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Star Sisters

1: I: Star Sisters

2: II: How to Approach the Potions Master

3: III: Bludgers, Butterbeer and Brazen Behaviour

4: IV: Lunch at Malfoy Manor

5: V: Slytherin Thinking

6: VI: Mine is Your Mind

7: VII: Malfoy's Plan

8: VIII: Innocence Lost

9: IX: Poison Running Through My Veins

10: X: The Unbearable Beast of Burden

11: XI: Mine Is Your Body

12: XII: Secrets And Lies

13: XIII: Snakes

14: XIV: Should Old Acquaintance Be Forgot

15: XV: Descending into Darkness

16: XVI: Heartache and Tears

17: XVII: The Greater Good

18: XVIII: Date with Destiny

19: XIX: A Lesson In Lust

20: XX: Mine Is Your Heart

21: XXI: Immaculate Deception

22: XXII: A Show Of Loyalty

23: XXIII: Fractured Friendships

24: XXIV: Lost

25: XXV: The Future of Slytherin

26: XXVI: Keep It in the Family

27: XXVII: Balance of Allegiance

28: XXVIII: Spring Cleaning

29: XXIX: Potions and Pestering

30: XXX: Hell Hath No Fury Like A Slytherin Scorned

31: XXXI: How To Handle A Snake

32: XXXII: Friends Are Like Stars

33: XXXIII: Dispatches

34: XXXIV: Pruning

35: XXXV: A Black Day

36: XXXVI: Healing and Feeling

37: XXXVII: A Nice Family Dinner

38: XXXVIII: London

39: XXXIX: Revenge Is A Dish Best Served Cute

40: XL: Unveiling

41: Epilogue

Star Sisters

sevs_starsisters

224 Reviews   |   224 Ratings, 0 Likes, 52 Favorites )

Romance Alternate Universe Hogwarts Castle 222,935 Words 41 Chapters Complete
Albus Dumbledore Lucius Malfoy Original Character Severus Snape Avery (Death Eater) Bellatrix Lestrange Poppy Pomfrey Draco Malfoy Blaise Zabini Tom Riddle (Voldemort) Harry Potter Hermione Granger Filius Flitwick Sirius Black Yaxley (Death Eater) Alastor (Mad-Eye) Moody Molly Weasley Nymphadora Tonks Remus Lupin

Two girls. Two Houses. One obsession.

In their final year at Hogwarts, two very different girls face their own battle with the continuing rise of the Dark Lord, encountering along the way shattered friendships, broken hearts, a charming blond Death Eater with a twisted plan, and a secret that could rock the foundations of the Wizarding world. Once more, the stern Potions master will have to do the impossible and offer his protection. Will he succeed?

Set during Harry Potter and The Order Of The Phoenix and mostly canon compliant.

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Chapters (41)

