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Looking and Seeing

Chapter 17 of 22

Fawkes_07

Draco drops his guard, big time.

Angst Romance Erotica General Alternate Universe Malfoy Manor 29,809 Words 22 Chapters WIP
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* * * November 18, 1997 (continued) * * *

Judging by the cheers and catcalls that greeted him at breakfast, the little gargoyle had quite a network around Hogwarts. Draco held his head high and put on his best unfathomable smile. Most of the girls were scowling at him, but the seventh-year Ravenclaw prefect ran her gaze down his body and back up in such a predatory way, he had no doubt he was welcome to climb her roof any time.

"Checking out Trelawney through her window?" mocked Blaise as he budged over so Draco could sit beside him. "You gotta come visit the dungeon, Dray, if you're resorting to that bint."

Laughing, Draco reached for a plate of toast. "Trust me, B, that wasn't the view I was after."

"Why were you climbing her tower, then?"

"Because it was there, man. Because it was there." Leave it to Blaise to set him up with a straight line like that. His friend grinned and punched his upper arm, then both set to work on breakfast.

Granger came in sometime later and sat down casually with Neville Longbottom, but after a moment of huddled conversation, she turned and stared at Draco in pure disbelief. He smirked and tipped his chin in wry acknowledgement, and she spun back around immediately, hunching her shoulders. She's so funny, he thought with a grin, then considered stabbing himself in the hand with his own fork.

Though it wasn't Snape's turn to patrol that night, he made a point of accompanying Draco, which included escorting the Head Boy back to his suite when the rounds were finished. "I trust I needn't instruct your portrait to keep you contained once I leave?" the professor asked quietly.

"I get it, Uncle Severus," Draco sighed impatiently. He gave the password, seeing to his relief that the common room was both empty and dark. "Tell Mrs. Snape goodnight for me," he added somewhat awkwardly.

"I'll be Flooing her in an hour; I shall give her your regards."

Floo... what the hell? "She's not here?" he asked, reflexively pushing the portrait nearly shut.

Snape stiffened; Draco had hit a nerve. "My wife lives elsewhere, Draco. Somewhere very remote. She can't bear to be around strangers, both dreading and wishing she could hear them. I only see her when I leave the castle."

Fuck, no wonder you're so grouchy all the time. "How long have you been married?"

"ENOUGH, Draco," Snape growled, but relented with an annoyed huff. "Eight years. Good evening." He pulled the portrait back open and gestured for Draco to go in, in a way that suggested a shove would soon follow if he didn't proceed voluntarily.

Eight years? EIGHT? That fucker's been married longer than I've been at Hogwarts? The portrait literally whapped his bottom when it swung shut. He knew Snape could keep secrets but this was beyond all reason. If there was ever a night Draco needed to spend some time walking, it was this one.

Don't even toy with it. You KNOW he's right outside. Draco sighed. The greasy git probably didn't even need to lurk out there, he probably had a suit of armor or a portrait standing guard. Shit, I better make nice with that damn gargoyle or every eye in the castle will be on me for the rest of the year. He wondered dully how one went about soothing the feelings of a creature carved of granite. A diamond, perhaps? Fuck that. Even Pansy wasn't worth a diamond, not even when she was sucking him all the way down to the balls.

Now there's a thought. He hadn't taken an evening bath in ages. Maybe the warm water would break up some of the tension in his shoulders, and maybe Granger would put on a show. "Why the hell not?" he muttered to himself with as much cold contempt as he could muster, trumping the annoying pang of guilt that squeezed his belly as he gathered the potion and donned his bathrobe. It's only Granger, he reminded himself through gritted teeth. She's just a goddamn know-it-all Mudblood.

He cast the enchantment before turning on the tap, and found to his complete surprise that Granger was, in fact, already in her room. A single candle flickered on the stand beside her bed, where she lay on her back. Her nightdress was still lumped atop the woodstove. One hand cupped a breast, while the other moved in steady, firm circles through the tuft of curls between her legs.

Oh, yeah.

Draco leaned back to rest his bum against the edge of the countertop, letting his robe fall open, the bath forgotten. He set down the wand and the potion without looking, and barely registered the clatter of his wand sliding into the sink. He was hard already, but he was also determined to enjoy this treat to its fullest.

