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Star Sisters

1: I: Star Sisters

2: II: How to Approach the Potions Master

3: III: Bludgers, Butterbeer and Brazen Behaviour

4: IV: Lunch at Malfoy Manor

5: V: Slytherin Thinking

6: VI: Mine is Your Mind

7: VII: Malfoy's Plan

8: VIII: Innocence Lost

9: IX: Poison Running Through My Veins

10: X: The Unbearable Beast of Burden

11: XI: Mine Is Your Body

12: XII: Secrets And Lies

13: XIII: Snakes

14: XIV: Should Old Acquaintance Be Forgot

15: XV: Descending into Darkness

16: XVI: Heartache and Tears

17: XVII: The Greater Good

18: XVIII: Date with Destiny

19: XIX: A Lesson In Lust

20: XX: Mine Is Your Heart

21: XXI: Immaculate Deception

22: XXII: A Show Of Loyalty

23: XXIII: Fractured Friendships

24: XXIV: Lost

25: XXV: The Future of Slytherin

26: XXVI: Keep It in the Family

27: XXVII: Balance of Allegiance

28: XXVIII: Spring Cleaning

29: XXIX: Potions and Pestering

30: XXX: Hell Hath No Fury Like A Slytherin Scorned

31: XXXI: How To Handle A Snake

32: XXXII: Friends Are Like Stars

33: XXXIII: Dispatches

34: XXXIV: Pruning

35: XXXV: A Black Day

36: XXXVI: Healing and Feeling

37: XXXVII: A Nice Family Dinner

38: XXXVIII: London

39: XXXIX: Revenge Is A Dish Best Served Cute

40: XL: Unveiling

41: Epilogue

Star Sisters

sevs_starsisters

224 Reviews   |   224 Ratings, 0 Likes, 52 Favorites )

Romance Alternate Universe Hogwarts Castle 222,935 Words 41 Chapters Complete
Albus Dumbledore Lucius Malfoy Original Character Severus Snape Avery (Death Eater) Bellatrix Lestrange Poppy Pomfrey Draco Malfoy Blaise Zabini Tom Riddle (Voldemort) Harry Potter Hermione Granger Filius Flitwick Sirius Black Yaxley (Death Eater) Alastor (Mad-Eye) Moody Molly Weasley Nymphadora Tonks Remus Lupin

Two girls. Two Houses. One obsession.

In their final year at Hogwarts, two very different girls face their own battle with the continuing rise of the Dark Lord, encountering along the way shattered friendships, broken hearts, a charming blond Death Eater with a twisted plan, and a secret that could rock the foundations of the Wizarding world. Once more, the stern Potions master will have to do the impossible and offer his protection. Will he succeed?

Set during Harry Potter and The Order Of The Phoenix and mostly canon compliant.

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Chapters (41)