Chapter 1: I: Star Sisters

Chapter 2: II: How to Approach the Potions Master

Chapter 3: III: Bludgers, Butterbeer and Brazen Behaviour

Chapter 4: IV: Lunch at Malfoy Manor

Chapter 5: V: Slytherin Thinking

Chapter 6: VI: Mine is Your Mind

Chapter 7: VII: Malfoy's Plan

Chapter 8: VIII: Innocence Lost

Chapter 9: IX: Poison Running Through My Veins

Chapter 10: X: The Unbearable Beast of Burden

Chapter 11: XI: Mine Is Your Body

Chapter 12: XII: Secrets And Lies

Chapter 13: XIII: Snakes

Chapter 14: XIV: Should Old Acquaintance Be Forgot

Chapter 15: XV: Descending into Darkness

Chapter 16: XVI: Heartache and Tears

Chapter 17: XVII: The Greater Good

Chapter 18: XVIII: Date with Destiny

Chapter 19: XIX: A Lesson In Lust

Chapter 20: XX: Mine Is Your Heart

Chapter 21: XXI: Immaculate Deception

Chapter 22: XXII: A Show Of Loyalty

Chapter 23: XXIII: Fractured Friendships

Chapter 24: XXIV: Lost

Chapter 25: XXV: The Future of Slytherin

Chapter 26: XXVI: Keep It in the Family

Chapter 27: XXVII: Balance of Allegiance

Chapter 28: XXVIII: Spring Cleaning

Chapter 29: XXIX: Potions and Pestering

Chapter 30: XXX: Hell Hath No Fury Like A Slytherin Scorned

Chapter 31: XXXI: How To Handle A Snake

Chapter 32: XXXII: Friends Are Like Stars

Chapter 33: XXXIII: Dispatches

Chapter 34: XXXIV: Pruning

Chapter 35: XXXV: A Black Day

Chapter 36: XXXVI: Healing and Feeling

Chapter 37: XXXVII: A Nice Family Dinner

Chapter 38: XXXVIII: London

Chapter 39: XXXIX: Revenge Is A Dish Best Served Cute

Chapter 40: XL: Unveiling

Chapter 41: Epilogue


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A Slytherin (morgaine_dulac) and a Ravenclaw (star_girl) met through a mutual love of the brooding Potions master. They discovered they enjoyed writing seperately, but thought joining forces could be even more fun. Are they bat-shit-crazy? Well, you'll have to wait and see...

 

 

 


 

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Reviews for Star Sisters

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0/10

sunny33

Guilt is a powerful feeling.  Poor Sev feels it so badly! :)

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

 Guilt suits Snape better than black silk and emerad green lace suit Lucius. heheS&M

0/10

kallonista

Whoa...intense. I wonder why she didn't just go to the hospital wing. I also wonder if her impromptu bloodletting eliminated the poison. And just what the hell is Dumbledore thinking?!? I know I will find out eventually but gah! The man is nuts!

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

You will have to do what Snape, Harry and the Order do every day - trust Dumbledore. And trust us ;-)S&M

10/10

makaem

Dumbledore doesn't ask much, does he? Is Dumbledore aware of the interest in Snape? I really like this story.

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

Dumbledore neeeeeever asks much of anybody. Like Harry is only supposed to defeat Voldemort. Piece of cake!AS for the rest: Not many things get past the old codger's Roman nose...Glad you like the story. Stay tuned.S&M

10/10

makaem

Hmm... I hate that Morgana is in danger.  Charis may be better off staying away from both Morgana and Snape-- but that wouldn't be nearly as much fun to read.

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

Would be no fun at all, would it. No fun and no story ;-)Stay tuned.S&M

10/10

braye27

It seems that whatever spell Lucius has cast on Morgana to make her want him was also cast on Severus to make him want Charis.  After all, hadn't Lucius threatened Severus with telling the Dark Lord that Severus has betrayed him by interfering with Lucius' seduction of Morgana?  It seems like the kind of twisted plan Lucius would have.Well done!Beth

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

Lucius, yes. We are not that twisted. LOLBut as much as there is friction between Lucius and Severus, Lucius still believes him to be on "their" side and thus a mudblood would be below him.And the dear Potions master's wand has a mind of its own :-PGlad you're still with us and enjoying the story.S&M

10/10

Crystal Quill

I was glad the way Snape was cut short. He deserves it! Nice cliff hanger

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

Naw, everybody else is telling us we are being mean to Snape. You wouldn't hold a grudge on him, now would you?  ;-)Glad you enjoyed the cliffie!S&M

Response from Crystal Quill (Reviewer)

Well, maybe contrary to the general impression in this site, I'm still not very keen about a teacher getting involved with students 20 years younger. I feel like that's there's something fundamentally wrong with it. It isn't just that it's Snape.

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

Many writers and readers seem to forget about Snape's age now and then. We find that fiction is a safe place to explore fantasies, and teacher/pupil is one of the oldest fantasies in the book.Guilty as charged ;-)

Response from Crystal Quill (Reviewer)

Indeed! I wouldn't read your story if I didn't like it.

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

We're very glad that you do like it :)

0/10

sunny33

nearly... very nearly!  :)

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

Nearly is not close enough! ;)

10/10

freeluciusnow21

What a cliff hanger! I was worried when I saw the chapter title. Poor Morgana... I hope she's okay. I think Severus almost giving in to her is far sexier than anything! Nice work.

