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A Long Vernal Season

1: Prologue: Return

2: Chapter One: Hermione’s News

3: Chapter Two: An Unusual Invitation

4: Chapter Three: St. Giles Clinic for Magical Maladies

5: Chapter Four: Through the Looking-Glass

6: Chapter Five: Alternative Treatment

7: Chapter Six: Race Cars Go “Vroom”

8: Chapter Seven: Waxing

9: Chapter Eight: Business as Usual

10: Chapter Nine: A Delicate Phase

11: Chapter Ten: Jam Tarts

12: Chapter Eleven: Don’t Frighten the Firsties

13: Chapter Twelve: The Stages of Brewing

14: Chapter Thirteen: Breakfire

15: Chapter Fourteen: Of Ice Cream, Kittens, and Jet Planes

16: Chapter Fifteen: Bacon Butties and Baked Beans

17: Chapter Sixteen: A Sympathetic New Start

18: Chapter Seventeen: An Ambush for Minerva

19: Chapter Eighteen: A New Man

20: Chapter Nineteen: Of Scotch, Choices, and Ambiguity

21: Chapter Twenty: A Ghostly Halloween

22: Chapter Twenty-One: Fancy Dress

23: Chapter Twenty-Two: Not Onerous or Dreary

24: Chapter Twenty-Three: Collegiality

25: Chapter Twenty-Four: Dawn Light Reflected

26: Chapter Twenty-Five: Preoccupation

27: Chapter Twenty-Six: Laid to Rest

28: Chapter Twenty-Seven: ’Twas the Night Before the Night Before Christmas

29: Chapter Twenty-Eight: A Happy Birthday?

30: Chapter Twenty-Nine: A Tear Shed

31: Chapter Thirty: A Tour of the Past

32: Chapter Thirty-One: A Date with Hermione

33: Chapter Thirty-Two: Disquiet

34: Chapter Thirty-Three: At Spinner’s End

35: Chapter Thirty-Four: Uncertainty

36: Chapter Thirty-Five: Friendship

37: Chapter Thirty-Six: A Darkly Smouldering Magnetism

38: Chapter Thirty-Seven: An Exercise in Harmless Flirting

39: Chapter Thirty-Eight: Playing with Fire

40: Chapter Thirty-Nine: The Morning After

41: Chapter Forty: A Matter of Timing

42: Chapter Forty-One: A Fast Learner

43: Chapter Forty-Two: Confessions

44: Chapter Forty-Three: Distractions

45: Chapter Forty-Four: No Unmixed Pleasures

46: Chapter Forty-Five: An Esoteric Spell

47: Chapter Forty-Six: A Complicated Life

48: Chapter Forty-Seven: Exotic Concoctions

49: Chapter Forty-Eight: A Wager with the Headmistress

50: Chapter Forty-Nine: Normal Life

51: Chapter Fifty: A New Project

52: Chapter Fifty-One: Just a Fling?

