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Dangerous Liaisons Chapter 7: Realisations
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Dangerous Liaisons

1: Threats and Set-ups

2: Friends and Favours

3: Teasing and Temptations

4: Lost in Translation

5: Confessions

6: Vultures

7: Realisations

Realisations

Dangerous Liaisons

Chapter 7 of 7

bellarossi

Draco proposes to Ginny, Ron's a bastard and 'MJ' and 'Toby' plan to meet up finally.

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A/N: SO SORRY about the huge long wait. I have this thing called the Six Chapter Syndrome. I get to six chapters and my muse just dies. The good news is, I had the whole story completely planned out, so it's really just a case of sitting down and writing the damn thing. Thanks for everyone's support and for voting for me in both the challenge and the After-Voting Awards! I'm really thrilled to be second place since there was so much amazing stuff out there competing with me.

Now I can finally thank my wonderful beta, Katie (i.e. You-Know-'Oo), who puts up with all my whims and still sticks around (God knows why.) Thanks, you're a star!

Oh, and to keep up tradition:

Warning: Having your cake and eating it is not acceptable while reading. May have unwanted side effects.


To: Draco Malfoy

Congratulations, Draco. I would be delighted to attend the wedding, thank you for inviting me. I hope you are happy, as that is what matters most.

Sincerely,

S.S.


To: Severus Snape

Thanks, Uncle Severus. I really appreciate the support. I'm not sure Father is going to look at it the same way, which is why I informed him before announcing our engagement. I might be practically estranged, but I'm not heartless. He deserves to know, even if it kills him.

– Draco


To: Severus Snape

A Weasley! He's actually going to marry a Weasley! I'm going to be related to those filthy blood traitors! Malfoys and Weasleys! Oh Merlin, what is the world coming to?

Surely there's something in the family will that forbids this kind of thing.

Lucius


To: Lucius Malfoy

She's a pureblood, Lucius. Pureblood. Be grateful it wasn't Hermione Granger, or you'd probably be in Azkaban for trying to murder her on the spot.

Blast it, Lucius. Can't you just be happy for him? At least he was still willing to try.

Disbelievingly,

S.S.


To: Ginny Weasley

Oh Ginny! That's brilliant! He finally did it! I'm so happy for you. When's the wedding date? How are the Malfoys taking it?

Love,

Hermione


To: Hermione Granger

Oh, I'm just so over the moon about it! I knew it would happen eventually, but... oh, Hermione! I'm getting married! Me!!!

Not too sure about Draco's parents. I'm guessing no news is good news; Draco owled them the day before we announced it, but they haven't replied. Well, we haven't dropped dead or anything like that, so that's a start, I suppose. If they don't accept it, well... there's nothing any of us can do about it. I just hope that they can find it in them to support their son. He's definitely taking it hard, though he doesn't show it. This is supposed to be one of the happiest times of his life; they have no right to take that away from him. Even a curt "congratulations" would be good enough for us.

The wedding's in three weeks. I know it's really soon, but we'll make it just in time for New Year's, and frankly, I can't wait longer than that. It'll be a small thing with just our close friends, so I think we can manage it. Mum will blow her top when she realises how little time she has, but you know her. She'll get over it eventually.

Well, I hope so anyway.

– Ginny xoxoxo


To: Ginny Weasley

Can I come back in now? I don't hear anything, but for all I know, the apartment could be up in flames, judging by that Howler.

Geez, Ginny. Only your mum could send you a Howler about your wedding date, then soften it by asking if you and "that dear boy Draco Malfoy" are happy and saying that he needs to eat more.

– Chloe


To: Ginny Weasley

Draco Malfoy.

You are actually going to marry that filthy ferret? You're going to sully our name by marrying that piece of crap!? How could you, Gin? First Harry, now you? Daphne Greengrass, I can understand...at least her father didn't try to KILL him!

Don't bother inviting me.

– Ron


To: My Fuckwit of a Brother

Oh, Ronald. When will you ever learn? The war is OVER! People are different now. Draco, Daphne, even Snape...none of them deserve the kind of crap you give them. "You're going to sully our name"? That's exactly the kind of thing we hated Draco for! How dare you be so fucking hypocritical!

You know what, Ronald? I'm starting to think that if you were twice as smart, you'd still be a halfwit. I suppose it would be too much to ask that you should just be happy that I'm happy. Me, your little sister. Or have you been so intent on losing your friends that you've lost your family, too?

– Ginny

P.S. I won't.


To: Ginny Weasley

Ginny, love, don't worry about it. Ron's going through a difficult phase, and if he rejects all our attempts to reach out to him, then... well, there's not much we can do about it. I guess we just have to try to be there for him when he comes out of it. I'm sure he will.

In the meantime, we have a lot of planning to do. And I want to see that ring!