Chapter 1: I: Star Sisters

Chapter 2: II: How to Approach the Potions Master

Chapter 3: III: Bludgers, Butterbeer and Brazen Behaviour

Chapter 4: IV: Lunch at Malfoy Manor

Chapter 5: V: Slytherin Thinking

Chapter 6: VI: Mine is Your Mind

Chapter 7: VII: Malfoy's Plan

Chapter 8: VIII: Innocence Lost

Chapter 9: IX: Poison Running Through My Veins

Chapter 10: X: The Unbearable Beast of Burden

Chapter 11: XI: Mine Is Your Body

Chapter 12: XII: Secrets And Lies

Chapter 13: XIII: Snakes

Chapter 14: XIV: Should Old Acquaintance Be Forgot

Chapter 15: XV: Descending into Darkness

Chapter 16: XVI: Heartache and Tears

Chapter 17: XVII: The Greater Good

Chapter 18: XVIII: Date with Destiny

Chapter 19: XIX: A Lesson In Lust

Chapter 20: XX: Mine Is Your Heart

Chapter 21: XXI: Immaculate Deception

Chapter 22: XXII: A Show Of Loyalty

Chapter 23: XXIII: Fractured Friendships

Chapter 24: XXIV: Lost

Chapter 25: XXV: The Future of Slytherin

Chapter 26: XXVI: Keep It in the Family

Chapter 27: XXVII: Balance of Allegiance

Chapter 28: XXVIII: Spring Cleaning

Chapter 29: XXIX: Potions and Pestering

Chapter 30: XXX: Hell Hath No Fury Like A Slytherin Scorned

Chapter 31: XXXI: How To Handle A Snake

Chapter 32: XXXII: Friends Are Like Stars

Chapter 33: XXXIII: Dispatches

Chapter 34: XXXIV: Pruning

Chapter 35: XXXV: A Black Day

Chapter 36: XXXVI: Healing and Feeling

Chapter 37: XXXVII: A Nice Family Dinner

Chapter 38: XXXVIII: London

Chapter 39: XXXIX: Revenge Is A Dish Best Served Cute

Chapter 40: XL: Unveiling

Chapter 41: Epilogue


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A Slytherin (morgaine_dulac) and a Ravenclaw (star_girl) met through a mutual love of the brooding Potions master. They discovered they enjoyed writing seperately, but thought joining forces could be even more fun. Are they bat-shit-crazy? Well, you'll have to wait and see...

 

 

 


 

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10/10

Crystal Quill

That was an excellent display of wit by Charis. She stood up to her task brilliantly. I just hope she and Jack become more interested in their project, now that Lucious practically forbade them. Now that Dumbledore is about to leave Hogwarts, it is pretty obvious that Snape will take care of his little girls...in every sense, that is.

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

Charis did indeed do well, but did Malfoy put them off or will it just make them hunt harder? And as for Snape: his hands are very full, and he will have a tough time looking after his girls, but you'll know that he'll do his best.

10/10

freeluciusnow21

Oh, this is going to be interesting. I'm glad nothing catastrophic has happened yet between Lucius and Charis.  

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

Catastrophe starting in 5, 4, 3, ....

10/10

braye27

I think Charis and Jack played their parts very well, and even though Lucius warned both of them off pursuing their research into magical transference via genetics, I don't think for a minute they will give up what they have started.I can't wait to see how the next day goes for Lucius with Charis as his guide.  He will surely try to get some "alone time" with Morgana, but between Severus, Dumbledore, and Charis, maybe he will be thwarted... a bit... or not.Of course Lucius will spend time in Slytherin House, but with Draco there, how will he be able to pay attention to Morgana without letting the cat out of the bag in front of Draco or the other students in Slytherin.Will Morgana be able to keep herself away from Lucius?  Will she be able to "duck" a clandestine meeting in some out-of-the-way classroom that he is sure to suggest?  Can't wait to see how this turns out!Beth

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

We LOVE how you're guessing what's going to happen. For now, we just say: wait and see :)

10/10

Lkmaide

YIKES!!  poor Charis!  But the fact remains, recessive genes in incest prone circles like purebloods should overtime develop into Squibs.  Good thing the Blacks were such snobs.

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

This is one little secret the Blacks would like to sweep under the carpet. With a huge broom!Thanks for joining the circle of reviewers. We hope you will enjoy the rest of the story.

0/10

hidden

Still really enjoying this. Would like snape to be a bit more sympathetic though.

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

We'll all get a dose of sympathetic Snape pretty soon! Promise!