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

Oh there will be much more sexiness from our favourite snarky Potion's master, don't you worry!

0/10

kallonista

Ok, not to be nitpicky, but a 360 turn would put someone right where they started, so for Morgana to have a complete flip in her feelings for Lucius and Snape it would be a 180. Anyway, I still don't know what I think about Snape and Charis, even though he is now sexybitch!snape lol. The idea is growing on me. The charmed necklaces are a fantastic idea. I can't wait to see the resolution of this evil cliffie!

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

Thank you for pointing out the error, maths is not a strong point! We have corrected this. I hope you'll get used to sexybitch!Snape as there will be plenty more of him! And thank you for the comment about the necklaces - we like them very much too.

0/10

Phyllidia

And here I was expecting Sev to give her a quick shag before taking her to the manor so she was pregnant with his child instead of Lucius'.

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

Now, Sev is more of a gentleman than that!

9/10

Phyllidia

Zounds! Snape got...star-blocked!

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

LOL! yes, indeed he did!

0/10

Phyllidia

Ooh the plot thickens.  Still going strong.

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

We admire your tenacity :)

0/10

Phyllidia

Well, gosh, I'm blushing....But that won't stop me from reading the next chapter.

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

You're blushing already? Hope you had a cold shower on stand-by for the later chapters.

Response from Phyllidia (Reviewer)

Well, I have very pale skin that tends to ruddiness so I blush easy--doesn't mean my mind isn't in the gutter 9/10ths of the time anyway....

0/10

Phyllidia

polish her pack of porcelain Persian plates I love lines like that.  And may I say Sev you naughtly boy!

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

Did we write that? Wow, whe have our moments :-)

0/10

Phyllidia

Can't getting nothing by our sneaky Slytherin Head can we?  Time to see what he does with the infomation.

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

He's like a blood hound. Doesn't miss anything. Unless he's distracted. :P

9/10

Clairvoyant

Poor Charis.  She was so brave, revealing her inner-most desires to him, and then masterbating before him, only to be rejected and embarrased.  That's cold!

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

Charis should know that is is cold in the dungeons... Cold and yet hot, at the same time

0/10

sunny33

Oh, that was not nice, Severus! :P

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

Awful. But delicious

10/10

freeluciusnow21

Oh, Severus. You are such a bastard sometimes. I'm a bit worried over Morgana as well.  A Malfoy is not someone to mess with... Lovely writing. Still on pins and needles...

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

Severus? A bastard? Whatever gave you that idea? ;) So glad you're enjoying it. There's plenty more to come!

0/10

sunny33

I think Morgana's one step ahead now! :)

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

Hope she won't trip over her own feet!

0/10

sunny33

He's an observant one! :)

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

Nothing gets past his abnormally large nose. But can he handle what he sees?

10/10

freeluciusnow21

Wow, it's heating up a bit. I like that Severus is staying aloof to the whole matter at present. Seems spot on. Nice work. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

Bring ice cubes for the next chapter! You'll need them!

9/10

Sevvy

That Morgana's a naughty girl!  Wouldn't be based on anyone you know, by any chance?! :-)

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

Nope, we don't know any decadent people like her ;)

Response from Sevvy (Reviewer)

Glad to hear it!  Thought I'd just wish you both good hols together; I will be thinking of you both innocently chatting and plotting (er, sorry, I mean sweetly pondering) when you meet up!! I'm off to sunnier climes myself on Sunday (don't know how I'm going to cope without my daily dose of TPP for two whole weeks!!)Looking forward to hearing more from you both soon.  Take care and don't do anything I wouldn't do while you're together! :-)

0/10

brunetzyca

I love  this story and often look for part 2...I hope it'll be up soon :)

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

Plotting is well under way, and we are hoping to start writing again in a few weeks time. Hopefully, we will start posting in the summer.

We are very glad that you enjoyed our story and hope you will have the patience to wait for Part 2.

10/10

DaniSnape

I tore through this in one day. Thank you for my newest addiction.

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

Thank YOU! We hope you'll enjoy the sequel, Shooting Stars, just as much :)

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