Love,

Hermione


To: Hermione Granger

Thanks for that, Hermione. I know you don't like shopping but that actually made me feel a lot better. I'm really glad I have friends like you. And of course, I would be thrilled if you would be my maid of honour. Draco and I agreed that it would be an honour for us.

So how are things with the mysterious Mr. Toby? It's been two months already, don't you think you should try and meet up with him? Make sure he's not, you know, a goblin or anything? Ooh, I just can't wait to find out who he really is. I wonder if we've met him before? Oh, the anticipation....

– Ginny xoxoxoxo


To: Ginny Weasley

Thank you so much, Ginny. It would be an absolute honour, and I look forward to it.

About Toby... I've actually been feeling the same way. I think it's time I asked him to meet up with me. The thing is... I think I'm starting to fall in love with this man. It's wrong! I don't even know who he is! And yet, I get this feeling that he understands me more than anyone, and vice versa. He seems like a really private person, but he tells me things that really make him human and real. I know it's only been two months, but I feel like this is the right thing. I can just feel it!

Looks like I'll have to thank you after all. Yes, yes, you told me so. Don't make me say it again, you lovable harpy.

Love,

Hermione


To: Hermione 'Miss MJ' Granger

Do it! I promise I won't spy on you or anything. Well, maybe. Depends on how I'm feeling that night.

– Ginny xoxo


To: My Husband-To-Be

Oh, it was so exciting to write that. It's like I'm a schoolgirl all over again, writing 'Mrs Draco Malfoy' all over my textbooks. Next thing I know I'll be saying 'hubby'.

... Hmm. Maybe not that far.

Any news on the parents? Also, do you think we should make Harry our best man? The twins would be so immature, and Percy's head would inflate to the size of a football field. I suppose Bill or Charlie could do it, but I'd really like it to be Harry. I think he'd really like that. Of course, before, I would have said Ron, but now... well, you know. I still can't believe it, you know. He's family. I'm still reeling from the blow.

Oh! Hermione's going to meet up with her penpal! Promise me you'll spy on her and find out where they're going so we can see who it is, too. I just know she'll keep me waiting as long as possible, that wench.

– Ginny xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox


To: Toby P.

Dear Toby,

Thanks for your last letter; I'm sorry I wasn't able to reply for a bit, but I really enjoyed reading about 'The French Connection' and how French food may have some kind of influence on magical ability. I'm not sure I subscribe to it, but the next time I have a plate of escargot I'll let you know!

We've been writing each other for two months now, and I was wondering if you would like to meet up? I know you are a private man, and if you don't want to that's totally fine, I will completely understand. But I'd really like to get to know you in person. I've learnt so much about you and I've told you so much about myself, more than most of my friends know. And you're so intelligent, more than most anyone I've ever met. It's always a pleasure to talk to you. I hope you agree.

– M.J.


To: Mary Jane

I would be delighted to meet with you. I feel the same way; you know me far better than most people, and that says a lot about me, if you knew me. Well, I suppose you will, soon enough.

Why don't we test out that theory about French food? Let's meet at Le Carillon De L'Angelus at Diagon Alley, 8 pm this Saturday night. I've heard their salmon is excellent.

Let's wear a flower somewhere on our person so we can recognise each other. I will wear a white rose on my lapel.

I look forward to meeting you at last, Mary Jane. I have longed to place a face to your letters.

Hopeful,

T.P.


To: Toby P.

Sounds brilliant! I'll be there. I'll wear a white rose in my hair. Oh, I can't wait!

– M.J.


To: Mrs Draco Malfoy

Who are you, and what have you done with my sweet, loving, not-nosy fiancée? Come on, Gin. Leave her alone. I can think of far more enjoyable things we could be doing while she and Mr. Mysterious are getting to know each other.

Love you,

Draco

P.S. I have to admit, I enjoyed writing that too. I never thought I would, but I guess I'm just a sap like everyone else.


To: Draco Malfoy, My Fiancé

Boo. You're such a party pooper. But you have a point....

– Ginny xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox ;)


To: Minerva McGonagall

Oh, fucking Merlin.

Mary Jane is Hermione Granger.

S.S.


A/N: Hope you liked it! Tell me what you think. :]

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Latest 25 Reviews for Dangerous Liaisons

277 Reviews  |  6.07/10 Average

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liviconnor

Aah!  We don't get the meeting?  Well, of course not.  But it's still torture, leaving us like this.  It looks like you're pretty much done with this story, which makes me sad.  I suppose I'll have to fill in the momentous meeting in my mind...

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Madame DeFarge

Excellent!  And I let my glass of wine sit there because I just knew it would ruin my kb.  Splorffing in many places would not have done it much good!

10/10

mom2divas

Oh I hope you don't leave it there! I have loved reading this and can't wait to see if there's more coming.