53: Chapter Fifty-Two: Technique

54: Chapter Fifty-Three: Dinner at Delancie’s

55: Chapter Fifty-Four: Dangerous Consequences

56: Chapter Fifty-Five: Not Falling in Love

57: Chapter Fifty-Six: Out-of-Sorts

58: Chapter Fifty-Seven: Making it Through the Week

59: Chapter Fifty-Eight: The Barghest’s Howl

60: Chapter Fifty-Nine: Skimming the Lake

61: Chapter Sixty: Perfect Timing

62: Chapter Sixty-One: Late Night Advice

63: Chapter Sixty-Two: For Old Times’ Sake

64: Chapter Sixty-Three: A Little White Lie

65: Chapter Sixty-Four: The Goblin’s Knee

66: Chapter Sixty-Five: Test Flight

67: Chapter Sixty-Six: Broomstick Rodeo

68: Chapter Sixty-Seven: Some Muggle Business

69: Chapter Sixty-Eight: Bad Timing

70: Chapter Sixty-Nine: Moulting

71: Chapter Seventy: To Persist and Pursue

72: Chapter Seventy-One: Descent into Hades

73: Chapter Seventy-Two: Home

74: Chapter Seventy-Three: Renovation

75: Chapter Seventy-Four: Glimpse the Snape Family Past

76: Chapter Seventy-Five: A Wizard Not to be Crossed

77: Chapter Seventy-Six: Present Danger

78: Chapter Seventy-Seven: Paying Court

79: Chapter Seventy-Eight: Sifting the Past

80: Chapter Seventy-Nine: Atmosphere

81: Chapter Eighty: Finding Flowers and Family

82: Chapter Eighty-One: Lighting

83: Chapter Eighty-Two: An End to a Perfect Evening

84: Chapter Eighty-Three: Attack in a Blur

85: Chapter Eighty-Four: Suspicion

86: Chapter Eighty-Five: Jumping at Shadows

87: Chapter Eighty-Six: Remedying Magical Misfortune

88: Chapter Eighty-Seven: Brewing with the Master

89: Chapter Eighty-Eight: Back to Brewing

90: Chapter Eighty-Nine: A Cryptic Missive

91: Chapter Ninety: A Happy Decision

92: Chapter Ninety-One: A Proposal

93: Chapter Ninety-Two: Promising Start to a Holiday

94: Chapter Ninety-Three: Whetting the Appetite

95: Chapter Ninety-Four: The Rewards of Patience

96: Chapter Ninety-Five: Afternoon Games

97: Chapter Ninety-Six: An Unexpected Encounter

98: Chapter Ninety-Seven: Another Splash of Whiskey

99: Chapter Ninety-Eight: Confidences and Promises

100: Chapter Ninety-Nine: Memory Lane

101: Chapter One Hundred: Some Truth

102: Chapter One-Hundred One: Simply Severus

103: Chapter One-Hundred Two: Meeting Max

104: Chapter One Hundred-Three: Of Lilacs, of Love, and of Danger

105: Chapter One Hundred-Four: Party Games

106: Chapter One Hundred-Five: An Assignation

107: Chapter One Hundred-Six: Refuge

108: Chapter One Hundred-Seven: Reparation

109: Chapter One Hundred-Eight: The Greatest Slytherin

110: Chapter One Hundred-Nine: Vita Furtiva

111: Chapter One Hundred-Ten: Journey to Dun Torc

112: Chapter One Hundred-Eleven: An Accident Foretold

113: Chapter One Hundred-Twelve: Association

114: Chapter One Hundred-Thirteen: The Past Follows

115: Chapter One Hundred-Fourteen: Arithmantic Charms

116: Chapter One Hundred-Fifteen: Dead … or Alive?

117: Chapter One Hundred-Sixteen: The Tyree Estate

118: Chapter One Hundred-Seventeen: From the Primrose Cottage to the Shell Folly

A Long Vernal Season

MMADfan

1,058 Reviews   |   1,058 Ratings, 0 Likes, 88 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Drama Romance Alternate Universe Hogwarts Castle 652,726 Words 136 Chapters WIP
Albus Dumbledore Filius Flitwick Hermione Granger Minerva McGonagall Poppy Pomfrey Severus Snape Lucius Malfoy Pomona Sprout Original Character Other Canon Witch/Wizard Narcissa Malfoy Rubeus Hagrid Hogwarts Eileen (Prince) Snape Tobias Snape Draco Malfoy Professor Vector The Fat Friar Madam Rosmerta Alastor (Mad-Eye) Moody Firenze (Centaur) Professor Sinistra Name Withheld (surprise) Ginevra Weasley Arthur Weasley Wilhelmina Grubbly-Plank Harry Potter Fawkes Bellatrix Lestrange Peter Pettigrew Nymphadora Tonks Remus Lupin Sorting Hat

Severus Snape had believed that, for him, life after the Dark Lord was an impossibility, that his death was not merely justice, but necessity. He has survived, though, and now he must learn to live his new, unexpected life, and to find something beyond the narrow existence to which he was once bound. A Snape-centric post-war fic.

