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Resolving a Misunderstanding

1: I: Minerva’s Grievance

2: II: Minerva’s Mortification

3: III: Albus Reflects

4: IV: More McGonagalls

5: V: Madam Puddifoot’s and a Complicated Situation

6: VI: Spero et Expecto

7: VII: Chez Albus

8: VIII: Minerva’s Project

9: IX: A Father Worried, A Father Reassured

10: X: A Smooth Apparater

11: XI: The Special Project

12: XII: An Unexpected Arrival

13: XIII: Lunch in the Great Hall

14: XIV: To Train a House-Elf

15: XV: A Success

16: XVI: Preparations

17: XVII: Minerva’s Mission

18: XVIII: A Sudden Change of Circumstance

19: XIX: Waiting

20: XX: Hiding

21: XXI: Seeking

22: XXII: Finding

23: XXIII: Escaping

24: XXIV: A Missent Missive

25: XXV: Meeting

26: XXVI: A Lovely Sight to Behold

27: XXVII: Pleasurable Anticipation

28: XXVIII: A Bright Morning

29: XXIX: Breakfast with Albus, Breakfast with Minerva

30: XXX: Speculation and Facing Oneself

31: XXXI: Curiosity Piqued

32: XXXII: The Attacks

33: XXXIII: A Difficult Conversation

34: XXXIV: Professor Gamp’s Suggestion

35: XXXV: Hagrid

36: XXXVI: Dinner and Dessert

37: XXXVII: A Morning Constitutional

38: XXXVIII: Requests

39: XXXIX: A Startling Revelation

40: XL: Horrid Relatives

41: XLI: Down the Garden Path

42: XLII: Dalliance and Deception

43: XLIII: Doubt and Comfort

44: XLIV: An Early Breakfast and an Owl

45: XLV: A Quiet Afternoon at the Gamp Estate

46: XLVI: More Relatives

47: XLVII: Dinner and Divination

48: XLVIII: Lessons in Letter-Writing

49: XLIX: Games at the Gamps

50: L: Curious Conversation

51: LI: The Lovely Couple

52: LII: Shall We Dance?

53: LIII: The End of the Party

54: LIV: Breakfast al Fresco

55: LV: Return to Hogwarts

56: LVI: A Conspiracy of Witches

57: LVII: Hot, Cold, and Tepid

58: LVIII: The Comforts of Home

59: LIX: Mistakes and Misunderstandings

60: LX: The Magic of Memory

61: LXI: An Owl from St. Mungo’s

62: LXII: To Be of Assistance

63: LXIII: Tasseomancy

64: LXIV: Debate and Dissension

65: LXV: Hagrid’s Hut

66: LXVI: Many Meetings

67: LXVII: An Escort in Dark Places

68: LXVIII: A Date for Minerva

69: LXIX: None But the Two

70: LXX: Forever in the Sun

71: LXXI: If This Were a Date . . .