She must have been at it for some time already; her breath was rapid and soft little cries were accompanying each exhalation. That's right, Granger. Show me how it's done. He raised his own hands to his throat and swept them down to his nipples, giving each a firm pinch as he widened his stance. Draco groaned aloud, dropping one hand desperately to his cock. Do it, witch.

She was already beginning to buck her hips into her hand, and though Draco could probably have caught up with her, he wanted very much to watch this. He curled his long, slender fingers around himself but did not move, waiting raptly for her to finish first. Her back began to arch, her head tipped back to expose her throat. Come on, yes. He really could catch up; it felt like the slightest movement would bring him over. "Granger," he croaked, determined to see this to the end before he gave in.

"Nnn, oh, Draco!" cried the girl as her fingers froze and stiffened and she threw her knees wide apart into the air.

He didn't even get a chance to stroke himself; the sights and sounds were more then he could take. His knees gave way and he slid partway down the front of the cabinet, throbbing and sticky and utterly blissful. "Granger," he moaned when he could. "Granger."

This is too rich to pass up, he reasoned as soon as he came back to Earth. Draco yanked the nearest hand towel from the rack and dashed from the bathroom, rubbing his hand dry. He knocked on the girl's door and threw the towel toward the bathroom door, then cinched the belt on his robe. He had time; she couldn't possibly answer until she fumbled into some clothes, too.

He realized his cheeks were probably suspiciously ruddy, but what the hell, it was pretty dark. She'll be too flustered to notice, anyway, he thought with a wicked grin. He rested his forearm against the doorjamb, as much to support his shaky legs as to appear casual.

"What?" the girl squeaked, wide-eyed and flushed as she flung open the door. She was clearly expecting some sort of emergency, and the look on her face was utterly priceless as she realized it was not only him at the door, but he was standing right over her wearing nothing but a bathrobe. He wanted so badly to laugh it was almost painful, but he kept it to a too-broad smile.

"Easy, easy," he chided. "Just about to have a bath, and wondered if you felt like a fire later?" Her breath was still thready, but he realized suddenly that his was too. Shit! Well, at least he had the advantage of knowing what happened; the girl could only guess.

"What's wrong, Granger?" he asked, but it didn't come out nearly as innocently as he meant it to. Her eyes narrowed and they assessed each other with a long, knowing stare. "Something on your mind?" he purred.

"Malfoy... " she said hesitantly, then reached for the door. He caught her hand, her right, the one she'd just... Before he had time to think about it and reject the idea as insanely stupid, Draco tugged her hand to his chin and drew a deep breath through his mouth.

Oh, Goddess. He hadn't known he could get that hard so soon afterward. Draco's eyes fell shut and all thought ceased, leaving him to breathe deeply, over and over, filling his mouth with an essence like fresh baked bread and butter, only oh, so much better. He slowly turned his head to draw his face across her fingers, then did it again, this time letting the tip of his tongue protrude between his lips.

She made a little gasping sound and reality crashed back on top of him.

Her expression was an unlikely mixture of horror and desire. Draco could feel it in the pit of his stomach; he'd shown her far too much, willingly surrendered his innermost truth to this witch, who was far too smart not to recognize it. He set his jaw and reared his head, though he clung to her wrist as though his hand had declared a mutiny from the rest of him.

"Pathetic, isn't it?" he asked in a scraped voice. "That I've become so hard up." He finally managed to get the message to his hand and let go of her wrist, but he couldn't quite bring himself to cast it away with contempt.

Slackjawed, she gave her head a tiny shake and took a timid step closer to him. Draco threw up his his hands before his chest and backed away. "No, Granger," he grated. "Not even now. I'm nobody's fuck."

Draco spun on his heel without looking for the impact of his words and dashed into his room.

* * * * * * * * * *

A/N: Okay, I was trying for something sexy but tweaked, that would hopefully address some of the tired old DM/HG cliche's in a new way. Did it work? I have a few more chapters in me right now, but it seems like this story isn't particularly popular, so I'm not sure it's worth any more work.