A Death’s Dominion sequel, but may stand alone. Not DH-compliant. DH-disregarded. Rated M for overall content. Much of it is "T," but the ratings rise to MA later for a reason, hence the switch to an M-rating for the earlier chapters. Watch the individual chapter summaries and author’s notes for ratings, warnings, and the characters appearing in that chapter.


Part One finds Severus dealing with some very immediate and dangerous consequences of his final confrontation with the Dark Lord more than three months before.

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Chapters (118)

Chapter 1: Prologue: Return

Chapter 2: Chapter One: Hermione’s News

Chapter 3: Chapter Two: An Unusual Invitation

Chapter 4: Chapter Three: St. Giles Clinic for Magical Maladies

Chapter 5: Chapter Four: Through the Looking-Glass

Chapter 6: Chapter Five: Alternative Treatment

Chapter 7: Chapter Six: Race Cars Go “Vroom”

Chapter 8: Chapter Seven: Waxing

Chapter 9: Chapter Eight: Business as Usual

Chapter 10: Chapter Nine: A Delicate Phase

Chapter 11: Chapter Ten: Jam Tarts

Chapter 12: Chapter Eleven: Don’t Frighten the Firsties

Chapter 13: Chapter Twelve: The Stages of Brewing

Chapter 14: Chapter Thirteen: Breakfire

Chapter 15: Chapter Fourteen: Of Ice Cream, Kittens, and Jet Planes

Chapter 16: Chapter Fifteen: Bacon Butties and Baked Beans

Chapter 17: Chapter Sixteen: A Sympathetic New Start

Chapter 18: Chapter Seventeen: An Ambush for Minerva

Chapter 19: Chapter Eighteen: A New Man

Chapter 20: Chapter Nineteen: Of Scotch, Choices, and Ambiguity

Chapter 21: Chapter Twenty: A Ghostly Halloween

Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty-One: Fancy Dress

Chapter 23: Chapter Twenty-Two: Not Onerous or Dreary

Chapter 24: Chapter Twenty-Three: Collegiality

Chapter 25: Chapter Twenty-Four: Dawn Light Reflected

Chapter 26: Chapter Twenty-Five: Preoccupation

Chapter 27: Chapter Twenty-Six: Laid to Rest

Chapter 28: Chapter Twenty-Seven: ’Twas the Night Before the Night Before Christmas

Chapter 29: Chapter Twenty-Eight: A Happy Birthday?

Chapter 30: Chapter Twenty-Nine: A Tear Shed

Chapter 31: Chapter Thirty: A Tour of the Past

Chapter 32: Chapter Thirty-One: A Date with Hermione

Chapter 33: Chapter Thirty-Two: Disquiet

Chapter 34: Chapter Thirty-Three: At Spinner’s End

Chapter 35: Chapter Thirty-Four: Uncertainty

Chapter 36: Chapter Thirty-Five: Friendship

Chapter 37: Chapter Thirty-Six: A Darkly Smouldering Magnetism

Chapter 38: Chapter Thirty-Seven: An Exercise in Harmless Flirting

Chapter 39: Chapter Thirty-Eight: Playing with Fire

Chapter 40: Chapter Thirty-Nine: The Morning After

Chapter 41: Chapter Forty: A Matter of Timing

Chapter 42: Chapter Forty-One: A Fast Learner

Chapter 43: Chapter Forty-Two: Confessions

Chapter 44: Chapter Forty-Three: Distractions

Chapter 45: Chapter Forty-Four: No Unmixed Pleasures

Chapter 46: Chapter Forty-Five: An Esoteric Spell

Chapter 47: Chapter Forty-Six: A Complicated Life

Chapter 48: Chapter Forty-Seven: Exotic Concoctions

Chapter 49: Chapter Forty-Eight: A Wager with the Headmistress

Chapter 50: Chapter Forty-Nine: Normal Life

Chapter 51: Chapter Fifty: A New Project

Chapter 52: Chapter Fifty-One: Just a Fling?

