Chapter 6 The Nine Dragons
Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One)
Chapter 7 of 15
blackeyedlilyHermione meets Severus for drinks and learns his purpose for being at Disney World.
As Hermione entered the Showcase, she saw that pavilions for various countries were set up around a large lagoon. Surveying the skyline, she recognized a building that had to be the Temple of Heaven. Walking past Mexico and Canada, she came to China. With a glance at her wristwatch, she saw that she had about ten minutes to spare. She located the koi pond and came to rest on the bridge, where she could watch the graceful koi swim among the lotus plants. She was enjoying the meditative quality of her surrounding when a voice right next to her made her jump.
"Right on time. I do appreciate your punctuality, Ms. Granger."
"You startled me Professor..." Hermione began, only to be interrupted.
"Severus, remember."
"Right then, Severus, it's Hermione to you."
"I've already spoken with the hostess at the Nine Dragons, and she is securing us seating," Snape explained while indicating a pathway toward the restaurant. As they walked the short distance through a beautifully landscaped garden, Chinese lanterns were turned on to signal the approaching dusk. Hermione felt the Disney magic sweep over her again, and she felt as if she and Snape had been transported to China.
The Nine Dragons was the premiere restaurant in Epcot's Chinese Pavilion. The hostess led Hermione and Snape to a private seating area adjacent to the bar. Ornate screens gave total privacy to each table.
"I expect your boundless curiosity needs to make sense of these unusual circumstances," Snape began.
Hermione marvelled at how Snape could utter 'boundless curiosity' in such a manner that she was not sure whether he was insulting her or not. She felt the need to maintain her dignity in this situation, as she was no longer his student, and she had meant it earlier about not putting up with his typical attacks or insults. At the same time, she did not need to blow Snape's dry sarcasm out of proportion by being oversensitive. She could feel the tension rising and knew she had to stay on her toes.
"As I stated earlier today, I believe it is fortuitous that our paths have crossed, Hermione. Since you are a former member of the Order of the Phoenix, as well as a former student, I've had to rely on your discretion in the past. Therefore, the fact that I am still alive and here speaking to you demonstrates that you can be trusted, in some small measure. However, before I proceed with further information, I must ask you to perform a wand oath that the information I choose to divulge to you this evening will go no further."
Snape's eyes bore into Hermione's in a manner that made her feel that he was trying to invade her mind. As if on autopilot, Hermione felt herself blank everything from her mind. Snape's eyes spoke approval of her action. With a quick flick of his wrist, he cast a temporary shield that would prevent their servers from moving the privacy screen. Vine met ebony, and Hermione's wand gave off a soft glow as she promised her silence.
Almost the moment their wands were again out of sight, a waitress entered to take their order. She wore a traditional Chinese dress, known as a qupao, and her nametag denoted the Guangdong province of China. Snape ordered a Laphroaig neat, while Hermione ordered a margarita.
"You know that old adage, when in Rome..." Hermione ventured.
"Isn't a margarita a Mexican drink? I thought we were in Florida, or is it China? I find it quite confusing to remember where I'm supposed to be with all this make-believe," quipped Snape as he gestured around the room for emphasis.
"Well, a margarita is tropical," Hermione explained. "And I've found Disney World enchanting so far." She found she was avoiding using Snape's given name.
"Indeed!" Snape raised one eyebrow to this statement. Once the waitress had reappeared and left their order, he took out his wand again and uttered, "Muffliato," creating a barrier to eavesdroppers.
Snape took a long drink, then leaned back and closed his eyes. He sat this way for a moment or two, as if relishing the peace, and then with a sigh, he opened his eyes and began to tell Hermione his tale.
"Most likely you have grown up knowing all about Walt Disney, or at least you thought you did." Hermione nodded in agreement. "What is not widely known is that Walt Disney is in fact a wizard. Something I would never expect a Muggle-born, like yourself, to know. Indeed, due to his American birth, most half-bloods, and many purebloods, from our country would not know that he is in fact a distant cousin of Dumbledore's. Which is the only reason I am involved in this entire mess." Snape's voice had switched into perfect lecture mode.