10/10

braye27

It seem as though Severus' plate is always filled to overflowing.  What can possibly happen next?  Dumbledore will almost certainly be dismissed as Headmaster and may end up in Azkaban.  He has told Severus to make himself available to Morgana... "keep your door unlocked."  Like Severus doesn't have enough to keep up with already.Dumbledore has "encouraged" Severus to find someone with whom he can "settle down," and now the Headmaster is planning a Spring Ball.  Just what Severus needs.  Is Dumbles setting Snape up to ask someone to be his date at this ball?  Good grief!Morgana's body is fighting the "Devil's spawn" she is carrying.  Lucius is as cunning as ever, and is trying to convince the Dark Lord that Severus is a traitor to the cause.  He is angry that Severus can't control Morgana and blames the Potions master for the bloodied face the girl gave his precious son.  Voldemort will soon visit Hogwarts castle.  Draco has told them about the discovery he made regarding Charis' ancestry. And life for Severus Snape had been made immeasurably more difficult and miserable.  You ladies are trying to break the Head of Slytherin House, aren't you?  I hope he is made of sterner stuff and can withstand all that you have dreamed up for him.Great chapter!!!Beth

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

We are sure that, given a chance, Dumbledore would indeed love to meddle in Severus' love life.

Not sure if Severus would appreciate, though.

And seeing how much he had on his plate already, the last thing he needs is a love affair.

Lucius and Severus meanwhile are once more out-snarking each other. Those two have a lot of bad blood.Keep your eyes open for the next chapters. We're not done with messing things up just yet.

10/10

Crystal Quill

Wait a minute! Has Snape been actually poisoning Morgana, or was that meant to be a metaphor?No wonder Snape thought Dumbledore was serious when he suggested him to wear a dress in order to fulfil the motherly figure Morgana needs. One doesn’t know when the old man is serious recently :-) On the other hand, Snape certainly needs to improve if he wants to be a match for Lucius, who's really got Morgana eating from his hand. This reminds me of Greek tragedies. Pleasure always comes at the expense of great sorrow.

I look forward to the next udate.

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

We all know that Snape cuts a dashing figure in a dress. Can't blame Dumbledore for bringing it up.

Everyone has their own cross to bare in this story, but we hope it's not all doom and gloom.

Eventhough some of us like doom and gloom, hehe :)

10/10

freeluciusnow21

Really interesting chapter. The concept of Morgana's body knowing that something is wrong and fighting against the baby is brilliant. I'm surprised that Lucius didn't do something worse to her, but I'm glad he didn't.

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

Lucius has to be nice to Morgana. He cannot afford to lose her. He's playing his part well, so far...

10/10

Crystal Quill

Ha! What will Morgana say when she finds out Charis is a Black, no less! Charis is finally behaving like a Ravenclaw, with a little helf from Jack. I wish she forgot about Snape and stuck to him...but I know she won't, you evil writers :P As for Morgana, it was nice to see she remains loyal to Charis in spite of the turmoil she's going through herself.I loved the opening scene at the Astronomy Tower.

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

Love throws all logic out of the window. Plays havoc with emotional Ravenclaws and knocks their reason for six. As for us being evil, whatever makes you say that? We're hurt :pSo glad you're still enjoying it.

10/10

braye27

Wow!  This family tree stuff is verrrrrrry interesting.  No wonder Draco nearly had a coronary when he read that marriage announcement.  I think eventually Jack and Charis will find that she is descended from the Noble House of Black.  See...

•  There is the marriage announcement of Callista Black to George Byrne in June, 1950.•  Callista's parents are Eleanor and Marius Black.•  Marius Black is the son of Cygnus and Violette (Bulstrode) Black and the grandson of Phineas Nigellus and Ursula (Flint) Black.•  Marius Black would have been born sometime between 1915 and 1920.•  Marius Black was disowned by the Black family because he was a squib. •  Charis told Jack that her paternal grandparents had died before she was born and that her father did not like talking about them.•  So it stands to reason that Charis Byrne's great-great-grandfather was none other than Phineas Nigellus Black, Headmaster of Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and

Wizardry.•  Charis Byrne's relationship to Phineas Nigellus Black is the same as Narcissa Malfoy's... making her a nearer descendant of the Headmaster than Draco is.

•  I have no idea of Charis' mother's ancestry.  Eleanor Black could have come from a Wizarding line as well, but I couldn't find any information about an "Eleanor," and Jack and Charis' research into her maternal line had come to a dead end without any indication of a Wizarding ancestry.

