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Cake
ayerf10 Reviews | 10 Ratings, 0 Likes, 14 Favorites )
Severus, Hermione, Lucius and a chocolate cake.
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ayerf
Member Since 2006 | 30 Stories | Favorited by 277 | 151 Reviews Written | 1,977 Review Responses
Jumped on the Harry Potter bandwagon in 2000 (when Goblet of Fire was out in hardback). Prisoner of Azkaban is my favourite in the series, followed by Order of the Phoenix. I read and write in the SS/HG corner of the Potterverse.
Reviews for Cake
Brill, my favourite foursome ;-) The touch with Crooks is pure genius.
Response from ayerf (Author of Cake)
Thank you! I just couldn't resist Crooks as the guilty culprit.
Oh my! lol! What a nifty little piece this is - between sneaking out to get the last bit of cake (to me that's SO Lucius), the description of his slippers, then the trap, the tears and finally the unveiling of the culprit, you had me giggling till I ended up doing a muttley snigger! Then add the mouthwatering description of that cake...... mmmmmm....chocolate...drool...(goes off into a haze of choccie fantasies)You wicked person! Making me choose between chocolate and Lucius and Snape fantasies....Hang on..MY fantasy, so I choose... both of them feeding me chocolate cake, whilst doing other naughty things! YEAH!An endearingly funny drabble!
Response from ayerf (Author of Cake)
Thank you! Glad you liked sneaky!Lucius and his slippers and found it funny!I hoped the chocolate cake would be fantasy inducing!
Novelty peacock slippers??? You had me laughing out loud there. Great story!!gab
Response from ayerf (Author of Cake)
Thank you! I'm delighted to hear it, I just couldn't resist giving him them.
Severus and Lucius - but I'm drooling over your wonderful imagery of the cake - where are my prioritites? Thanks for a delightful snap shot!
Response from ayerf (Author of Cake)
I'm delighted my description of the cake was drool worthy! I did my best to describe my ideal birthday cake there.Thanks for reviewing!
poor Crookshanks, but I understand how he feels. One should learn to resist certain temptations.
Response from ayerf (Author of Cake)
Maybe Crooks has learned his lesson now... or maybe chocolate cake is irresistable.Thanks for reviewing!
Poor kitty has quite a tummy ache doesnt he? My precious.
Response from ayerf (Author of Cake)
Poor Crooks indeed! Maybe he'll now know to leave the chocolate for his human now.Thanks for reviewing!
Bad Crooks! And Lucius, you git. Stealing a birthday cake! He should be punished... ^_^
Response from ayerf (Author of Cake)
I think Crooks might have learned his lesson...And Lucius definitely needs some punishment. I'm not sure having fingers caught in a mousetrap was enough, as he still intended to steal the cake...Thanks for reviewing!
Oh this was delicious! In so many ways!Cheers. /M
Response from ayerf (Author of Cake)
Thank you! I'm delighted to hear it, I hoped it would be.