Chapter 53: Chapter Fifty-Two: Technique

Chapter 54: Chapter Fifty-Three: Dinner at Delancie’s

Chapter 55: Chapter Fifty-Four: Dangerous Consequences

Chapter 56: Chapter Fifty-Five: Not Falling in Love

Chapter 57: Chapter Fifty-Six: Out-of-Sorts

Chapter 58: Chapter Fifty-Seven: Making it Through the Week

Chapter 59: Chapter Fifty-Eight: The Barghest’s Howl

Chapter 60: Chapter Fifty-Nine: Skimming the Lake

Chapter 61: Chapter Sixty: Perfect Timing

Chapter 62: Chapter Sixty-One: Late Night Advice

Chapter 63: Chapter Sixty-Two: For Old Times’ Sake

Chapter 64: Chapter Sixty-Three: A Little White Lie

Chapter 65: Chapter Sixty-Four: The Goblin’s Knee

Chapter 66: Chapter Sixty-Five: Test Flight

Chapter 67: Chapter Sixty-Six: Broomstick Rodeo

Chapter 68: Chapter Sixty-Seven: Some Muggle Business

Chapter 69: Chapter Sixty-Eight: Bad Timing

Chapter 70: Chapter Sixty-Nine: Moulting

Chapter 71: Chapter Seventy: To Persist and Pursue

Chapter 72: Chapter Seventy-One: Descent into Hades

Chapter 73: Chapter Seventy-Two: Home

Chapter 74: Chapter Seventy-Three: Renovation

Chapter 75: Chapter Seventy-Four: Glimpse the Snape Family Past

Chapter 76: Chapter Seventy-Five: A Wizard Not to be Crossed

Chapter 77: Chapter Seventy-Six: Present Danger

Chapter 78: Chapter Seventy-Seven: Paying Court

Chapter 79: Chapter Seventy-Eight: Sifting the Past

Chapter 80: Chapter Seventy-Nine: Atmosphere

Chapter 81: Chapter Eighty: Finding Flowers and Family

Chapter 82: Chapter Eighty-One: Lighting

Chapter 83: Chapter Eighty-Two: An End to a Perfect Evening

Chapter 84: Chapter Eighty-Three: Attack in a Blur

Chapter 85: Chapter Eighty-Four: Suspicion

Chapter 86: Chapter Eighty-Five: Jumping at Shadows

Chapter 87: Chapter Eighty-Six: Remedying Magical Misfortune

Chapter 88: Chapter Eighty-Seven: Brewing with the Master

Chapter 89: Chapter Eighty-Eight: Back to Brewing

Chapter 90: Chapter Eighty-Nine: A Cryptic Missive

Chapter 91: Chapter Ninety: A Happy Decision

Chapter 92: Chapter Ninety-One: A Proposal

Chapter 93: Chapter Ninety-Two: Promising Start to a Holiday

Chapter 94: Chapter Ninety-Three: Whetting the Appetite

Chapter 95: Chapter Ninety-Four: The Rewards of Patience

Chapter 96: Chapter Ninety-Five: Afternoon Games

Chapter 97: Chapter Ninety-Six: An Unexpected Encounter

Chapter 98: Chapter Ninety-Seven: Another Splash of Whiskey

Chapter 99: Chapter Ninety-Eight: Confidences and Promises

Chapter 100: Chapter Ninety-Nine: Memory Lane

Chapter 101: Chapter One Hundred: Some Truth

Chapter 102: Chapter One-Hundred One: Simply Severus

Chapter 103: Chapter One-Hundred Two: Meeting Max

Chapter 104: Chapter One Hundred-Three: Of Lilacs, of Love, and of Danger

Chapter 105: Chapter One Hundred-Four: Party Games

Chapter 106: Chapter One Hundred-Five: An Assignation

Chapter 107: Chapter One Hundred-Six: Refuge

Chapter 108: Chapter One Hundred-Seven: Reparation

Chapter 109: Chapter One Hundred-Eight: The Greatest Slytherin

Chapter 110: Chapter One Hundred-Nine: Vita Furtiva

Chapter 111: Chapter One Hundred-Ten: Journey to Dun Torc

Chapter 112: Chapter One Hundred-Eleven: An Accident Foretold

Chapter 113: Chapter One Hundred-Twelve: Association

Chapter 114: Chapter One Hundred-Thirteen: The Past Follows

Chapter 115: Chapter One Hundred-Fourteen: Arithmantic Charms

Chapter 116: Chapter One Hundred-Fifteen: Dead … or Alive?