•  There was also an earlier "Charis" in the Black family tree.  This Charis Black was the daughter of Arcturus and Lysandra (Yaxley) Black, and a granddaughter of

Phineas Nigellus Black.  She was born in 1919 and married Caspar Crouch.  So the name "Charis" is not unheard of within the annals of the Black family.It was a good thing that Severus changed Charis' shirt to read Muggle-born instead of Mudblood.  She didn't need to call further attention to herself with "that word" because Draco has come to the decision that "the nosey Ravenclaws [Charis and Jack] would need to be silenced once and for all."And Morgana has opened another can of "wormies" by knocking the crap out of Draco because he insulted her friend again.  Her nerves are frayed to the breaking point, and Severus is having a devil of a time trying to get her to practice her Occlumency skills.  Thank goodness this time he didn't resort to kissing the young and very pregnant Slytherin.  What a messier mess we now have!  Severus has had sex with the great-great-granddaughter of former Headmaster Black... who probably knows that Charis is one of his descendent's but isn't saying anything.  Severus has engaged in kissing and groping with the pregnant young mistress to Lucius Malfoy who is a student of his House.  And sooner or later the cats will get out of the bag... the only question is just who will see these cats and what price will Severus have to pay for this.  And since this is in the category of Hogwarts Castle (not Potions Under Duress), I have know idea if Severus will make it out of this with his skin intact.Great writing, ladies!  This in one of the most fascinating and convoluted plots I've ever had the pleasure to read.Beth

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

Firstly, we need to congratulate you on your detective abilities. We have tried to make this story as canon compliant as possible, and it's rewarding to know you enjoy the story enough to appreciate the research we've done for it.We did promise you more wormies, and now you have some cats into the bargain aswell! In a couple of chapters time, you might be smelling a rat

10/10

freeluciusnow21

I love Charis taking some action! And, more importantly, really thinking about her situation. For a moment I thought she would flee from Hogwarts. I'm glad she's sticking it out. And, of course, yeah for some Snape sugar. : )

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

There's plenty more action for Charis coming up. And as for Snape's sugar - extra helpings over here, please!

10/10

Crystal Quill

You make me like Lucius. I wonder how he'd react if Morgana suffered a miscarriage. I can imagine his rage. So now Snape will have to sacrifice himself seducing Morgana so that she doesn't turn to the dark side. How considerate of him  . I always comment on the plot, but I should note that I also read your story because I love your writing.

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

Now WE are not going to comment on the plot, but we thank you very much for your compliments :-) Please keep reading to see which of your theories are correct.

10/10

braye27

Good lord!  The impossible order that Dumbledore had given to Severus to protect Morgana is requiring him to do things that he may have wanted to do, but I fear that he may be losing himself in the web of deceit that he may have trouble walking away from it.I don't see how anything good can come from this encounter between the Potions master and the Slytherin student.  Sooner or later a price will be have to be paid.Another wonderful chapter!Beth

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

We did promise you wriggly wormies ... here they are :P

10/10

freeluciusnow21

Ugh! I'm taking Morgana's lead and falling for Lucius. He's becoming more irresistible in each chapter. I think it's the way you write him. I like Severus's response to it all too. And the whole secret stash thing is sexy. Think of what he could do with chocolate.

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

One of us loves Lucius, and the other one loves writing him.Now we're having bad thoughts about chocolate. :PThanks for being such a faithful reader and reviewer.

10/10

Crystal Quill

It's interesting how your Snape gets carried by is passions, and yet he has the ability to come to his senses. On the other hand, Charis is blinded. How can't she see she can find love and understanding in Jack... I hate when young girls turn to older men assuming they are mature. They wouldn't meddle with young girls if they were.I wonder how Charis and Morgana will find the way back to each other. Something very serious will need to happen. Maybe Morgana will be able to protect Charis knowing what happens within the Death Eater's circle.

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

Even Severus Snape is only a man. And Charis is young and inexperienced. And yes, it will take something special to bring the girls back together. Keep reading to find out what!

