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Contraceptus

Ariadne AWS

22 Reviews   |   22 Ratings, 0 Likes, 27 Favorites )

Drama Potions Under Duress 758 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Severus has found Hermione's shoe. What happens next? (Winner, Best Drabble/Snapshot ~ 2008 OWL Awards)

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Chapter 1: Contraceptus


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10/10

mick42

ti seems a very ''SEVERUS'' thing to do, plan for every contingency. I get the feeling it would have been a stopgap measure, untill he could find a way to free her.

10/10

snitchette

This is disturbing. How can he say she is of no consequence as he obviously has feelings for her and it seems since a very long time? I hope he'll come back and she'll forgive him. I think you should write the next. It can't end like that. Please.

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

Hi,

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

- I know you've reviewed the longer version (and I thank you!) but I think your question here about how he can say she is of no consequence deserves an answer...There are a lot of reasons why he'd say that she _wasn't_ anyone of consequence (his line is in response to Hermione's "Who was she?") - they're all kind of muddled because it's a muddly moment in a muddly problem, but the way I see it working is this:1.  It never happened, and it's something that on one level he'd like to forget.2.  He can't forget it, but, as it wasn't real, he'll try to keep it compartmentalized (he'll fail, of course, as comes out in the longer version).3.  He feels guilty that she was of such consequence to him when she was so young, although Molly's take on that (in the longer version) indicates that his guilt may be out of proportion to how others would have seen it under other circumstances.4.  He doesn't want to tell Hermione, on the surface of things, anyway, and is hoping to deflect her questioning (on one level).  In other words, he's lying, but not entirely.I hope that helps?Thank you, as always,~ Ari

Response from snitchette (Reviewer)

Yes enornously. Thank you for that detailed answer.

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

Hi,

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

- I know you've reviewed the longer version (and I thank you!) but I think your question here about how he can say she is of no consequence deserves an answer...There are a lot of reasons why he'd say that she _wasn't_ anyone of consequence (his line is in response to Hermione's "Who was she?") - they're all kind of muddled because it's a muddly moment in a muddly problem, but the way I see it working is this:1.  It never happened, and it's something that on one level he'd like to forget.2.  He can't forget it, but, as it wasn't real, he'll try to keep it compartmentalized (he'll fail, of course, as comes out in the longer version).3.  He feels guilty that she was of such consequence to him when she was so young, although Molly's take on that (in the longer version) indicates that his guilt may be out of proportion to how others would have seen it under other circumstances.4.  He doesn't want to tell Hermione, on the surface of things, anyway, and is hoping to deflect her questioning (on one level).  In other words, he's lying, but not entirely.I hope that helps?Thank you, as always,~ Ari

Response from snitchette (Reviewer)

Yes enornously. Thank you for that detailed answer.

9/10

bookwyrmqueen

Ooh, excellent suspense throughout. I absolutely loved the last line. Brava!

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

Thanks so much!  ;)  ~ Ari

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

Thanks so much!  ;)  ~ Ari

0/10

sunny33

That's a twist!

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

*smiles*  Just a bit of a twist there!  Thank you for reviewing :)  ~ Ari

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

*smiles*  Just a bit of a twist there!  Thank you for reviewing :)  ~ Ari

10/10

karelia

*phew* I'm glad you're continuing!

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

*grins*  Me too, my friend; me too.  *waves*  Thank you!

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

*grins*  Me too, my friend; me too.  *waves*  Thank you!

0/10

mock_turtle

eurg.  weird ending.  I can't decide if I like it or not.  hm..

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

I get that - it is a very weird ending.  Thanks for taking the time to review despite the weirdness and the ambivalent feeling it leaves you with - I appreciate it ~ Ari

Response from mock_turtle (Reviewer)

ambivalent is definitely the right word.

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

I get that - it is a very weird ending.  Thanks for taking the time to review despite the weirdness and the ambivalent feeling it leaves you with - I appreciate it ~ Ari

Response from mock_turtle (Reviewer)

ambivalent is definitely the right word.

10/10

MollysSister

Oh.Well then. I guess Hermione has some backpedaling to do huh?

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

Seems so!  Bit of a twist with that last line.  *smiles*  This one won't seem to let me go; there may be more coming.Thanks, Molly :D  *waves*  ~ Ari

Response from MollysSister (Reviewer)

See the little cheerleader girl <---She and I both would like to see this continued. I'll just bookmark it quick so you don't sneak by me.

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

Seems so!  Bit of a twist with that last line.  *smiles*  This one won't seem to let me go; there may be more coming.Thanks, Molly :D  *waves*  ~ Ari

Response from MollysSister (Reviewer)

See the little cheerleader girl <---She and I both would like to see this continued. I'll just bookmark it quick so you don't sneak by me.

10/10

braye27

How very Slytherin of you!  I loved it, and the last line came right out of the blue.  I wasn't expecting that at all!!!Well done!Beth

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

Thanks so much, Beth!  So glad you liked it, and that the last line delivered the twisty punch I was hoping for ;)  ~ Ari

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

Thanks so much, Beth!  So glad you liked it, and that the last line delivered the twisty punch I was hoping for ;)  ~ Ari

0/10

FruGal

I loved the terseness of this story and the last sentence was a real kicker. I think sticking to the drabble format helped alot. Good work.