"I'm rather confused. You're talking about Walt Disney in the present tense," pointed out Hermione, who was still avoiding the necessity of calling Snape Severus.
"Yes, well, have some patience, and I'll get to that. Walt Disney always was a true blue, dyed in the wool, Muggle-loving Wizard. Just like Arthur Weasley. It became his life's work to bring some of the wonder of magic to the Muggle world, and especially Muggle families. Of course, everything had to be accomplished without breaking any Wizarding laws related to Muggles and magic.
"It turned out that everything he touched turned to gold. From Steamboat Willie to these mega-amusement parks, everything was a complete success. It seems he filled an unmet need in the Muggle world. Eventually, like any true genius, Walt became bored with success. He desired to move on to new challenges. So he drew up a blueprint for the future of his dynasty and left his brother, Roy Disney, who is incidentally a Squib, in charge of implementation. Then he faked his death and left the identity of Walt Disney behind him."
"Are you telling me he's living under another identity?" Hermione asked in fascination.
"He'd become obsessed with magical plants and their healing properties. In order to pursue his new obsession, he moved to the Amazon rainforest, where he's been studying and cataloguing plants for years now. His research is published under the name Jose Raton. I've had the occasion to benefit from his research in my own work," Snape continued.
"Fascinating as this is, I still don't understand..." Hermione began.
"If you would allow me to finish," Snape interrupted. "I believe everything will become clear. Senor Raton has remained in isolation from civilization for many years. A situation I admit to finding enviable. Nevertheless, this past year he came in contact with some American tourists. Apparently, they were on some sort of extreme vacation adventure. During their interaction, they related how much their vacation was a welcome alternative to the highly commercialised, homogenized, and money-extorting world of Disney, where so many people went these days. Apparently, it was a bit of a shock to the old man. He is very concerned about what his brother Roy is up to and why he isn't sticking to the plan."
Snape paused in his story to take a drink, but Hermione decided to keep quiet. She didn't want to be chastised yet again for her impatience, and she was intrigued by the tale, especially as delivered in Snape's hypnotic voice.
"Senor Raton decided he should investigate. He did not want to confront his brother without some facts and evidence. All he really had was the report of potentially biased Muggles. He tried to get in touch with Albus and ended up reaching Minerva instead." With the mention of Dumbledore, Snape's face took on a shuttered look, as though he was willing himself to remain impassive, and he paused to drink again. Once he continued speaking, it was apparent that Snape would make no further reference to Albus' death.
"It seems that the former Walt Disney was quite fond of Minerva as a young girl," Snape added with the sly grin of one relishing the moment. "He had spent some time in England and is much closer to Minerva in age."
"Really!" Hermione interjected.
Snape overlooked this interruption and added in a conspiratorial voice. "It seems he gave her the pet name Minnie."
"Are you telling me that Minnie Mouse is named after Professor McGonagall?" Hermione could not contain herself at the incongruousness of it all.
"Apparently, and I don't mind sharing that bit of information in the least, for all the trouble she's putting me through," Snape uttered half to himself as he looked into the depths of his drink. "And that brings us to the heart of this entire matter. Minerva told Walt Disney she had just the wizard to help him. Then she contacted me in Paris, to remind me that I was still indebted to her for her testimony and she now expected me to repay her by helping Walt." It was clear to Hermione that Snape felt Minerva's transfer of her debt to Walt Disney was, at the very least, inappropriate.
"Walt went on to secure me letters of introduction from the American Ministry of Magic to Roy Disney. According to a contract, the Ministry provides an oversight function for Walt Disney, Inc. and its subsidiaries because of the ties to the magical community since its inception. It appears they are overdue for an audit," Snape offered with an evil smirk.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One)
75 Reviews | 4.97/10 Average
Well the ending should be the beginning.
I enjoyed it evry much.
Emjoying the littel looks and the occassional thoughts of Severus.
I like her last statement to Snape its nice :)
Very interesting. Love Disneyland and Walt Disney.
