Interesting curse, I'm not sure what's going on.  She seems to have dual memories or a twin somehow with all the bouncing between the Hospital Wing and muggle hospital.

Cute, interesting and Albus of course is still seemingly all knowing.  Very enjoyable so far.

Very interesting story-line. So Dolhov's curse will eventually take her permanently into a catatonic state where she will think that her entire macigal life was just an ellaborate fanatsy? How horrible for Hermione and all the people who love her.I have enjoyed it so far. Good job.

omg, I must have brain damage.  Albus and Severus are present in both realities - now, to figure out what the hell that means.  Oh, and I want to kick Atalanta, HARD!  She reminds me of my spoiled brat of a brother.  Great chapter!  :D

How bizarre!  An alternate reality encroaching on present time.  Like a wizarding form of schitzophrenia.What's up with that curse?  Too bad Dolohov couldn't be questioned.  Maybe the remnants of memory on her jumper will be enough to give Poppy a clue how to treat Hermione.  Wonder how Severus will take seeing Hermione first off?  Great chapter!  :D

Great beginning.  A meeting of the minds at a bus stop, a interesting talent with wildlife, and a little sister in the wings.  Very intriguing!  :D

Nastiness. I'm sure it would be hard to tell what was real and not.

I would have loved to read more about Snape's waking and what ensued then. Well, I'm glad he woke and seems to be rather well, and the mystery with Hermione gets more and more interesting.

Alcina vom Steinsberg's response: Oops, so sorry, I obviously managed to delete the first part of my review saying how much I liked this chapter and how fascinationg this switching-realities-stuff is. I really have difficulties discerning between the both of them.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying this.

This is so brilliant I end up wondering what world is the real one. Or perhaps it's both. After all Dumbledore and snape were discussing in front of the two sisters in the first chapter, so why doesn't Hermione hava no baby sister? Grr this is so frustrating and so exciting. I can't wait to read next chapter.

I hope the death eater didnt just make up the curse because then we are screwed. Its completely crippling her. Severus to the rescue!!!! Happy 4th toots!

At least Severus and Poppy realize that something unusual is going on now. And with Severus and his expertise in her corner, at least she stands a fighting chance. What a horrible fate for Hermione, otherwise, to be trapped forever in a world inside her mind!Fascinating story though. And I look forward to your next update!

That last sight must have been quite cute too witness. And I suppose Fiona is Atalanta. Can't wait for the next update.

That ending scene was so sweet, I ache for Severus.  Great job.

Oh, my. This story is breaking my heart. Please let her and Snape make a connection so strong that she will never want to go back to the other world. Perhaps if she does, and she can get her parents back in the real world, that will be enough to keep her here. I hope so.Snape obviously loves her. I just hope he can find the courage to tell her so. That may help to keep her here as well.

Hmmmm.  O Rly....So...she has nothing for her in the Muggle World . . . Good to see Atalanta's still alive?

You created a truly beautiful story, thank you for giving me the opportunity to read it!

wow again.  what a story!  thanks and mucho smoochies

Sounds promising. She's back, he's friendly, a house elf is bringing food.  What more can you want? :)

I'm glad Ron is back. Not because I like him but because it means Hermione is getting better. I hope she will continue to improve with the help of Harry and Severus.

Okay, I've read all eleven chapters in one sitting and am on pins and needles awaiting chapter 12.  I'm loving the 'friendship' Hermione and Severus seem to be developing.  I am also interested in finding out more about Hermione's sister and Albus' reasoning behind his need to curse Hermione, though I have a few theories on that front.   Great Job :)

So, because she now remembers Ron in the past, he became real again in the present. Interesting... I just hope she doesn't send anyone else into oblivion. I wonder, if she makes Harry disappear, then they will have to let Snape use Legilimency on her because there would be no one else left to do it. I don't understand why they are trying to prevent him from helping her in the first place. Their fears are unfounded. But I suppose, from McGonagall's pov, she has a right to be suspicious of him.Fascinating story.

Oh High Magic tapdancing Merlin what an AWFUL place to have to pause.  *flail*(Ignore me, I haven't worked on MY story for three years . . . >.< )

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Do you know, I was genuinely afraid that DH was going to end up that the entire wizardng world was a fantasy in Harry's head?I would have been absolutely mortified if Jo had done that, but I'm really excited to be reading this as a fanfiction!

Oh my, so now we find out why we saw Snape and Dumbledore watching her and her sister at the beginning, but she has no memory of her sister later at Hogwarts. This was already an interesting tale. Now it is fascinating. I can hardly wait for the next installment.