Battlefield Love
chivalric25 Reviews | 25 Ratings, 0 Likes, 41 Favorites )
Hermione realises that cheating on Severus is never a good idea when she finds her two lovers fighting each other.
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chivalric
Member Since 2007 | 65 Stories | Favorited by 776 | 213 Reviews Written | 4,182 Review Responses
Located in Germany. Female, around 40. The first chapters of my published novels/novellas can be found here on the archive.
Other than writing, I am reading, cycling, running, and singing in a choir.
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Reviews for Battlefield Love
My Dear Chivalric, I loved your story, but I must point out something wrong!! The female character's name is not Hermione....it is Deedee!
Response from chivalric (Author of Battlefield Love)
*lol* Yep, I know what you mean. Glad you liked the story, and thanks for leaving a review!
Response from chivalric (Author of Battlefield Love)
*lol* Yep, I know what you mean. Glad you liked the story, and thanks for leaving a review!
Love It
Response from chivalric (Author of Battlefield Love)
My one and only Snucius... Not my pairing, really, but I enjoyed writing this one a lot. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Haha! I love this! Severus is such an evil plotter :D lol so is Lucius, Hermione was so confused it was so funny! Great job so far! :)
Response from chivalric (Author of Battlefield Love)
I would have liked to post it as a one-shot, but somehow, it didn't work. Thanks for liking it, though, and thanks for reviewing.
it so Ancient ... like Old Romans or Greeks, IMHOLovely, so lovely...Thanks a lot!
Response from chivalric (Author of Battlefield Love)
Thanks for reading it - it took me a while to figure out that slash is just sth not everyone enjoys ;-) Glad you liked the story, and I very much like the hint to Greek!
Interesting Ending. Didn't see that coming. Was kinda hoping for more SS/HG/LM action but this was good too. :-) Thanks for posting. Much Love ~ Brena
Response from chivalric (Author of Battlefield Love)
It's not the pairing I like to write about most, but well, a bit of slash never hurts, IMO. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
It is lovely to see Severus getting for once everything (or everyone) he wants. Very steamy, and I love the dynamic you've created between the three.
Response from chivalric (Author of Battlefield Love)
Thanks so much, hon! Means a lot, those words from you!
~fans self~ I loved this the first time I read it and I still do. Off to savour the next chapter again!
Response from chivalric (Author of Battlefield Love)
*hugs you* Thanks so much, hon!
I'm so relieved that the guys weren't really going to battle each other over Hermione. I like them much better as contemporaries than I do rivals. Now, about the other bit of fighting; if Lucius and Severus need to 'alpha male' each other a little before they call it a night, I can certainly be persuaded to get out my binoculars and watch. That Hermione is one lucky gal! :D
Response from chivalric (Author of Battlefield Love)
"alpha male" indeed - haven't looked at it that way, but you are right of course. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
A well matched trio.
Response from chivalric (Author of Battlefield Love)
Not a trio I write about too often, but sometimes, I can't help myself. Thanks for reviwing!
I don't think anyone can outmaneuver Severus when he sets his mind to it.
Response from chivalric (Author of Battlefield Love)
That, my dear, are very true words ;-) Thanks for reviewing!
That is one kinky threesome you created. So hawt.
Response from chivalric (Author of Battlefield Love)
"Kinky" is what Dreamy called it, too ;-) Thanks for reviewing!
*fans face* Gosh, it's hot in here. Must be the heater... it's up too high (it's winter where I am).*Ahem* Very nice, yes, that's what I was going to say. :)
Response from chivalric (Author of Battlefield Love)
;-) Thanks, dear. Turn the heater down before the next (and last) chapter is up, please. Although... there's a bit of slash coming up...
Hey there chivalric! I think this is a great start! I can't wait to see what happens next! Much Love ~ Brena
Response from chivalric (Author of Battlefield Love)
Thanks, dear. Only two chapters for that one, and what happens next is quite different from what happened first. Thanks a lot for reviewing!
*dreamy sigh* This is perfect. No need to change the tiniest comma.
Response from chivalric (Author of Battlefield Love)
Thanks so much! I feel a bit uneasy about the story - I wouldn't write it that way would I write it today - but then, I'm glad you enjoyed the first half.
To hell with the POV, this is yummy!!! :D
Response from chivalric (Author of Battlefield Love)
Sometimes, the POV really follows me into my dreams, turning them into nightmares ;-) Thanks for reviewing!
Brilliant, absolutely brilliant!!!
Response from chivalric (Author of Battlefield Love)
Thank you so much, love!
Why on earth hadn't she thought of that before? And how generous of the two of them to share! Glad you didn't change a thing. Very nicely done!
Response from chivalric (Author of Battlefield Love)
Well, she can't think of everything herself, can she ;-) Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing!
Hmm, sounds like you created a delicious, yummy picnic. How decadent!
Response from chivalric (Author of Battlefield Love)
It's not over yet. The two men desire a dessert ;-)
wow. Understanding of Severus, wasn't it, eventually?? lol
Response from chivalric (Author of Battlefield Love)
The real understanding will happen in the second half *g* Thanks for reviewing!
That would be quite decadent.
Response from chivalric (Author of Battlefield Love)
*lol* Indeed!
You sure that fight wasn't staged? ;)
Response from chivalric (Author of Battlefield Love)
+lol+ Have you already read the next chapter, or what? Of course it was staged!
Both funny and steamy! Thanks.
Response from chivalric (Author of Battlefield Love)
.-) Thank you!