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The Redemption of Draco Malfoy

floorcoaster

18 Reviews | 18 Ratings, 0 Likes, 23 Favorites )

Romance Epilogue compliant post-DH/DH What Epilogue? Malfoy Manor 15,261 Words 3 Chapters WIP

Draco Malfoy Hermione Granger

Draco discovers an injured Hermione and is faced with a life-changing decision.

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Chapters (3)

Chapter 1: The Other Side - Prequel

Chapter 2: 1 - Nothing But Pictures

Chapter 3: 2 - Down the Rabbit Hole

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10/10

MollysSister

And so it begins! I like the way you are giving us the past and present in the same chapter.

Response from floorcoaster (Author of The Redemption of Draco Malfoy)

Thanks! I do hope you enjoy this one! :)

Response from floorcoaster (Author of The Redemption of Draco Malfoy)

Thanks! I do hope you enjoy this one! :)

0/10

sunny33

That was tricksy on Snape's part !

Response from floorcoaster (Author of The Redemption of Draco Malfoy)

LOL. Thanks! :)

Response from floorcoaster (Author of The Redemption of Draco Malfoy)

LOL. Thanks! :)

10/10

MollysSister

5 points to your house for each made up spell. Well done Floo! he would return Hermione’s kindness if the opportunity presented itself dum dum dum DUM that sounds like foreshadowing to me

Response from floorcoaster (Author of The Redemption of Draco Malfoy)

Thanks! The spells are always fun to make up.And yup! Foreshadowing, indeed! Stay tuned! LOL.

Response from floorcoaster (Author of The Redemption of Draco Malfoy)

Thanks! The spells are always fun to make up.And yup! Foreshadowing, indeed! Stay tuned! LOL.

10/10

lili44

WOW this is really good!!

Response from floorcoaster (Author of The Redemption of Draco Malfoy)

Thank you!!

Response from floorcoaster (Author of The Redemption of Draco Malfoy)

Thank you!!

0/10

noybate

A very good beginning. . Your behind the scenes story line is well thought out and makes a lot of sense. I'm looking forward to reading more as you develop your story.

Response from floorcoaster (Author of The Redemption of Draco Malfoy)

Thank you! Glad you're enjoying it!

Response from floorcoaster (Author of The Redemption of Draco Malfoy)

Thank you! Glad you're enjoying it!

9/10

la Chatelaine

Well I for one could see all of this happening and just this way, too. Draco with dimensions, what a concept! (^_^)

Response from floorcoaster (Author of The Redemption of Draco Malfoy)

LOL. I know, right? Imagine that! I'm glad you're able to see it and "buy" it so far! :)

Response from floorcoaster (Author of The Redemption of Draco Malfoy)

LOL. I know, right? Imagine that! I'm glad you're able to see it and "buy" it so far! :)

8/10

la Chatelaine

They say that growing old aint for sissies. Growing up requires an incredible amount of intestinal fortitude, too, especially you put a foot wrong when you're just starting out. Love the story.

Response from floorcoaster (Author of The Redemption of Draco Malfoy)

Thank you! You're very right, and Draco had quite a rude awakening, so the speak. An unfriendly shove into the world of growing up. :)

Response from floorcoaster (Author of The Redemption of Draco Malfoy)

Thank you! You're very right, and Draco had quite a rude awakening, so the speak. An unfriendly shove into the world of growing up. :)

10/10

aura

You are such a wonderful story-teller!Really enjoying this.Looking forward to the next.

Response from floorcoaster (Author of The Redemption of Draco Malfoy)

Thank you! :) Glad to hear it!

Response from floorcoaster (Author of The Redemption of Draco Malfoy)

Thank you! :) Glad to hear it!

0/10

mock_turtle

wow. I really like the bit where draco figures out snape was a spy, and dumbledore knew about his task. it's good and full of panic.

Response from floorcoaster (Author of The Redemption of Draco Malfoy)

Hee hee, your username is in Alice and Wonderful! Cool! I liked your last sentence: IT's good and full of panic. Very well stated! Thanks for the review!

Response from mock_turtle (Reviewer)

I'm so glad someone FINALLY noticed it is a reference to Alice...the mock turtle is one of my favorite characters. especially in the really weird movie adaptation where he sings...have you seen that? it's live action, not disney.

