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Happiness

10 Reviews | 5.7/10 (10 Ratings, 0 Likes, 9 Favorites )

Drama Romance Songfic Epilogue What Epilogue? Potions Under Duress 2,068 Words 1 Chapter Complete

Albus Dumbledore Hermione Granger Original Character Severus Snape

A look at the evolution of the relationship between Severus & Hermione through journals and a scrapbook. This is a songfic using the lyrics of "Happiness" by The Fray.

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BrenaMarie

Member Since 2006 | 21 Stories | Favorited by 48 | 536 Reviews Written | 360 Review Responses

Hello There! My name is Karen and I live right outside of Philadelphia, Pennsylvania. Way back in 2006 when we needed to put "Half-Blood Prince" spoilers on our fics... when DH didn't even exist... I created my profile here on The Petulant Poetess.

Falling in love with the SS/HG Ship changed my life and allowed me to be in a position to save the site from extinction in 2019. I'm so grateful to be here and to continue to see the wonderful fic here live on for as long as possible.

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http://brenamarie.livejournal.com/

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Reviews for Happiness

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8/10

Danu

Awww that was really sweet!

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of Happiness)

OMG, I just realized I never responded to this! I'm so glad you enjoyed it honey! Thanks for reviewing!

0/10

blyf

Very sweet and lovely!

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of Happiness)

Hey there

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of Happiness)

! Thank you so much for taking the time to review. It really does mean soooooo much to me! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thanks again. Much Love ~ Brena

10/10

rosered

Lovely story! Severus waiting for the woman he loves was wonderful to read. Well done. :D

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of Happiness)

Hey

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of Happiness)

! Thank you so much for the review. I know its kinda sappy but I'm glad you enjoyed it all the same! It warms my heart to know people like you are enjoying my writing. Thanks again! Much Love ~ Brena

10/10

fizzabella

This was simply lovely:) I enjoyed it so much, but I would have loved to have read the newsclips Hermione saved:)Wonderful job:)Warm regards,Fizzabella

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of Happiness)

Hey Frizzabella! Thanks for the review! The Newsclips are at the very bottom of the story. Every line after "She'll Be" thats underlined is actually a news headline... It was the only way I could think of doing it. Thanks again for the review and the lovely stars! :-) Much Love ~ Brena

0/10

sunny33

Still good, after a second reading! :)

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of Happiness)

Hey Sunny! OmG you read it twice! How awesome. Thank you so much for the review! Much Love ~ Brena

9/10

indigo_rose

What a sweet tale! I love stories that are retrospective looks at the lives of the characters, either through letters or memories, and this was very well done indeed. Thanks for sharing this with us all!

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of Happiness)

Hey indigo rose! Thank you so much for leaving this review. I'm so happy that the idea I was going for actually came across. This format seemed to be the best way to tell the story based on the song and the idea I had. It truly is a relieft that everyone is enjoying it so much. Thanks Again. Much Love ~ Brena

10/10

braye27

Thank you for giving the link to the song at the beginning of the story. I listened to it (and followed the lyrics) before I read the story, and I can't tell you how lovely it was to understand what was going on as I read. It made the reading all the more enyoyable!

Iloved how you told their story through journal entries and news paper articles. The was such an unusual way to present the tale, and I really like it!

Well done.

Beth

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of Happiness)

Beth, thank you so much for the review. I'm so glad to hear that you listened to the song before actually reading the story. I was hoping people would since this song hasn't been relased to radio and I felt that the story really wouldn't make sense without hearing it. Again, thank you so much for taking the time to review. Much Love ~ Brena

10/10

luvsev

I love how you told their story through journal entries and headlines. Gives it a much more intimate feel, too. It's quite different, and I love it!

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of Happiness)

Hey Luvsev! Thank you so much for the review! When I got the idea for the story the journals seemed to be the best idea to get the story out. :-) I'm so glad you liked it! Much Love ~ Brena

0/10

cheryl123sing

Oh, that's lovely! I really enjoy stories done in an interesting format.

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of Happiness)

Thank you so much for the review! I really do try to be interesting! Thanks again. Much Love ~ Brena

0/10

Angenieta

I like it. But I don't get how Voldemort would be dead for 5 years in 1998?

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of Happiness)

Omg, I totally didn't change that whan I was writing it. I was playing around with the dates and then didn't change that one. Thank you so much. ~ Brena

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of Happiness)

I just fixed it. Thanks again.

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