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What Goes Around....

1: The Interview

2: A Secret Revealed

3: Kindness Personified

4: Quiet Authority

5: A Room with a View

6: Tough at the Top

7: Mysteries and Complications

8: A Taste of Honey.

9: A Key Question

10: Tentative Progress

11: A Bit of a Dilemma

12: So that's where it goes!

13: Faded Grandeur

14: Bewitched, Bothered and Bewildered

15: By the Pricking of my Thumbs...

16: Aftermath

17: Epilogue

What Goes Around....

melusin

548 Reviews   |   548 Ratings, 0 Likes, 364 Favorites )

Drama Romance Drabble/100-Word Potions Under Duress 24,901 Words 17 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Original Character Severus Snape Albus Dumbledore Minerva McGonagall Armando Dippet The Bloody Baron Salazar Slytherin

Down on his luck, Snape returns to Hogwarts to seek employment. Will the Headmistress give him a chance?
Drabble series written for the 'Headmistress Hermione' challenge on Grangersnape100.
**Winner: Best Drabble Series, SS/HG awards, Third Round, 2008**

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Chapters (17)

Chapter 1: The Interview

Chapter 2: A Secret Revealed

Chapter 3: Kindness Personified

Chapter 4: Quiet Authority

Chapter 5: A Room with a View

Chapter 6: Tough at the Top

Chapter 7: Mysteries and Complications

Chapter 8: A Taste of Honey.

Chapter 9: A Key Question

Chapter 10: Tentative Progress

Chapter 11: A Bit of a Dilemma

Chapter 12: So that's where it goes!

Chapter 13: Faded Grandeur

Chapter 14: Bewitched, Bothered and Bewildered

Chapter 15: By the Pricking of my Thumbs...

Chapter 16: Aftermath

Chapter 17: Epilogue


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Alan Rickman obsessed ex-civil servant now living the good life in France. I only write in the good ship SS/HG. However, if you think that the only way these two can get together is by some sort of forced marriage, 'binding' or whatever, don't read my stories. You will be disappointed.

Author Website
http://asylums.insanejournal.com/melusin_la_fey/
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OWL Ashwinder and my IJ asylum (see above).

Reviews for What Goes Around....

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0/10

ladyofthemasque

Buahahaha!...So, where's the smut?~Lotm

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Ahem... note the rating. :)

Response from ladyofthemasque (Reviewer)

WAAAAAAAH!!*pout*~Lotm

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

I maaay be persuaded to do a missing scene...

Response from ladyofthemasque (Reviewer)

Which would motivate you  more,  or  ...?~Lotm

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

The first one, definitely - plus chocolate.

Response from ladyofthemasque (Reviewer)

Awwww, but I have such a big , and they tend to get themselves into trouble if I don't give 'em something to do!...Milk chocolate?  With nuts?~Lotm

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

I am very partial to nuts

Response from ladyofthemasque (Reviewer)

Aha!  No wonder you like me!  *cuddlehugs you in encouragement...but is keeping the Mob on standby, mweeheeheehug*~Lotm

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Ahem... note the rating. :)

Response from ladyofthemasque (Reviewer)

WAAAAAAAH!!*pout*~Lotm

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

I maaay be persuaded to do a missing scene...

Response from ladyofthemasque (Reviewer)

Which would motivate you  more,  or  ...?~Lotm

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

The first one, definitely - plus chocolate.

Response from ladyofthemasque (Reviewer)

Awwww, but I have such a big , and they tend to get themselves into trouble if I don't give 'em something to do!...Milk chocolate?  With nuts?~Lotm

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

I am very partial to nuts

Response from ladyofthemasque (Reviewer)

Aha!  No wonder you like me!  *cuddlehugs you in encouragement...but is keeping the Mob on standby, mweeheeheehug*~Lotm

10/10

debjunk

That was great.  I loved his silent cursing of himself, then everything they both said to each other.  I love you Purdy!  More, more, more!

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Thank you - more coming.

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Thank you - more coming.

0/10

orm irian

Ha!  The house elf strikes again!

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

There's no stopping her now

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

There's no stopping her now

10/10

MollysSister

Oh how I adore that Purdy! Is there a house elf protection program we can put her in?

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

i think she may need it once Severus gets out :)

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

i think she may need it once Severus gets out :)

10/10

pookah

love your vinoveritas!  LOL  a fun chapter after the menacing feeling of Gary Burbage and disgruntled portraits in the last one.  Thanks for the update.

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Thank you - glad you enjoyed it.

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Thank you - glad you enjoyed it.

0/10

kimjo2

yay purdy!! thanks for the absolutely splendid update and i look forward to more. burbage is definately up to something! 

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Thanks - more soon

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Thanks - more soon

10/10

fizzabella

Winston Churchill is one of my favorite people:) This was PERFECT!!! I love it:)Fizzabella

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Thank you - glad you enjoyed it.

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Thank you - glad you enjoyed it.

10/10

soccermom

I really enjoyed this chapter.  Purdy is quite the plotter.  I can't wait to see where this story goes.

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Thank you. You hopefully wont have too long to wait

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Thank you. You hopefully wont have too long to wait

10/10

kittylefish

okay, i've picked myself up off the floor, cleaned off the keyboard, and am now able to say - this is one of the funniest scenes i've ever read!  i love little purdy.  oh, and i really enjoyed the beginning, where severus hurt so bad and it was just the overexertion.  i admit i am of an age where i can relate a little too much.  :D

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Thanks - yes, that's what gardening does to me these days.

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Thanks - yes, that's what gardening does to me these days.

10/10

morgaine_dulac

Bad Purdy, bad. Oh, this is going to be so much fun! :-)

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

It's going to be a bumpy ride :)Thanks for reviewing.

