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Monsters

ayerf

15 Reviews | 6.6/10 (15 Ratings, 0 Likes, 24 Favorites )

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Crookshanks Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Slight expanded version of my answer to the 'Monster under the bed' GS100 challenge.

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Member Since 2006 | 30 Stories | Favorited by 277 | 151 Reviews Written | 1,977 Review Responses

Jumped on the Harry Potter bandwagon in 2000 (when Goblet of Fire was out in hardback). Prisoner of Azkaban is my favourite in the series, followed by Order of the Phoenix. I read and write in the SS/HG corner of the Potterverse.

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0/10

MollysSister

One must not hex his wife, this is a very good mantra!

Response from ayerf (Author of Monsters)

Thanks! I suspect it would be a sleeping-on-the-sofa offence!

9/10

beaweasley2

Really, really cute.

Response from ayerf (Author of Monsters)

Thank you!

10/10

Austenfan

The comment about the "fourth Unforgiveable" was hysterical. Very funny!

Response from ayerf (Author of Monsters)

Thanks! That line was one of my own favourites in this too.

10/10

Sampdoria

Brilliant! I loved your story! Hermione is quite the Slytherin, everyone would have known what Severus reaction to the idea of Harry and Ron having a hand in raising his child. And, the "I must not hex my wife" comment at the end, you really made my day:-)))

Response from ayerf (Author of Monsters)

Thank you! Despite her manipulation, Hermione didn't give in easily. I'm pleased that you liked it so much.

10/10

Stormi

Thanks for a laugh this morning! Keep up the great work.

Response from ayerf (Author of Monsters)

You're welcome! I certainly hope to.

10/10

missblue

Oh wonderful! Perfect and succinct. I want more about Matilda. Great OC.

Response from ayerf (Author of Monsters)

Thank you! Matilda the temperamental Kneazle is more popular than I ever imagined.

10/10

fireflies

Lovely story! I enjoyed it very much.

For some bizarre reason... when Hermione was reaching under the bed, I thought it was gonna be Severus under there, haha!

And it's amusing to imagine Severus having a kneazle named Matilda for a familiar :D

Anyways, well done!

Response from ayerf (Author of Monsters)

Thanks!I would hope that Severus has sufficient manners not to hide under beds, let alone scratch people.As for Matilda, I was looking around my room searching for inspiration. The Roald Dahl book was within reach.

10/10

Marti

ROFLMAO! I say that all the time here..."I must not curse my children, I must not curse the children..."I loved it, it was so cute and we still don't know how the darn creature got under Hermione's bed!marti

Response from ayerf (Author of Monsters)

Thank you! Children, spouses and pets: curse free, in theory.Was it Harry or Severus? Not even I know the answer.

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Elen_Sila

"Once the new mother and kittens safely ensconced in the cat bed before the fire," Are you, perhaps, missing a "were" in this line? Once the new mother and kittens were safely ensconced in the cat bed before the fire,

Response from ayerf (Author of Monsters)

Quite possibly! Keen eyes you have there. Unfortunately, fixing it would mess up the word count, as this was written as a set of 100 word drabbles. I'll see what I can do.

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Elen_Sila

Cute!

Response from ayerf (Author of Monsters)

Thanks!

10/10

sinbad

Funny and amusing. I love how their pets 'brought them back together' so to speak.

Response from ayerf (Author of Monsters)

Thanks! If the furry monsters hadn't managed it, she'd have had to tell him about the little Granger-Snape hybrid monster eventually.

10/10

wsanders