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Lily Marlene Chapter 7: Chapter Six: April 1947
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Lily Marlene

1: Prologue: 12 December 1975

2: The Beginning: April 1945

3: Chapter Two: June 1945

4: Chapter Three: December 1945

5: Chapter Four: January 1946

6: Chapter Five: December 1946

7: Chapter Six: April 1947

8: Chapter Seven: September 1953

9: Chapter Eight: September to October 1953

10: Chapter Nine: October 1953

11: Chapter Ten: October to November 1953

12: Chapter Eleven: June 1954

13: Chapter Twelve: June 1954

14: Jun-55

15: Jun-56

16: June 1963 - June 1966

17: June 1972 – 12 December 1975

Chapter Six: April 1947

Lily Marlene

Chapter 7 of 17

diana_hawthorne

Albus’s son has his first birthday; Albus, Colleen, Alastor, Kendra, Minerva, and Fawkes reflect on the events of the past few years.

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Chapter Six: April 1947

Colleen had spent the day before Albert’s first birthday decorating their home in Godric’s Hollow for his party. Both sets of his grandparents would be there, along with Albus’s brother, Aberforth, her brothers, Algie and Harfang, Albert’s godfather, Alastor Moody, and his godmother, Poppy Pomfrey. Everyone was so excited for Albert’s first birthday – Colleen and Albus especially. Albus had spent quite a lot of time preparing for the party – creating a spell that would record every moment for Albert to peruse later in his life.

When she and Albus first were married, she could tell that his mind was on someone else – on another woman, she supposed. And her suspicions were confirmed one day in December of 1945 when there was an article published in the Daily Prophet claiming that Minerva McGonagall had given birth to Albus’s child. He disappeared for a day, but when he returned, he was a changed man. He was more amorous than ever – more loving, more caring, more present than he ever had been before. After that, their marriage had been perfect – she could tell that he was completely focussed on her and in love with her – not with that McGonagall girl. Colleen was happier than she ever had been before – she had a happy marriage, a wonderful son, and a fabulous life.

Albus sat at his desk, thinking about Minerva and their daughter. He didn’t even know his own daughter’s name, the colour of her eyes, or the colour of her hair... He loved Minerva and his daughter (though he knew almost nothing about her – he had never even held her), but he also had grown to love his wife and, of course, he loved his son unconditionally.

But Minerva... he did love her, but... he had his responsibilities to his family, and he couldn’t let them down. And he was happy with Colleen and their son. Minerva and their child were no more than a memory to him now, after a year and a half. He hadn’t even thought of her or their child since December – let alone tried to find them. A tiny voice deep inside his head wondered why, but he ignored it.

Alastor Moody put the final touches on his present for his godson – he had enchanted a stuffed phoenix to alert his parents to any trouble he might be in. Everything was going according to plan – Minerva was out of the picture, the spell he had cast on Albus was still working perfectly, and everyone was pleased with the results. Albus was married to Colleen, a respectable woman from a long line of purebloods; they had a legitimate son; and the Dumbledore line was established – all according to what Albus’s parents wanted. And he had got his reward – he was now the Head of the Auror Department.

Kendra Dumbledore signed her grandson’s birthday card and sat back in her chair, thinking about all the events of the past year and a half. Thank goodness she had the foresight to hire Alastor Moody to keep an eye on her son. She knew that they had both desired each other when she was his student, and when she was one of the few with Albus towards the end of the war, she had been worried that he would take up with that McGonagall girl and disgrace the family, so when he did, she had ordered Alastor to incapacitate her during the final battle and leave her on the battlefield. Unfortunately, when that girl turned up again, and pregnant to boot, there were problems. Once again, she was fortunate to have acquired Alastor’s services, and he was able to keep her out of the way. But when there were complications with that McGonagall’s girl’s delivery, and she was sent to Saint Mungo’s, the fact that she was carrying her son’s child became public. Yet again, Alastor’s services were invaluable. He contacted Willa Wilder, and she wrote a fantastic article about how that McGonagall girl used Dark magic to seduce her boy. And, finally, to make sure that her son didn’t abandon his loving wife and then-unborn child for that hussy, Kendra had Alastor cast a spell on Albus to make him forget what he felt for that girl. She knew that that was the only way that he would stay with his wife and child. And it worked. It worked.

Her daughter was sixteen months old when Albus and Colleen’s son had his first birthday. The Daily Prophet and Witch Weekly ran photograph spreads of his son’s birthday party. Minerva’s heart hurt when she looked at the happy family – especially the photographs which included Alastor Moody – Alastor – who had betrayed her! How could Albus have welcomed him into his family? Especially after Albus knew that Alastor had betrayed her! How could he? How?

Something wasn’t right – she could tell. But what would she do about it? What could she do about it?

Fawkes knew that something was wrong – Albus hadn’t seen Minerva in a long time – he hadn’t even tried to find her. It was as if she never existed... But Fawkes knew that she did, and that her daughter was Albus’s daughter, and that the child was conceived in love. He visited Minerva and her daughter every month to make sure that they were safe, because he couldn’t do anything else to help them...

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Latest 25 Reviews for Lily Marlene

136 Reviews  |  4.25/10 Average

10/10

beaweasley2

Oh, this is such a tragic ending. I am still shocked that Lily was killed by the boy who everyone thought was Albus' son!  But then I suppose the bitterness of the boy's mother, her anger and hatred simmered and grew into posion, and warped her son.

