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Potions Under Duress Mr Alister Comes Home: A Master of Enchantment Christmas Story
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Mr Alister Comes Home: A Master of Enchantment Christmas Story

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Mr Alister Comes Home: A Master of Enchantment Christmas Story

Subversa

31 Reviews   |   31 Ratings, 0 Likes, 65 Favorites )

Humor Romance Alternate Universe Potions Under Duress 10,542 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

This story is set in the Master of Enchantment Universe. Two years into their marriage, Severus and Hermione separately reach the same conclusion regarding an important subject.

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Reviews for Mr Alister Comes Home: A Master of Enchantment Christmas Story

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10/10

suckerforsnape

Wonderful.

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Bettina

wonderful!

10/10

little beloved

I know I've already left a review for this somewhere, and I have no idea what prompted me to read this today, but it is just so very lovely. So true to life, and brought back so many memories from when we were expecting our boys. Thank you, thank you. :)

Response from Subversa (Author of Mr Alister Comes Home: A Master of Enchantment Christmas Story)

*glomps you*Whatever it was that prompted you to read, I thank you for leaving a note for me.  Those times when we're anticipating the arrival of our littles ones are priceless, indeed.And who could resist SnapeWithABear?

Response from Subversa (Author of Mr Alister Comes Home: A Master of Enchantment Christmas Story)

*glomps you*Whatever it was that prompted you to read, I thank you for leaving a note for me.  Those times when we're anticipating the arrival of our littles ones are priceless, indeed.And who could resist SnapeWithABear?

0/10

lady_rhian

Just reread this. One of my favorites of yours - it is just really tender and beautiful, and I quite adore Mr. Alistair.

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Elise_Wanderer

Mr. Alister is a touching and very sweet creation, worthy of is job of protecting that little boy that no one else could or would, until Hermione came along.

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real_life

You're always returning to this plot..universe..thing..not that I'm complaining, I love it.So, now that this lovely piece of literature is finished, you can go back to 'The Love You Take'.Merry Christmas! Keep it up. 

10/10

little beloved

Thank you so much for this little bit of Christmas loveliness. Everything I had hoped it would be. :)

7/10

menagers

Very beautiful. Thankyou for such a tale. Reminds me of the joy of falling pregnant the first time. Happy Christmas!

10/10

earth_fae

There is no words to describe how much I loved this story. I'll use beautiful for now. ^_^ You are amazing.

0/10

pygmypuff

Aahh, what a lovely read! It's great to have another story to add to the series, and I hope that we'll get a follow up someday soon, once the baby has arrived!

10/10

Lysithea

Oh this is such a lovely story. I loved the little bear and when I finished reading, and saw the image, I had to go and hug my little orange bear (Toby) who looks a lot like it. This will definitely be a story I'll be coming back to and reading over and over.

10/10

tialangela

Can't comment much. Still crying a lot. Thank you, wonderful story.

10/10

rosineide

This is so sweet. I seriously hope that you will write another sequel. Pretty please!

0/10

IndigoAngel

Wonderful as usual, and me being pregnant and hormonal, I think the tears started in the first scene!  I'd definitly like to see more of this particular story line too :) 

0/10

peppermint

Aw, gosh! 

Not only a new MoE story (whoo!), but a christmas one, AND it made me tear up at the end, especially the footnote.  

Then again, being in the middle of my second pregnancy, EVERYTHING makes me tear up. 

Another wonderful tale.  Thanks so much :) 

10/10

Gardengirl

That was fantastic! Thanks for a nice warm fuzzy smile.

9/10

helshez

Aw man, that was so sweet, it brought a tear to my eye more than once. (The good kind of tears though)

Thank you very much, and merry christmas to you! 

10/10

chyara

what a lovely story!  My eyes were misty.  I am glad you decided to continue along the enchantment series.

10/10

mia madwyn

Oh, I am just a puddle of squee.

So lovely!

And (dare I admit it?) worth pushing TLYT a bit farther back on the burner. 

Happy Christmas! 

10/10

Bentwaters

Ah it's a wonderful return to THE series. ^.^  So beautiful and full of such great moments that I won't try to list all my favorites.  This gift alone makes the season bright.  Many thanks to you and SubHub for all you give to us.Happy Holidays!!!!!

10/10

irishredlass

Very well done as always.  I love the way you portay both sides of our favorite Slytherin but, all I want for Christmas is more of The Love You Take

10/10

MagicAlly

Wonderful and touching.  I particularly love Diana.  Now I KNOW it's Christmas with another wonderful MoE story.  You spoil us. XXX

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FruGal

This continuation of MOE is a wonderful present. I've read and enjoyed all the other fics in the series. I look forward to the next installment when we get to meet Daddy Severus.

10/10

Mazzy

Delightful as always. I saw in a review response, you had said you may write another "Enchantment" story for Christmas - I was hoping you would - and here it is :) yeah!Merry Christmas!! & Happy Yule!!

10/10

kittylefish

i can't tell you how happy i was to see that you had a new story up.  and i wasn't even disappointed that you decided to do this before returning to the love you take, because i love the MoE stories so much, and this is another wonderful addition to that universe.  as always, your imagery was splendid - i particularly loved how you described the strange, tiny people from severus's perspective.  and i liked when he allowed that luna has more sense than one might think at first.  not to mention, of course, the genius of basing this story upon the return of severus's beloved teddy bear, exposing his soft side for us to swoon over.in other words, as is usual with your work, i loved every little thing about this story.  thanks for a wonderful christmas present!

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