72: LXXII: Not a Date

73: LXXIII: A Tale of Two Wands

74: LXXIV: Ever Green

75: LXXV: Collision

76: LXXVI: A Most Pleasant Disturbance

77: LXXVII: Impulse

78: LXXVIII: Meeting Morag

79: LXXIX: Jeremiah Was a Jarvey

80: LXXX: An Evening in Hogsmeade

81: LXXXI: Disarming Minerva

82: LXXXII: Silly Wizard

83: LXXXIII: Family Time

84: LXXXIV: Mates

85: LXXXV: Plans

86: LXXXVI: A Mother’s Trust

87: LXXXVII: Of Altruism and Magical Accidents

88: LXXXVIII: From Albus, Sincerely

89: LXXXIX: A Perfect Flat

90: XC: A Confidant

91: XCI: Hope, Suspect

92: XCII: Expectations and Arrivals

93: XCIII: Tea Party on the Ceiling

94: XCIV: Poppy and Potions

95: XCV: Home Again

96: XCVI: Not to Be Tolerated

97: XCVII: Happy Birthday, Albus

98: XCVIII: Warding

99: XCIX: Head of Gryffindor

100: C: Touring Hogwarts

101: CI: The Tale of a Young Wizard

102: CII: The Sorrows of a Young Wizard

103: CIII: Defeating Darkness

104: CIV: Gifts

105: CV: A Werewolf's End

106: CVI: Reverberations

107: CVII: Unsolicited Advice

108: CVIII: In Memoriam

109: CIX: Holiday from Hogwarts

110: CX: Seduction

111: CXI: Headmaster’s Holiday

112: CXII: Unexpected Arrivals

113: CXIII: Seeking Counsel

114: CXIV: His Lady’s Servant

115: CXV: Questionable Intentions

116: CXVI: Seeking Solace

117: CXVII: Comfort and Consolation

118: CXVIII: Confronting Albus

119: CXIX: Love Unceasing

120: CXX: The Morning Beyond Never

121: CXXI: The MacAirt Pledge

122: CXXII: Another Date for Minerva

123: CXXIII: Love Beyond Disbelief

124: CXXIV: Courting Minerva

125: CXXV: Rematch

126: CXXVI: Age Cannot Wither

127: CXXVII: An Interesting Idea

128: CXXVIII: Romance Interrupted

129: CXXIX: A Mercurial McGonagall

130: CXXX: The McGonagall Cliffs

131: CXXXI: Realising Love

132: CXXXII: Melina Marries Her Muggle

133: CXXXIII: Abiding Love

134: CXXXIV: Sweet Delight

135: CXXXV: A Spree

136: CXXXVI: Aprés Spree

137: CXXXVII: The Silent Knight’s Tale

138: CXXXVIII: Back to Hogwarts

139: CXXXIX: Lagniappe

140: CXL: Sorted

141: Epilogue: . . . and his stupid beard too!

Resolving a Misunderstanding

MMADfan

954 Reviews   |   954 Ratings, 0 Likes, 108 Favorites )

Humor Drama Romance Alternate Universe Hogwarts Castle 887,445 Words 157 Chapters Complete
Albus Dumbledore Minerva McGonagall Poppy Pomfrey Armando Dippet Rubeus Hagrid Wilhelmina Grubbly-Plank Rufus Scrimgeour Alastor (Mad-Eye) Moody Tom Riddle (Voldemort) Moaning Myrtle Aragog Bellatrix Lestrange Druella (Rosier) Black Bartimus Crouch Filius Flitwick Horace Slughorn Professor Binns Mr. Ollivander Gellert Grindelwald Nicolas Flamel Cornelius Fudge Professor Kettleburn

Minerva has just finished her first term teaching. A series of misunderstandings leads to an embarrassing moment, injured feelings, regret, growing understanding, then resolution. A Minerva McGonagall fic set in 1957, with forays into the past. More than a Romance; stories within stories. Features Minerva, Albus, and Poppy, with appearances by Slughorn, Grubbly-Plank, Hagrid, Flitwick, Moody, Riddle, Grindelwald, and other canon characters. Not DH-compliant. Disregards DH.
Nineteen Parts.
Most content T-rated, but ratings rise to M and MA for several later chapters. Overall M rating reflects later content.
Pertinent warnings in individual chapter summaries.

Voted First Place, Minerva McGonagall: Legacy Fic, in the HP Fanfiction Fan Poll Awards Spring/Summer 2013.

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Chapters (141)

