I like how you worked in his evil side, her learning of it, and just how strength of emotion can drive us toward doing things we would have found outside our realm of capability.

This was very well written and I love how you wrote Severus.  It's good to see him in a different light.  I believe there are many layers to a person.  You have made this layer, intriguing to read.  Beautifully done.  Tamara

Excellent story. I am a big fan of Severus in the first person. and you did it extraordinarily well. It is nice to see that even evil people are multifaceted.

that was interesting.

An amazing story... well written... thoughtful... disturbingly intimate... moving... despite the horror I felt many times with "Dark Severus" I was still touched and pleased in the end that she could forgive him and accept him and that he truly learned to love her and was planning to protect her if Voldemort won... I finished this story the other day and there was so much I wanted to say when I was done... I apologize as I don't feel that I have been able to do this story justice...