In the Garden of Eve
FicklePen15 Reviews | 15 Ratings, 0 Likes, 11 Favorites )
Voldemort has gained power and Hermione has lost everything. In the midst of all the chaos, Severus Snape has the one thing he always wanted; a woman to love and possess. SS/HG.
Start ReadingChapters (2)
About FicklePen
Author
FicklePen
Member Since 2006 | 6 Stories | Favorited by 11 | 11 Reviews Written | 108 Review Responses
I'm a twenty-something lurker of unbelievable proportions. Slytherin is my house; I don't have time for stupidity, ignorance, laziness or unimaginative people.
I enjoy all things Harry Potter, and though Hermione is my favourite character to read and write about, I refuse to read anything with Ron/Hermione as the main pairing. The thought of them together makes me weep.
That said, I hope you enjoy my stories. They won't bite. Much. Okay, maybe a little...
Reviews for In the Garden of Eve
I hope you haven't abandoned this. I would like to see where this goes.
oh my what a tangled web we weave. He wants her but its on her terms. If she opens her heart she might learn to move on from what she can't have and maybe find love in someone who is around and loves her too.
How interesting? He is right she does seem very angry. I wonder how everything came to pass. The background of it all. I can't wait to see what is happening next.
Interesting chapter, the first scene wasn't very clear though. I got the impression that Hermione was remembering Ron and now we know Snape uses polyjuice. The end result is a bit of confusion; who was Hermione with in the first part of the chapter. Otherwise a great tale is developing here.
I am intrigued, and more than willing to see what happens. Please go on with your story.
Oh, how cruel! What losses? The war? Ron? arrrgh! Update soon or I might go bald from pulling my hair out!
Response from FicklePen (Author of In the Garden of Eve)
Hermione's been to hell and back, so there are many things she has lost, all of which you'll find out about as the story unravels. On the bright side, the next chapter is in the queue! :D
Intriguing start, if short chapter!
Response from FicklePen (Author of In the Garden of Eve)
Thank you! I know it was a short beginning, but I'm treating this story like a series of snap-shots into their odd life together. Hopefully it will work out :)
Wonder where this is going. :)
Response from FicklePen (Author of In the Garden of Eve)
It's going dark... :P hee. Thanks for the review!
Fascinating beginning. Poor gauche Snape!
Response from FicklePen (Author of In the Garden of Eve)
He's going to be even more gauche as the story continues :) Thanks for reviewing!
Oooh...what a promising start, I can't wait to read more!
Response from FicklePen (Author of In the Garden of Eve)
Thanks!
Interesting! Great beginning. Can't wait for more. I like how you tapped into Snape's awkwardness with women.Livvy
Response from FicklePen (Author of In the Garden of Eve)
Thank you :) His awkwardness is what I like about him the most!
Response from livvy6 (Reviewer)
Hehe, me too!
How very interesting!! And all too short!
While I find it a little hard to see where the story is going, I do find your presentation of these two souls interesting. I will follow your path and see where it all leads. Thanks, JoAnne
Oh, wow! This story is very well written! I can't wait to read more! It's really superb how you build the tension! Words fail to obey my call...
Wonderful beginning. I do hope you write more!
Response from FicklePen (Author of In the Garden of Eve)
Thank you, the next chapter has been written and is awaiting approval :)