four: Through the Looking-Glass

6: Chapter Five: Alternative Treatment

7: Chapter Six: Race Cars Go “Vroom”

8: Chapter Seven: Waxing

9: Chapter Eight: Business as Usual

10: Chapter Nine: A Delicate Phase

11: Chapter Ten: Jam Tarts

12: Chapter Eleven: Don’t Frighten the Firsties

13: Chapter Twelve: The Stages of Brewing

14: Chapter Thirteen: Breakfire

15: Chapter Fourteen: Of Ice Cream, Kittens, and Jet Planes

16: Chapter Fifteen: Bacon Butties and Baked Beans

17: Chapter Sixteen: A Sympathetic New Start

18: Chapter Seventeen: An Ambush for Minerva

19: Chapter Eighteen: A New Man

20: Chapter Nineteen: Of Scotch, Choices, and Ambiguity

21: Chapter Twenty: A Ghostly Halloween

22: Chapter Twenty-One: Fancy Dress

23: Chapter Twenty-Two: Not Onerous or Dreary

24: Chapter Twenty-Three: Collegiality

25: Chapter Twenty-Four: Dawn Light Reflected

26: Chapter Twenty-Five: Preoccupation

27: Chapter Twenty-Six: Laid to Rest

28: Chapter Twenty-Seven: ’Twas the Night Before the Night Before Christmas

29: Chapter Twenty-Eight: A Happy Birthday?

30: Chapter Twenty-Nine: A Tear Shed

31: Chapter Thirty: A Tour of the Past

32: Chapter Thirty-One: A Date with Hermione

33: Chapter Thirty-Two: Disquiet

34: Chapter Thirty-Three: At Spinner’s End

35: Chapter Thirty-Four: Uncertainty

36: Chapter Thirty-Five: Friendship

37: Chapter Thirty-Six: A Darkly Smouldering Magnetism

38: Chapter Thirty-Seven: An Exercise in Harmless Flirting

39: Chapter Thirty-Eight: Playing with Fire

40: Chapter Thirty-Nine: The Morning After

41: Chapter Forty: A Matter of Timing

42: Chapter Forty-One: A Fast Learner

43: Chapter Forty-Two: Confessions

44: Chapter Forty-Three: Distractions

45: Chapter Forty-Four: No Unmixed Pleasures

46: Chapter Forty-Five: An Esoteric Spell

47: Chapter Forty-Six: A Complicated Life

48: Chapter Forty-Seven: Exotic Concoctions

49: Chapter Forty-Eight: A Wager with the Headmistress

50: Chapter Forty-Nine: Normal Life

51: Chapter Fifty: A New Project

52: Chapter Fifty-One: Just a Fling?