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

It's going to be a bumpy ride :)Thanks for reviewing.

10/10

MollysSister

"but short of locking him in a room with Headmistress Granger" I can name you three stories off the top of my head where the romance was consumated after being locked in a room! Another wonderful chapter per ususal. That Prof Burbage gives me the creeps but I cant quite put my finger on why...

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Hmm - we shall see how they react to Purdy's meddling soon.thank you -we shall also see if you're right about Burbage :)

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Hmm - we shall see how they react to Purdy's meddling soon.thank you -we shall also see if you're right about Burbage :)

10/10

hgelman

It is just great how this story is shaping up.   I really like your Snape.  Very nice chap!

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Thanks (Do you mean Snape is a very nice chap or you liked the chapter - either way, thanks for reviewing.)

Response from hgelman (Reviewer)

No, I really do not think that Snape is a very nice chap.  (Only in the seriously AU world)  I thought the chapter was very nice - that your writing is very nice.  And I still do!

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Thanks (Do you mean Snape is a very nice chap or you liked the chapter - either way, thanks for reviewing.)

Response from hgelman (Reviewer)

No, I really do not think that Snape is a very nice chap.  (Only in the seriously AU world)  I thought the chapter was very nice - that your writing is very nice.  And I still do!

9/10

Anonymous

Purdy will make a cute little cupid, I think.
Phineas dealing with midges *snort* - that's simply a great idea! *laugh*
Great new chapter, I'm eager to read on.

Author's Response: She is very determined to make sure her beloved headmaster gets what he deserves.
the highlands of Scotland aare infested with them in summer.
Thank you - more on the way.

10/10

Anonymous

"Vinoveritas" - that's a good one!
Hermione ogling him reminds me of a certain Coca-Cola-advertisement... *giggles*

Author's Response: Thank you
Yes, that was the inspiration for that scene.

10/10

Anonymous

Is your Dumbledore just plain nasty, or is this some kind of game? ;o)
Another great chapter! The class scene is great, as the Burbage scene is intense. And so does Snape imagine a tumble with Hermione... look there... *gg*

Author's Response: I don't like Dumbledore much as you can probably tell :)
Thank you.

10/10

Anonymous

So wonderful to introduce the houseves in this way! I particularly love good house elve tales, and this idea is one of the best I ever read! Congratulations!

Author's Response: Thank you - yes, they are a force of nature

9/10

Anonymous

Lovely chapter. It's an unusual Severus we see, but one I quite like, and a very intriguing one.

Author's Response: It's a post-war 'why am I still alive' Severus. Glad you like him.

9/10

Anonymous

That's very sweet. So nice to see Hermione as headmistress with such a wise and kind demeanour, and Minerva in a portrait there as well. I'm curious about your Snape.

Author's Response: Thanks - just how wise Hermione is remains to be seen

10/10

snitchette

I think I love elves. Give little Purdy a batch of socks from me.

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

I think they're very much underestimated :)Thank you.

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

I think they're very much underestimated :)Thank you.

10/10

cenicienta

Funny, different and an altoguether great story. Hope to read more soon!

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Thank you. You shouldn't have to wait too long.

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Thank you. You shouldn't have to wait too long.

10/10

braye27

Instead of just telling Burbage that she had to "keep the old guard happy," I wish Hermione had told him explicitly to put the Bloody Betty's portrait back where it had hung for the last who-knows-how-many years.Burbage is up to no good!  What kind of oath would he have taken other than the Oath of Allegiance to Slytherin House?  Purdy is the most wonderful House Elf, and she will stop at nothing to see that her Headmaster gets what he wants -- and he wants the Headmistress.  Now about that locked room... Hummm...  This is going to be fun!Great story, and I'm lovin' it!Beth

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Ah, but she appointed him to make reforms and she trusts his judgment - we shall see how that goes. And the Slytherins would have taken an oath of alliegence to him as their Head.Yes, Purdy is a law unto herself - lots of fun ahead there.Thanks for reviewing.

Response from braye27 (Reviewer)

Thank you for clarifying my misunderstanding about the oath.  Now it all makes sense to this dunderhead.Beth

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Ah, but she appointed him to make reforms and she trusts his judgment - we shall see how that goes. And the Slytherins would have taken an oath of alliegence to him as their Head.Yes, Purdy is a law unto herself - lots of fun ahead there.Thanks for reviewing.

Response from braye27 (Reviewer)

Thank you for clarifying my misunderstanding about the oath.  Now it all makes sense to this dunderhead.Beth

10/10

Elisabeth

Oh, what will the elves do now? This is perfect -- elf interference, plus a slow burn between Headmaster (oops, Professor) and Headmistress, PLUS a Slytherin Head of House who seems to radiate smiling menace. It's a great series and I can't wait to see what happens next.

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Thank you. Glad you're enjoying it.

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Thank you. Glad you're enjoying it.

10/10

Prof M McGonagall

Phineas has a problem, and Purdy has a plan!  A pretty promising part of your story!  Alliteration aside, I really liked it.  I wonder what Burbage is up to.  I really like the interaction with the portraits and house elves.

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Thanks. Glad you're enjoying it so far.

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Thanks. Glad you're enjoying it so far.

0/10

kimjo2

i love purdy!  it's about time someone treated severus as he should be.  i look forward to how she'll implement her idea.  thanks so much and i await the next chapter with delighted anticipation

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Thank you - yes, she thinks a great deal of him

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

Thank you - yes, she thinks a great deal of him

10/10

Hypnobarb

Matchmaking house-elves.  It is good to have allies who actually run everything.  Surely they will find their ways around the Headmistresses' good intentions.And what is going on in Slytherin?

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

ah we shall see...

Response from melusin (Author of What Goes Around....)

ah we shall see...

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