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Potions Under Duress The Endlessness That You Fear
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The Endlessness That You Fear

1: Prologue - She Knows

2: Chapter One - The Traitor

3: Chapter Two - Waiting

4: Chapter Three - Shelter

5: Chapter Four - Grand Mistakes

6: Chapter Five - Explanations and Escapes

7: Chapter Six: Old Acquaintance, New... Friend?

8: Chapter Seven: Wants and Needs

The Endlessness That You Fear

JackieJLH

94 Reviews   |   94 Ratings, 0 Likes, 85 Favorites )

Drama Angst Action/Adventure post-HBP/HBP compliant Potions Under Duress 21,267 Words 8 Chapters WIP
Hermione Granger Severus Snape Neville Longbottom

Even though Snape is a traitor, Hermione hopes he finds her. She's barely survived this long, and he may be her only chance.

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Chapters (8)

Chapter 1: Prologue - She Knows

Chapter 2: Chapter One - The Traitor

Chapter 3: Chapter Two - Waiting

Chapter 4: Chapter Three - Shelter

Chapter 5: Chapter Four - Grand Mistakes

Chapter 6: Chapter Five - Explanations and Escapes

Chapter 7: Chapter Six: Old Acquaintance, New... Friend?

Chapter 8: Chapter Seven: Wants and Needs


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JackieJLH

Member Since 2006  |  41 Stories  |  Favorited by 40  |  2 Reviews Written  |  177 Review Responses

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PenAgainstSword

Wooh, super-late review, but I randomly thought of this fic the other day and dropped in to see if there had been an update. Surprise! You have added chapter five, and I would like to say that I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter to see what happens to Hermione and Neville. 

10/10

Subversa

*glowers*

*notes conspicuous absence of Potions master*

*shakes monitor to see if next chapter falls out*

*sulks*

*points to computer*  Get busy! 

0/10

droxy

Oh my!  Love the war environment in this.

10/10

Darque Hart

Like I said in my last review, I still haven't missed our darling Snape one bit!! [I'm almost ashamed.] This story is just toooo good. I was thrilled to finally see a new chapter up.

10/10

sinbad

Poor Hermione and Neville, now they have muggles after them.  This is a very well written chapter, you managed to capture the character's fear without resorting to graphic scenes.  Great job.

9/10

nata

No Snape yet, but you wonderfully compensate for the lack of his personna by near perfect description of a real wizard-Muggle war. Neville's carelessness in the face of werewolf danger is striking, but understandable. I must wonder though, whether Mark would transform right now, and the others would shoot him, or if our wizards would have to talk themselves out of it and shoot him later. This is going straight into my favourites, so that I don't miss the resolution of this cliffhanger.

10/10

Passionate4Snape

Hi, Am very happy that you have once again updated this story. I really, really enjoy reading this and hope that you will continue until it's finished.

Linda

Response from JackieJLH (Author of The Endlessness That You Fear)

I'm glad you're enjoying it!! I'll definitely finish, it's just taking... a really long time. :(   But it'll get done, I promise! :)

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Snapekat

Glad to know I'm not the only one who takes their chapter titles from Sarah's inspirational lyrics!

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droxy

Enjoying the angst and suspense.

10/10

Linwe Numenesse

Wow!! Cant think of much else to say.....I'm speechless. Cant wait to see where this leads.

10/10

sinbad

Exciting chapter.  I hope Neville makes it OK, I suspect Severus was healing him.

0/10

droxy

oooh dark fic!  Will be watching.If Snape put her inteh room, then he knows how to find her. 

10/10

sinbad

I Can't wait until you update this, I just know it's going to be great!

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Bentwaters

Wow.  Talk about "bleak". ^.~  But I must say I like it!!  I'm well and truly hooked in and can't wait to see where this goes.Very good job!!!

9/10

Sampdoria

I liked the start of your story and I look forward to see more of it!

Response from JackieJLH (Author of The Endlessness That You Fear)

Thank you!! The next chapter was just posted a few minutes ago. ;)

9/10

Elisabeth

What a great beginning -- creepy and intriguing. Looking forward to more.

Response from JackieJLH (Author of The Endlessness That You Fear)

Thanks!! The next chapter just went up! :)

10/10

karelia

*squee* You started posting it! Wonderful!!! Oh, it is so good.

Response from JackieJLH (Author of The Endlessness That You Fear)

You spoil me, my dear. Lol. *blushes*  Thanks for being so helpful! I don't know what I would have done without someone to be my sounding board and help me figure out the iffy parts. 

8/10

vincablack

Ok my interest is peeked.I like the idea that time has passed and she  is'nt sure what is going on outside . Did they win and there looking for her?That would be my hope anyway.Interesting I will watch for your update.

Response from JackieJLH (Author of The Endlessness That You Fear)

Thanks, I'm glad you like it!! I just posted chapter two. ;)

10/10

freeluciusnow21

Isn't it just like Snape to be cryptic, and yet at the same time say so much! Lovely work. It was recommended to be by another author and I adore what you have so far. Keep up the goodness!

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