53: Chapter Fifty-Two: Technique

54: Chapter Fifty-Three: Dinner at Delancie’s

55: Chapter Fifty-Four: Dangerous Consequences

56: Chapter Fifty-Five: Not Falling in Love

57: Chapter Fifty-Six: Out-of-Sorts

58: Chapter Fifty-Seven: Making it Through the Week

59: Chapter Fifty-Eight: The Barghest’s Howl

60: Chapter Fifty-Nine: Skimming the Lake

61: Chapter Sixty: Perfect Timing

62: Chapter Sixty-One: Late Night Advice

63: Chapter Sixty-Two: For Old Times’ Sake

64: Chapter Sixty-Three: A Little White Lie

65: Chapter Sixty-Four: The Goblin’s Knee

66: Chapter Sixty-Five: Test Flight

67: Chapter Sixty-Six: Broomstick Rodeo

68: Chapter Sixty-Seven: Some Muggle Business

69: Chapter Sixty-Eight: Bad Timing

70: Chapter Sixty-Nine: Moulting

71: Chapter Seventy: To Persist and Pursue

72: Chapter Seventy-One: Descent into Hades

73: Chapter Seventy-Two: Home

74: Chapter Seventy-Three: Renovation

75: Chapter Seventy-Four: Glimpse the Snape Family Past

76: Chapter Seventy-Five: A Wizard Not to be Crossed

77: Chapter Seventy-Six: Present Danger

78: Chapter Seventy-Seven: Paying Court

79: Chapter Seventy-Eight: Sifting the Past

80: Chapter Seventy-Nine: Atmosphere

81: Chapter Eighty: Finding Flowers and Family

82: Chapter Eighty-One: Lighting

83: Chapter Eighty-Two: An End to a Perfect Evening

84: Chapter Eighty-Three: Attack in a Blur

85: Chapter Eighty-Four: Suspicion

86: Chapter Eighty-Five: Jumping at Shadows

87: Chapter Eighty-Six: Remedying Magical Misfortune

88: Chapter Eighty-Seven: Brewing with the Master

89: Chapter Eighty-Eight: Back to Brewing

90: Chapter Eighty-Nine: A Cryptic Missive

91: Chapter Ninety: A Happy Decision

92: Chapter Ninety-One: A Proposal

93: Chapter Ninety-Two: Promising Start to a Holiday

94: Chapter Ninety-Three: Whetting the Appetite

95: Chapter Ninety-Four: The Rewards of Patience

96: Chapter Ninety-Five: Afternoon Games

97: Chapter Ninety-Six: An Unexpected Encounter

98: Chapter Ninety-Seven: Another Splash of Whiskey

99: Chapter Ninety-Eight: Confidences and Promises

100: Chapter Ninety-Nine: Memory Lane

101: Chapter One Hundred: Some Truth

102: Chapter One-Hundred One: Simply Severus

103: Chapter One-Hundred Two: Meeting Max

104: Chapter One Hundred-Three: Of Lilacs, of Love, and of Danger

105: Chapter One Hundred-Four: Party Games

106: Chapter One Hundred-Five: An Assignation

107: Chapter One Hundred-Six: Refuge

108: Chapter One Hundred-Seven: Reparation

109: Chapter One Hundred-Eight: The Greatest Slytherin

110: Chapter One Hundred-Nine: Vita Furtiva

111: Chapter One Hundred-Ten: Journey to Dun Torc

112: Chapter One Hundred-Eleven: An Accident Foretold

113: Chapter One Hundred-Twelve: Association

114: Chapter One Hundred-Thirteen: The Past Follows

115: Chapter One Hundred-Fourteen: Arithmantic Charms

116: Chapter One Hundred-Fifteen: Dead … or Alive?

117: Chapter One Hundred-Sixteen: The Tyree Estate

118: Chapter One Hundred-Seventeen: From the Primrose Cottage to the Shell Folly

A Long Vernal Season

MMADfan

1,058 Reviews   |   1,058 Ratings, 0 Likes, 88 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Drama Romance Alternate Universe Hogwarts Castle 652,726 Words 136 Chapters WIP
Albus Dumbledore Filius Flitwick Hermione Granger Minerva McGonagall Poppy Pomfrey Severus Snape Lucius Malfoy Pomona Sprout Original Character Other Canon Witch/Wizard Narcissa Malfoy Rubeus Hagrid Hogwarts Eileen (Prince) Snape Tobias Snape Draco Malfoy Professor Vector The Fat Friar Madam Rosmerta Alastor (Mad-Eye) Moody Firenze (Centaur) Professor Sinistra Name Withheld (surprise) Ginevra Weasley Arthur Weasley Wilhelmina Grubbly-Plank Harry Potter Fawkes Bellatrix Lestrange Peter Pettigrew Nymphadora Tonks Remus Lupin Sorting Hat

Severus Snape had believed that, for him, life after the Dark Lord was an impossibility, that his death was not merely justice, but necessity. He has survived, though, and now he must learn to live his new, unexpected life, and to find something beyond the narrow existence to which he was once bound. A Snape-centric post-war fic.

A Death’s Dominion sequel, but may stand alone. Not DH-compliant. DH-disregarded. Rated M for overall content. Much of it is "T," but the ratings rise to MA later for a reason, hence the switch to an M-rating for the earlier chapters. Watch the individual chapter summaries and author’s notes for ratings, warnings, and the characters appearing in that chapter.


Part One finds Severus dealing with some very immediate and dangerous consequences of his final confrontation with the Dark Lord more than three months before.