Chapter 117: Chapter One Hundred-Sixteen: The Tyree Estate

Chapter 118: Chapter One Hundred-Seventeen: From the Primrose Cottage to the Shell Folly


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10/10

sinbad

Interesting, I'm glad he realized that Hermione won't hang around forever.  Let's hope he secures his relationship with her.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

I'm sure that Severus's foray into socializing and dating will do him a lot of good. He certainly is realizing that he needs to take advantage of opportunities and not let himself fall back into old patterns of behavior -- and certainly, he's trying to appreciate the people in his life in a way that he didn't before. A lesson learned, he thought, too late, but now he has a second chance in this new life he has.Thanks for the review!

10/10

mimmom

Wow, every chapter has been enjoyable.  I love all of Snapes internal monologue and his fears, anxieties, hopes.  Real people carry on these kinds of conversations wtih themselves when trying to process confusing human interactions so Snape feels very real to me here.  He wants so badly to just live a normal life and he wants to be liked.  It seems a simple thing but for Snape life is always complicated.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

For Severus, everything is much more confusing, poor fellow. I'm glad that you liked the chapter and found it seemed real to you! Thanks for reviewing!

10/10

esmelle

Wow what a chapter!  I'm thinking Gareth is going to be put in his place by his mother.  I imagine that was quite an interesting conversation.  However I think having Severus and Gertrude meeting again will be beneficial for them both and they'll admit it at least to themselves if no one else.  Poor Severus, for someone who isn't used to dealing with emotions he was put through the wringer today. Luckily the day ended on a positive note with a date with Hermione.  Just a final random thought, I don't like those inheritance laws that give only Alroy the Gamp Estate.  It would seem much more fair to me that he, Aine, Robert and Gareth split it evenly.     

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

It was done by will -- they didn't die intestate. Aine gets a lot of property in Ireland, and what Gareth gets is better than anything the rest of them get, plus he has the house in Hogsmeade. Besides, keep breaking up a piece of land, and nothing's left after a few generations. LOL!I'm glad you liked the chapter! Gertrude is not exactly the most communicative person in the world, so what Gareth tells Severus she said to him was it (that's in the next chapter to be posted :-)). You're right -- it's good for them both, on some level. Thanks for the review!

10/10

makaem

Neat story.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Thank you very much. I'm glad you like it.

10/10

sinbad

I really enjoyed that party.  It sounded great and was so descriptive!

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Thanks,

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

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10/10

wyndnfyr

severus willingly kissing people and not getting super upset about it? he really HAS changed!  :Dand that was sweet of him at the end to make sure albus and minerva had privacy

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Well, he didn't want to look like the odd man out and get teased about it, nor did he want to be suspected as the culprit playing with the mistletoe, so that helped. Minerva also picked two "safe" witches -- ones who were already safely paired up with someone else, and ones who were older and who viewed Severus kindly. Although Pomona occasionally has foot-in-mouth syndrome, she is fond of Severus. She also just likes the mistletoe game! lol! Having to kiss Helena in front of all those people might have given Severus a panic attack, if not a heart attack! Poor boy!Severus is becoming more thoughtful and sensitive toward other people, not just about his own needs, though it comes in fits and starts.

10/10

wyndnfyr

im glad they got it all straightened out.  i can see how such a worry could turn into despair at never finding out the truth.  i had never thought of severus as suicidal but now that i think about it, i wonder how i never thought of it before.  it just seems to fit him so perfectly....or rather, it DID fit him once upon a time.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Yes, it did at points in his life. Let's hope it never gets to that point again!Severus was in danger of going backwards instead of forwards, despite Firenze's warning. Good thing that Minerva stepped in and Dumbledore had a light go on! Thanks!

