New Chapter for If At First You Don't Succeed...
If At First You Don't Succeed...
fyiagcg13 Reviews | 13 Ratings, 0 Likes, 22 Favorites )
Hermione has come down to the dungeons to admit her feelings for Snape, in hope of reciprocation. But how will she react if he denies her? And how will he feel about that?
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fyiagcg
Member Since 2005 | 18 Stories | Favorited by 18 | 27 Reviews Written | 52 Review Responses
I was originally an SS/HG shipper that then fell in love with HG/DM as well. I now read and write both. I also have some original fiction and poetry up here on TPP, and love getting feedback on everything.
I have faced some writer's block on my only multi-chaptered story, but I PROMISE nothing is abandoned.
I do love to write, and I love REVIEWS!!
Ah, last thing. I am NOT HBP compliant. And now that I'm updating this profile in November 07, I need to tell you I am NOT DH Compliant
Reviews for If At First You Don't Succeed...
Lovely. Simply a lovely, straightforward tale that brought warmth and a smile. Well done!
Oh my goodness, I absolutely adored this!! Well done!
LOL What a nice way to out-Slytherin the Head of Slytherin. (Whether it was intentional or not.) Lovely work indeed! Thank you for posting this; I really enjoyed it. Cat
Okay, that wasn't just cute. That was freeakin' hilarious! Very entertaining bit of fluff there, and nice little plot bunny.
Elura
This is absolutely wonderful! I found this story by way of Datus Interuptus. I can't believe I haven't seen your work before.
Beth
How funny! I love that you took a facfiction 'staple' and twisted it delightfully. Thank you for this tale!
*Highly* amusing. Have never seen it presented this way--dear Professor sputtering at her lack of insistence. *hee!* Loved it!
Response from fyiagcg (Author of If At First You Don't Succeed...)
it was a surprisingly inspired plot bunny. i highly enjoyed writing it.
"It is *WINTER in SCOTLAND!"...best line ever lol.
i can honestly picture severus' indignance and bewilderment when hermione goes "off-script" lol. maybe he's one of the many "help-i'm-trapped-in-a-fanfic!" snapes?
i also like the ambiguity over hermione's overall game plan. for most of the story, it seems like she sincerely didn't want to bother him, but once severus is in her room, it appears hermione's a bit more slytherin than she lets on.
all in all, a VERY entertaining little one-shot:)
LOL that was so clever! I liked it!!! Men are so easy... even Severus I guess! Somehow I could totally see Severus saying 'wretched little chit'
Anonymous
cute.
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She definitely got what she wanted....even without all the convincing.
Well done. That was truly awesome. Perfect. Tamara
Clever and very Slytherin of Hermione. I like.