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Resolving a Misunderstanding

1: I: Minerva’s Grievance

2: II: Minerva’s Mortification

3: III: Albus Reflects

4: IV: More McGonagalls

5: V: Madam Puddifoot’s and a Complicated Situation

6: VI: Spero et Expecto

7: VII: Chez Albus

8: VIII: Minerva’s Project

9: IX: A Father Worried, A Father Reassured

10: X: A Smooth Apparater

11: XI: The Special Project

12: XII: An Unexpected Arrival

13: XIII: Lunch in the Great Hall

14: XIV: To Train a House-Elf

15: XV: A Success

16: XVI: Preparations

17: XVII: Minerva’s Mission

18: XVIII: A Sudden Change of Circumstance

19: XIX: Waiting

20: XX: Hiding

21: XXI: Seeking

22: XXII: Finding

23: XXIII: Escaping

24: XXIV: A Missent Missive

25: XXV: Meeting

26: XXVI: A Lovely Sight to Behold

27: XXVII: Pleasurable Anticipation

28: XXVIII: A Bright Morning

29: XXIX: Breakfast with Albus, Breakfast with Minerva

30: XXX: Speculation and Facing Oneself

31: XXXI: Curiosity Piqued

32: XXXII: The Attacks

33: XXXIII: A Difficult Conversation

34: XXXIV: Professor Gamp’s Suggestion

35: XXXV: Hagrid

36: XXXVI: Dinner and Dessert

37: XXXVII: A Morning Constitutional

38: XXXVIII: Requests

39: XXXIX: A Startling Revelation

40: XL: Horrid Relatives

41: XLI: Down the Garden Path

42: XLII: Dalliance and Deception

43: XLIII: Doubt and Comfort

44: XLIV: An Early Breakfast and an Owl

45: XLV: A Quiet Afternoon at the Gamp Estate

46: XLVI: More Relatives

47: XLVII: Dinner and Divination

48: XLVIII: Lessons in Letter-Writing

49: XLIX: Games at the Gamps

50: L: Curious Conversation

51: LI: The Lovely Couple

52: LII: Shall We Dance?

53: LIII: The End of the Party

54: LIV: Breakfast al Fresco

55: LV: Return to Hogwarts

56: LVI: A Conspiracy of Witches

57: LVII: Hot, Cold, and Tepid

58: LVIII: The Comforts of Home

59: LIX: Mistakes and Misunderstandings

60: LX: The Magic of Memory

61: LXI: An Owl from St. Mungo’s

62: LXII: To Be of Assistance

63: LXIII: Tasseomancy

64: LXIV: Debate and Dissension

65: LXV: Hagrid’s Hut

66: LXVI: Many Meetings

67: LXVII: An Escort in Dark Places

68: LXVIII: A Date for Minerva

69: LXIX: None But the Two

70: LXX: Forever in the Sun

71: LXXI: If This Were a Date . . .