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Chapters (118)

Chapter 1: Prologue: Return

Chapter 2: Chapter One: Hermione’s News

Chapter 3: Chapter Two: An Unusual Invitation

Chapter 4: Chapter Three: St. Giles Clinic for Magical Maladies

Chapter 5: Chapter Four: Through the Looking-Glass

Chapter 6: Chapter Five: Alternative Treatment

Chapter 7: Chapter Six: Race Cars Go “Vroom”

Chapter 8: Chapter Seven: Waxing

Chapter 9: Chapter Eight: Business as Usual

Chapter 10: Chapter Nine: A Delicate Phase

Chapter 11: Chapter Ten: Jam Tarts

Chapter 12: Chapter Eleven: Don’t Frighten the Firsties

Chapter 13: Chapter Twelve: The Stages of Brewing

Chapter 14: Chapter Thirteen: Breakfire

Chapter 15: Chapter Fourteen: Of Ice Cream, Kittens, and Jet Planes

Chapter 16: Chapter Fifteen: Bacon Butties and Baked Beans

Chapter 17: Chapter Sixteen: A Sympathetic New Start

Chapter 18: Chapter Seventeen: An Ambush for Minerva

Chapter 19: Chapter Eighteen: A New Man

Chapter 20: Chapter Nineteen: Of Scotch, Choices, and Ambiguity

Chapter 21: Chapter Twenty: A Ghostly Halloween

Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty-One: Fancy Dress

Chapter 23: Chapter Twenty-Two: Not Onerous or Dreary

Chapter 24: Chapter Twenty-Three: Collegiality

Chapter 25: Chapter Twenty-Four: Dawn Light Reflected

Chapter 26: Chapter Twenty-Five: Preoccupation

Chapter 27: Chapter Twenty-Six: Laid to Rest

Chapter 28: Chapter Twenty-Seven: ’Twas the Night Before the Night Before Christmas

Chapter 29: Chapter Twenty-Eight: A Happy Birthday?

Chapter 30: Chapter Twenty-Nine: A Tear Shed

Chapter 31: Chapter Thirty: A Tour of the Past

Chapter 32: Chapter Thirty-One: A Date with Hermione

Chapter 33: Chapter Thirty-Two: Disquiet

Chapter 34: Chapter Thirty-Three: At Spinner’s End

Chapter 35: Chapter Thirty-Four: Uncertainty

Chapter 36: Chapter Thirty-Five: Friendship

Chapter 37: Chapter Thirty-Six: A Darkly Smouldering Magnetism

Chapter 38: Chapter Thirty-Seven: An Exercise in Harmless Flirting

Chapter 39: Chapter Thirty-Eight: Playing with Fire

Chapter 40: Chapter Thirty-Nine: The Morning After

Chapter 41: Chapter Forty: A Matter of Timing

Chapter 42: Chapter Forty-One: A Fast Learner

Chapter 43: Chapter Forty-Two: Confessions

Chapter 44: Chapter Forty-Three: Distractions

Chapter 45: Chapter Forty-Four: No Unmixed Pleasures

Chapter 46: Chapter Forty-Five: An Esoteric Spell

Chapter 47: Chapter Forty-Six: A Complicated Life

Chapter 48: Chapter Forty-Seven: Exotic Concoctions

Chapter 49: Chapter Forty-Eight: A Wager with the Headmistress

Chapter 50: Chapter Forty-Nine: Normal Life

Chapter 51: Chapter Fifty: A New Project

Chapter 52: Chapter Fifty-One: Just a Fling?