Response from floorcoaster (Author of The Redemption of Draco Malfoy)

Nope, I haven't seen it, sadly. :)

Response from floorcoaster (Author of The Redemption of Draco Malfoy)

Hee hee, your username is in Alice and Wonderful! Cool! I liked your last sentence: IT's good and full of panic. Very well stated! Thanks for the review!

Response from mock_turtle (Reviewer)

Response from floorcoaster (Author of The Redemption of Draco Malfoy)

Nope, I haven't seen it, sadly. :)

0/10

Muggline

Thank you very much for this interesting chapter. I am looking forward to the development of your great story.

Response from floorcoaster (Author of The Redemption of Draco Malfoy)

Thank you for the review! I don't know about "great," but it's been a lot of fun to write. :D

Response from floorcoaster (Author of The Redemption of Draco Malfoy)

Thank you for the review! I don't know about "great," but it's been a lot of fun to write. :D

10/10

aura

Really liked the prequel when I ran across it the first time...whenever that was...was happily surprised to see that this was a continuation of it. Looking forward to seeing where this goes from here!

Response from floorcoaster (Author of The Redemption of Draco Malfoy)

Thank you! Yes, this is the story after "The Other Side." It's seven parts total, so there's quite a bit left! Thanks for the lovely review!

Response from floorcoaster (Author of The Redemption of Draco Malfoy)

Thank you! Yes, this is the story after "The Other Side." It's seven parts total, so there's quite a bit left! Thanks for the lovely review!

8/10

la Chatelaine

Oh, I like it. Will be following, if only in the shadows. (^_^)

Response from floorcoaster (Author of The Redemption of Draco Malfoy)

LOL - that's cool! I'm glad you like it, thanks for letting me know!

Response from floorcoaster (Author of The Redemption of Draco Malfoy)

LOL - that's cool! I'm glad you like it, thanks for letting me know!

0/10

mock_turtle

more! more! more! more! you are a fantabulous writer and all I want is more! you've got style, you've got voice, you've got an expansive vocabulary...what more could a fan ask for?? :)

Response from floorcoaster (Author of The Redemption of Draco Malfoy)

WOW! Thank you! I'm flattered! I will do my best to post more! :)

Response from floorcoaster (Author of The Redemption of Draco Malfoy)

WOW! Thank you! I'm flattered! I will do my best to post more! :)

0/10

sunny33

Poor Draco, he had few choices all along.

Response from floorcoaster (Author of The Redemption of Draco Malfoy)

Thanks for the review!

Response from floorcoaster (Author of The Redemption of Draco Malfoy)

Thanks for the review!

10/10

MollysSister

I can certainly understand Draco's dispair post voldy. Especially since you killed off my boyfriend...I hope Hermoine can reach Draco before something bad happens.

Response from floorcoaster (Author of The Redemption of Draco Malfoy)

Ah, my dear. One shouldn't assume. I'm merely picking up from the world JKR left us, keep that in mind. I did not kill him off, she did. So. Thanks for the review!

Response from floorcoaster (Author of The Redemption of Draco Malfoy)

Ah, my dear. One shouldn't assume. I'm merely picking up from the world JKR left us, keep that in mind. I did not kill him off, she did. So. Thanks for the review!

0/10

Jade_W

This is a great beginning!

You did a great job conveying Draco’s helpless and hopeless feelings about his mission and the sheer awkwardness of the situation he now finds himself in with Hermione. I think you did an especially good job with the dialogue.

I can’t wait to read more.

Jade

Response from floorcoaster (Author of The Redemption of Draco Malfoy)

Thank you very much! I'm glad you found it believable. I've been having too much fun with this story. Thanks for the review!

Response from floorcoaster (Author of The Redemption of Draco Malfoy)

Thank you very much! I'm glad you found it believable. I've been having too much fun with this story. Thanks for the review!

0/10

sunny33

That was great! I hope there is more to come. :)

Response from floorcoaster (Author of The Redemption of Draco Malfoy)

Yup! Just need to get the chapter submitted. Thanks for the review!

Response from floorcoaster (Author of The Redemption of Draco Malfoy)

Yup! Just need to get the chapter submitted. Thanks for the review!

0/10

mock_turtle

cool setup...I am excited to see what comes next!

Response from floorcoaster (Author of The Redemption of Draco Malfoy)

Thanks! I hope to get it submitted soon... Maybe even today. :)

Response from floorcoaster (Author of The Redemption of Draco Malfoy)

Thanks! I hope to get it submitted soon... Maybe even today. :)

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