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Latest 25 Reviews for Looking and Seeing

170 Reviews  |  7.69/10 Average

8/10

roni0811

looking to see what next... chapie 21: suprise that severus has a wife, & he gave great advice to draco!!!

0/10

roni0811

love it.. lovely moment between dh..

0/10

roni0811

alway knew draco could be nice to hermine, if he wanted to.. 

0/10

roni0811

maybe draco will help hermione over her sadness of being lonely.. love severus's idea of draco and hermione working together..

8/10

roni0811

so draco learn interesting fact concerning hermione, while spying on her and severus's discussion! love the plot, so far...

8/10

Amiella

Omg! I started this not realising it was incomplete, and that it had been five or so years since it was updated. Are there any concrete plans to finish it? I really hope so, it's a great story so far. Feels like it's going to be much longer than this. Please finish! :) 

0/10

TycheSong

oh! I really hope you havenmt decided to completely abandon this fic forever, I've only just discovered it and I want more! Please reconsider and pick it up again! --Tyche

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

I haven't abandoned any of these poor fics, honest.  I have them all written in my head.  I just can't for the life of me find time to type them out.   Someday...

Response from TycheSong (Reviewer)

Good! I am relieved to hear that. :-)

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

I haven't abandoned any of these poor fics, honest.  I have them all written in my head.  I just can't for the life of me find time to type them out.   Someday...

Response from TycheSong (Reviewer)

Good! I am relieved to hear that. :-)

0/10

TycheSong

oh! I really hope you havenmt decided to completely abandon this fic forever, I've only just discovered it and I want more! Please reconsider and pick it up again! --Tyche

0/10

mock_turtle

I just noticed that this story got updated over on MNFF, which prompted me to reread....I really, really hope that you finish this story and the "is it worth it to finish" from a couple of chapters back is not how you feel.  I want to know what happens!  Or rather, how you draw the story to its conclusion.  The situations you devise are unusual and intriguing, and I look forward to the next chapter.

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

I plan to, really.  I'm just always short on time.  MNFF doesn't even have the latest chapter up, I don't update as regularly over there.

10/10

ebonyeyez1

Great start so far. 

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

Thanks!

10/10

Battle of Lissa

Ahh... this story was so satisfying. I loved how in character both Hermione and Draco are. Their 'feelings' naturally evolve without making them ooc. I see you haven't updated this in a while, I hope eventually you'll come back to it. Even so, since they finally got together and it seems happy times are ahead, you could also mark this as complete.

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

Heh, well, I could, except I do have some more ideas that I wanted to write about when I started this tale... well, we'll see.

10/10

LadyBlueEyes

Just read through this story for the first time!   Its brilliant, I would love to read more!!!

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

Thx, yeah, I wish I could write more, but I just broke 6 ribs and can't sit up for more than a few minutes.  Sigh.

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

Thx, yeah, I wish I could write more, but I just broke 6 ribs and can't sit up for more than a few minutes.  Sigh.

0/10

lulululu

Draco is so sexy/pathetic/vulnerable/lovable/hatable in this chapter.  I love how complicated and and mysterious and subtle their relationship is so far...  it's somehow a lot more believeable than if everything were all spelled out.  I love it.

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

That's what I was shooting for--cool!  Glad you're enjoying.

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

That's what I was shooting for--cool!  Glad you're enjoying.

0/10

lulululu

I was seriously busting a gut laughing while reading this chapter.  I LOVE the way this story begins--I've been looking for some good snark for weeks.  This is the first D/H fic I've read, and I think I may be hooked.  Hawt.  I really love your version of Draco.  He feels just right.

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

Cool!  Always glad to know there's other people who have the same twisted sense of humor as me.  :)

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

Cool!  Always glad to know there's other people who have the same twisted sense of humor as me.  :)

10/10

ladylynne9

I started reading this on Pureblood and was so thrilled to see it here, too!  Fantastic story and I agree with the other reviewers - the amount of build-up has been perfect.Looking forward to the next installment. :)

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

Thanks!  I'm pretty happy with it so far--it turned out pretty good. 

10/10

Lyssiej

I have thoroughly enjoyed this fic.  It is very well-written, and, unlike many for this pairing, believable.  Thanks for writing it, and I hope you choose to continue.