72: LXXII: Not a Date

73: LXXIII: A Tale of Two Wands

74: LXXIV: Ever Green

75: LXXV: Collision

76: LXXVI: A Most Pleasant Disturbance

77: LXXVII: Impulse

78: LXXVIII: Meeting Morag

79: LXXIX: Jeremiah Was a Jarvey

80: LXXX: An Evening in Hogsmeade

81: LXXXI: Disarming Minerva

82: LXXXII: Silly Wizard

83: LXXXIII: Family Time

84: LXXXIV: Mates

85: LXXXV: Plans

86: LXXXVI: A Mother’s Trust

87: LXXXVII: Of Altruism and Magical Accidents

88: LXXXVIII: From Albus, Sincerely

89: LXXXIX: A Perfect Flat

90: XC: A Confidant

91: XCI: Hope, Suspect

92: XCII: Expectations and Arrivals

93: XCIII: Tea Party on the Ceiling

94: XCIV: Poppy and Potions

95: XCV: Home Again

96: XCVI: Not to Be Tolerated

97: XCVII: Happy Birthday, Albus

98: XCVIII: Warding

99: XCIX: Head of Gryffindor

100: C: Touring Hogwarts

101: CI: The Tale of a Young Wizard

102: CII: The Sorrows of a Young Wizard

103: CIII: Defeating Darkness

104: CIV: Gifts

105: CV: A Werewolf's End

106: CVI: Reverberations

107: CVII: Unsolicited Advice

108: CVIII: In Memoriam

109: CIX: Holiday from Hogwarts

110: CX: Seduction

111: CXI: Headmaster’s Holiday

112: CXII: Unexpected Arrivals

113: CXIII: Seeking Counsel

114: CXIV: His Lady’s Servant

115: CXV: Questionable Intentions

116: CXVI: Seeking Solace

117: CXVII: Comfort and Consolation

118: CXVIII: Confronting Albus

119: CXIX: Love Unceasing

120: CXX: The Morning Beyond Never

121: CXXI: The MacAirt Pledge

122: CXXII: Another Date for Minerva

123: CXXIII: Love Beyond Disbelief

124: CXXIV: Courting Minerva

125: CXXV: Rematch

126: CXXVI: Age Cannot Wither

127: CXXVII: An Interesting Idea

128: CXXVIII: Romance Interrupted

129: CXXIX: A Mercurial McGonagall

130: CXXX: The McGonagall Cliffs

131: CXXXI: Realising Love

132: CXXXII: Melina Marries Her Muggle

133: CXXXIII: Abiding Love

134: CXXXIV: Sweet Delight

135: CXXXV: A Spree

136: CXXXVI: Aprés Spree

137: CXXXVII: The Silent Knight’s Tale

138: CXXXVIII: Back to Hogwarts

139: CXXXIX: Lagniappe

140: CXL: Sorted

141: Epilogue: . . . and his stupid beard too!

Resolving a Misunderstanding

MMADfan

954 Reviews   |   954 Ratings, 0 Likes, 108 Favorites )

Humor Drama Romance Alternate Universe Hogwarts Castle 887,445 Words 157 Chapters Complete
Albus Dumbledore Minerva McGonagall Poppy Pomfrey Armando Dippet Rubeus Hagrid Wilhelmina Grubbly-Plank Rufus Scrimgeour Alastor (Mad-Eye) Moody Tom Riddle (Voldemort) Moaning Myrtle Aragog Bellatrix Lestrange Druella (Rosier) Black Bartimus Crouch Filius Flitwick Horace Slughorn Professor Binns Mr. Ollivander Gellert Grindelwald Nicolas Flamel Cornelius Fudge Professor Kettleburn

Minerva has just finished her first term teaching. A series of misunderstandings leads to an embarrassing moment, injured feelings, regret, growing understanding, then resolution. A Minerva McGonagall fic set in 1957, with forays into the past. More than a Romance; stories within stories. Features Minerva, Albus, and Poppy, with appearances by Slughorn, Grubbly-Plank, Hagrid, Flitwick, Moody, Riddle, Grindelwald, and other canon characters. Not DH-compliant. Disregards DH.
Nineteen Parts.
Most content T-rated, but ratings rise to M and MA for several later chapters. Overall M rating reflects later content.
Pertinent warnings in individual chapter summaries.

Voted First Place, Minerva McGonagall: Legacy Fic, in the HP Fanfiction Fan Poll Awards Spring/Summer 2013.

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Chapters (141)

