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Potter Place's Variety Challenge 2009 Marriage by Numbers
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Marriage by Numbers

1: Prologue

2: Chapter One:Time to Face the Facts

3: Chapter Two: A Nudge in the Right Direction

4: Chapter Three: A Rock and a Hard Place

5: Chapter Four: Homework

6: Chapter Five: Confrontation

7: Chapter Six: Going Public

8: Chapter Seven: Up Close and Personal

9: Chapter Eight: The Tables are Turned

10: Chapter Nine: Nearly There

11: Chapter Ten: The Toad Returns

12: Chapter Eleven: Conflagration

13: Chapter Twelve: The Morning After the Night Before

14: Chapter Thirteen: Reactions

15: Chapter Fourteen: Bargaining

16: Chapter Fifteen: Fantasy and Reality

17: Chapter Sixteen: Miscommunication

18: Chapter Seventeen: Relationship Counselling

19: Chapter Eighteen: A Little Chat

20: Chapter Nineteen: Payback

21: Chapter Twenty: Ginny's Revenge

22: Chapter Twenty-one: Parenthood

23: Epilogue

Marriage by Numbers

sunny33

832 Reviews   |   832 Ratings, 0 Likes, 183 Favorites )

Humor Romance Epilogue What Epilogue? Potter Place's Variety Challenge 2009 58,076 Words 27 Chapters Complete
Harry Potter Hermione Granger Ronald Weasley Severus Snape Ginevra Weasley Minerva McGonagall Dolores Jane Umbridge Filius Flitwick

Hermione is back at Hogwarts for her seventh year. Voldemort is dead, and life should be good. That is, until the results of her special Arithmancy Project provide some unwelcome realisations for the Potions master.

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Chapters (23)

Chapter 1: Prologue

Chapter 2: Chapter One:Time to Face the Facts

Chapter 3: Chapter Two: A Nudge in the Right Direction

Chapter 4: Chapter Three: A Rock and a Hard Place

Chapter 5: Chapter Four: Homework

Chapter 6: Chapter Five: Confrontation

Chapter 7: Chapter Six: Going Public

Chapter 8: Chapter Seven: Up Close and Personal

Chapter 9: Chapter Eight: The Tables are Turned

Chapter 10: Chapter Nine: Nearly There

Chapter 11: Chapter Ten: The Toad Returns

Chapter 12: Chapter Eleven: Conflagration

Chapter 13: Chapter Twelve: The Morning After the Night Before

Chapter 14: Chapter Thirteen: Reactions

Chapter 15: Chapter Fourteen: Bargaining

Chapter 16: Chapter Fifteen: Fantasy and Reality

Chapter 17: Chapter Sixteen: Miscommunication

Chapter 18: Chapter Seventeen: Relationship Counselling

Chapter 19: Chapter Eighteen: A Little Chat

Chapter 20: Chapter Nineteen: Payback

Chapter 21: Chapter Twenty: Ginny's Revenge

Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty-one: Parenthood

Chapter 23: Epilogue


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sunny33

Member Since 2008  |  129 Stories  |  Favorited by 689  |  8,383 Reviews Written  |  8,235 Review Responses

Hello all,  I am a 53 year old from NZ.  Although SSHG is how I started and still my main pairing, I'll give pretty much any pairing a try, whether it be reading or writing.  Sev and Herms need a bit of variety at times. ;)

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Reviews for Marriage by Numbers

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10/10

Lkmaide

Heehee, you finally mentioned something blue--  lets not forget a 6 pence in her show though..

Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)

LOL. wasn't even thinking of that!

10/10

WriterMerrin

Wow.  I don't know that a love scene has ever made me cry before, but this one was so beautiful and sweet that I really did.  You do such a great job showing several of the characters as strong as they are in canon but also delicately vulnerable.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)

Thank you, Merrin!

10/10

Maddie

I'm a sucker for a good marriage law story and this one is no exception. It is heartwarming to see the transformation in Severus when he is given a little attention, respect, and affection. The challenge Hermione represents has brought him to life in many ways. Hermione, too, is thinking about something other than books. Although she appears to be a little focused on sex at the moment.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)

A little? LOL Thanks!

10/10

MollysSister

Are you going tease me with another chapter of wedding prep and ceramony? Please jump QUICKLY to the naked part!!!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)

ROFL.  You impatient wench! Hold onto your hat, nakedness will ensue... soon!

10/10

MollysSister

I really loved that part where Severus and Ginny came to an agreement. The best friend and the husband. Excellent!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)

LOL, thanks!

10/10

sinbad

I think they, like all new couples will have to learn from each other.  They will be fine I think.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)

Of course! :)

10/10

Mooncat

I am really, REALLY enjoying this tale. Thank you so much for continuing to post it - you've done such a great job with the characterizations that it is really a joy to read. Cat

Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)

Thanks, Cat!

0/10

Elise_Wanderer

"Nearly there," indeed!  I love that she has last-minute jitters and he has none!  Perhaps he can in fact learn to be happy, and perhaps he can teach her a thing or two in the process (as she's giving HIM such an education!).

Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)

They have a lot to offer each other. :)

10/10

gabi1791

Great chapter, but I'm really looking forward to the wedding!!! So get it out now!!!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)

Ooo!  Bossy!   I like it!

10/10

beaweasley2

Ah darn I was hoping for more on the boys in drag, but the half-lemon was decent enough. I really liked the conversation between Ginny and Hermione.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)

Thanks!

