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Looking and Seeing

Chapter 11 of 22

Fawkes_07

An overhaul of the daily routines for the Head Boy.

Angst Romance Erotica General Alternate Universe Malfoy Manor 29,809 Words 22 Chapters WIP
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* * * Chapter 11: October 29, 1997 * * *

They were just stupid little things, Draco told himself, and no one except Granger noticed them. Therefore he had no reason to be embarassed, but he was.

He would wait in the common room in the morning to walk her down to breakfast. He left his bedroom door open when he was studying, and would tip his chin in greeting whenever she entered the suite. He even pulled aside the few Slytherin prefects he trusted and instructed them to quietly keep tabs on Granger during patrols. In particular, they were to ensure that she made her way safely down to Snape's office and back every single night--and report straight to Draco if anything was out of the ordinary.

I can't let her fall to pieces on my watch. Mother would go nuclear if Granger became the first Hogwarts Head Girl to take a dive from the Astronomy Tower. From that day forward, every minute his father spent in Azkaban would be his fault for screwing up their one opportunity to influence Dumbledore and the Wizengamot, and Mother would be sure he never forgot that. He had to look after her for his own sake. That was what the Head Boy did. Yeah. Just doing his job. Doing as Uncle Severus insisted.

He stopped taking his late-evening baths, however.

Homework was taking more and more time to complete as the semester progressed, and he could no longer afford the luxury of a long bath just before bed. Besides, if he started a fire in the common room hearth just after she left for patrol, it would be roaring cheerfully when she returned, and she would sit with him. It wasn't anything like watching her undress, but all in all, Draco felt it was a good trade.

She still steadfastly refused to attend the Halloween Ball. She was sure he was up to something and wouldn't be part of it. That really stunk, because she was, of course, spot on in her assessment, but confirming her suspicions would hardly change her mind. When Snape cornered him again after Potions, Draco confessed that he might have met his match.

"She reads the Prophet, Uncle Severus. She knows Father is on the docket for probation when the Wizengamot meets in February. She said I had no right to 'use' her for political influence."

"And you were unable to convince her of your 'sincere intent' to support the Headmaster?"

That stung. "She's known me a long time, you know," Draco snarled defensively. "It's rather like you trying to pull one over on Mum."

Snape made the slightest cringe, and a surge of vindication warmed Draco's chest. "Touche'," said the older man.

"But she's agreed to the dinner, and perhaps once she's all dressed up, I can persuade her to--" Draco stopped in mid sentence when Snape waved his hands impatiently.

"Won't work," Snape said curtly. "The girl's worse than a mule. Once she's decided something, it would take the Imperius to change her course." Draco fingered his wand thoughtfully until Snape yanked it from his hand and slammed it down on the lab bench. "Don't even think about it. No, Draco, leave this to me. I believe I have just the solution."

Draco was curled up on the divan in his pajamas, his Arithmancy text cradled in his lap, when Granger returned from patrol that night. He invited her to sit before the fire with a wave of his hand. She removed her cloak, hung it on the peg by the portrait hole, and took her usual chair. But instead of sinking into it, she sat up straight on the front edge. Her eyes were brighter than usual.

"Something on your mind, Granger?" said Draco, forcing himself to contain a wicked grin.

She wrung her hands briefly. "Well, yes. I, that is... I just thought you should know, I've changed my mind."

Draco raised his brows innocently. "Regarding?"

"The Halloween ball," she said, beginning to blush. "I'd like to go after all. Just for a brief while."

Donning his best come-hither gaze, he shoved the book from his lap. "I knew you'd come to your senses. But I won't have you hanging all over me; you get the first dance and then you'll get in line with all the other witches."

She looked so affronted that he was afraid he'd gone too far. But he laughed, and then she did as well, and for a few seconds it felt like he was with a friend.

"So what really changed your mind?" Draco said.

She hid a shy smile behind her hand. "I'm not supposed to tell. It's a secret."

He nodded slowly. "But you can tell me. I'm all about secrets." She shook her head, but he could see from the glint in her eye that she was dying to tell it. "In two days everyone will know it anyway. I can definitely keep my mouth shut that long. Spit it out!"

It had been so long since he'd seen her really smile, he'd forgotten what it looked like. Or perhaps he'd never noticed before, it was hard to tell.

Despite the fact that they were obviously alone in the suite, she leaned forward into a conspiratorial huddle. "All right," she said in a hushed voice. "I just, um, ran into Professor Snape. He said he'll be at the dance tomorrow."