Chapter 1: I: Minerva’s Grievance

Chapter 2: II: Minerva’s Mortification

Chapter 3: III: Albus Reflects

Chapter 4: IV: More McGonagalls

Chapter 5: V: Madam Puddifoot’s and a Complicated Situation

Chapter 6: VI: Spero et Expecto

Chapter 7: VII: Chez Albus

Chapter 8: VIII: Minerva’s Project

Chapter 9: IX: A Father Worried, A Father Reassured

Chapter 10: X: A Smooth Apparater

Chapter 11: XI: The Special Project

Chapter 12: XII: An Unexpected Arrival

Chapter 13: XIII: Lunch in the Great Hall

Chapter 14: XIV: To Train a House-Elf

Chapter 15: XV: A Success

Chapter 16: XVI: Preparations

Chapter 17: XVII: Minerva’s Mission

Chapter 18: XVIII: A Sudden Change of Circumstance

Chapter 19: XIX: Waiting

Chapter 20: XX: Hiding

Chapter 21: XXI: Seeking

Chapter 22: XXII: Finding

Chapter 23: XXIII: Escaping

Chapter 24: XXIV: A Missent Missive

Chapter 25: XXV: Meeting

Chapter 26: XXVI: A Lovely Sight to Behold

Chapter 27: XXVII: Pleasurable Anticipation

Chapter 28: XXVIII: A Bright Morning

Chapter 29: XXIX: Breakfast with Albus, Breakfast with Minerva

Chapter 30: XXX: Speculation and Facing Oneself

Chapter 31: XXXI: Curiosity Piqued

Chapter 32: XXXII: The Attacks

Chapter 33: XXXIII: A Difficult Conversation

Chapter 34: XXXIV: Professor Gamp’s Suggestion

Chapter 35: XXXV: Hagrid

Chapter 36: XXXVI: Dinner and Dessert

Chapter 37: XXXVII: A Morning Constitutional

Chapter 38: XXXVIII: Requests

Chapter 39: XXXIX: A Startling Revelation

Chapter 40: XL: Horrid Relatives

Chapter 41: XLI: Down the Garden Path

Chapter 42: XLII: Dalliance and Deception

Chapter 43: XLIII: Doubt and Comfort

Chapter 44: XLIV: An Early Breakfast and an Owl

Chapter 45: XLV: A Quiet Afternoon at the Gamp Estate

Chapter 46: XLVI: More Relatives

Chapter 47: XLVII: Dinner and Divination

Chapter 48: XLVIII: Lessons in Letter-Writing

Chapter 49: XLIX: Games at the Gamps

Chapter 50: L: Curious Conversation

Chapter 51: LI: The Lovely Couple

Chapter 52: LII: Shall We Dance?

Chapter 53: LIII: The End of the Party

Chapter 54: LIV: Breakfast al Fresco

Chapter 55: LV: Return to Hogwarts

Chapter 56: LVI: A Conspiracy of Witches

Chapter 57: LVII: Hot, Cold, and Tepid

Chapter 58: LVIII: The Comforts of Home

Chapter 59: LIX: Mistakes and Misunderstandings

Chapter 60: LX: The Magic of Memory

Chapter 61: LXI: An Owl from St. Mungo’s

Chapter 62: LXII: To Be of Assistance

Chapter 63: LXIII: Tasseomancy

Chapter 64: LXIV: Debate and Dissension

Chapter 65: LXV: Hagrid’s Hut

Chapter 66: LXVI: Many Meetings

Chapter 67: LXVII: An Escort in Dark Places

Chapter 68: LXVIII: A Date for Minerva

Chapter 69: LXIX: None But the Two

Chapter 70: LXX: Forever in the Sun

Chapter 71: LXXI: If This Were a Date . . .