0/10

salvamea

What! he found out!!!???
how when where?
and she?
he did it so that she would not see him but he see her, right?
oh that bugger.

And your second story about ginny and Draco is just cute!!

go ooooooooonnnn!

0/10

kimjo2

brilliant!  love the format.  thanks so much

Response from bellarossi (Author of Dangerous Liaisons)

:] Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!

10/10

debjunk

How on earth did he figure that out?  I'm glad you've continued.  I love these secret admirer letter stories.

Response from bellarossi (Author of Dangerous Liaisons)

You shall see! I'm glad to be back, too, especially as everyone has been so supportive (and I totally don't deserve it after 6 months of no updates!) which is really nice. Thank you for reviewing :)

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WriterMerrin

Well, that last letter certainly screams for more!

I know what you mean about six chapter syndrome; my own attempt has similarly stalled out. So glad you got over it, and I'm hoping you won't keep us in suspense too much longer.

Response from bellarossi (Author of Dangerous Liaisons)

Yeah, that one's a killer. As I've said before, the good news is that I anticipated this time and hacked out the whole storyline BEFORE I wrote it, so now all I have to do is write the corresponding letters. It's far easier than writing a 'normal' story, I can tell you that. 'Paris' is going to take much longer to get back to, and I've written the plot for that one out too. Don't worry; the muse will come back. I definitely won't be leaving it quite so long this time, time permitting. I've got a few big deadlines out of the way so I really do have the time to sit down and write things without feeling hassled. :) So that next chapter will be coming soon!

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mock_turtle

HA HA HA HA HA I can't wait to find out what happens next!  I love this story, I really do.

Response from bellarossi (Author of Dangerous Liaisons)

Ahh that's wonderful to hear! I'm really glad. :) Next chapter is coming soon...ish, hahaha. Thanks for a lovely review!

10/10

LoveFenrir

LOL, love it!The wait was worth it =)Yay for the dramatic irony

Response from bellarossi (Author of Dangerous Liaisons)

Yay! I'm glad you think so haha. Yes, dramatic irony ftw. :D

10/10

hgelman

Oooh - I am so glad you decided to continue!  I really like this story and the way it is told.  The format of the notes/letters is just great.  I eagerly look forward to an update!

Response from bellarossi (Author of Dangerous Liaisons)

Thank you! I'm really glad to hear that. :]

9/10

HannahSmith

Does that mean they've already had their date? Or how else did he know? And did he run away when he found out? Or did she? Don't keep us waiting too long!

Response from bellarossi (Author of Dangerous Liaisons)

Heehee. You'll see in the next chapter, I promise. And I won't take so long this time! :]

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sunny33

How did he work it out? :)

Response from bellarossi (Author of Dangerous Liaisons)

You shall see. :]

9/10

Maggie

Please don't make us wait so long next chapter....  I can't wait to see more reaction.......

Response from bellarossi (Author of Dangerous Liaisons)

Hahaha I won't. Thanks for staying with the story!

10/10

Sampdoria

I am trilled to see the update, thank you! I wonder if Severus letter to Lucius will come back and bite his arse? The one with the frase "it could be worse than a Weasley, it could be Hermione Granger" comment? He would deserve it! Promise me that if Severus acts like the arse he so often do with humiliating and hurting Hermione, you will make him pay, costly? I get so annoyed when otherwise great fics/plots are destroyed by letting Severus walk all over Hermione, hurting and humiliating her, and when/if he after thouroughly destroying her "lower" him self to admit any feelings for her, she either sniffles a tear, stutter and throw herself into his arms, or stumbles in her own feets in her hurry to throw her self at him while readily agree upon that she is just a stupid know-it-all who needs the "superior" Severus to show her the way... It migth not be in your plot at all, but if it is, please make him work hard, very, very, hard to make her even consider giving him another chance!And while I try to decide if I will find myself a "happy ending story" and swoon (drool) with the images of Severus and Hermione walking into the sunset together, or if I shall find myself a dartboard and throw some arrows at Severus image...:-)) I am truly and honestly looking forward to read the next update to this brilliant story!

Response from bellarossi (Author of Dangerous Liaisons)

Goodness, why would I ever let Severus get the upper hand here? Believe me, he's got it coming. And yes, he's definitely paying for that comment, you'll see.I should point out, though, regarding the 'it could have been Hermione Granger' comment, you should look at it from his point of view. For Lucius, Draco marrying a 'mudblood' really WOULD be a fate worse than death. It's more of putting it into perspective, the way I see it. But you're completely right, he will pay for it regardless. I have some fun conflicts planned for them, but you'll just have to wait and see! I can assure you this will turn out happy and sappy. With bribing I could work in a sunset scene. :D

Response from Sampdoria (Reviewer)

I am totally in favour of bribes, it's a brilliant way to get things the way you want them...:-))

10/10

beaweasley2

Let's see. Enjoyed the letters, Ginny and Draco are so cute to each other. Lucius is a berk - Ron's toe jam, and Severus finally caught on!  Yeah!

