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The Story
shellsnapeluver93 Reviews | 93 Ratings, 0 Likes, 5 Favorites )
A series of drabbles telling about the grief of a Death Eater.
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shellsnapeluver
Member Since 2007 | 6 Stories | Favorited by 154 | 182 Reviews Written | 1,336 Review Responses
Severus Snape has always been my fav character since I found HP. I enjoy dark, graphic stories, but will read some fluff and I love humour.
Happy to be in Slytherin house.
Reviews for The Story
I hope Hermione give Narcissa hell (I'm in a vengeful mood tonight lol).
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Story)
Grrrrrr... lol!!! And the claws come out!
I wonder how you manage to convey so much into so few words.Truly brilliant.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Story)
*Smiles* Thank you so much. And to answer your question...it took a lot of rearranging! lol
justy how did you make 100 words so...hot?
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Story)
I did that??? Really? I have no flippin clue! I've been learning a lot from my beta, I do not usually write, I'm actually an artist, so this is very new to me...but my beta is a writer, so I just learn from her--and by reading a lot! hehehhehe... Thank you!
It is obvious from just your 100 words that he cares greatly for her. Wonderfully done.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Story)
Very much so. Thank you.
Such a sweet lover this one. Lucky Hermione.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Story)
Yes she is!
Nice lead up to problems ahead, please give a happy ending!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Story)
Problems? muwahahahaha!
The last line has given me a bad feeling as to where this may go...
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Story)
*shudders* Oh dear.
you seem to capture a really poignant moment with just a few words. Really well written.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Story)
Golly...thank you! :) I'm so glad you like it.
I really love that Severus could be nervous about going on a date!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Story)
:) Sure...why not? It so out of the ordinary for him
I am once again dumbfounded by your ability to pack so much emotion into a few well-chosen words. Nice! Bittersweet, like really good, dark chocolate...
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Story)
oohhhh yum! I have enjoyed writing these drabbles, so your review just makes it much better! Thank you!
I have a bad feeling about this. This is too beautiful. Something awful is going to happen to one of them.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Story)
Aahhh...the first to start wondering if something bad might happen! Is it just your imagination? Or, is there something truly in the works? We shall see... And thank you for saying that it's beautiful, that means so much--you have no idea.
What a lovely set of drabbles. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this...
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Story)
*blush* thank you!!
Oh, wow. Such an emotional punch in such brief words. Brilliant! I am definitely enthralled.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Story)
Yep! Thank you for reading it...I'm definitely enjoying Anthem, so I'm glad I could make you feel the same way!
This is a lovely set of drabbles.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Story)
Why, thank you!
I do hope he told her how beautiful he thought she was. Even if it was a quick and simple wedding, she should be told how perfect she looked.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Story)
Ohhh of course! ;)
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Story)
Ohhh of course! ;)
You are doing quite well with these drabbles. I like seeing this development of the story.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Story)
Thank you so much. After the day I have had...seeing your response has cheered me up!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Story)
Thank you so much. After the day I have had...seeing your response has cheered me up!
I understand better why he was so nervous.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Story)
Ahhh... :) Thanks for reviewing!
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Story)
Ahhh... :) Thanks for reviewing!
Really? Snape can be nervous about a romantic date? How funny. I would'nt have never guess ;D.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Story)
When it comes to his lady love! Anything else...nah. :)
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Story)
When it comes to his lady love! Anything else...nah. :)
Very nice. I suspect after it's all done I'll be able to actually say something overall. It is really hard to form an opinian in one hundred words, but when I read all the chapters I started picking up the story.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Story)
Thank you for sticking w/ it. I promise, it's completed...just takes a while to get posted.
Wonderful drabbles so far. I look forward to seeing where you take this, and if there is the happy ending I hope for.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Story)
Will there? Hmm... I guess you have to keep reading! Thanks for reviewing :)
I wish I could do these little drabbles....I am way too wordy though.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Story)
Aahh I used to think that too. It's a good writing challenge to get all that you want to say in 100 words! Try it, you never know what you'll end up getting! Thanks for reading!
Wow, short and intense.
Response from shellsnapeluver (Author of The Story)
Yep!
Response from sinbad (Reviewer)
I did try a drabble once, it was a challange issued by the readers writers group. I had to come up with a 500 word story. After serious cuts I managed to get it down to 513 words. lol