LOL look forward to more of this story
Interesting start to the story.
What a great theory of mis-use of magic!
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks again. It would be nice to think we had an excuse for buying useless soveniers. LOL.
I loved the portkey idea, I wonder if Hermione's attendence will be traced back to the Potters? Will they be in danger too?
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you! I've had a lot of compliments on the idea of jewelry portkeys.
The dress sounds lovely and you did a good job of describing things in this chapter.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks. I always notice when authors describe such details, so I wanted to do the same.
Interesting way to begin a relationship. I guess Severus hasn't stopped spying yet lol.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Yes, Severus is up to a bit of spying. It's reluctantly though. Thanks again for your comments.
again a very interesting back story. You are doing a wonderful job giving this story a good bit of meat to bite into.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks. My biggest self-critism of this story was that it lacked the depth I would have like it to have. So your comment means a lot.
I love the back story, how creative!
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks again. I do think Walt Disney makes a perfect wizard. He certainly brought a lot of magic to life for us muggles.
I have a feeling the Potters will be quite surprised to find out Hermione being quite truthful about their old professor.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Yes indeed!
Nice interaction between our favorite couple! Even better Hermione had the last word.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks. Yes, Hermione was quite proud to get one up on Snape.
The magic definition was really good. You are doing a great job 'blending in' the two worlds.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you yet again. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I like Ginny's idea. It's perfect!
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you. I had another reader object to the idea as elitist, seeing as advance quidditch training would create yet another area muggle borns would not have the opportunity to experience. To me it seemed like a good nitch for Ginny. Plus in my reading it seemed like most pure-bloods, or other kids growing up in the wizarding world, were supposed to be home schooled. If so it seems that pre-Hogwarts education/activities outside the home were few and far between.
Good flow in the chapter, never a dull moment.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks. Any positive input on my writing style/stucture thrills me as a very novice writer.
Response from sinbad (Reviewer)
I've been reading your comments as I go along and I noticed that your regret was this story wasn't as 'deep' as you wanted it to be. Not all stories have to be 'deep' to be enjoyable, in fact, sometime I pick stories that are light and fluffy because they are so. I take it this is your first story? You did a great job. My first was The Bridge, it was 513 agonizing words long. I am now working on my first multi chapter story. Just the fact that you wereconfident and skilled enough to do a long story first run out says a lot. Don't be hard on yourself, this is a fine accomlishment.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Awww, you've made my day again! Thanks for your words of encouragement.
Nice start, a lighthearted chapter, too bad Hermione doesn't know what shw wants to do though. I alwasys thought she was the type with a 'plan'.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you for this and all your lovely reviews. I do agree about Hermione. It probably wasn't true to character, but it helped me establish her being in a bit of a personal life crisis and needing a change.
Just o touch of sinister implications in this chapter. This story is quite well rounded and developed.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
You are too kind with your compliments, but I'll take them anyway!
Awww how sweet. I love the beginings of a romance, so careful with their words and actions.....
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks again. I always think Snape would be pretty awkward in such situations, and I can't imagine Hermione being too brave around him at first.
This is a cute story
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thank you.
I knew those souvenir shops at Disneyland had a conspiracy going to make you buy! :)
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
LOL! That was one of my favorite ideas for the story. Makes sense doesn't it?
Haha... I still have to giggle when I think of Walt Disney alive and kicking as a wizard.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Thanks! I did have fun with that and making Eisner an evil wizard. LOL.
Oh, Severus got to play the hero for Hermione, even if it was his fault she was in trouble. But she has such an adventurous soul that I am sure she didn't mind!
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
Yes, it was his fault. Good thing he had some tricks up his sleeve.
I've often wondered why they didn't have portkey jewelry in canon. Glad to see you had the same idea. How sensible of you! This is a charming story, a fresh look at SSHG.
Response from blackeyedlily (Author of Hermione's Cinderella Adventure (Or a Facsimile of One))
That's cool you thought jewelry would make good portkeys. I don't think I had really thought it out until I needed a way for them to escape. Then it just seemed to work. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.