10/10

Amathya

Now who on earth would want to avoid any upcoming chapters/parts? Certainly not me :) Very happy to see this update, it's helping me through my psych midterm studying. Always an enjoyable read, whether emotive, amusing, or inspiring. I'll admit, I was hoping for a bit more sexual tension for Severus, but Minerva kept her promise, all for the best no doubt :) too much "festivity" in one evening may not a happy Severus make. Looking forward to the birthday!

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Maybe some people prefer one kind of suspense to another -- the suspense of knowing the chapter titles and characters might not be the same for someone else, who prefers having no clue at all about what might be coming up! lol!Don't worry, *spoilerish bit here*: Severus will find PLENTY of sexual tension all around him in parts 3 & 4, and it will confuse the hell out of him! *smirk* It just comes at him from all corners.Good luck w/ your midterms! Have fun with psych!The birthday will be coming up pretty soon . . .

10/10

Riposto

Success! An entire party without committing any major faux pas or being subjected to anything embarrassing - that would be Severus's definition of a successful party, I guess. He even managed some VERY brief small talk and a dance without too much trouble. But I had to laugh that he would end up insisting that he get the mistletoe to keep Minerva's secret. I suppose the role of spy and supporter of subterfuge will always be where he feels most natural. Hopefully, he will one day be able to get through an entire party without constantly comparing it to his time with the Death Eaters, though. His careful analysis of party behavior and satisfaction in successfully emulating it was pretty funny. But totally plausible. How else can he learn to behave in social situations, if not by imitation and experimentation? I remember doing that, myself, when I was an awkward pre-teen. RE: the previews - bring it on! I enjoy the hint of what's coming, and you're right that people can avoid it, if they prefer! I feel like I might be missing something at your LJ, though, maybe I should check it out?

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

To take your last question first, lest I forget: sometimes I do put extra info on my blog and lj. The blog might be a bit easier to navigate, I think, and has better links on the side.Yes, a successful party, even by Severus's definition! lol! The primary reason he wanted to be caught under the mistletoe was that he was afraid of being suspected of doing it, and that would be really embarrassing for him! Severus Snape, playing a mistletoe game? Heaven forfend! haha!I am sure that there will come a time when he will go an entire party without comparing it to his time with the Death Eaters. When there will be a day when he manages to avoid thinking of them altogether, though, who knows . . .Yes, Severus is kind of going through an awkward pre-teen time, at a very late stage. But he is starting life over, and relearning all kinds of things.Thanks for the review! And for your input on the sneak peeks!

10/10

wyndnfyr

i know dumbledore was just trying to protect severus sotospeak, but he could have worded it different.  especially considering everything they've been through.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Yes, he sure could have! But by the time he realized that and tried to correct himself, Severus was out the door! But it will all be all right!Thanks for the review! I appreciate it!

8/10

LinZE

thanks as ever for updating - I loved Severus 'wobble' on the  road to recovery and I thik that Albus and Minerva' sreactions were perfect!hope you get a chance to write more soon, Linds

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

I have the next 40 or so chapters written. Perfect, huh?

10/10

sinbad

I loved the sharing of memories, I think it did help Severus feel better.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Thanks! It did.

10/10

mimmom

well done.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Thanks

10/10

mimmom

Oh wow, I'm glad the next chapter is already done.  I'd hate to have to wait for it!  This is such and excellent story.  I love reading all of the emotions that Severus experiences.  They feel quite real to me.  The emotions are complex and this is how it would be for a real person.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Yes, no suffering through the evil cliffie! lol!Thank you, I'm glad that you find all of Severus's emotions and his turmoil to be so real.Thanks for reviewing! I hope you enjoy the next chapter!

10/10

wyndnfyr

its so weird to see snape being nice!  lol  i have way too many stories on my reading plate and the writers often portray him as a snarky bastard even after the war :)i liked his speech.  it was short and got his point across.  what did firenze mean when he all but told severus' future?  basically that if he kept on the way he had been recently, life would be relatively nice?  i think i made sense enough of that lol.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

I'm glad that Firenze's prediction made good sense to you!Severus wants to be happier, and he has friends and knows it (it's hard for even Severus to deny all the effort that went into saving his life -- and by so many people), so he's working on being the better Snape. He can still be snarky -- especially when a student does something incredibly stupid! LOL! But I'm just using select occasions when he's making an effort not to be miserable all the time, and where he's trying to fit into his life. LOL!Thanks for the review! I'm really glad you're enjoying the story!