Chapter 72: LXXII: Not a Date

Chapter 73: LXXIII: A Tale of Two Wands

Chapter 74: LXXIV: Ever Green

Chapter 75: LXXV: Collision

Chapter 76: LXXVI: A Most Pleasant Disturbance

Chapter 77: LXXVII: Impulse

Chapter 78: LXXVIII: Meeting Morag

Chapter 79: LXXIX: Jeremiah Was a Jarvey

Chapter 80: LXXX: An Evening in Hogsmeade

Chapter 81: LXXXI: Disarming Minerva

Chapter 82: LXXXII: Silly Wizard

Chapter 83: LXXXIII: Family Time

Chapter 84: LXXXIV: Mates

Chapter 85: LXXXV: Plans

Chapter 86: LXXXVI: A Mother’s Trust

Chapter 87: LXXXVII: Of Altruism and Magical Accidents

Chapter 88: LXXXVIII: From Albus, Sincerely

Chapter 89: LXXXIX: A Perfect Flat

Chapter 90: XC: A Confidant

Chapter 91: XCI: Hope, Suspect

Chapter 92: XCII: Expectations and Arrivals

Chapter 93: XCIII: Tea Party on the Ceiling

Chapter 94: XCIV: Poppy and Potions

Chapter 95: XCV: Home Again

Chapter 96: XCVI: Not to Be Tolerated

Chapter 97: XCVII: Happy Birthday, Albus

Chapter 98: XCVIII: Warding

Chapter 99: XCIX: Head of Gryffindor

Chapter 100: C: Touring Hogwarts

Chapter 101: CI: The Tale of a Young Wizard

Chapter 102: CII: The Sorrows of a Young Wizard

Chapter 103: CIII: Defeating Darkness

Chapter 104: CIV: Gifts

Chapter 105: CV: A Werewolf's End

Chapter 106: CVI: Reverberations

Chapter 107: CVII: Unsolicited Advice

Chapter 108: CVIII: In Memoriam

Chapter 109: CIX: Holiday from Hogwarts

Chapter 110: CX: Seduction

Chapter 111: CXI: Headmaster’s Holiday

Chapter 112: CXII: Unexpected Arrivals

Chapter 113: CXIII: Seeking Counsel

Chapter 114: CXIV: His Lady’s Servant

Chapter 115: CXV: Questionable Intentions

Chapter 116: CXVI: Seeking Solace

Chapter 117: CXVII: Comfort and Consolation

Chapter 118: CXVIII: Confronting Albus

Chapter 119: CXIX: Love Unceasing

Chapter 120: CXX: The Morning Beyond Never

Chapter 121: CXXI: The MacAirt Pledge

Chapter 122: CXXII: Another Date for Minerva

Chapter 123: CXXIII: Love Beyond Disbelief

Chapter 124: CXXIV: Courting Minerva

Chapter 125: CXXV: Rematch

Chapter 126: CXXVI: Age Cannot Wither

Chapter 127: CXXVII: An Interesting Idea

Chapter 128: CXXVIII: Romance Interrupted

Chapter 129: CXXIX: A Mercurial McGonagall

Chapter 130: CXXX: The McGonagall Cliffs

Chapter 131: CXXXI: Realising Love

Chapter 132: CXXXII: Melina Marries Her Muggle

Chapter 133: CXXXIII: Abiding Love

Chapter 134: CXXXIV: Sweet Delight

Chapter 135: CXXXV: A Spree

Chapter 136: CXXXVI: Aprés Spree

Chapter 137: CXXXVII: The Silent Knight’s Tale

Chapter 138: CXXXVIII: Back to Hogwarts

Chapter 139: CXXXIX: Lagniappe

Chapter 140: CXL: Sorted

Chapter 141: Epilogue: . . . and his stupid beard too!


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10/10

Fallen_Angel_Mione

Quin is such a good friend to Minerva. Unfortunately, I have a feeling that this will set back her progress with Albus, especially after the things she'd said to him earlier about getting out of the castle more. It will be interesting to see how they get past this set back.

Great chapter!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Thanks very much! There will be another one up in a few days.

10/10

Hypnobarb

Poor Hagrid.  His tender feelings are going through quite a lot.  His lady love is departing and his dog is nearing the end of a long and satisfying life.  It was very thoughtful of Malcolm to find a puppy for him, given that there weren't any baby dragons available.Gertrude is certainly becoming more of a real, well-rounded person with what we learned of her and Malcolm, her life outside of the interactions with Albus or within her functions as Deputy.When Albus doesn't think about what he's doing or saying, it goes well for Minerva.  As soon as he starts thinking, he gets all honorable and such.  Blurting is definitely the way to go.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Blurting might be good . . . but sometimes not thinking doesn't work so well, either. We shall see!

And yes, given the dearth of baby dragons, a puppy is a very good thing!

Thanks for reviewing! 

10/10

stardragon

That was sweet, and more lighthearted following their respective brooding. They do bring out the best in one another. A puppy for Hagrid--oh, my, Malcom is a keeper! I did have a a bit of a dither in the poll, I voted for Gertrude as fave, but it was a quite difficult to choose between Malcolm and Quin for second favorite. I think Malcolm may be edging out Quin now!Interesting tidbit on Merrythought. There's some inspiration for our almost-couple!Thanks for the update. And I'm greedy, can't wait for the next one!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

They can bring out the best in each other . . . or the very worst. *sigh*

I'm glad you like Malcolm. He does have a bit more "cool" than Quin does, and while they may both be non-conformists and very sweet in their own ways, Quin is much more steady and less exciting and unpredictable than Malcolm.

I have been able to write in the evenings a lot, so hopefully the next update will not be long in coming. But it depends whether my energy level stays high enough to keep it up. Some nights, I just wanna veg!

Thank you for reviewing! 

10/10

Fallen_Angel_Mione

Interesting chapter. Liked the Caeser and Brutus bit. Good work.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Many thanks! :)

0/10

prosopopoiia

Lovely chapter, I especially like the bit at the end.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Thank you!

0/10

bedworm

Another question answered. Now I'm feeling like we're really getting somewhere. Poor Albus feeling so inadequate. Hope he gets over it soon.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Yes, well, we are closing in on the final crisis, after which things will look up, to put it mildly! Thanks for reviewing!

0/10

bedworm

Gah! That chapter title really had me thinking something more was going to happen. Still it was great to find out what's going on with Gertie and Malcolm. Wonderful chapter as always.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Thanks very much! Glad you enjoyed the chapter. And you aren't alone -- many people were under that impression. But I don't think that the title for the chapter in which they finally figure out their biggest misunderstanding will be anything like "Seduction." *grin*

Thank you for the review as always! 

0/10

stardragon

Forgot to say last night, that V. woman needs to be hexed into the grave! What a b$#%*! I was tired last night, don't think I expressed myself well. I didn't quite mean that I see Getrude and Albus as co-dependent<g>, just that they seem to be at the same place, lonely for too many years and reaching a breaking point, Gertrude in a somewhat less dramatic fashion!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Yes, Valerianna is pretty dreadful! Vile Val!