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

Thank you,

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

(love your name, btw)...  I'm so pleased you liked it.  Cheers!  ~ Ari

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

Thank you,

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

(love your name, btw)...  I'm so pleased you liked it.  Cheers!  ~ Ari

8/10

MistressSnape

Wow.  That was pretty intense.

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

Thanks,

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

.Cheers,~ Ari

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

Thanks,

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

.Cheers,~ Ari

9/10

dressagegrrrl

Oh my gosh!  *Goggles a bit at ending*  This was really good.

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

Thanks much,

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

!  Bit of a twist, there - glad you enjoyed it.Cheers,~ Ari

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

Thanks much,

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

!  Bit of a twist, there - glad you enjoyed it.Cheers,~ Ari

0/10

morgaine_dulac

Oh wow.

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

*nods*  Thanks,

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

!Cheers,~ Ari

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

*nods*  Thanks,

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

!Cheers,~ Ari

0/10

Shiverrus

Powerful!

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

Thanks, as always,

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

!  Pleased to hear that it touched you.Cheers,~ Ari

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

Thanks, as always,

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

!  Pleased to hear that it touched you.Cheers,~ Ari

0/10

tonksinger

Oohh... twisty. I like it very much.

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

Thanks so much,

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

!  Glad you liked it.  Pleasure meeting you at Terminus, too.  Cheers,~ Ari

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

Thanks so much,

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

!  Glad you liked it.  Pleasure meeting you at Terminus, too.  Cheers,~ Ari

10/10

Melenka

I like your intentionally blank spaces in the story - things we don't know, maybe can't know - they leave us with so much to imagine.  They also create a delicious tension.  And the last one is a complete sucker punch.  Perfect.

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

I flourish my quill of white space, 'Lenka my dear, and am so pleased the sucker punch worked for you.And now I shall wander off to announce your lovely new fic far and wide.  :D*grateful bow*~ Ari

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

I flourish my quill of white space, 'Lenka my dear, and am so pleased the sucker punch worked for you.And now I shall wander off to announce your lovely new fic far and wide.  :D*grateful bow*~ Ari

10/10

blackaces924

awesome! that last line.... *swoons*

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

*smiles*  Bit of a shocker for its writer as it was all evolving.  Thanks much, as always, blackaces - glad you enjoyed it!~ Ari

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

*smiles*  Bit of a shocker for its writer as it was all evolving.  Thanks much, as always, blackaces - glad you enjoyed it!~ Ari

10/10

OpalJade

Very nicely written!I am looking forward to more!

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

Thanks much,

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

:)  I initially intended this one as a stand-alone becaue of the drabble challenge - but the characters have more to say, so it seems there's more coming!Cheers, and thanks!~ Ari

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

Thanks much,

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

:)  I initially intended this one as a stand-alone becaue of the drabble challenge - but the characters have more to say, so it seems there's more coming!Cheers, and thanks!~ Ari

0/10

Isode

What a different feel from A Walking Shadow.  I think I will like this one just as much.   Nice start.

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

Thanks,

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

... your reviews always make me so happy :)This one started as a response to a challenge and so I initially intended it as a stand-alone - but the characters have more to say, so there may be more coming soon.  Still have to finish No Loyalty, but I'll be putting the last chapter of AWS up where you're reading this weekend.Cheers!  *waves*~ Ari

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

Thanks,

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

... your reviews always make me so happy :)This one started as a response to a challenge and so I initially intended it as a stand-alone - but the characters have more to say, so there may be more coming soon.  Still have to finish No Loyalty, but I'll be putting the last chapter of AWS up where you're reading this weekend.Cheers!  *waves*~ Ari

9/10

irishredlass

Already he was protecting her in her 6th year...were they together then or just looking?

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

Hi,

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

...He was already protecting her... this was one of those that started as a small response to a drabble challenge but has already outgrown its form.  And apparently the characters have more to say, so there may be more soon... so your question will get an answer even though initially I wanted to leave the backstory up to the readers... *laughs  The characters, they have other ideas.Cheers,~ Ari

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

Hi,

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

...He was already protecting her... this was one of those that started as a small response to a drabble challenge but has already outgrown its form.  And apparently the characters have more to say, so there may be more soon... so your question will get an answer even though initially I wanted to leave the backstory up to the readers... *laughs  The characters, they have other ideas.Cheers,~ Ari

10/10

CordyAngelSeer

Really, really enjoyed this.  Hope there is more to come. Just adored Severus and Hermione's interaction and his confession at the end.  Great Job.

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

Thanks,

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

... so pleased you enjoyed it, especially his confession.  Initially this was to have been a stand-alone under the rules of the challenge, with readers free to imagine whatever backstory they wished, but the characters have more to say, so there may be more soon.Cheers - and thanks again!~ Ari

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

Thanks,

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

... so pleased you enjoyed it, especially his confession.  Initially this was to have been a stand-alone under the rules of the challenge, with readers free to imagine whatever backstory they wished, but the characters have more to say, so there may be more soon.Cheers - and thanks again!~ Ari

9/10

Maggie

Wow, very well done....

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

Thank you,

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

:)  *waves*  ~ Ari

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

Thank you,

Response from Ariadne AWS (Author of Contraceptus)

:)  *waves*  ~ Ari

10/10

Helena Rickman

Wow! I didn't see that coming! Brilliant!

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