New Chapter for Determination.
Determination.
savine_snape15 Reviews | 15 Ratings, 0 Likes, 7 Favorites )
Written for the GrangerSnape100 Voldemort Wins challenge.
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What can I say a 30 something mother of 1 who works as a clinical chemist in a path lab and has a 'thing', if its possible to have a 'thing' for a character, for a certain Potions Master.
RL has stalled the plot bunnies and I've no idea if/when I'll feel like writing again.
Reviews for Determination.
very sad that it took so long, but hope at the end!
Response from savine_snape (Author of Determination.)
I had hoped that it wouldn't take so long for Hermione to crack the hex, but it seemed fitting to allow Seb to be the one who solved the problem.
My lovely beta has looked over an outline for a second chapter that deals with how everyone copes with Severus' return.
Thank you for taking time to review.
Well done! Very sweet and touching!
Response from savine_snape (Author of Determination.)
Thank you!
Aww, that was sweet. I'm glad she found a cure!
Response from savine_snape (Author of Determination.)
Ahh it was a team effort between Hermione and Seb.
Thank you for taking the time to post a review.
Fortunately everything ends well. You seem to have a soft spot for despair before hope comes around.
Response from savine_snape (Author of Determination.)
I was in a slightly dark place when I wrote this. However, I think that it is the best piece of fanfic I have written to date. (I am still wet behind the ears and learning as I go)
I have sent some ideas for a second chapter to my lovely beta.
Thank you so much for taking the time to review.
Anonymous
I REALLY like this one. The idea of their son helping to find the cure; shows just how much those two passed on to him!
Author's Response: *glomps you hard*
Ahh I see Seb as being an unconcious mixture of both Hermione and Severus. He has a natural skill in potions but also has Hermione's determination to solve problems.
Thank you so much for doing the admin on this I know you are busy.
Thanks so much for leaving a comment too. I'm really glad you enjoyed this, Lestatswife has been sent some idea's for a series about how they all cope with the reality of Severus' return.
*hugs* Savine x
lovely. thanks
Response from savine_snape (Author of Determination.)
Thanks for leaving a comment, I'm thrilled that you enjoythis. :D
Wow, I love it. I can't imagine being in a situation where someone I love is alive but in a coma. It just seems like the worst possible thing that could happen. It feels like death would be easier. So glad he woke eventually.
So much to pack into such a short story. It says it all, really!
Aw, I'm glad they were finally able to be reunited. Well done!
Response from savine_snape (Author of Determination.)
Thank you for your review, I have an outline for another chapter which explores how Severus copes with being back in the land of the living. So long as Erica the plot bunny co-operates.
I really liked this when you posted it at GS100, and it's even better with a looksee by the beta and admin. It's so good that you gave them a happy ending!
Response from savine_snape (Author of Determination.)
Thank you so much for the review. It was very raw when it was posted over at GS100.
I have been mulling over a possible scond chapter with my beta, who bless her has come back with some great comments. It's potentially a look at how they all cope with Severus being back.
*hugs*
Drabbles are too short! But you've packed so much into these fragments, and it's all quite lovely. Good work!
Response from savine_snape (Author of Determination.)
Thank you so much for your kind words.
Drabbles are just right for me at the mo, I am dipping me toes in the water at the moment. Although a longer length fic is being mulled over at the moment. I am more confident writing drabbles.
Response from Elise_Wanderer (Reviewer)
Okay, ankle-deep next, then up to your knees, come on in, the water's fine....
Such a powerful story! Hermione shows just the right amount of determination needed when caring for loved ones.
Response from savine_snape (Author of Determination.)
Thank you for taking the time to review this series of drabbles. I have a second chapter mulling over that covers how they all deal with Severus' return.
How how wonderful....
Response from savine_snape (Author of Determination.)
Thank you for leaving a comment.
Oh the pain and suffering of 14 years with a hexed husband! Thank you for the happy ending.
Response from savine_snape (Author of Determination.)
I have sent a second chapter off to my lovely beta. In the next one I hope to cover how they all cope with Severus' return.
Thank you for taking the time to comment.
Very touching. I have a problem really engaging emotionally with drabbles, but this did manage a flicker. Well done.
Response from savine_snape (Author of Determination.)
*blushes*
Thank you for your kind review.