I didn't think you meant co-dependent, just that they have been focussed on each other, and they need to be reaching beyond that, in a way.  

10/10

stardragon

Ah, Albus! This does give much insight into his insecurity regarding Minerva, and his ability to have a relationship with a woman. Heartbreakng, again.I thought he and Gertrude must have been lovers, that she was the "one witch" he had pursued. I was unsure how I felt about that, or how they could still be such good friends, but you've pulled it off [again]. Totally believable. Very true to human nature--you understand how people tick, on a very deep level. So Gertrude has known how he feels about Minerva for probably longer than he has himself. It's a wonder she hasn't just locked them in the tower together and let them be to figure it out, as direct as she can be!  I'm glad she has met Malcolm (like Albus' thought that she has a thing for Gryffindor wizards!).  And it is well past time for them to move on from one another, eh? I know they did romantically, but perhaps they have been a little too emotionally depdendent on each other.Truly wonderful chapter. Interesting revelations, indeed!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Thank you very much! *blush* I really appreciate the sentiment! And I'm glad that you found the Albus-Gertrude interaction believable!

And as direct as Gertrude may be, she is still a Slytherin, and she also knows how "balky" her Gryffindor friends can be at times, and pushing too hard might be a mistake. Maybe not, but she wants them to find each other with just a few nudges here and there. And she wasn't sure of Minerva's feelings toward Albus until the party, really. And you may be correct about the emotional dependence. 

As always, thank you for the review! I' glad you enjoyed the chapter. The next one will be up toward the end of the week, if RL cooperates! Definitely by the weekend, though, I think! 

10/10

cocoasnape

holy shit! excuse my language but i am suitably shocked.  i kind of suspected but i thought i was imagining things!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

what a back story you've given usbut this all does make total sense now with what we know about their closeness and also his rejection of her advice about valerianna

and of course now we understand where all of albus's self-deprecating behavior comes from and his not believing minerva could ever want him. damn that valerianna woman!

i'm very happy for gertie finding malcolm - but damn wasn't minerva giving her the third degree although for her own protection clearly

i'm looking forward to albus and minerva lunching together.......

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Sounds like you are a bit surprised. Taken aback. Startled. Shocked, even! LOL!

I'm glad the chapter was entertaining! And yes, Valerianna was pretty terrible.

Minerva wasn't trying to give Gertie the third degree, she just couldn't help herself. And she was concerned about her. And about her brother. She was unsure who to be more concerned about!

Thanks very much for the review! I enjoyed it, especially the multiple exclamation points! LOL! (It's nice to know the story isn't stale and dull and still has a few surprises for folks!) 

The next chapter will likely be up on Wednesday or Thursday, but it really depends on how cooperative RL is! 

10/10

Fallen_Angel_Mione

Hehe, Minerva's such a mother hen. Silly Albus. I wonder if anyone will tell him when Minerva came back from her holiday. Excellent chapter.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Thanks very much! Glad you enjoyed it!

0/10

MsAnnaLytical

I'm really enjoying all this backstory! Gertrude and Albus' relationship makes a lot more sense now. Unfortunately, Minerva and Albus continue to make things more difficult than necessary, but that just makes the prospect of their realization more palatable. :) Great story! Do you have all these chapters written already, or are you constantly working on them?

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

I have parts of future chapters written, and I have a very detailed outline that I work from and add to as I think of things that I don't want to forget to put in. There were some chapters that were written way in advance of their being posted, or at least, drafts of them were written. The three "Albus chapters" are the best example of that. I wrote the essence of those chapters back in March or April, knowing that I wouldn't get to the point in the story to reveal them for a long time. When it came time to "write" the chapters, then, I took what I'd already written, was one big single thing, reorganized it, put it in a first-person narrative, and polished it up.

I tend to write large chunks of the story at once and then go days without writing much, if anything. I prefer to be at least a couple chapters ahead of where I post -- best to have four or five chapters written, actually -- so that when I have periods when I can't write, I still have chapters to post. I try not to get to the point where I'm posting the last chapter I have written, although that has happened a couple of times, and one time, people had heart attacks when it took me two weeks (!) to update. I had people PMing me and asking if I'd abandoned the story!

I don't think I could sustain such a long, complicated story without a detailed outline. I also have character sketches for a number of the main characters. Malcolm's character has had a sketch for months and months even though he didn't appear until recently. Of course, some of the other characters did talk about him.

Glad you're enjoying the backstory!

