Bounce, Bobble, and Boink
PersephoneVerte22 Reviews | 22 Ratings, 0 Likes, 25 Favorites )
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About PersephoneVerte
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PersephoneVerte
Member Since 2009 | 12 Stories | Favorited by 24 | 16 Reviews Written | 159 Review Responses
Reviews for Bounce, Bobble, and Boink
He sees sense at last.
Cripes your good at this sweet smut in Snape's POV!
Response from PersephoneVerte (Author of Bounce, Bobble, and Boink)
Lol thank you!
Response from PersephoneVerte (Author of Bounce, Bobble, and Boink)
Lol thank you!
Smutty good to the very last drop.
Response from PersephoneVerte (Author of Bounce, Bobble, and Boink)
Thank you :D
Holy moly that was hot...
Response from PersephoneVerte (Author of Bounce, Bobble, and Boink)
Heh, thanks :)
Seems like a fantastic experience for both of them. *jealous*
Response from PersephoneVerte (Author of Bounce, Bobble, and Boink)
*also jealous* Thanks for reviewing!
I really really really like the last sentence. You made a very happy Severus and he deserved it.
Response from PersephoneVerte (Author of Bounce, Bobble, and Boink)
Thank you very much!
amen, sister! great stuff! thanks
Response from PersephoneVerte (Author of Bounce, Bobble, and Boink)
Thank you!
YEAH!! That whats I like to hear! 'Oh, yes. I’ll take Hermione fucking Granger over Lily bloody Potter any day' You've made my night. Brilliant.
Response from PersephoneVerte (Author of Bounce, Bobble, and Boink)
Heh, and making your night makes mine :) Thank you very much for the review!
nothing like a little smut. Okay alot of smut.
Response from PersephoneVerte (Author of Bounce, Bobble, and Boink)
thanks for reviewing!
This was very sexy, although I have to admit the title put me off somewhat; wasn't quite sure what I was letting myself in for with that! However, it was very succinctly written without missing out on the feelings involved - and that's quite an 'art' in itself in my opinion. It's also nice to sometimes read stuff from SS' POV only, I think.I'm pretty sure most of us can appreciate (and indeed aplaud) that last line - about time really, Sev! :-)
Response from PersephoneVerte (Author of Bounce, Bobble, and Boink)
The whole thing was written at about three in the morning, lol, and so was the title. The next day I couldn't think of anything else to call it (I'm crap at titles), so I just submitted it.Thank you very much for your review.
Phew!
Response from PersephoneVerte (Author of Bounce, Bobble, and Boink)
Thanks for the review!
I’ll take Hermione fucking Granger over Lily bloody Potter any day.Awesome line! Very interesting POVLivvy
Response from PersephoneVerte (Author of Bounce, Bobble, and Boink)
Thank you!
Short, sweet, dirty. Nice writing. Smart man to choose Hermione!
Response from PersephoneVerte (Author of Bounce, Bobble, and Boink)
Thank you!
Nice! Severus has totally lost himself in "Hermione fucking Granger." Lucky for them they found each other!Beth
Response from PersephoneVerte (Author of Bounce, Bobble, and Boink)
Thank you! :)
Merlin, this was so very sexy! Beautifully written, too. I also think you did a great job with Severus's POV: not too dirty and perfectly in character.
Response from PersephoneVerte (Author of Bounce, Bobble, and Boink)
Oh, thank you very much! I really enjoy your work, and it means a lot to a young writer who is just trying to find her niche when she gets a review from someone she likes.
YES! I love a Severus who realise how much better a real Hermione is compared to a image of the "perfect" Lily Potter
Response from PersephoneVerte (Author of Bounce, Bobble, and Boink)
I do too! Stupid Lily Potter, what's so special about her? Thanks for the review!
HOT, yet funny! Great mix!
Response from PersephoneVerte (Author of Bounce, Bobble, and Boink)
Thank you! :)
lmao... brilliant!
Response from PersephoneVerte (Author of Bounce, Bobble, and Boink)
Thank you! :)
his point of view. so from his point of view it is heaven.Well, he dare call it anything else.he has the best woman in town, in the wizzarding world in his bed, so he can not pout, nor complain.yes, they seem to correspond perfectly, the way you described it. cool, well done.But one stupid question now: to whom does he write his bed-stories, this dirty old man! *ggg*
Response from PersephoneVerte (Author of Bounce, Bobble, and Boink)
Hmm, I don't understand quite what you're asking in that last bit there. Thanks for the review!
Response from salvamea (Reviewer)
who is Nimue. I have no idea where I have to know her or him? or it? from.
Response from salvamea (Reviewer)
to me the beginning read like a letter. but now it dawns. it must be some goddes, right?he praises thos heavenly time he is having with Hermione.god, I'm so helplessly daft.
Response from PersephoneVerte (Author of Bounce, Bobble, and Boink)
Oh! Ok, that makes more sense, lol. I've never actually learned about her myself, but what I've seen/heard she was Merlin's love interest. She stayed with him to learn about magic and used a spell to trap him. That's all I know about her. I referenced her because her name is sometimes used much like someone would say, "Oh my God." I'm sure you could find more if you're interesed through Google.So he isn't writing <i>to</i> anyone; he's just making an exclamation.
LOL Good choice, Sev!
Response from PersephoneVerte (Author of Bounce, Bobble, and Boink)
Thanks for reviewing :)
OMG--this story is so very deliciously detailed--I love it!Wow!Hermione is one freaking lucky girl to have such a studly specimen of sexy man-beast--I would so love to take her place... you know?;~D VERY well written--keep up the good work!☺
Response from PersephoneVerte (Author of Bounce, Bobble, and Boink)
Aw, thank you so much :D