I'm so glad that you enjoyed it!  Thanks!  :)

Lol!  Yes, definitely a little crass!  I wrote this for a contest over at SH, and one of the criteria was that the sex be "more realistic."  So there you have it, Pook's idea of a more realistic first time.  I wrote three fics for that contest, 2 were in the PWP catagory and 1 was not.  But I'll warn you, most of my fics are NC-17 for sexual situations, so check the ratings brfore you dive in.  I'd love to see what JKR could do with a litte erotica, but I'm afraid that writers known for writing childrens books couldn't afford to stray that far afield.  Pity!  Thanks for reading, and for the kind review!  :)

No...I love a little smut now and then - although fan fic writers can be so predictable when choosing adjectives. I love to see - and occasionally find it funny - to read what people think "perfect" sex should be like. (Especially over at SH) It's refreshing to see sex described as somthing more than multiple orgasms and the binding of two souls. I guess I just become desensitised too quickly when innundated with PWP, that reading something with a new 'twist' takes me by surprise. Although I admit, I am a sucker for a well written PWP, and even more shamelessly drawn to Porn-with-a-Plot. Have you read 'Needfire' by 'bicycle built for two'? Fantastic story. Would totally recommend it to anyone in need of a good read. I have 'overcome with feeling', listed as one of my favorites - and have just finished reading it for the second time. Damn you and your time wasting writing skills - that story has had me procrastinating for days (should be studying). Keep up the fantastic work, I absolutely love your writing style - smut and all:)

I like a little plot with my porn, myself.  though it doesn't always have to be too much! ;)  Lol, I admit I've done a bit of "perfect sex" myself, but who wants to read about bad sex? :D  I have heard a lot about "Needfire", that author is one of Doomspark's favorites, but I haven't read it yet.  I confess that it's hard for me to find the time for long fics, but I'll have to make time for that one.  I'm so glad that you enjoyed OWF, and I'm thrilled that I made you procrastinate! :D  I hope you'll give my new fic, Price of Madness, a try when you have the time.  I'll warn you that it's a WIP, though I've been managing fairly timely updates.  Thanks for reading, and thanks for letting me know what you think!  :)

Thanks! I think? *giggle* :)

Yeah--was definitely good. *g* Nice twist at the end!

*snicker* Oh, I can ramble on and on during smut scenes, but this fic wanted something quick and honest, I thought. Glad you got a kick out of it! :)

That's exactly what I loved! Quick and honest! Bravo!

In my mind, Cassandra the true seer, weeping at what a complete idiot Trelawney is. But that would work for Sybill's grandmother as well... :)southern_witch_69's response: I thought so. "I can't believe this idiot came from my family. Will she never learn?" lol

*giggle* I was a bit crass with the sex in this one, wasn't I? It's quite fun to be crass on occasion! Thanks, love! :)southern_witch_69's response: Indeed, my dear. I shall have to boldly venture into that one day. lol

Thanks!  Glad that you got a kick out of it!  :)

I think I may have written that whole ficlet just to do that bit at the end, the idea made me giggle so!  Thanks!  :)