10/10

Hypnobarb

This is a revelation, but not entirely surprising.  They would hardly be the first friends to take a little physical comfort in their companionship during difficult times.  It says a lot about Gertie that she chose to end it when Albus decided to court her.  She's the Slytherin, but she didn't do the thing that could have been perceived as the ambitious thing to do.It still explains a lot about why they are so comfortable with each other.She hints that she's realised that there is someone there for Albus.  If she figured it out that far ahead of time, the signals must have been pretty strong.  No wonder she's matchmaking now.  She knows Albus well enough to realize that he's positively thick when it comes to women.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

She had seen Albus's growing affection for Minerva and was getting the sense that his feelings toward her were changing, then when he came back from her Challenge, she was pretty sure that he was falling in love with her, though he wasn't completely aware of it yet, and she wasn't completely certain that it was going to last, but she thought that they would make a good couple and were well-suited, and that in any case, his heart was not as entirely devoted to his courtship of her as he believed it was. So it was difficult for Gertie, but she did what she thought was right for Albus.

And Albus is brilliant in many areas, but not when it comes to women, unfortunately! Part of it comes from his not having had a real romantic relationship for so many years, but it's complex. 

Thank you for your review!

0/10

alina612

Excellent chapter! I always suspected there had been something there between Gertrude and Albus!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Thanks much! And you were right!

10/10

Hypnobarb

Urgh.  Poor Minerva seems to be fated to be an unwilling voyeur.  I don't want to see either of my brothers doing what she saw Malcolm doing.  I'd need therapy.  Or a good brain scrubbing.However.Way to go, Gertie!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Minerva wasn't too pleased, either! LOL. Glad you're cheering Gertie on, though! Thanks for reviewing!

0/10

MsAnnaLytical

I absolutely loved that last bit with Malcolm and Gertrude. Who is Trudie's second lover? This was a very long, and very good, chapter. The descriptions are superb- I felt myself lost (in a good way) in this chapter. You've created some magnificent characters who not only stand on their own without canon, but also support and lend credence to the present canon characters and settings. ABCfamily is running a Harry Potter movie weekend, and when Harry went into the Headmaster's office, I found myself looking for the back stairs before I realized that they are not canon! Haha! That's when you know you've created a convincing, real fan fic. :) Are you still planning on writing a sequel to AAoL?Hope your Thanksgiving vacation went well!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Thanks very much! I'm very glad you liked the last bit with Malcolm and Gertrude. It was a section I was fond of and hoped would work well, so it's gratifying to hear that you loved it.

I am still planning on writing the AAoL sequel -- it's actually aout half-written. Oddly enough, I think I want to finish writing the sequel before I write the epilogue for AAoL, which is why that's been a long time coming. I do need to write all of this sequel before I begin posting it, however, because I want to be able to go back and reintegrate things as I need to. I haven't worked on it in a while, however, being somewhat caught up in RL and spending most of my writing time on RaM.

My Thanksgiving was very nice, thanks! I really needed it. It was cut short somewhat because of a meeting I had to be back in town for, but that was okay.

I had people who, when reading DH, said they were confused because they kept thinking of RaM events that weren't there! So I think you have company! They would have been even more confused if I'd already posted the three "Albus" chapters where he tells of the lessons of his youth. Haha!

Thank you very much for the thoughtful -- and kind -- review! I really appreciate it! 

10/10

cocoasnape

poor minerva being so lonely!i loved her fantasy of albus in teh garden though...very nice imagery for us thereone can never have too much wall sex in my opinion....!

lovely to see gertie getting some of that action althoug h minerva must think she's hte only one not getting any at this pointpoor dear

ok....i assume from the title of the next chap we are going to find out where the hell albus went!!?!?!??!  i'm sure he's off in tanzania fantasizing about minerva!

loved the chap and am demanding the next one (nicely, of course!)

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

"loved the chap and am demanding the next one (nicely, of course!)"

I don't mind the nicely delivered demands for the next chapter, especially after an appreciative review! LOL! But that doesn't necessarily mean that the Muse and RL will cooperate as well as I'd like. But I'll try to get them to play nice so I can get the next chapter out in the next day or two. I never like to post a chapter unless I have at least two written, sometimes more, depending on the point I'm at in the story. And RL is being rather pesky, unfortunately!

Glad you like the "wall sex"! You'll be happy with one of the upcoming chapters, then -- it's a few chapters away, so don't hold your breath for it, though! (I do write part of things in advance. Much of the three "Albus-chapters" were already written last spring, and just sat and waited patiently for me to get to them and finish them up -- and change them into first-person narrative, which was a bit of a pain . . .)

