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Potions Under Duress Macushla
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Macushla

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Macushla

neelix

26 Reviews   |   26 Ratings, 0 Likes, 11 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Drama Angst Romance General Songfic compliant post-DH/DH Potions Under Duress 2,392 Words 3 Chapters Complete
Severus Snape

This is a song-inspired fic featuring Hermione and Severus. It's only short but I hope you like it all the same!

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Chapters (3)

Chapter 1: Chapter One

Chapter 2: Chapter Two

Chapter 3: Chapter Three


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neelix

Member Since 2008  |  21 Stories  |  Favorited by 471  |  528 Reviews Written  |  2,066 Review Responses

Happily married to a sexy Irishman, one teenage son.

Work with teenagers.

Obsessed with Alan Rickman and SS/HG fiction.

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0/10

sunny33

Lovely finish! :)

Response from neelix (Author of Macushla)

ahh thank you. Glad you liked it.

0/10

sunny33

Harry knows?

10/10

Muggline

What a beautiful little piece of fiction – Thank you!

Response from neelix (Author of Macushla)

Oh what a nice thing to say! thank you so much!

10/10

debjunk

Ahh, thank you.  I was a bit nervous when she arrived to find the place seemingly deserted.  Then I was sure when she walked into the bedroom that he would be lying there, dead.  Thanks for letting him live.  A nice ending, where I'm sure they'll find peace.

Response from neelix (Author of Macushla)

I have to tell you that neither Hermione nor Severus will ever pop their clogs in any of my fics! And there will always be a happy ever after - I am a sucker for it! Thanks for reviewing and I am very pleased you liked it!

0/10

HermioneJeanSnape

Such a sweet ficlet. I like the idea of an unplottable cottage he could use as a base...its interesting to start from a point like you started from, so each reader can invent their own beginning and ending. Great job!

Response from neelix (Author of Macushla)

Thank you so much! I like stories where you have to fill in the gaps... it's just a small snap shot, so you can make up the rest rather than have me hold your hand. Thanks for the reveiw!

10/10

beaweasley2

What a lovely little story and a much nicer ending to the battle. Thank you so much for sharring this. 

Response from neelix (Author of Macushla)

ahh thank you so much. I hope you listened to the song, it makes the fic all the more emotional.

10/10

makaem

Great story.

Response from neelix (Author of Macushla)

Thanks for reviewing and your nice comment!

10/10

braye27

She pulled him down beside her and kissed him fiercely before snuggling under his arm and forcing him to hold her. Severus sighed and closed his eyes.The perfect ending, neelix!  Well done!  Beth

Response from neelix (Author of Macushla)

ahhh... thank you! I didn't think it needed anything else. They had each other, and that was the ultimate aim after all.

10/10

serenity_potterx

absolutly love this. Its awesome S_pxxxx

Response from neelix (Author of Macushla)

wow thankyou! So glad people are liking this little fic :)

10/10

Becky

OMG..OK Crying now!!!  I love this, and can't wait until the next chapter!!!  WOW Neelix, excellent stoof....(((HUGS))) brandi1498 from 394...

Response from neelix (Author of Macushla)

Thanks!! Glad you like it.

9/10

beaweasley2

Oh, so Harry knew? and he's okay with her and Sev being together? cool!

Response from neelix (Author of Macushla)

lmao at you reviewing all three chapters! Thanks for taking the time.

0/10

kimjo2

lovely, happy ending.  thanks so much

Response from neelix (Author of Macushla)

Thankyou for reading, and for your kind comment. So glad you liked it!

0/10

kimjo2

lovely, just lovely.  i can't wait for her to get there!  thanks

Response from neelix (Author of Macushla)

ahh thank you! I hope you're not disappointed.

10/10

Nessa

Clever boy that Harry. I hope Severus is well and she finds him.

Look forward to more as always.

x

Response from neelix (Author of Macushla)

Thanks for reviewing, and I hope the next (last) chapter doesn't disappoint.

10/10

braye27

How could she have waited so long to go to the cottage?  I know there were the deaths of friends to mourn, and a victory to cherish in the company of surviving friends, but I know I'd have had to steal a few moments to go to the cottage... just in case, you see...I hope that Severus is still alive and waiting for her.  Sigh!  I can't wait for your next chapter.  Well done!Beth 

Response from neelix (Author of Macushla)

She had to wait, because they've kept everything secret. She couldn't risk blowing the cover on their relationship, plus - there is the fall out from Severus killing Dumbledore to deal with... he's not a free man yet! But Harry knew....Thanks for reviewing and I am very glad you are enjoying it.