10/10

indigo_rose

I cannot say enough just how much I love this story!  From the detention to the hen party to the morning after, this chapter has been a great read.  I wish someone had been around to take photos of Harry and Ron all made up... surely Draco wouldn't have passed up an opportunity like that, would he?    And Ginny takes charge!  I'd feel sorry for Harry's future as a hen-pecked husband, but ironically I suspect that's exactly what he needs and wants.Hope the wedding itself makes the next chapter, as well as the wedding night (but you'll probably make us all wait until the chapter after next for that...sigh)!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)

Would I do that? Hehe, wait and see!

10/10

snitchette

I can't believe he did that to her for detention. I'm signing for a year (life) of detention (only with dear Sev' of course) *grin* I love the MLC in general but is very special to me. Please update as soon as you can with the wedding day and night...

Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)

I'll add you to his 'detention' list...

10/10

braye27

Severus has certainly proved that he is as good at the practical application of seduction as he is at potions making... a quick study and paying very close attention to the details.  It's all in the details.I would love to have been a fly on the wall when Lavender was "making up" Harry's and Ron's faces.  I can only imagine what the boys looked like with blush and mascara.  I'm glad that Severus took pity on the party goers who were suffering from hangovers.  He scored major points with this one!  Good job.I'll bet Severus will be blown away when he first lays eyes on Hermione at their wedding ceremony.  This is a fabulous story—I'm such a sucker for Marriage Law fics!Can't wait for the wedding and the wedding night!Beth

Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)

Coming up soon.  One wedding! Thanks for the review, Beth.

10/10

blue artemis

That was a lovely chapter, I truly did enjoy it.  And I'm looking forward to the wedding and the wedding night.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)

Thanks, blue!

10/10

Dianne64

I am always watching for this story -- what a fun way to start the weekend! I love that Sev provided the hangover elixer. That was my favorite part! I am anxiously awaiting the wedding!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)

Thank you, Dianne!

0/10

salvamea

Ginny is just marverllous!!Always there when doubts are raised, when Hermione is needed to be pushed, or when she needs someone who encourages her, listens to her.A unique friend.And at the last part so much "Molly the big mama ".OOH, you kept your promise! details indeed did follow!Severus loosening up. my!Ginny was right, Hermione created something new here.Or at least used the material that was already there in the perfect manner. Finally he discovers and gets to know his WHOLE self. so to speak.he may have been perfect up till now. But now he is whole.She has helped him here like no one. ok. And a book.. *gg*nice evening before the wedding, reallynice.Well done! Thank you !

Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)

Ginny is the best support Hermione and Severus can have. And as a bonus, she is learning too. Thanks for the review!

10/10

ginnylovesharry07

I was so happy to see an update.  Love the whole chapter.  Their interaction steaming up, not queit freighttrain yet...lolIt was nice to see her have a breakdown before the marrige, although she is sure of herself, she is still able to have insurities.  Honestly that was my second favorite part.  The steaming up was my first by the way...lol.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)

LOL, would never have guessed!

10/10

makaem

Oh, I was so excited to see an update.  You've made my day. 

Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)

Thanks!

8/10

sara lady dalian

Very nice - the detention was fabulous.  I am glad to see this again; I was going into withdrawl.  What a way to start the weekend.  Sara

Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)

Wouldn't want to see you suffer, my dear!

Response from sara lady dalian (Reviewer)

One other reviewer mentioned the boys as bridesmaids and that got me to thinking.  Who will give her away?  It would be wonderful if one or both of the boys did.  That way, Severus would have a little leverage over them - after all, they would be GIVING her to him.  *hum...  and they are the closest ones she has to male relatives.  Can't wait for another update.  This really is one of the best fics going now.

10/10

pearl city princess

Another perfect chapter, it's my favorite one so far. Severus and Hermione are made for each other, they really balance each other out. I am totally addicted, please hurry with the next update.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)

It's underway!

Response from pearl city princess (Reviewer)

Oh, thats wonderful to hear.  Thank you, thank you, thank you.

9/10

kimbee73

I am truly looking forward to the wedding and wedding night. I really liked that Severus seduced Hermione to show that he was taking things she said seriously. Great Chapter!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)

Nothing like a bit of practice!

0/10

Stephanie76

Yay!  Currently my favorite fic, and I am so excited that it seems the next chapter will finally be the wedding - unless you turn completely evil.  So don't!  Great job!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)

I'm not THAT evil! Thanks for the review.

10/10

pookah

Thanks for another charming chapter. SS taking points for speculating about your professor's love life was hysterical. How sweet that a chat with Ginny set his mind at ease. I am glad he now has a supporter in Ginny.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)

Now he knows Ginny is on his side will help a lot. Thanks for the review!

0/10

CardinalinNight

Sweeet! Perfect! Hot! Did I mention HOT?!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)

I think you did somewhere along the way!

10/10

pookah

I really like Ginny sticking up for Herimone's choice and encouraging her. (how nice that Severus got to see that)
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there was some discussion in earlier chapters about the wisdom of Hermione telling Ginny everything. I know that (although I am more circumspect myself) some people DO 'tell all.' I have defintely had cases of Too Much Information from my girlfriends. Personally I feel that it is casting wisdom aside to tell such things, but I know from personal experience that others tell.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)

In Hermione's case, it has been good to have Ginny aware of all the goings-on. By knowing the details, she has learned to see the real Severus just as Hermione does.  Thanks for reviewing!

Response from pookah (Reviewer)

you are correct.  It isn't so bad in this case.  and I suppose one could argue that those of my friends who have confided suchlike stuff in me have not placed their trust unwisely.  But sometimes I'd be just as happy not knowing. 

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