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Eve of Battle
Good_Witch19 Reviews | 19 Ratings, 0 Likes, 97 Favorites )
Hermione surprises Snape on the eve of the Final Battle. They both get what they want. Dirty smut!
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Good_Witch
Member Since 2005 | 17 Stories | Favorited by 360 | 32 Reviews Written | 2,096 Review Responses
I have completed my Master's of Science degree in Marriage and Family Therapy and want to focus on serving the LGBTQIA community and the Alt/Kink/Poly communities in my work. I used to be a poker tournament director and floorperson at the world famous Binion's Gambling Hall in downtown Las Vegas. Before that, I was high school Spanish and Theatre teacher. I am happily married and (thankfully) have NO kids. I have an original short story published here: http://www.elm-books.com/ProductDetails.asp?ProductCode=R01%2DChristmasBadGirls under my penname, Jess Alynn. Thanks for taking a chance and reading my stories! :)
Oh, and check out the "trailer" for Phantom of Hogwarts that xtahsee made for me on youtube! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k63yCE9sslY
Reviews for Eve of Battle
Really good!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Eve of Battle)
*curtseys* Why, thanks kindly, darlin! Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Eve of Battle)
*curtseys* Why, thanks kindly, darlin! Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reviewing! :)
I definately need a cold shower after reading this.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Eve of Battle)
LOL!!! I warned you it'd be raunchy... ;) Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Response from luvsev (Reviewer)
Raunchy is good though. A nice smutty story makes my day go better.
Ah, yes, nothing like realilzing your own mortality to make one realize just what you want on your bucket list.Nice.Elura
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Eve of Battle)
LOL The bucket list, indeed. (I'd want bucketsful of Snape, wouldn't you?" Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
yeah! i like to think the got together afterwards and did it again! thanks so much
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Eve of Battle)
*grin* Yeah, I like to imagine that too. LOL Thanks for reviewing! :)
Good little one shot of smut- I was looking for something like this - kind of a dark and brooding Severus. It showed Hermione's Griffindore spirit by going to the snake and entering his den and not backing down until she got what she wanted.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Eve of Battle)
I'm glad you enjoyed it! :) It was fun to write. LOL Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
I love this one-shot. Perfectly squeezed lemons. ;) I'm in shock to see that I haven't reviewed it before so I'm reviewing now. I'm sorry I was delayed in telling you that I love this story.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Eve of Battle)
LOL!! No worries! I'm glad you enjoyed the lemons. They were fun to write. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Excellent story. An interesting interlude whilst waiting for more PoH.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Eve of Battle)
LOL I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the continued support! :)
Loved it =) Nice to see some lemons from you *laughs*. I have been following your Phantom story for quite a while (years?) and they just don´t seem to reach this point.. Really shallow of me, I know, as it´s otherwise a really fantastic story. But we do love us some lemons from time to time ;) And it´s nice to know you´re a very capable "lemon-writer" when Hermione evetually gets to graduate in PoH.. Will be looking forward to PoH as a finished work of art!Great work
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Eve of Battle)
LOL!!! Yeah, this was written specifically for those who were suffering from the UST in PoH way back when. *snerk* Glad you enjoyed these lemons, and I hope that when the real lemons show up in PoH, they'll be just as juicy. ;) Thanks so much for the continued support! :)
Dun dun dun dunnn!! We all know where he is going!!
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Eve of Battle)
Indeed, we hope! LOL Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Great story. I know it is what it is but it would be great to what happened next, if they both survived the war that is. Brilliant writing.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Eve of Battle)
*blush* Aww, thank you! I had fun writing it, that's for sure. Glad you enjoyed it, and thank you for reviewing! :)
I loved the ending. It's just perfect for our Little Miss Know-It-All.Also, it's very erotic. You've done a good job of making the reader want to continue reading.
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Eve of Battle)
*beams* I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I just wanted a hot little smut-miffin with practically no redeeming qualities for those nights when people need that sort of thing. LOL Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
great oneshot... any chance of an epi?
