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Potions Under Duress Reprisal
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Reprisal

1: One-shot

Reprisal

ayerf

12 Reviews   |   12 Ratings, 0 Likes, 11 Favorites )

Smut Potions Under Duress 1,502 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Sequel to Reciprocity. Hermione ignores Severus again. This time, he doesn’t put up with it for long…

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Member Since 2006  |  30 Stories  |  Favorited by 277  |  151 Reviews Written  |  1,977 Review Responses

Jumped on the Harry Potter bandwagon in 2000 (when Goblet of Fire was out in hardback). Prisoner of Azkaban is my favourite in the series, followed by Order of the Phoenix. I read and write in the SS/HG corner of the Potterverse.

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10/10

ylang_two

yumm.  I enjoy a good bit of Sev/Herms smut as much as anyone.  yay!  fun.

Response from ayerf (Author of Reprisal)

Glad you do! Thanks for reviewing.

10/10

snitchette

you know I like equality in a couple. I would have liked a chained on the bed Severus while Hermione makes him understand who's the chief *evil grin*. I think that's a fair revenge. *double evil grin*. I'm glad you make a sequel for reprocity and if you think necessary to make another : please feel free.

Response from ayerf (Author of Reprisal)

Another sequel is certainly a possibility! If I write one, Hermione will get her revenge.

Thanks for reviewing! 

10/10

remy

Bwahaha - our favorite couple, residing in the dungeons of Castle Anthrax, lol!

Loved the follow-up!

Response from ayerf (Author of Reprisal)

I just couldn't avoid that reference!

Thanks for reviewing, glad you did.

10/10

Minutiae

What ho! Do I detect a hint of Grail in this story?? Hope no-one tried to "save" Severus . . . not a fan of spanking (unlike LoTM) but it was a cute and worthwhile sequel.

Response from ayerf (Author of Reprisal)

Yes, there is a hint of that! I can't imagine anyone did, as it's a little too late to save him from temptation.

This was my first attempt at writing a spanking, so I'm glad you read and reviewed despite not being a fan of it!

0/10

Marti

Good for Hermione!

Response from ayerf (Author of Reprisal)

Indeed! Thank you for reviewing.

10/10

blue artemis

Hee.  

Response from ayerf (Author of Reprisal)

Thanks, I hoped this would get that sort of reaction!

10/10

pettybureaucrat

Quite the naughty couple, the Snapes!  Just delightful!

Response from ayerf (Author of Reprisal)

Not being able to behave is something they have in common!

Thanks for reviewing! 

10/10

firefly124

Hee!  I love that she got her turn at the end!

Response from ayerf (Author of Reprisal)

Thanks! She's clamouring for a ficlet of her won to get her revenge.  But she's not going to get one just yet if I can help it, as the gift exchange fic is begging to be written.

0/10

melusin

I was very glad to see Hermione get her own back at the end. Nicely done.

Response from ayerf (Author of Reprisal)

Thanks! It was either that or have Severus promise that sort of punishment for future instances of ignoring him. Hermione asserting herself appealed to me.

9/10

Maddie

Ah, I liked it very much, especially with the quote from Monty Python's The Holy Grail.

Response from ayerf (Author of Reprisal)

Thank you! I just couldn't resist that line.

0/10

kimjo2

cute and fun.  thanks so much

Response from ayerf (Author of Reprisal)

Thank you! I'm glad to hear it!

0/10

HermioneJeanSnape

Monty Python reference! Woohoo! Mmmm, oral sex? Do tell!

Response from ayerf (Author of Reprisal)

I just couldn't resist!Thanks for reviewing!

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