0/10

wyndnfyr

i wondered when moody would apologize, if he ever would at all.  im glad he finally manned up and did it.  it no doubt helped severus to reach his unusually good mood that evening. :)

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Yes, once he was over his shock, it did contribute to his good mood -- not that he reflected upon that fact. But that's probably best -- he might have become depressed again if he'd thought about it too long! LOLThanks for the review!

10/10

Riposto

I just love it when I come home from work to find a new chapter waiting in my inbox. It's a nice reward for a hard day's labor.I remember that JKR once said of the canon Dumbledore that he is essentially a very lonely man, that, because of his enormous intelligence and magical gifts, he really had no equals to share his thoughts and feelings with. Your Albus has Minerva, and he is more open and giving than he seems in canon, but perhaps he still is prone to act on thoughts and conclusions that he'd be better off using a sounding board for, first.I'm glad he and Severus had their time alone, to patch up the rift and to renew their friendship. But I wish Severus had been able to talk to him the way he talks to Minerva.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Life is not simply about intellect, intelligence, strength, talent, or whatever (IMO), so although the burdens that Albus bore were his by dint of his intellectual and magical gifts, I was glad to give him an emotional support and partner for the last several decades of his life. He does still too often depend on his own conclusions and sometimes keep his own counsel when he might better seek the opinions of others, and we saw where that almost landed him in DD -- and how this became a weakness for him when he underestimated Minerva's stubbornness and willingness to ambush him. Severus probably should have talked to Albus at the very start, even if he was hurt and angry, rather than running to Minerva, but Severus has his own issues. That he talked to anyone about it was still strides beyond where he was a few years before, say at the beginning of AAoL, or even the beginning of DD.He and Albus will gradually get so they communicate with each other better -- but it will take (Warning: spoilerish bit ahead!) . . .it will take Albus opening up even more to Severus first. It will help bring them closer, not ony because Albus will be sharing something personal with Severus, but because it will provide a kind of leveling for the two, and in more than one respect.Thanks as always for your review! I'm glad it was a good reward for a hard day at work!

10/10

HogwartsDuo

First of all, it was my pleasure to read the chapter and offer my opinion. Anytime you need someone to read over a chapter, I'm your GLM!I'm very glad Minerva took time to show Severus the memories and to help him understand Albus' actions. It can't be easy for her being stuck in the middle of these two wizards, but she does an admirable job of keeping them in line.Despite seeing the memories and fully understanding what happened, I'm still glad Albus took Severus to the spot and showed that both he and Harry trusted Snape enough to reveal the location of Riddle's remains. I'm sure that went a long way towards bridging the gap between Albus and Severus.And what's not to LOVE about the ending bits with Minerva. I always love it when the chapter ends on a happy note with the two of them. A nap, a cuddle, and a shower ... what's not to LOVE!!!???

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

"And what's not to LOVE about the ending bits with Minerva. I always love it when the chapter ends on a happy note with the two of them. A nap, a cuddle, and a shower ... what's not to LOVE!!!???"Haha! That's also what makes you the GLM! lol!Glad you loved that! And yes, Minerva does have a bit of a time of it occasionally, being the sort of go-between for the two, but as you say, she does an admirable job of it! And she's able to be frank with each of them, and they know it!Thanks again for the multiple read-throughs!

10/10

sinbad

Nice chapter, the preparations for the duel was interesting.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Thanks!

10/10

PureBlood Proud

OOOOOOOH what a place to stop!  It would be so much better for them if Severus and Albus could really listen to each other.  But they have to muddle their way through as they learn to adjust to their new roles.  Minerva must get tired of being the mother hen to two grown men when she already has a castle full of children to look after.  I can’t wait until the next chapter is up!

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Yes, Minerva does have to step in and take care of the two rather frequently, doesn't she?They'll learn . . . sort of. Fortunately, there's a good deal of affection on both sides, and that helps them weather the communication failures.Thanks for reviewing!