Chapter 53: Chapter Fifty-Two: Technique

Chapter 54: Chapter Fifty-Three: Dinner at Delancie’s

Chapter 55: Chapter Fifty-Four: Dangerous Consequences

Chapter 56: Chapter Fifty-Five: Not Falling in Love

Chapter 57: Chapter Fifty-Six: Out-of-Sorts

Chapter 58: Chapter Fifty-Seven: Making it Through the Week

Chapter 59: Chapter Fifty-Eight: The Barghest’s Howl

Chapter 60: Chapter Fifty-Nine: Skimming the Lake

Chapter 61: Chapter Sixty: Perfect Timing

Chapter 62: Chapter Sixty-One: Late Night Advice

Chapter 63: Chapter Sixty-Two: For Old Times’ Sake

Chapter 64: Chapter Sixty-Three: A Little White Lie

Chapter 65: Chapter Sixty-Four: The Goblin’s Knee

Chapter 66: Chapter Sixty-Five: Test Flight

Chapter 67: Chapter Sixty-Six: Broomstick Rodeo

Chapter 68: Chapter Sixty-Seven: Some Muggle Business

Chapter 69: Chapter Sixty-Eight: Bad Timing

Chapter 70: Chapter Sixty-Nine: Moulting

Chapter 71: Chapter Seventy: To Persist and Pursue

Chapter 72: Chapter Seventy-One: Descent into Hades

Chapter 73: Chapter Seventy-Two: Home

Chapter 74: Chapter Seventy-Three: Renovation

Chapter 75: Chapter Seventy-Four: Glimpse the Snape Family Past

Chapter 76: Chapter Seventy-Five: A Wizard Not to be Crossed

Chapter 77: Chapter Seventy-Six: Present Danger

Chapter 78: Chapter Seventy-Seven: Paying Court

Chapter 79: Chapter Seventy-Eight: Sifting the Past

Chapter 80: Chapter Seventy-Nine: Atmosphere

Chapter 81: Chapter Eighty: Finding Flowers and Family

Chapter 82: Chapter Eighty-One: Lighting

Chapter 83: Chapter Eighty-Two: An End to a Perfect Evening

Chapter 84: Chapter Eighty-Three: Attack in a Blur

Chapter 85: Chapter Eighty-Four: Suspicion

Chapter 86: Chapter Eighty-Five: Jumping at Shadows

Chapter 87: Chapter Eighty-Six: Remedying Magical Misfortune

Chapter 88: Chapter Eighty-Seven: Brewing with the Master

Chapter 89: Chapter Eighty-Eight: Back to Brewing

Chapter 90: Chapter Eighty-Nine: A Cryptic Missive

Chapter 91: Chapter Ninety: A Happy Decision

Chapter 92: Chapter Ninety-One: A Proposal

Chapter 93: Chapter Ninety-Two: Promising Start to a Holiday

Chapter 94: Chapter Ninety-Three: Whetting the Appetite

Chapter 95: Chapter Ninety-Four: The Rewards of Patience

Chapter 96: Chapter Ninety-Five: Afternoon Games

Chapter 97: Chapter Ninety-Six: An Unexpected Encounter

Chapter 98: Chapter Ninety-Seven: Another Splash of Whiskey

Chapter 99: Chapter Ninety-Eight: Confidences and Promises

Chapter 100: Chapter Ninety-Nine: Memory Lane

Chapter 101: Chapter One Hundred: Some Truth

Chapter 102: Chapter One-Hundred One: Simply Severus

Chapter 103: Chapter One-Hundred Two: Meeting Max

Chapter 104: Chapter One Hundred-Three: Of Lilacs, of Love, and of Danger

Chapter 105: Chapter One Hundred-Four: Party Games

Chapter 106: Chapter One Hundred-Five: An Assignation

Chapter 107: Chapter One Hundred-Six: Refuge

Chapter 108: Chapter One Hundred-Seven: Reparation

Chapter 109: Chapter One Hundred-Eight: The Greatest Slytherin

Chapter 110: Chapter One Hundred-Nine: Vita Furtiva

Chapter 111: Chapter One Hundred-Ten: Journey to Dun Torc

Chapter 112: Chapter One Hundred-Eleven: An Accident Foretold

Chapter 113: Chapter One Hundred-Twelve: Association

Chapter 114: Chapter One Hundred-Thirteen: The Past Follows

Chapter 115: Chapter One Hundred-Fourteen: Arithmantic Charms

Chapter 116: Chapter One Hundred-Fifteen: Dead … or Alive?

Chapter 117: Chapter One Hundred-Sixteen: The Tyree Estate

Chapter 118: Chapter One Hundred-Seventeen: From the Primrose Cottage to the Shell Folly


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10/10

Riposto

Severus's conversation with Sinistra's portrait and his speech at the dedication were very touching. I don't remember that part of DD and would like to go back and re-read it now. You captured the centaurs' odd sort of indirect conversational style nicely, and I feel for Firenze's sadness and longing for a loved one lost. It makes some sense that Sinistra, with her love and knowledge of astronomy, would connect on a personal level with Firenze. What has Severus been up to in the Forest? What dead is he talking to, and why is he seeking his peace there?? If this is something from DD, I totally don't remember. Or are you just teasing us with a new mystery?