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Eve of Battle)
LOL ;) Why thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. As for an epilogue, I figure I'll just leave the rest to your imagination. *wicked grin* Thanks for reviewing! :)
What can I say ? A sorcerer spell for a enchanting day away from POKER!!!! 1) 1 Harry Potter DVD [Pick a scene with Hermione] 2) One pair of baggie shorts. 3) Coco butter with ready whip cream . 4) Baby wipes or large beach towel. 5) ONE EVE OF BATTLE CHAPTER BY GOOD WITCH Yes yes yes OOHHH YES!! Need a E.O
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Eve of Battle)
Oh holy Christ... I'm laughing my ass off over here. *hyperventilates* I KNEW it was you, and then I checked your profile and verified it. *falls over laughing. iz ded* I swear, I can't believe you wrote that. But then again, you're prolly saying the same thing about me! LOL Anyway, now you've read the naughty smut, time to read the other stuff. *cracks whip* J/K I will make you an addict too. *waggles eyebrows and cackles while concocting nefarious plot* I swear, I'm gonna lose it when next I see you. Thank the gods you're off tonight... I think I need an EO after dying over here. See you soon! Oh, and thanks for reviewing. :)
My goodness! There you are, with that wicked ability to write lemons, and in your Phantom you've written them into a situation of perpetual denial! Naughty vixen! :)
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Eve of Battle)
LOL!!! Glad you like the lemons, but I also enjoy writing the building tension... *snort* You'll get lemons eventually in PoH, but it'll ahve to wait until she graduates. *cringes at the exasperated Pooka* Thanks for reviewing here! *luff* :)
If only this was true. Where you could just go up to him and say, "I want you to fuck me," and then he give in. Now that's heaven. Great story. Tamara
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Eve of Battle)
ROFL!!!! If only, indeed! *snerk* Yeah, the closest I've ever come to this sort of thing was gonig up to the guy I liked at my 16th birthday party and telling him he had two choices: dance with me, or I'd kiss him. LOL He danced with me, but we ended up getting together 3 days later. *giggles* Yeah, I was apparently a weird mixture of Slytherin and Gryffindor then already! Thanks for a great review! :)
Oh man...looking for an update to PoH, I stumbled across this goody again and greedily consumed it once more. Any idea if there'll be a sequel? I'm thinking that it needs one...What Did Snape Do afterwards? The more smut, the better...this one had to launch 100 ceiling fans, at the very least! ;)~HR
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Eve of Battle)
*bursts out laughing* OMG, you're awesome. LOL!!!! I daren't think of anything other than PoH when I try to write anymore, lest I have a gang of disgruntled readers show up on my doorstep with pitchforks. *snerk* But, I'm glad this one-shot wears well and is enjoyable more than once. *hugs* :)
Hard and explicit and elegant all at once, with great dialogue. Hit the spot, so to speak. ;-D
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Eve of Battle)
LOL!!!!!! I'm so glad you enjoyed it for the romp it was intended to be. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
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okk.... that was alittle different. um... yeah. not much to say here. I finally got the start of my story finished! It's called Harry Potter and the Unavoidable Battle. You can find it at www.harrypotterfamfcition.com I hope you enoy it after Master of Enchantment!
Author's Response: Well, I did put warnings in the author's note. Sorry you didn't care for it, but it wasn't meant to be like the other things I've written. It's a completely different 'verse than those in not only canon but in the other fics. Thanks for giving it a chance!
Wow! I love your stories! This is the second one of yours I've read, and I love this one too. Where the hell did you learn to write like that?C
Response from Good_Witch (Author of Eve of Battle)
Aww, thanks!! As for learning to write... I just read a lot. *shrug* I know what I enjoy when reading, and I just try to write something I would enjoy. It's just an awesome bonus that others enjoy it too! LOL Thanks so much for reviewing, and feel free to check out the last fic I've got on here that you haven't read yet... :)