10/10

Riposto

Evil, EVIL cliffie! It's a good thing you update so frequently, or I'd be sending you some nastygrams over this one.Poor Albus really bungled this one. I imagined him still standing in the same spot, after Severus stormed out, staring at the door and thinking, "Well, shit." Or whatever the Albus Dumbledore version of that sentiment is.Thank goodness for Minerva and her sensible way of dealing with Severus. I'm sure that, whatever those memories are, it was terribly painful for both her and for Albus to have to revisit them, and a mark of their love for Severus that they would do so to help relieve his pain.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Muwahaha! Glad you appreciated the evil cliffie! LOL!"Doxiedung" was one of his favored expressions when he was younger. But yes, he was standing there thinking, "that could have gone a lot better." Glad you enjoyed the chapter! I hope to have the next one up in a couple days. Thanks for the review!

10/10

HogwartsDuo

Hmm, that conversation could have gone a lot better between Albus and Severus. I hate that they seemed to be at odds, especially over something like that. I can understand Albus being concerned about Snape's obsession but I can also see the obsession being born from needing to put everything to rest. I just wish Snape hadn't stormed off to Minerva. sigh. I swear she must feel like a mother or at least caught in the middle of them sometimes.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Yes, she must feel caught in the middle, especially since she can see both their perspectives so well and see that both have merit, given their individual positions.Hopefully, it will all be mended soon, right?! Neither of them was really talking to the other the right way, which was a pity, but Albus was somewhat blinkered by his worries and Severus was already unhappy with his current obsession, so it rankled to have Albus bring it up.Glad you liked the chapter!TTFN!

10/10

HogwartsDuo

Eeeep! Pomona brought out the claws towards Severus. She could have phrased her thoughts in a less acidic way. Good thing Albus and Filius worked together to try to smooth things over quickly.The bit with Firenze tugged at my heartstrings. I think the following sentence was just utterly beautiful:“I saw the reflection of the dawn in the moonlight on water,” Firenze said, his deep voice melodious but sad, “and was left pondering the deeps and the shallows.”

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Pomona does like Severus, but she's had some bad experiences with Slytherins in general. She also sometimes suffers from foot-in-mouth syndrome when she speaks without thinking too much -- she can be a bit too forthright!I'm glad you liked that sentence. :) I hoped it ws worthy of Firenze.Thanks for the review!

10/10

HogwartsDuo

Hearing Filius talking about the duel between Malcolm and Albus all those years ago makes me want to go back and read that section in RaM. Ah, the "good ole days" lol.The conversation with Moody was awkward at best but I'm glad it went as well as it did. It will take a long time to get over what happened. And I'm glad Vector mentioned that she knew it was Snape who'd helped her out at the party.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Ah, yes, those good ole days! haha! I actually reread that chapter recently myself, and it was still fun. ;)Yes, Vector mentioning that made Severus happy that he'd said something, and it made him feel good about himself. A definite step in the right direction!

10/10

HogwartsDuo

Wow, I go away on holiday and come back to find all these chapters have been uploaded. eeep. Gotta get on the ball and leave my reveiws.The lunch between Snape, Gareth, and Hermione seemed to go well. I'm glad Snape is slowly branching out and enjoying life again. The story of Frances Flint and Valerianna (nasty as she was) was very sad. I would love to have "heard" what Minerva said of Valerianna to Snape that allowed him to pick up on the fact that Minerva disliked her. lolOff to read another chapter.

Response from MMADfan (Author of A Long Vernal Season)

Hi! Hope you had a great time while you were away!Yeah, Valerianna was a real piece of work, as they say. I imagine it was a combination of Minerva's tone of voice and what she didn't say that clued Severus in to the fact that Valerianna was not one of Minerva's favorite people by a long shot.Yes, Severus is trying to be more sociable -- even down to inviting friends to lunch and picking up the tabl! Oh my! And then he actually enjoyed himself, too! What's the world coming to!Enjoy catching up! Thanks for reviewing!

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