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Just teasin' ya! LOL! But the mystery won't last long -- the next chapter will answer it for you. It is, however, rooted in events in DD.Glad you liked Firenze's centaur speech. :)The scene in DD w/ Firenze and Sinistra is at the end of the chapter 25, "At Elbow and Foot." The mention of Sinistra and Severus taking care of the Slytherins during the extraordinary curfew occurs in 27, "Shall not die windily," about 2/3 of the way through. A lot happens in that chapter, so I'll find it and copy it here.Found it:"Lunch in Slytherin House was peculiar. Again, Zabini and his group sat together and were nearly totally silent, and there was a clear distance between Zabini’s Slytherins and the rest of the House. It was as though they existed in completely different spaces, neither group acknowledging the existence of the other. Sinistra had joined him in his baby-sitting duties, and he was careful to thank her, and from her smile, he believed that she knew he was thanking her for more than just helping him watch the Slytherins eat their lunch."

0/10

oenthusiast

What a place to stop. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

A teeny, tiny bit of a cliffie can be good for the soul, don't you think? Muwahaha! (That's my attempt at an evil laugh. I'm not very experienced! lol!)I hope to have the next chapter up sometime early next week, so hopefully the suspense won't be too bad!Thanks for the review,

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

! Glad you liked the chapter!

10/10

esoterica1693

I chose a random chapter somewhere right before Severus's collapse to start my re-read of this and was reminded why I hadn't done so before...I couldn't stop w/ just one chapter!  On the second time through I can spot details I missed, or gave insufficient attention, the first time, like Minerva's and Melina's exchanges.  Will have to limit my visits to this site til after my major exams in January . . . .

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Hi, esoterica! Have fun studying for your exams!I'm glad you enjoyed your reread of some of the first chapters, and I hope you can schedule occasional breaks for a chapter or two now and then -- but not so much as to interfere with your studying!Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked Minerva and Melina's exchanges. Later!

10/10

sinbad

Interesting chapter.  I liked how you brought the portrait to life as it were.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Thanks!

10/10

PureBlood Proud

Real life caused me to get 4 chapters behind and now that I am caught up I can’t wait for more.  I love the way Snape is evolving to enjoy true friendships.  Longing for the contact even thought he is still a bit wrong footed at times it’s a growth process that gets glossed over by a lot of people.  Now I’m waiting with baited breath for the next chapter.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Hi! I'm glad you found time to catch up and enjoyed it! I'm glad you like the way that Severus is evolving in fits and starts. He'll have some hiccups and some jump-starts and some detours along the way, but he'll keep moving forward.I will likely post the next chapter later today. I just have to go over it one last time before I post it.Thanks for the review!

0/10

gurlimargrethe

This was so beatiful and sad and also optimistic. I loved how you wrote Firenze ( and I am so in love with your Severus - in all your stories)

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Oh, thank you so much! I'm very glad you liked it. And, of course, that you liked the way I wrote Firenze. I wanted to get him "right." I'm happy you're in love with this Severus! <*insert blushing emoticon here!*>Thanks for the review!

10/10

Riposto

Was it really only a few chapters ago that I was wishing Severus could be comfortable engaging in pleasant conversation? I know it's more difficult in a party situation, but I think it's kinda cute that he's marvelling at the pleasure of just having a normal, pleasant conversation with his collegues. In giving and receiving courtesy. And Moody! That conversation might have been harder for him than for Severus. It takes a certain kind of courage to sincerely apologize for the wrong you've done another, and with no expectation that the apology will be accepted or even received. Given that Severus has been on the wrong side of the wand himself, I wonder if he appreciates the parallel? I'm sure he was too angry and surprised to respond, but I wonder if he will get past it and develop some kind of relationship with Mad Eye?

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

His life was so messed up for so long, even just ordinary conversation becomes meaningful for him, you're right. It's very hard to apologize for something that was as terribly wrong as what Moody did to Severus, you're right about that, too. As to Severus and whether he appreciates the parallel, I don't think he can just yet. Moody and Severus have more in common than either would likely recognize themselves at this point, butperhaps they might develop some kind of relationship at some time in the future -- stranger things have happened, after all! Just look at Severus & Gareth's friendship. :)Thanks for the review! Glad you enjoyed the chapter!

10/10

sinbad

I'm glad Severus is starting to come around.  He does deserve better than what he was given by life.  The war is over, time to relax and have some fun.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Yes, he does deserve better, and he's been earning it. He has his own hurdles to overcome, but he does have the freedom to do so now.Thanks!

0/10

wyndnfyr

:)  those two REALLY need to move on with their little romance.  like flirting.  severus snape flirting!!  lol that would be something to see :D

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Severus Snape learning to flirt -- glad you'd like to see that! LOL! Thanks for reviewing!