Response from bellarossi (Author of Dangerous Liaisons)

Yay! Haha yeah that sounds about right to me. :]

0/10

Terab

Okay, you can NOT leave us hanging like that.  I had to re-read the previous chapters because it's been SO long and I hope we don't have to wait too long for an update.  Really enjoying this story.

Response from bellarossi (Author of Dangerous Liaisons)

But the thing is, I totally can. :D Not to worry, I'm really not that cruel. I'll try to have something up by next week. It isn't actually writing it that takes a long time. Once I sit down and do it, it only takes about a day at the most. The chapter queues are freakishly long right now, though, so that will delay quite a bit. I'm really glad you like it, and I do promise to try to keep things as regular as I can!

10/10

fizzabella

I am so glad to be reading another chapter of this!!!!!It fulfilled my wishes:) Perfect:)Fizzabella

Response from bellarossi (Author of Dangerous Liaisons)

So good to hear! Thanks for sticking around, I really appreciate it! :]

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justjen

That's great! How did he figure it out? Will she?? Did she??

I'm so glad you updated, I hope you're able to convince your muse to stick around!

Response from bellarossi (Author of Dangerous Liaisons)

All will be revealed. :]Haha I'm pretty sure my muse is here to stay. I've actually written out the whole plot and I've been crossing things off as I go along. So that isn't even the problem, it's just that I literally had no extra time and I hate writing a chapter over more than one day. I feel like I lose the thread after too long. Anyway, I'll definitely try to keep updates more regular this time! Thanks for reviewing :]

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Clairvoyant

How did he figure that one out?  I guess I should go back to previous chapters and read them again.  Very excited that you picked this up again.

Response from bellarossi (Author of Dangerous Liaisons)

That might help, but it will all be revealed in the next chapter. :] Thanks so much for staying with the story!

10/10

Dreamy_Dragon

Squee! I'm so happy to see an update to this. Lovely chapter and the last line makes me very curious as to what will happen next :)

Response from bellarossi (Author of Dangerous Liaisons)

Thanks! Haha yes, I couldn't resist. Have to put something to keep you people coming back, don't I? ;]

10/10

Anonymous

Lovely chapter! The last letter was absolutely brilliant. I virtually can't wait to read on!

Author's Response: Thank you! Hopefully the next chapter will be up soonish, so you won't have to wait quite so long this time, haha.

10/10

mikimoto

Uh-oh.  You can almost hear the melodramatic DUM-DUM-DAAAAAAA in the background.  Is this realization only one-sided like in "You've Got Mail" or does she know Toby is Severus?  I guess we will just have to wait and see.

Response from bellarossi (Author of Dangerous Liaisons)

Hahaha I know right. I'm just a DRAMAAAA whore. I love those omfg moments. Yes, it will be one-sided for now. It follows You've Got Mail/The Shop Around the Corner for about two more chapters, then I go crazy and add more plot twists. Well, actually, I wrap up a lot of plot twists, to be honest. But there's more interesting stuff coming along that deviates from the YGM plot. :] I'm excited about writing it so I hope you like it!

10/10

MollysSister

An unkind person would ask how Toby is supposed to see the rose in that rats nest of head of hair she has. Good thing I am not unkind.HOW DID HE FIGURE IT OUT??

Response from bellarossi (Author of Dangerous Liaisons)

:D Patience, young Padowan.

10/10

MollysSister

Have I mentioned how much I am enjoying the correspondence flying back and forth? Its a hoot. You should post a picture of Gin's engagement ring. Busy bodies curious fangirls want to SEE it!Toby and Mary Jane have given each other some big hints. I wonder if they will slap their foreheads and say "I should have known" after the truth is revealed?

Response from bellarossi (Author of Dangerous Liaisons)

Hahaha I'm very glad. Actually, I did have a ring in mind... Tiffany's, of course. :] Only the very best for Mrs Draco Malfoy. I'll put a link in the next chapter for you!You'll see the 'oh wow I'm a fool' head-slapping in a few more chapters. Particularly the coming one, and especially when Hermione figures it out. :] They're fun to write, so I hope you enjoy them!

9/10

June W

how did Severus figure out who MJ is?  I'm glad Draco and Ginny and their friends are excited for their wedding, and wonder if Ron will ever grow up.  I'm afraid of Hermione's response to Severus at the restaurant.  meeps!  thanks for the new chapter.

Response from bellarossi (Author of Dangerous Liaisons)

You shall find out soon enough! I think you'll like what I have in store for the restaurant scene. Don't worry about Ron, you'll find out more about him in due time. Thanks for the review! :]

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