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

Thanks!  I will--but I'm behind on all my fics at the mo.

9/10

CharmedForce

Haha.. I can totally picture Draco checking himself in the suits of armor. And the description of "pink, bubbling champagne" was perfect!

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

*grin*  Thanks!  I've felt like pink bubbles inside before, myself.

10/10

mia madwyn

Oh, this was SO lovely!

I can't explain why, but this slow, kissing-only, nonsexual event feels deliciously perfect. If I were reading Severus/Hermione I'd probably be frustrated but in this story with Draco and Hermione it feels splendidly right.

Can't wait for more!

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

yay!  I like to think they're both young enough that they wouldn't leap into it pell-mell--they'd want to try one another on first. 

Response from mia madwyn (Reviewer)

Also, maybe a response to how fragile she is (or has been)? How unexpectedly sweet of him.

10/10

spikespetslayer

Oh, I do hope that you will be continuing on with this.  I couldn't stop reading--it was spellbinding in every way.  If you need encouragement, consider this to be some, okay?  If you choose not to go on, thank you for sharing what you have.  It's well written and thought out and I did really enjoy it.  :D

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

Thanks!  Glad you like it--I do plan to continue but I have a lot of "open" fics at the moment...

10/10

myami

Glad to know you're back on this; thanks for the short but sweet chapter!

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

You bet!

10/10

blue artemis

That was quite sweet. 

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

:)  I thought so.

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

:)  I thought so.

10/10

tootie

Please keep writing this story. A couple of chapters back you thought it wasn't being recieved well. I wasn't reading it because it was listed under the hogwarts cat. and I haven't taken to many of those stories. But I started to read yours and kept saying yeah with each marker for the next chapter until this one.
Don't get discouraged about not getting reviews, I am a avid reader but terrible about writing a review and I am going to try and become better at giving encouragement to my favorite authors. I am looking forward to your next chap. Your timing for the relationship to take a turn was perfect. I didn't feel like---geez, get there already. I know there is suppose to be a build up but some authors build up for so long that I actually start disliking the characters and then I lose interest in the story altogether.
So I bow to your nimble fingers and quick mind. But most of all, have fun writing or its not worth it.

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

LOL, thanks.  It is nice to get reviews, we authors are such hogs for trouble.  Maybe I should have put it in a different category?  Malfoy Manor, maybe?  Heck, I never know what to put them in.I know exactly what you mean about the WAAAY too long buildup--I get annoyed with that a lot too.  But some people love it--it's all accounting for taste, I guess.

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

LOL, thanks.  It is nice to get reviews, we authors are such hogs for trouble.  Maybe I should have put it in a different category?  Malfoy Manor, maybe?  Heck, I never know what to put them in.I know exactly what you mean about the WAAAY too long buildup--I get annoyed with that a lot too.  But some people love it--it's all accounting for taste, I guess.

10/10

La Mariane

I really like this story, i love the draco/Hermione pairing (there aren't enough of them in my opinion)Draco's POV was irresistible, i liked how he reacted to having a "secret". but I wonder what will happen when the other students discover their relationship. and i'm sure Harry and ron will have something to say, even if they are no longer so close to hermioneupdate soon please

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

Yeah, it was fun to think about how they might react the next day.  I debated a lot of ways it could go and decided this was the sweetest.  Hee hee.  But yeah, you know a LOT of people are going to weigh in on this one...

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

Yeah, it was fun to think about how they might react the next day.  I debated a lot of ways it could go and decided this was the sweetest.  Hee hee.  But yeah, you know a LOT of people are going to weigh in on this one...

10/10

Riposto

I gave up reading fanfic for Lent, but when I saw you'd updated the temptation was too great to resist. This was a great chapter, I love the change in Draco, how his self-centered concern for his own pleasure has begun to shift in ways he's not really even recognizing yet.

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

Exactly.  He's really in over his head and he doesn't even know it.  Heh.

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

Exactly.  He's really in over his head and he doesn't even know it.  Heh.

10/10

Mazzy

Ah! Short and sweet :)

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

*bows*

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

*bows*

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