0/10

wyndnfyr

somehow i knew he would win if the teachers were voted on. :D  its the blue eyes.  gotta be lol

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

The blue eyes sure couldn't have hurt his chances! ;)Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks!

10/10

mimmom

I can imagine Severus being at loose ends after spying for so many years.I'm still enjoying this story!

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Thanks! I'm glad. :-)

8/10

LinZE

fab as always!and as for Mr Brett - the definative holmes unquestioningly. :)thanks as always for sharing Linds

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Thanks you.

10/10

sinbad

I really liked the teen aged server with the hard luck story.  He added depth and interest to the chapter.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

I'm glad you liked O'Fallon -- we get more references to him much later on in the story, so I'm glad you noticed him! I am also glad you though it added some depth to the scene!It's fun, too, I think, to see the way that Severus interacts with the various different kinds of characters, so I like giving him new opportunities to run into different sorts of people! haha!Thanks for the review!

10/10

Riposto

Snape's Slytherins have their own notepaper and logo? There must be some interesting things going on behind the scenes, there. I hope we get to find out more about it.

Severus seemed to enjoy drawing out his story of the costume party, giving his audience little snippets of information so they would ask him for more. I wonder if his jealousy over Hermione's and Gareth's playfulness might inspire him to try a little playfulness, himself?

The duelling with Flitwick sounds fun. I'm looking forward to it!

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

He did enjoy having an audience to appreciate his having won, and he was also feeling oddly shy about admitting that he had enjoyed winning, though he did. Severus's  ability to engage in playfulness will most definitely improve!If I ever get around to it, I have a Blaise Zabini, many years post-Hogwarts story rattling around in my head. He is off doing his thing in the wizarding word, building his sphere of influence and taking advantage of whatever he can to do that -- just in an ambitious way, not in a "Dark" way. Don't know if that will ever happen, though. Ah, yes, duelling with Filius! Fun fun! Thanks for the review!

Response from Riposto (Reviewer)

"Hufflepuff and Slytherin, what a combination, he thought. He couldn’t imagine what had drawn the two to each other, unless his wife enjoyed his devotion and knew she wouldn’t have to work too hard for it." While waiting for you to finish whatever you're doing in RL and post Ch 78, I'm re-reading the story to look for all the, um, significant events I've forgotton or missed, and I had to laugh at this line. Wouldn't have to work too hard for it? LOL.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

I'm glad you had a nice laugh there! That is one of the little things that totally slips by on first reading -- quite understandably so! Glad you're enjoying the re-read! RL should let me post sometime the last week of May, I hope! (I'm mostly having fun. :-))

9/10

LinZE

I have particularly enjoyed the lead up to this party.  The oppertunity presented in fancy dress is an amazing one but is often done horribly badly.  This was, however, as perfectly pitched as always.oh - and Jamie Brett as Sherlock Holmes(!)roflit's all about the in jokes :)hope you're well and that you get the chance to continue to post oftenLinds

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Jeremy Brett is my favorite Holmes, so back in DD, I almost named the Ravenclaw "Jeremy Brett," but I changed it a bit so I could give Jamie Brett a bit of independence from his namesake! I'm glad you caught the reference. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. It was fun to write.Life is okay, and I'm doing pretty well -- I hope I'll be able to post again soon.

10/10

sinbad

I think the party turned out quite well.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Severus at least didn't have a miserable time! LOL! Thanks for the review! :)

10/10

sinbad

Lots of fun reading this chapter, but I think I reviewed twice...

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

You reviewed "Fancy Dress," but not "Ghostly Halloween," so you didn't review twice, so no worries! Thanks!

10/10

HogwartsDuo

Another wonderful chapter. It's fun to hear the costume choices of the staff and students. Severus had me cracking up with his "Gods, save me from the munchkins" line. I can hear him saying that under his breath. Suzy really is a hoot and she's got it BAD!!!Too bad Albus didn't win the contest, but if he couldn't then I'm happy Severus did. I'm very pleased Albus and Minerva were able to share the last dance and based on what happened in DD, I'm sure Poppy didn't mind sharing dances with Albus, wink wink!