I've enjoyed this story, and I found it intriguing and heartwarming at times. Even ruffled my feathers more than once - a sign that I even got into it.  Well done.

0/10

kimbee73

This was such a sad story but I saw it through to the end. Thanks so much!

Response from diana_hawthorne (Author of Lily Marlene)

Thank you so much for seeing it through!  Sorry the ending was so sad.

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kimbee73

Oh my what a predicament! Albus wants to protect his family and well hurt them at the same time. What a Catch-22 he is in. And we already know what happens to Marlene. Poor Minerva, she is in for a world of hurt.

0/10

phoenix

Poor Albus. It's amazing how much wisdom you accumulate over the years and clearly had to learn from the bad as well as the good.

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phoenix

Well, he couldn't have asked for anything easier, could he? She just handed him what he wanted. At least he and Minerva are now free to be together.

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phoenix

Glad to see he got to the bottom of it. Though I do worry about his statement about not leaving her again. He has quite the mess in his family waiting for him. Nothing like a meddling mother.

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phoenix

Good job, Albus. You are halfway there. Now he just has to be on guard while confronting Alastor. And when he learns it was his mother's idea... That's going to be a hard one.

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phoenix

Good job, Fawkes. Now to see if he can get to the bottom of the enchantment.

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phoenix

Oh, Alastor you bad man. I can't believe he would do that. And Kendra, you bad woman. I curse you. At least there is Fawkes who will hopefully wake Albus from his stupor.

0/10

phoenix

Interesting that Fawkes would seek them out on his own. Then again,

Response from diana_hawthorne (Author of Lily Marlene)

es are quite intelligent and probably know more than their masters sometimes. I hope that Minerva doesn't stay in seclusion too long.

0/10

phoenix

Oh, poor both of them. And Moody, well, still not happy with him. Better be a darn good explanation for that. And for him talking Albus into getting married so quickly. Poor Minerva left all alone during this time. *sniff*

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phoenix

Oh what a horrible blow to a new mother. She really should have paid more attention to the wizarding world, though Poppy really should be flogged for not filling her in on Albus's marriage. And if it was Alastor letting the cat out of the bag like that... Well, I have a few things to say about that, too. LOL

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phoenix

Oh, Minerva. What will happen when Albus finds out? It really is a compelling story and nice to see something featuring the older professors and such when they were younger.

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phoenix

Oh, poor Minerva. One moment of happiness and then being lost like that. I hope that someone will come looking for her.

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phoenix

Oh, what a horrible start, but it seems to ring so true that Minerva would have once had a family and that something horrible had to have happened to them. I look forward to journeying back to the past and happier days.

9/10

pookah

very interesting.  what a charming woman Colleen is.  and Kendra is even more delightful.  (Almost as nice as Sirius's mom, as Harry would say.)Well that was a surprise.  thanks for the update!

0/10

sunny33

OH, what a nasty piece of work she turned out to be!

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sunny33

Don't know how I missed this one before, but it explains a lot!

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elsolel

Considering that she's remarried, why is Albus paying alimony, anyway?  Child support - yes, but not alimony.

Response from diana_hawthorne (Author of Lily Marlene)

Albus hadn't known that she had remarried, so that's why he was still paying alimony.Thanks for the review!

Response from diana_hawthorne (Author of Lily Marlene)

Albus hadn't known that she had remarried, so that's why he was still paying alimony.Thanks for the review!

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Wow here if you remarry you don't get alimony anymore.  Wizarding ways sure are different.  I want to live there. lol  Though I'm not sure  I like Colleen even more now.  She is becoming more of a b...h.  I hope Albert doesn't become like her.  I really enjoy reading your story.

Response from diana_hawthorne (Author of Lily Marlene)

You don't get alimony if you remarry here either - but Albus didn't know that she had remarried - therein lies the problem.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Reviewer)

Ah, I see.  Colleen is pretty smart, then.

Response from diana_hawthorne (Author of Lily Marlene)

You don't get alimony if you remarry here either - but Albus didn't know that she had remarried - therein lies the problem.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Reviewer)

Ah, I see.  Colleen is pretty smart, then.

10/10

makaem

Does Albert belong to Albus or Travers?  Great story, I like this non all knowing Dumbledore.   

Response from diana_hawthorne (Author of Lily Marlene)

Glad you like it, dear!  Thanks for your review!

Response from diana_hawthorne (Author of Lily Marlene)

Glad you like it, dear!  Thanks for your review!

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

Haha! How surprising. lol

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elsolel

Well, that is resolved, kind of. 

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elsolel

They may be awake, but they are definitely dreaming.  Albus has a wife.  And another child.  His life is seriously screwed up.

9/10

Southern_Witch_69

I wish he'd have done something... more to Moody. LOLNow I wonder what he's going to do about his wife and child. :( Tough subject.

Response from diana_hawthorne (Author of Lily Marlene)

The next chapter reveals what happens between Albus, Colleen, and their son.  And believe me, it's not what you'd expect.Thanks for the review!

Response from diana_hawthorne (Author of Lily Marlene)

The next chapter reveals what happens between Albus, Colleen, and their son.  And believe me, it's not what you'd expect.Thanks for the review!

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