She paused to glance around, as if there were any chance of being overheard. Draco was growing impatient. "That's the secret? He's a teacher; of course he'll be there to chaperone!"

She leaned even closer. "No, he's not working at the dance. He's going to the dance. As a guest. And he's bringing someone."

Once again Draco found himself on strange and unfamiliar ground. "Snape's got a date?"

Granger's eyes nearly bugged out of their sockets. "Even better. He said he's bringing his wife."

Draco internally chanted every single swear word he knew, and improvised a few new ones. "You're having me on," he finally croaked.

"I'm not! He said it, I swear!"

Mother of Merlin! Draco burst out laughing. "That little bastard."

Granger laughed too. "I know! I wouldn't miss this for the entire world."

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Latest 25 Reviews for Looking and Seeing

170 Reviews  |  7.69/10 Average

8/10

roni0811

looking to see what next... chapie 21: suprise that severus has a wife, & he gave great advice to draco!!!

0/10

roni0811

love it.. lovely moment between dh..

0/10

roni0811

alway knew draco could be nice to hermine, if he wanted to.. 

0/10

roni0811

maybe draco will help hermione over her sadness of being lonely.. love severus's idea of draco and hermione working together..

8/10

roni0811

so draco learn interesting fact concerning hermione, while spying on her and severus's discussion! love the plot, so far...

8/10

Amiella

Omg! I started this not realising it was incomplete, and that it had been five or so years since it was updated. Are there any concrete plans to finish it? I really hope so, it's a great story so far. Feels like it's going to be much longer than this. Please finish! :) 

0/10

TycheSong

oh! I really hope you havenmt decided to completely abandon this fic forever, I've only just discovered it and I want more! Please reconsider and pick it up again! --Tyche

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

I haven't abandoned any of these poor fics, honest.  I have them all written in my head.  I just can't for the life of me find time to type them out.   Someday...

Response from TycheSong (Reviewer)

Good! I am relieved to hear that. :-)

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

I haven't abandoned any of these poor fics, honest.  I have them all written in my head.  I just can't for the life of me find time to type them out.   Someday...

Response from TycheSong (Reviewer)

Good! I am relieved to hear that. :-)

0/10

TycheSong

oh! I really hope you havenmt decided to completely abandon this fic forever, I've only just discovered it and I want more! Please reconsider and pick it up again! --Tyche

0/10

mock_turtle

I just noticed that this story got updated over on MNFF, which prompted me to reread....I really, really hope that you finish this story and the "is it worth it to finish" from a couple of chapters back is not how you feel.  I want to know what happens!  Or rather, how you draw the story to its conclusion.  The situations you devise are unusual and intriguing, and I look forward to the next chapter.

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

I plan to, really.  I'm just always short on time.  MNFF doesn't even have the latest chapter up, I don't update as regularly over there.

10/10

ebonyeyez1

Great start so far. 

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

Thanks!

10/10

Battle of Lissa

Ahh... this story was so satisfying. I loved how in character both Hermione and Draco are. Their 'feelings' naturally evolve without making them ooc. I see you haven't updated this in a while, I hope eventually you'll come back to it. Even so, since they finally got together and it seems happy times are ahead, you could also mark this as complete.

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

Heh, well, I could, except I do have some more ideas that I wanted to write about when I started this tale... well, we'll see.

10/10

LadyBlueEyes

Just read through this story for the first time!   Its brilliant, I would love to read more!!!

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

Thx, yeah, I wish I could write more, but I just broke 6 ribs and can't sit up for more than a few minutes.  Sigh.

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

Thx, yeah, I wish I could write more, but I just broke 6 ribs and can't sit up for more than a few minutes.  Sigh.

0/10

lulululu

Draco is so sexy/pathetic/vulnerable/lovable/hatable in this chapter.  I love how complicated and and mysterious and subtle their relationship is so far...  it's somehow a lot more believeable than if everything were all spelled out.  I love it.

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

That's what I was shooting for--cool!  Glad you're enjoying.

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

That's what I was shooting for--cool!  Glad you're enjoying.

0/10

lulululu

I was seriously busting a gut laughing while reading this chapter.  I LOVE the way this story begins--I've been looking for some good snark for weeks.  This is the first D/H fic I've read, and I think I may be hooked.  Hawt.  I really love your version of Draco.  He feels just right.

