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Hogwarts Castle It's Not Going To Stop
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It's Not Going To Stop

1: In The Deep

2: Save Me

3: Wise Up

4: A Long, Long Time

5: Epilogue - Give Up

It's Not Going To Stop

livvy6

11 Reviews   |   11 Ratings, 0 Likes, 15 Favorites )

Drama Romance Hogwarts Castle 12,132 Words 5 Chapters Complete
Albus Dumbledore Original Character Severus Snape

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Severus Snape and his student, Victoria Whitfield, have been thrown together in a forced marriage. This does not stop Severus from remaining loyal to his first love, Lily Evans Potter. How can Victoria keep her promise to Dumbledore to be a comfort to a bitter and heartbroken Snape?

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Chapters (5)

Chapter 1: In The Deep

Chapter 2: Save Me

Chapter 3: Wise Up

Chapter 4: A Long, Long Time

Chapter 5: Epilogue - Give Up


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livvy6

Member Since 2007  |  17 Stories  |  Favorited by 655  |  625 Reviews Written  |  6,131 Review Responses

I am a grateful fan of Ms. Rowling and of her overwhelming Byronic Character, Severus Snape! Please check out the first chapters of each fic (except for "How Can I Tell You," which is on Chapter 2) to see pictures of the Heroines.

 

Admins' Note: Livvy6 died suddenly on February 22, 2012, leaving behind her husband, six-year-old daughter, and seventeen stories well-loved by the TPP community. All who knew her—including those in Harry Potter fandom and all of us, here—are richer for having known her.

Requiescat in pace, Livvy. Always.

 

 

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Reviews for It's Not Going To Stop

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10/10

andyourbirdcansing

snif!

Response from livvy6 (Author of It's Not Going To Stop)

Thanks for reviewing. Yes, so sad for Victoria, but she's going to be one hell of a godmother! And she has a family now.

Livvy

Response from livvy6 (Author of It's Not Going To Stop)

Thanks for reviewing. Yes, so sad for Victoria, but she's going to be one hell of a godmother! And she has a family now.

Livvy

10/10

SeverusLovesUs

What a wonderful ending!

Response from livvy6 (Author of It's Not Going To Stop)

A lot of people have had the same reaction to the ending. Glad you liked it!

Thanks,

Livvy 

10/10

SeverusLovesUs

That was so sad! I'm very teary-eyed right now. I loved Severus/Victoria's first/last time together.

Response from livvy6 (Author of It's Not Going To Stop)

Sorry I made you cry. I really wanted to make sure thier time together was meaningful after so much. For them, it wasn't so much about "mind blowing sex"- it was about being naked emotionally and his coming to love her and respect her for all the "shit" she had put up with.

Thanks for reviewing,

Livvy 

10/10

Merlinsbeard

So glad you wrote an epilogue.  It was quite heart warming to find that Victoria found some love and peace after his death.

Response from livvy6 (Author of It's Not Going To Stop)

Thank you. It was very hard to write, but I thought Victoria being a godmother to Albus Severus was a perfect way to bring some happiness out of so much pain.

Thank you for reviewing

Livvy 

10/10

tcl0712

Wonderful story.  I am absolutely loving it, and can't wait to read more!

Response from livvy6 (Author of It's Not Going To Stop)

I apologize for replying so late! I make it a rule to respond to each one. I hope you continued to like the story. I appreciate you taking the time to review.

Thanks,

Livvy

10/10

Merlinsbeard

Beautiful *wipes away tears*

Response from livvy6 (Author of It's Not Going To Stop)

I'm so glad you liked it! Make sure you read the epilouge.

Thanks for reviewing!!

Livvy 

10/10

SeverusLovesUs

Oh, I can't wait to see what happens next!

Response from livvy6 (Author of It's Not Going To Stop)

Sorry for leaving you in such a depressing state of sffairs with Severus and Victoria. The next Chapter is gonna be a biggie.

Thank for reviewing!

Livvy 

Response from SeverusLovesUs (Reviewer)

I thought that scene between them was really intense. First in a good way, and then in a bad! LOL. I look forward to more =)

8/10

Merlinsbeard

Sorry for not reviewing before.

Enjoyed this chapter immensely.  My heart just goes out to Severus, although I suppose it really should go out to Victoria.  Lots of angst!

Looking forward to reading more. 

Response from livvy6 (Author of It's Not Going To Stop)

Thanks for reviewing. Yes, this was a hard chapter to write. Although everything seems lost, it's not over for either of them. I hope you like the next chapter, I'll have it up as soon as my beta is done with it.

Livvy

10/10

dali

great! i like your victoria very much. waiting impatiently for update.

Response from livvy6 (Author of It's Not Going To Stop)

Thank you for reviewing! I will get the next chapter up as soon as my beta is done working on it. I'm glad you like Victoria, she's a good girl!

Livvy 

8/10

SeverusLovesUs

Ahh, I see why they are married now. I wonder why Voldemort thought this was a good idea and why he ordered it? Does he just want to make sure Severus is really over the "mudblood" so that he knows he doesn't still have any resentment? I really like the scene by the fire in the beginning. They have potential, but they just have to cross the divide. I look forward to seeing where this is going.

Response from livvy6 (Author of It's Not Going To Stop)

Voldemort was extremely angry that Snape took matters into his own hands, not wholly unlike the time he begged for him to "spare" the life of Lily all those years ago. Voldemort wanted to punish Severus, and what better way than for him to be humiliated at Hogwarts being forced to marry one of his own students? Voldemoert is a very sick and twisted person and this a perfect way to pour salt in an open wound by having Severus marry a pureblood when he knows how much he had loved the "mudblood" Lily.

Oh yes, much potential, but also more pain to come and watch for Victoria to get "her rage on" and stand up to Severus and bring to his attention that she knows the truth of his continuous rejection of her and how she feels about it.

I'll have the next chapter as soon as my beta reader gets it back to me. Thanks for reviewing!  

8/10

SeverusLovesUs

LOL, I think Victoria is quite the match for Severus. She probably has no idea how much he hates the spell she used on him. This is entertaining so far, thanks!

Response from livvy6 (Author of It's Not Going To Stop)

Yes, I just had to do that. I LOVE Severus, but he can be such a snarky bastard sometimes. He needs reminding he can be a bit much.

Thanks for reviewing!

Livvy 

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