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Tweaking

WriterMerrin

10 Reviews   |   10 Ratings, 0 Likes, 2 Favorites )

Humor Romance Snapshot Hogwarts Castle 530 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Lily (Evans) Potter Severus Snape

The elixir "induces euphoria in the drinker, with occasional side effects of excessive singing and nose-tweaking" -HBP

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Chapter 1: Tweaking


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WriterMerrin

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Sometimes writing, nearly always beta reading, I love to unwind after work by reading fanfiction.

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10/10

mick42

Lily has never been my favourite person, but here she is sweet and kind to young Sev, well done.

10/10

beaweasley2

Oh lords how funny! Lily tweaking his nose! Good thing Sirius cottonn on to what was happening and got James out of there! What a berk James was being!

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Tweaking)

Yep.  It's obvious why Lily prefers Sev over James at this point in their lives.  Thank you very much.

9/10

braye27

Cute!  Lily tweaking Severus' nose is precious.Beth

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Tweaking)

Thank you very much.  I saw it as a potential beginning of their heightened awareness of each other... and, of course, cute.

10/10

The Girls of Hogwarts

LOL I had to come find this gem. I loved the second part and this is even funnier! Good of Sirius to figure out the potions effects were making Lily behave the way she was! James was being a right git! LOL Really cute, doll.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Tweaking)

Yeah, I always thought that Sirius was smarter than he appeared.  This was a whole lot more fun to write, being part of the "Romancing the Wizard" community and being able to use commas.

0/10

sunny33

Love the nose-tweaking!

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Tweaking)

Thanks.  When I went to write this story, I knew that I wanted them to be working on a potion together, so I went to a list of potions, and when I found this one, I knew it was the perfect one for the young couple.

0/10

lkwriter

Oh, what a sweet little piece - shows a bit of what Dumbledore meant when he mused that perhaps they Sort too early. Lovely!

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Tweaking)

Thanks for taking a moment to let me know you liked this piece :)

0/10

Rose of the West

Oh, that's really cute!  It's nice to see Lily at one of the moments when their friendship was a friendship.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Tweaking)

Thanks!  LE/SS was my first Snape pairing, and I love them like this.

10/10

mariec

This story left me in a rather cheery mood.  Thanks!

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Tweaking)

Thank YOU!  I laughed a lot as I wrote this, coming up with different scenarios such as one where they were actually interruped mid-snog, but I liked it, and I'm glad you did, too!

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

Very cute. I loved it.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Tweaking)

Aww, thanks for rescuing this story from the zero.  Glad you loved it.

0/10

MMADfan

This was really cute and amusing! Great last line! I love a perfectly rounded one-shot, and I really enjoyed this.

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Tweaking)

Thanks!  I love a challenge to say all I want in a certain word count.  I think it makes me work harder, and I'm glad to see it paid off!

Response from WriterMerrin (Author of Tweaking)

Thanks!  I love a challenge to say all I want in a certain word count.  I think it makes me work harder, and I'm glad to see it paid off!

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