Chapter 1: I: Minerva’s Grievance

Chapter 2: II: Minerva’s Mortification

Chapter 3: III: Albus Reflects

Chapter 4: IV: More McGonagalls

Chapter 5: V: Madam Puddifoot’s and a Complicated Situation

Chapter 6: VI: Spero et Expecto

Chapter 7: VII: Chez Albus

Chapter 8: VIII: Minerva’s Project

Chapter 9: IX: A Father Worried, A Father Reassured

Chapter 10: X: A Smooth Apparater

Chapter 11: XI: The Special Project

Chapter 12: XII: An Unexpected Arrival

Chapter 13: XIII: Lunch in the Great Hall

Chapter 14: XIV: To Train a House-Elf

Chapter 15: XV: A Success

Chapter 16: XVI: Preparations

Chapter 17: XVII: Minerva’s Mission

Chapter 18: XVIII: A Sudden Change of Circumstance

Chapter 19: XIX: Waiting

Chapter 20: XX: Hiding

Chapter 21: XXI: Seeking

Chapter 22: XXII: Finding

Chapter 23: XXIII: Escaping

Chapter 24: XXIV: A Missent Missive

Chapter 25: XXV: Meeting

Chapter 26: XXVI: A Lovely Sight to Behold

Chapter 27: XXVII: Pleasurable Anticipation

Chapter 28: XXVIII: A Bright Morning

Chapter 29: XXIX: Breakfast with Albus, Breakfast with Minerva

Chapter 30: XXX: Speculation and Facing Oneself

Chapter 31: XXXI: Curiosity Piqued

Chapter 32: XXXII: The Attacks

Chapter 33: XXXIII: A Difficult Conversation

Chapter 34: XXXIV: Professor Gamp’s Suggestion

Chapter 35: XXXV: Hagrid

Chapter 36: XXXVI: Dinner and Dessert

Chapter 37: XXXVII: A Morning Constitutional

Chapter 38: XXXVIII: Requests

Chapter 39: XXXIX: A Startling Revelation

Chapter 40: XL: Horrid Relatives

Chapter 41: XLI: Down the Garden Path

Chapter 42: XLII: Dalliance and Deception

Chapter 43: XLIII: Doubt and Comfort

Chapter 44: XLIV: An Early Breakfast and an Owl

Chapter 45: XLV: A Quiet Afternoon at the Gamp Estate

Chapter 46: XLVI: More Relatives

Chapter 47: XLVII: Dinner and Divination

Chapter 48: XLVIII: Lessons in Letter-Writing

Chapter 49: XLIX: Games at the Gamps

Chapter 50: L: Curious Conversation

Chapter 51: LI: The Lovely Couple

Chapter 52: LII: Shall We Dance?

Chapter 53: LIII: The End of the Party

Chapter 54: LIV: Breakfast al Fresco

Chapter 55: LV: Return to Hogwarts

Chapter 56: LVI: A Conspiracy of Witches

Chapter 57: LVII: Hot, Cold, and Tepid

Chapter 58: LVIII: The Comforts of Home

Chapter 59: LIX: Mistakes and Misunderstandings

Chapter 60: LX: The Magic of Memory

Chapter 61: LXI: An Owl from St. Mungo’s

Chapter 62: LXII: To Be of Assistance

Chapter 63: LXIII: Tasseomancy

Chapter 64: LXIV: Debate and Dissension

Chapter 65: LXV: Hagrid’s Hut

Chapter 66: LXVI: Many Meetings

Chapter 67: LXVII: An Escort in Dark Places

Chapter 68: LXVIII: A Date for Minerva

Chapter 69: LXIX: None But the Two

Chapter 70: LXX: Forever in the Sun

Chapter 71: LXXI: If This Were a Date . . .

