...........Oh...........................................Erm...................I LOVE IT!! AAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

Please, please, please, pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease write what happens next!!!!!!I'll pay you.......

Fantastic beginning!  You did a great job of summarizing everything without droning on.  I'm looking forward to more!Peace!  ~ j

Two years!  Such a long time has passed without his return. 

The tender night Severus and Hermione had spent together was the kind that creates sweet, sweet memories.  I hope he will come back, and that they will be able to make many more memories!

I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Beth

All the plans and contingencies are in place and now Severus is readying himself for what may be his final day.  But Hermione has plans of her own to carry out.

Nicely done!
Beth

Beautiful.

Nice start although it felt a little choppy. Rather like a series of drabbles than a full chapter. ^_^ But a good story nonetheless.

:(  My one hope for this is that there's another chapter left.  :)  Don't disappoint me...

I did love her bravery in telling him her feelings.  This was truly a lovely chapter up until the end.  *Glowers at you*

Oh, this is fun, having an alternative to canon.  Of course, Harry will be there, and that seems to be a good thing in the long run, maybe? Or a royal mess up... knowing Harry. 

On to the confession!

That made me cry.  Very powerful.

Oh no, how sad!  Excellent story though!  I'm glad had at least one good night knowing he was loved!

Please, pleeeeease, don't tell me this is the end. I would die of sadness!

ohhhhhh my.....I so look forward to the final chapter!  Great story