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

Cool!  Always glad to know there's other people who have the same twisted sense of humor as me.  :)

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

Cool!  Always glad to know there's other people who have the same twisted sense of humor as me.  :)

10/10

ladylynne9

I started reading this on Pureblood and was so thrilled to see it here, too!  Fantastic story and I agree with the other reviewers - the amount of build-up has been perfect.Looking forward to the next installment. :)

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

Thanks!  I'm pretty happy with it so far--it turned out pretty good. 

10/10

Lyssiej

I have thoroughly enjoyed this fic.  It is very well-written, and, unlike many for this pairing, believable.  Thanks for writing it, and I hope you choose to continue.

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

Thanks!  I will--but I'm behind on all my fics at the mo.

9/10

CharmedForce

Haha.. I can totally picture Draco checking himself in the suits of armor. And the description of "pink, bubbling champagne" was perfect!

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

*grin*  Thanks!  I've felt like pink bubbles inside before, myself.

10/10

mia madwyn

Oh, this was SO lovely!

I can't explain why, but this slow, kissing-only, nonsexual event feels deliciously perfect. If I were reading Severus/Hermione I'd probably be frustrated but in this story with Draco and Hermione it feels splendidly right.

Can't wait for more!

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

yay!  I like to think they're both young enough that they wouldn't leap into it pell-mell--they'd want to try one another on first. 

Response from mia madwyn (Reviewer)

Also, maybe a response to how fragile she is (or has been)? How unexpectedly sweet of him.

10/10

spikespetslayer

Oh, I do hope that you will be continuing on with this.  I couldn't stop reading--it was spellbinding in every way.  If you need encouragement, consider this to be some, okay?  If you choose not to go on, thank you for sharing what you have.  It's well written and thought out and I did really enjoy it.  :D

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

Thanks!  Glad you like it--I do plan to continue but I have a lot of "open" fics at the moment...

10/10

myami

Glad to know you're back on this; thanks for the short but sweet chapter!

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

You bet!

10/10

blue artemis

That was quite sweet. 

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

:)  I thought so.

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

:)  I thought so.

10/10

tootie

Please keep writing this story. A couple of chapters back you thought it wasn't being recieved well. I wasn't reading it because it was listed under the hogwarts cat. and I haven't taken to many of those stories. But I started to read yours and kept saying yeah with each marker for the next chapter until this one.
Don't get discouraged about not getting reviews, I am a avid reader but terrible about writing a review and I am going to try and become better at giving encouragement to my favorite authors. I am looking forward to your next chap. Your timing for the relationship to take a turn was perfect. I didn't feel like---geez, get there already. I know there is suppose to be a build up but some authors build up for so long that I actually start disliking the characters and then I lose interest in the story altogether.
So I bow to your nimble fingers and quick mind. But most of all, have fun writing or its not worth it.

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

LOL, thanks.  It is nice to get reviews, we authors are such hogs for trouble.  Maybe I should have put it in a different category?  Malfoy Manor, maybe?  Heck, I never know what to put them in.I know exactly what you mean about the WAAAY too long buildup--I get annoyed with that a lot too.  But some people love it--it's all accounting for taste, I guess.

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

LOL, thanks.  It is nice to get reviews, we authors are such hogs for trouble.  Maybe I should have put it in a different category?  Malfoy Manor, maybe?  Heck, I never know what to put them in.I know exactly what you mean about the WAAAY too long buildup--I get annoyed with that a lot too.  But some people love it--it's all accounting for taste, I guess.

10/10

La Mariane

I really like this story, i love the draco/Hermione pairing (there aren't enough of them in my opinion)Draco's POV was irresistible, i liked how he reacted to having a "secret". but I wonder what will happen when the other students discover their relationship. and i'm sure Harry and ron will have something to say, even if they are no longer so close to hermioneupdate soon please

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

Yeah, it was fun to think about how they might react the next day.  I debated a lot of ways it could go and decided this was the sweetest.  Hee hee.  But yeah, you know a LOT of people are going to weigh in on this one...

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

Yeah, it was fun to think about how they might react the next day.  I debated a lot of ways it could go and decided this was the sweetest.  Hee hee.  But yeah, you know a LOT of people are going to weigh in on this one...

10/10

Riposto

I gave up reading fanfic for Lent, but when I saw you'd updated the temptation was too great to resist. This was a great chapter, I love the change in Draco, how his self-centered concern for his own pleasure has begun to shift in ways he's not really even recognizing yet.

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

Exactly.  He's really in over his head and he doesn't even know it.  Heh.

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

Exactly.  He's really in over his head and he doesn't even know it.  Heh.

10/10

Mazzy

Ah! Short and sweet :)

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

*bows*

Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)

*bows*

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