9/10

debjunk

Oh!  I hope he's still alive!  I can't believe she couldn't break away before now. 

Response from neelix (Author of Macushla)

She has to bide her time. Their relationship is secret and as far as they know he's dead right? AND he killed Dumbledore and the truth is not yet out. He's not a free man.... she has to protect him, for her own sake.Thanks for reviewing. Answers in the next chapter, which is in the queue.

9/10

beaweasley2

Slipping away to spend a moment with Severus, how romantic. Figures all Ron cares about is his stomach. 

Response from neelix (Author of Macushla)

uhuh!! I like to try and stick to type!

0/10

sunny33

Intriguing.  I like the way it starts in the middle of things, gives the reader all sorts of leeway to imagine how they have come to this point.

Response from neelix (Author of Macushla)

Thanks for the review. I love stories that give the reader food for thought, and when I heard this song and the lyrics, it really sparked my imagination. I could see them forming a relationship and keeping it secret etc. Even I am asking... how did they come to this point? lol

10/10

Nessa

Really nice opening, Look forward to more.

x

Response from neelix (Author of Macushla)

Thank you! I hope the rest doesn't disappoint - it's only short.

0/10

debjunk

Well, I'm worried already.  It would be so hard for them to know what the future might hold, yet try to live in the present.  I suppose their meetings must be very short if she has to cover them up with the gathering of firewood.

Response from neelix (Author of Macushla)

My thought was that once the boys were asleep in the tent, she would sneak out to Severus. This would be before they started to keep watch alternately, naturally - although she's a determined young woman so I am sure she would have found a way! Thanks for the review :)

9/10

braye27

This is a heartbreaking opening and I want so badly for Severus and Hermione to be together.  Knowing the lyrics, I have to wonder in what direction events will carry them.Well done, you have set the tone perfectly.Beth

Response from neelix (Author of Macushla)

Thank you so much. The song is so moving, it seemed the perfect back drop to a relationship between them set at that time...

9/10

Sevvy

I rather stupidly didn't realise that this was a 3 chapter story and reviewed on chapter 1 thinking that was it!  I'm so glad it wasn't!If only JKR could have given him an ending like this (don't get me started on that - I could go on for hours!!)I do so love happy endings...thank you! :-)

Response from neelix (Author of Macushla)

lol.. don't worry! Did you listen to the song? It's beautiful and very moving...

9/10

Sevvy

Having read and reviewed one of your stories earlier today (which I loved!), I've been tempted to check out more of your stuff.  This is absolutely lovely too and brought tears to my eyes...poor Severus and poor Hermione, I guess the future doesn't bode well for them.  Clearly you are a true romantic though and this is a poignant little fic.  Do you mind me asking if you are Irish by any chance?  I realise that the song is Irish and I believe I'm right in saying that it was featured in the film Michael Collins (which of course starred Alan Rickman) and which I was co-incidently only recently watching.I just have to add here that the thought of a secret 'tryst' with the dear Potions master has set my pulse racing - would definitely make a camping trip bearable in my opinion! :-)

Response from neelix (Author of Macushla)

You're a clever little thing! I'm not Irish but I have been living with an Irishman for 20 years (married him eventually...) and we do live in Ireland now, which I totally love... it's such a spiritual place, good for feeding the muse... and my favourite actor is ALAN RICKMAN!! Who'd a' guessed???In fact, if you're a fan, check out the link to the Page394 forum!Thanks for the lovely review.

10/10

MollysSister

That was madening the way they kept missing each other there at the end. Thankfully they reunited again at their cottage. Thank you for not letting Snape be killed by that damn snake.

Response from neelix (Author of Macushla)

Never! JKR made a HUGE mistake!

Response from MollysSister (Reviewer)

Amen to that!

10/10

MollysSister

Harry knew??? When did he get to be so observent? Love it

Response from neelix (Author of Macushla)

My story... Harry was just a plot point to get hermione outa there! In my head he's not that smart to be honest, but I am guessing he knew more than he was letting on. I think we'll never know!

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