Yep, that's bittersweet all right.  Kind of reminds me of "The Time Traveler's Wife" at the end when she gets to see him again.  Too sad.

Oh, I wish you would continue this. It is a very interesting concept, I must say.

Goodness gracious. Bittersweet indeed. Left me wanting more. :( Well written.

Oh, very nice story. Though it feels like it's begging to be continued and I'd love it if you did.

oh awesome!!!!

any chance of continuing? pretty please? :)

wow. hard to believe such a short story could evoke so much emotion. great job. if you're even slighly considering it, i'd encourage you to continue the story. if not, thank you, it was great as it was.

wow. hard to believe such a short story could evoke so much emotion. great job. if you're even slighly considering it, i'd encourage you to continue the story. if not, thank you, it was great as it was.

Terrific tension and a good climactic last line (although I can't say I didn't see it coming).

This is a really great set up for a longer story--you should definately make use of it!

oh my god you can not just leave it there

Foofie

Oh wow!

Is this really a one-shot??? Please tell me there's more?

Oh please, tell me there is more to came. It's terrific as a start but it doesn't work as well as a one-shot.

Errr..."Completed?" I really don't think so.  This is like a really good show that gets cancelled during hiatus and you are doomed never to know how everything is resolved.

In other words, I think you are truly evil. No, really, I do.

You shall be known as "that-person-who-must-not-be-named-because-she-left-us-hanging."  I wonder how long you can live with that!!

I really loved this and I do hope you consider easing our pain...pretty please?

OH MY..OK in tears now...This is wonderful...I hope you are going to continue it...I'd love to know how Severus reacts to that..WELL DONE..I LOVE IT!

continuation!!!!!!!!! 

oh please!  we need more than a one shot!  It was beautiful!

Oh my God!  This is brilliant.  I know you've posted this as a one-shot, but I must tell you that what you have written is so amazingly good that it begs for more to be written. 

Please don't take that as pressure to write more if you don't want to, but I couldn't just review and not tell you.  LOL!  It really is that good!

In light of the fact that Severus was the father of her son, I love the name she gave him.  Dante means obstinate, lasting, enduring – which perfectly describes Severus.  It is fitting that their child should be name Dante because in him his father will continue to live... and since Hermione chose not to marry anyone else, but to raise her child alone, her love for Severus has been everlasting.

Give yourself a pat on the back for a writing such a well told tale!  *claps and cheers*  I'd give this a thousand stars if I could.


Beth

Brilliant and sad - very well done!

How brilliant, and yet how evil of you to write such an interesting and twisty tale and then end it all on that single word-- "You."  My hat is off to you, even as I simultaneously grind my teeth in frustration that this is apparently a one-shot.  It's a flattering sort of grinding, though.  Really.

Loved how the child was named Dante--wonder whose idea that was?  The knee-jerk reaction is to think Severus, but if he died before his child was born I could see Hermione thinking of the Inferno as she grieved.

Beautiful story!

what has happened? where did the electric impulse come from. what started her time-journey? and who is taking care of Dante?girl!!suspense. and giving her such a shock!the death of her husband - Snape is how long ago?and the war is not over for to long?how old is Dante?What will happen over the next "few months"?what is her mission here in the past?she will mix a lot up!will have to re-live some not so happy parts of her life.BUT she can get another share of her beloved sneering husband.You have set up a nice journey. I would like to travel with you.so quick to the next chapter

Aah!  What a way to finish it!  I mean, I saw it coming, what with the category and the genre and all, but I feel like there's so much more to say- I do love a good time twist story.  Brilliant!  And though I wish I knew what was on each of their faces, I rather think I can guess well enough on my own.  Good show.

Ooooh!  Signal cliffhanger!  Hope there's more on the way, and quickly. I'm so greedy, aren't I?  Good job so far!

I have a lump in my troath at the size of a football, making it hard to swallow you know, and it is all your fault... Beautifully written in all its sadness!

Excellend first chapter - but there's a little mistake you made: you marked it as "complete"...

After Severus has just been dealt one HELL of a shocker, there just has to be some serious fallout. This, my dear, is definitely not one-shot material. Reconsider? Pretty please?

How lovely. Very bittersweet. I do hope there is a continuation, the emotions are laid bare here and are deserve more attention! Well done, very well done.