New Chapter for The Love You Take
The Love You Take
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Now Complete! ~Winner Rd 3 Quill to Parchment for Best Fanon Het, Best AU, Best WIP!~ Hermione is cursed by the Death Eaters, and Dumbledore believes Professor Snape is the only one who can help her and keep her safe. Hermione is 18 years old in this story, but she is still a student.
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Magnificent chapter! There are so many things to love about it. The color symbolism is wonderful:• the green in the sky when the Morsmordre appears to announce the arrival of the Dark Lord's forces...• in the sky, the red sparks turning into the emblem of a phoenix to signify that the Dark Lord's forces had been defeated in their attack on Hogwarts Castle...• the bluebell blue of the walls of flame Hermione cast to trap Morgen...• the gold of the protective spell that Harry cast to prevent the Dark Lord's curses from harming him...*****I was glad to see that Severus extracted a reluctant promise from Dumbledore to "provide relief" to Hermione if Severus died and Voldemort survived: ‘You must provide relief, by the only means possible.’The headmaster’s eyes grew wide with consternation. ‘She’s just a girl … so many have already died …’Incensed, Severus slapped his palms upon the tabletop. ‘I’ll have your word, old man,’ he snarled.Now Dumbledore knows what it feels like to be manipulated.*****I wonder what was happening at the same time that Hermione told Tonks, ‘No, I’m not hurt—but I feel so odd…’ Then she swayed on her feet and fell bonelessly to the ground, incapacitated as surely as if she had been hit by a Stunner, as well.Was that when Severus had leapt between Harry and Voldemort's ‘Avada Kedavra’? Or did it happen when Voldemort died? Or did it happen when Severus was hit by Dennis Creevey's spell?*****I have loved this story from the very beginning. It has captured my heart and my imagination, and brought me countless hours of pleasure. I will hate to see it end, but it must, and I realize that. I can't wait to read the last chapter and find out what happens to my OTP.Thank you for sharing this exquisitely beautiful gift. I am such a huge fan of your writing!A Thousand Points to Ravenclaw!Beth
Subversa:This has been in the top-five (no, the top-three) among my very FAVORITE stories currently ever since it started. The only negative thing I have to say about it is that I'm sorry it's about to end. Yet, I look forward to an ending chapter as masterful as this one has been. I loved the movement and action of this chapter, yet you interspesed it with just enough mental soliloquey to keep us tuned in to what was going on in your character's heads--perfect balance. Even at such a breathless pace, your scenes flowed seamlessly one into another. A previous reviewer marveled at how you packed so much into one chapter, and I fully agree, and along with that request an equally (if not more) fully-packed chapter in your next. I am SO anxious to see how Grandmother Prince's "You will know" works out, for Hermione to know exactly what to do and say to declare her choice of Severus and convince him at last of the surety of her love. Like others, I want to put in my request (if it isn't too late and the chapter's not already written) for a nice LONG, detailed, juicy chapter, full of explanations and declarations and lots of "the love you make".Thank you for the gift to all of us of this beautiful story,Countrymouse
Nice chapter. Very action-y. I very much liked it.
now there's a final battle sence worthy of the story. Very very very nicely done indeed. And the love magic which kills Vol....well thought out....and nice completed circle...it's Love that saves Harry and it's love that kills Vol...yes well done indeed...oh....go nod to the Beatles...with the title...one of my all time favorite songs! Thanks for creating this wonderful story for us to enjoy!!
Great chappie!!! It's like adding insult on top of injury that Severus got taken down by a fourth-year!
The child would probably be very wise never to admit to that particular spell...if he even bothers to look at who he took down after the fact...
Now that Voldemort is dead, Hermione's free of the curse (right?) so at least we don't have to worry about Dumbledore attempting to kill her...
Hopefully Hermione is just exhausted rather than actually hurt (or maybe she started 'feeling odd' when Voldemort bit the dust), and Severus won't get trampled or something before he's either found or wakes up on his own...
Severus is probably going to fight her every inch of the way if she's actually cured, doubt he believes that she could possibly still have feelings for him (other than disgust over having been forced to be with him at all) without the compulsion in place.
Hope she remembers his Grandmother's advice...
Looking forward to the next!
I hope the youngest Creevey botches his spell! Harry's unique method of dealing with Voldemort was a pretty nifty invention -- and you've still got Hermione out there, in who knows what situation. Lots of suspenseful threads still unwinding; hope you update soon!
You know that I'll have to figure out a way to send some evil tickling charm overseas to punish you for this evil cliff, don't you?
And in the endThe love you takeIs equal toThe love you make.Wonder if Lennon knew just how powerful that all really is?This is a very evil cliffie to end a very exciting chapter, but I'm just gonna take a wild guess here and suppose that Severus wouldn't have survived everything just to be felled by a 4th-year.I'll be deeply sorry to see this end, but I am truly looking forward to the reunion to come--I'm praying for prolonged and juicy, as they have been apart too long and must now make things permanent.If only for the sanity of your faithful readers!This has been brilliant all the way through, by the way, and I like your ending to Voldy much more than You-Know-Who's. It just makes much more sense that he should be felled by love, "the one creature on earth so diametrically opposed to love that he could die of it." Bravo!!
Fucking Creevey! That's all I can think right now... XD Great chapter!
thanks for writing the end of voldemort as it should have transpired. i loved the literalness of your take on the "love" solution. :D i refuse to worry about your evil cliffie - i believe hermione will be his safe haven and his reward in the end. they deserve no less.
oh, and - tom's dead, the curse is over, so he will know she loves him for himself! :D
Thanks for updating. This chapter was awesome. Very well done!
Hermione felt the release of the spell, huh? Only one more chapter?! I can't believe its ending. This was a perfect way for Voldemort to die-- by love. Before DH, I thought that love was going to be a big part of how Harry defeated Voldemort-- what with jkr's emphasis on love. But then she threw in the Elder Wand, etc. This, I think, was much preferable! And please please a happy ending?!
aieeeeeeeeeeeee, that's a cliffhanger!I realized at the end that somewhere along the way I had stopped breathing.
I love Scampy so much! I also really hate Morgen haha.
Argh - why do I think Severus is going to react badly to this....
I do love a possessive Severus....
I would quite like to sit the both of them down and stick the mirror in front of them!! *facepalm*
Oh Severus... I wish you could see!
The last part was so beautiful. I can't tell you how much I love it when my boyfriend calls me petal, so I have a particular attachment to that name. It's such a gorgeous image, Severus and Hermione with the roses.
Hehehehe 'intentions' indeed.
A jealous Severus, mmmm? I like it! I don't like how Hermione had no idea of what wearing the Nexus meant though... somebody should have told her..
It's so sweet that Hermione was going to do that, unfortunate that she fell and hurt herself though!
I wonder was Hermione's collapse at the same time as the Dark Lord's demise? Is that why she felt peculiar as the spell was released with his death?Now I fear we will also find Hermione at Severus' bedside from the attack of the DA. There will be a lot of explaining to do and I hope a wedding to follow.
Now this was a final battle!!! Well done! I look forward to the last chapter!