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Glad you liked that! Nope, Poppy didn't mind dancing with Albus at all. He didn't mind, either! Poor Severus, with his adoring miniature "Spicy Girl" -- glad you enjoyed that!It was almost a tie between Albus and Severus, but given Severus's usual, unvarying black and white look and the fact that he actually was in something that was a little bit of a stretch for him, he probably deserved to win. Besides, he needed it more than Albus would. Thanks for the review!

Response from HogwartsDuo (Reviewer)

Hmmm, somehow I don't think that Poppy and Albus enjoyed the dance in quite the same way, if ya know what I mean. lol

0/10

WriterMerrin

Ooo, I'm glad Severus is still thinking about Hermione.  I'm going to have to ration myself to a couple of chapters of this per day or I'll get nothing done at all.And, as always, your Minerva is lovely.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Yes, no trying to read it all at once! You'll enjoy it just as much in smaller servings and you'll still get stuff done!I'm glad you like Minerva here. She's in the story a lot, so you'll see more of her.Thanks for reviewing! It's good to see you again!

0/10

gurlimargrethe

rapidly falling arches, oh my, poor man. Now I worry how Severus will do all his patrolling with those arches fallíng. It is nice to follow Severus' gradually enjoying life, the women, the food and even some dance. Lovely and very funny chapter

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Oh, yes, patrolling would be a problem, wouldn't it? lol! Guess he'll have to seek medical attention! Glad you enjoyed Severus's foray into socibility! Thanks for reviewing!

10/10

Riposto

Poor awkward, repressed, Severus! Only he would find dancing with friends and collegues so painful. I'm not sure if it was funny or just very sad that he cannot tolerate any hint of sexuality. Well, at least Minerva made him practice his interpersonal skills, and didn't let him skulk in the corners. Hopefully it will get easier for him over time, and he will find it perfectly natural to engage in pleasant conversation at parties and to ask witches to dance!Little Suzie is an adorable chatterbox. I could picture her in my mind wobbling around in her Spicy Girls costume and making eyes at her hero.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Severus does make a breakthrough in his level of comfort with sexuality/sensuality, butafter he's gotten over a few other hurdles first.Yes, little Suzie just jabbers on and gazes adoringly at Severus! haha! Glad you like her!Thanks for reviewing!

10/10

HogwartsDuo

This was an especially fun chapter to read. It was great to hear what each person had chosen as their costume. And I looved the bit about Minerva giving Albus a private dance party as Mata Hari. Let's hope he doesn't have the same problem getting out of his costume as he did getting into it. tee hee. Then again, the banishing charm is useful from time to time. lolWow! I can't believe Francis Flint is a ghost. He was always too good for Valerianna, not that that's saying much. It's so sad, though, that he's waited for her for twenty years and he knew nothing of what happened. Can't wait for the next chapter to be posted!

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter -- and the prospect of Minerva's little private party! lolYes, he was, and she did need him, though she learned too late that sometimes, her push-push-push was wrong, and that she should have listened to Francis. Poor Francis!Thanks for the review!

0/10

wyndnfyr

you DID turn his eyes blue!! yay!  and i never would have thought of the tan.  i really need to read R.A.M.  there are so many references to it that its piqued my interest. :D

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Yeppers! Blue-eyed Snape! Who would have thunk it? LOL!Resolving a Misunderstanding is the first fic I wrote, and second-best fic (after DD), IMO, and it's still my overall favorite, but it's long. However, I know that a lot of people enjoyed it, and there's a ton of backstory for all my fics in it. And you get to see Melina as a little girl and a young woman. :D I think you would probably enjoy it.

10/10

Amathya

Love the various costumes (and on whom they were paired) and, as always, your adept character interactions; every part has been a very pleasurable read! I also really liked Severus' interactions with Vector; it seemed inevitable that, now that things have eased for Severus, he'd experience some kind of desire, and it's nice to see that return, despite past circumstances. Always looking forward to more :)

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Thank you! This story really is about the character interactions and relationships and such, which is nice for me, since I enjoy writing dialogue. It was fun coming up with the costumes for everyone.Yep, good that some of Severus's libido is returning! Let's see where that goes! lolThanks for the review! More will be forthcoming!

0/10

wyndnfyr

T.E. Lawrence?  i guess he could look like him, but the eyes are all wrong.  will he glamour them blue?  :D  lol severus in a sheik.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Yeah, he knows that there's something not quite right with the look, but he gets some help with that. :)Thanks for the review!

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