0/10

sunny33

Poor Charis, she really has lost almost everything... but she still has Jack!

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

Cheers.

0/10

sunny33

Poor Charis, she really has lost almost everything... but she still has Jack!

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

It is a trying time for everyone involved. It will get better ... eventually.

10/10

makaem

Now he just needs to stay away from her. Jack seems like a really nice boy...

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

Snape knows he is doing a wrong. But even HE has feelings. And yes, Jack IS a nice boy! Totally adorable.

10/10

Crystal Quill

So Lucius happened to be quite a stud, and Morgana is now turning into a nymphomaniac thanks to him... In the end she’s been far luckier than Charis. I wonder what Draco would say if he knew she's her father's new mistress. For a minute I thought Lucius would tell Morgana about Lily, but he didn't get that far. Well, he had other business in mind, of course. As for Snape, I wonder  why he couldn't be found in Hogwarts Castle. Did he by any chance decided to get back to Malfoy Manor and saw what happened there?

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

If your definition of "lucky" is "more sex", then yes, Morgana has lucked out! Otherwise ... not so sure.As for Snape, maybe if you look in the library you'll see he was otherwise engaged, he was giving a private lesson, hem-hem. :P

Response from Crystal Quill (Reviewer)

Ah! I see. It wasn't that Snape wasn't in the Castle, but that Silvy simply couldn't figure out where he was exactly. Regarding Morgana and Lucius, you gave the impression that he actually liked the girl, and that this went beyond his loathsome plan. That's why I assumed he really wanted her as a steady mistress, and not just until she got pregnant.

10/10

braye27

This entire encounter was heartbreaking.  Lucius was clearly doing his best to seduce Morgana to his wishes, and she had a job to do.  It is doubly confusing for Morgana that she knows what Lucius' plan is and yet cannot prevent herself from desiring him.Now that she is "pregnant with Lucius Malfoy’s child, the heir of the Dark Lord," how will she be able to function when she returns to Hogwarts?  She may be able to put it out of her mind for the moment, but that cannot last.  In three months time she will be expected to abort this child.  Will she be able to do this?  She will need all of the support she can get from Charis, Severus, and the Headmaster if she is to survive all of this with any hope of a future worth living.Will Lucius still seek to have her return to Malfoy Manor?  Of course he will.  How long will it be before Draco realizes what is going on between his father and his classmate?  Will he tell his mother?  What will Narcissa do if/when she discovers the truth behind Lucius' interest in Morgana?  This can only get messier!  Another great chapter, ladies!Beth

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

We agree. Morgana needs Charis, and Charis needs Morgana. But will they be able to cling on to each other, or will their problems drive a wedge between them? Will Morgana push Charis away, and will Charis let her fall, just as Snape predicted in chapter one?*cue dramatic music*Stay tuned!

10/10

makaem

Poor Morgana.

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

And it's all downhill from here ...

0/10

sunny33

At least she has some awareness of the truth.:)

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

Hard to know what the truth is when you have a dreamy blond wizard making your body sing!

10/10

freeluciusnow21

Oh Morgana, don't get sucked in. This chapter was fabulous. I'm really enjoying the continuing plot complications you've created!

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

Poor girl is falling, and there is no safety net. And it all just gets more and more complicated! Stay tuned.

0/10

Clairvoyant

Wow!  That was hot.  Definitely a lesson to be learned.  What was he thinking? 

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

He was thinking with his other brain... you know, the one-eyed robe snake's brain? :p 

10/10

braye27

The goings on at Malfoy Manor had gotten to our Potions master, and he found his Charis when he went looking for her.  An now he knows beyond a shadow of a doubt that his life and hers have been forever changed.What will tomorrow bring for all of them... Morgana, Charis, Severus, and Lucius?Ladies, you have just ratcheted up the stakes quite a bit.Nicely done, too!  This was!Beth

Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)

If you think that's smoking, have a cold shower on standby for future chapters!

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