And yes, in the next chapter, we will learn where Albus went and what he did and what a nice time he is not having. Er, what a nice time he is trying to have? Something like that.

Glad you liked Gertie and Malcolm together.  

Thank you for your review! I look forward to your reaction to the next chapter!

Response from cocoasnape (Reviewer)

no need to explain your posting speed! please ignore my demands.......it's just my way of tell ing you that i can't wait for more.honestly i can't believe how fast you are - it takes me forever to update my fics, especially lately. real life is way too demanding!!i should post some of them here actually....if i ever get around to itxxcocoa

10/10

stardragon

That was an unexpected surprise! I couldn't put the chapter title together with the story at the beginning, when Albus was gone. Really nice work with Malcolm and Gertrude (beyond the seduction, that is!), very tender, a nice juxtaposition<sp?> with their more eccentric exteriors.So, are you going to write more than a one-shot with Gertrude and Malcolm?   I love secondary characters, I usually wind up following them around in my own writing.I'm a little scared of sex between Minerva and Albus if their fantasies are this hot! My computer may burst into flames! I think Minerva is going to implode with romantic/sexual frustration if Albus doesn't sort things out soon!Eliphelet is great!Wonderful chapter; very curious what's next, of course!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

I thought the chapter title was slightly tricky, but certainly descriptive! I'm glad you liked the Malcolm/Gertrude pairing and how they came together. They will show up again!

Their fantasies are tame . . . at least, in terms of description. So maybe you ought to keep a fire extinguisher handy!

And yes, Minerva is going to have trouble, poor thing . . . and it will take a major shaking for him to actually figure things out.

Glad you liked Eliphelet, the old letch! He was trying to behave himself. And he didn't do terribly badly, aside from the "young heifer" remark! LOL!

Up next is Albus's holiday. Such as it is. We'll get a little peek at what's going on at Hogwarts, then we see Albus not enjoying his holiday. And we'll get a glimpse at some of his thoughts and some of his memories, and I think you might find them interesting . . . .

Thank you for the review! I'm very glad you enjoyed the chapter! 

10/10

Fallen_Angel_Mione

Woot! Go Malcolm! It's cute when the aloof ones fall. And poor Minerva. Quin's prophecy seems to be coming full force. She really needs to take more initiative and hopefully soon. Great chapter!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Thanks very much! Glad you liked the chapter -- and Malcolm!

10/10

Fishy

I so love Quin in this - wouldn't it be nice if friends stood up for each other liket his on a regular basis? Even if it was just one friend whome you knew would go up to bat for you, in anything - you always had someone in your corner? Id love that! YAY for Quinn!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

He certainly is one very loyal friend, and ready to stick with you through thick and thin! Friends like that are true diamonds! Knowing you have a friend like that is very heartening, even in dark and difficult times, I agree!

10/10

cocoasnape

I loved albus's backstory..and even more him telling minerva it.Very interesting that your backstory has many similarities to jkr's. i have enjoyed your version very much. particuarly the bit with the master sending him to live in a cave. sounds very shaolin-esqe!

also going back a few chapters - i adored quin's interaction with albus.  "you are taken with her?"oh i squeed at that!  and how cool quin played it off. now he surely must know albus likes minerva

and this last chapter....with minerva's fantasies getting more vivid and 'physical,' if i can put it mildly...that was hot!!

i can only see this sharing of his past on albus's part as establishing even more advanced intimacy between themAND now...it's minerva's turn to share the details of her magical accident...(which i want to learn about myself, btw!)

and how noble (but stupid) of albus depriving himself of such things....

can't wait for the next chapter....please!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

When I first started reading DH, I thought I might be able to change my story of Albus around to be DH-compliant and have it still fit in with RaM, but as I continued reading, I realised I really couldn't because there were some fundamental differences between the two, not to mention that I'd already fairly well set up his family background, at least with regard to his having married young & lost his wife and the fact that he went to his uncle, rather than to his father (who was the absent one) for advice after his wife's death, etc. The few similarities that remain originate, I think, from the themes that I (and others, of course!) picked up from the books and that I extrapolated to create AD's history -- the idea of one or more absent parents (a theme I got a little too carried away with in RaM, I'm afraid, but by the time I realised it and had a good laugh about it, it was too late to change it! -- but there are a lot of orphans and "half-orphans" in the books, as well, so it's okay, I guess, to have gotten a bit carried away with it!), the presence of Muggle-ancestry for both TR and HP, the importance of choice, of responsibility, and of love in AD's personal philosophy, the notion that with great gifts comes great responsibility, and that mistakes that might be small ones from someone else are huge when committed by someone with such great gifts and great responsibility. I had tried to create a personal history for Albus that would tie all that together and that would also tie him to Minerva, in a way, through the wands, and to make the wands' nature somewhat reflective of their relationship.

I am trying to get a bit of writing done today, but the next couple weeks will be very busy ones for me, so although I'm still "ahead" by a couple chapters, I haven't much of a cushion in reserve and don't want there to be a long dry spell with no updates, so I'm going to ration the next updates some. It's for your own good! LOL! Dont' want folk to go through too much withdrawal! *grin*

If you think Minerva's fantasy was hot, "reality" will be (I hope) much better! ;)

Thanks for reviewing! I'm very glad you are enjoying the story so much! 

Response from cocoasnape (Reviewer)

ok i'll take your word for it that waiting is for our own good loli forgot to mention that i loved the little detail that the two wands ollivander made for dumbledore to try were in fact harry's and voldemort's wands (eventually)very cool....and when you do get to the sexy bits, i hope it is drawn out. i'd hate it for the thing to end all in one chapter!!cheers

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Don't worry -- after the long build-up, it won't all be over in one chapter, and there will be a few chapters that are zesty for you (and for poor Minerva and Albus, after all they've been through in this story! LOL!), and I hope the end will feel like a completion and not just where the story stops.

I had that thought about the Fawkes feather wands ages and ages ago -- before I even knew there was any such thing as HP fanfic, in fact (hard to believe there ever was such a time! LOL!) -- I was just trying to figure out how and why there would be those two wands, and I thought, well, maybe they were supposed to be for Dumbledore, but they weren't suited to him for some reason. It was fun to be able to explore that idea in this story. 

10/10

stardragon

You are really spoiling us you know. This chapter-a-day stuff is addicting.This was a huge hurdle for Albus. Does he even realize himself yet that he's declared his love to Minerva? I don't see much of a barrier there anymore in his internal musings, not sure if he's aware of that yet! My favorite part of this chapter was Minverva "dressing up" for him. Sweet! She's reacting to him as a lover now, subconscious or not. Her reaction to/jealousy of Maria was very realistic. (I must admit to having some thoughts myself about young Albus and Maria since I read the chapter.) I like Albus' thoughts on Maria to, how he appreciates the gift she gave him, and how it helped him. An effective emotional transition here. Things will be very different between them when they see each other again. Can't wait!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

"You are really spoiling us you know. This chapter-a-day stuff is addicting."

I do hope you don't get the DTs when the pace becomes more sedate now! Or at least if you do, your delirium includes visions of Albus and Minerva. Or Maria. Whichever you prefer! LOL! (I picture a young Salma-Hayek-type, for some reason, but feel free to substitute, if you like!)

Thanks very much for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed it! 

10/10

Fallen_Angel_Mione

Love their reactions to the aftermath of the telling. Minerva has quite an imagination too. Excellent chapter.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Thanks!

0/10

MsAnnaLytical

Ah, one more step on the road to realization! Do you already have the chapter written where they FINALLY get together? I bet you do- you're jusy holding out on us poor readers. :) Great chap! Hope you're having a good weekend!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

I have a lot of it written -- I started it back, oh, about a hundred chapters ago. (I will also give you a hint -- that little thing that Albus keeps in his desk drawer that he wrote while Minerva was at the Gamps and thinks he should destroy, that little parchment will play a role, and was written at about the same time as the chapter in which Albus wrote it, just a couple weeks before that in RL.) The outline has been complete for months and months, though as I have ideas or things I realise I might forget in the meantime, I either add them to the outline or to this other document full of notes and character sketches and that sort of thing. So I suppose you could say that I'm holding out on you! LOL! However, I'm having tons of fun telling their story. 

I am having a lovely weekend, despite the grey weather and the early dusk. The Guinness might be helpingwith that, though . . .

Thanks much for the review!!!

10/10

stardragon

Wow, that was absorbing. Again, I was completely drawn into his POV, vivid imagery. He really can't see how remarkable he is, can he? He survived all that--emotionally and mentally--and managed to use his experience for good rather than it dragging him down or making him bitter, yet he can't see that part of it. i was actually startled that Minerva left, that they didn't fall asleep together--just sleep  --the bond between them is that strong, and came across so clearly. It will be quite interesting to see how they react to one another now!Tired tonight myself, so I don't feel coherent, but wonderful chapter. Quite evocative.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Thank you! I'm very happy it struck a chord with you and you found it evocative. I'm off to bed now, myself. 

Thank you very much for your reviews! 

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