Chapter 72: LXXII: Not a Date

Chapter 73: LXXIII: A Tale of Two Wands

Chapter 74: LXXIV: Ever Green

Chapter 75: LXXV: Collision

Chapter 76: LXXVI: A Most Pleasant Disturbance

Chapter 77: LXXVII: Impulse

Chapter 78: LXXVIII: Meeting Morag

Chapter 79: LXXIX: Jeremiah Was a Jarvey

Chapter 80: LXXX: An Evening in Hogsmeade

Chapter 81: LXXXI: Disarming Minerva

Chapter 82: LXXXII: Silly Wizard

Chapter 83: LXXXIII: Family Time

Chapter 84: LXXXIV: Mates

Chapter 85: LXXXV: Plans

Chapter 86: LXXXVI: A Mother’s Trust

Chapter 87: LXXXVII: Of Altruism and Magical Accidents

Chapter 88: LXXXVIII: From Albus, Sincerely

Chapter 89: LXXXIX: A Perfect Flat

Chapter 90: XC: A Confidant

Chapter 91: XCI: Hope, Suspect

Chapter 92: XCII: Expectations and Arrivals

Chapter 93: XCIII: Tea Party on the Ceiling

Chapter 94: XCIV: Poppy and Potions

Chapter 95: XCV: Home Again

Chapter 96: XCVI: Not to Be Tolerated

Chapter 97: XCVII: Happy Birthday, Albus

Chapter 98: XCVIII: Warding

Chapter 99: XCIX: Head of Gryffindor

Chapter 100: C: Touring Hogwarts

Chapter 101: CI: The Tale of a Young Wizard

Chapter 102: CII: The Sorrows of a Young Wizard

Chapter 103: CIII: Defeating Darkness

Chapter 104: CIV: Gifts

Chapter 105: CV: A Werewolf's End

Chapter 106: CVI: Reverberations

Chapter 107: CVII: Unsolicited Advice

Chapter 108: CVIII: In Memoriam

Chapter 109: CIX: Holiday from Hogwarts

Chapter 110: CX: Seduction

Chapter 111: CXI: Headmaster’s Holiday

Chapter 112: CXII: Unexpected Arrivals

Chapter 113: CXIII: Seeking Counsel

Chapter 114: CXIV: His Lady’s Servant

Chapter 115: CXV: Questionable Intentions

Chapter 116: CXVI: Seeking Solace

Chapter 117: CXVII: Comfort and Consolation

Chapter 118: CXVIII: Confronting Albus

Chapter 119: CXIX: Love Unceasing

Chapter 120: CXX: The Morning Beyond Never

Chapter 121: CXXI: The MacAirt Pledge

Chapter 122: CXXII: Another Date for Minerva

Chapter 123: CXXIII: Love Beyond Disbelief

Chapter 124: CXXIV: Courting Minerva

Chapter 125: CXXV: Rematch

Chapter 126: CXXVI: Age Cannot Wither

Chapter 127: CXXVII: An Interesting Idea

Chapter 128: CXXVIII: Romance Interrupted

Chapter 129: CXXIX: A Mercurial McGonagall

Chapter 130: CXXX: The McGonagall Cliffs

Chapter 131: CXXXI: Realising Love

Chapter 132: CXXXII: Melina Marries Her Muggle

Chapter 133: CXXXIII: Abiding Love

Chapter 134: CXXXIV: Sweet Delight

Chapter 135: CXXXV: A Spree

Chapter 136: CXXXVI: Aprés Spree

Chapter 137: CXXXVII: The Silent Knight’s Tale

Chapter 138: CXXXVIII: Back to Hogwarts

Chapter 139: CXXXIX: Lagniappe

Chapter 140: CXL: Sorted

Chapter 141: Epilogue: . . . and his stupid beard too!


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10/10

Fallen_Angel_Mione

Wow, what a good chapter. I like how Albus provided Mother Dragon's heart for their wands, and that bit with defeating Grindelwald was heart-wrenching. Although I doubt that Albus has dissuaded Minerva from loving him, even with his "dubious" past. Extraordinary work.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Thank you very much!

10/10

Hypnobarb

There is so much here to respond to, I'm struggling with where to begin.First.  It is difficult to understand the nature of soil if you've never dipped your hands into mud.  It could be said that Albus spent some time wallowing, but I respect him all the more for turning his back on the temptations offered by those experiences. He learned from it and became a better person for it.Second.  To project into the future, this is clearly a reason why Dumbledore would accept Snape.  Having been down in the pit and having climbed his own way out, he would be able to show him the way.Third.  Whether he understands what he is doing at a conscious as well as unconscious level, he is exposing the darkest bits of himself to the women he loves.  If she loves him, he wants it to be for who he truly is, not just an idealised image she may have of him.That is a bit of wisdom it probably takes a hundred or so years for most men to understand.It does mean that he is choosing to take their relationship to the next level.  He risked everything in their current relationship to do it.  The ball is back in Minerva's court.What will she do?

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

"What will she do?" We shall see. And occasionally, things occur that are beyond our control.

I also thought there had to be a connection between Albus's own experiences and his willingness to give Severus a chance after he'd made an enormously bad decision when he was so young.

Yes, Albus does want Minerva to know him and to love him for all of who he is, not just based the partial picture of him she had before. Her telling him that she loves him was a big impetus for him to do this, even if he didn't explicitly spell that out to himself. But he does think that this IS the new level of their relationship, and believes it is as far as it will ever go.

Next chapter will be up in a few days, most likely. (I've rather spoiled folks with three rapid updates, but I wanted these three chapters not to be broken up too much.)

As always, thank you for reviewing! 

0/10

bedworm

Wow, that was an amazing retelling of Albus's life; way beyond anything I was expecting. I actually teared up a couple of times. And I loved it when you incorporated the part about the phoenix tail feather wands. It fits in rather well with canon hp. Thank you for the excellent last few chapters.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

You're welcome -- and thank you! I'm very glad you liked it so well.

I like to think of RaM as canon-compliant through the first six books, at least in terms of character and such, and not contrary to the "facts" that we learn in those first books, so I'm glad you like the way the two phoenix tail feather wands fit in.

Thanks again! The next chapter will be up sometime over the weekend.

10/10

HermioneDancr

Yay for so many updates!However, a note on Hungarian nicknames.  Gellért is a Hungarian name, as you probably know.  Having lived and studied in Hungary for a time (and started reading this story there), the familiar version of his name would indeed be pronounced Gelly, but it would never be spelled that way.  Familiar names are formed by cutting off the last vowel (or occasionally more) and adding -i.  So Monika becomes Moni, Erika becomes Eri, Zoltán becomes Zoli, etc.  The letter Y only exists in Hungarian in conjunction with specific consonants, and while ly exists, it's more of a yuh sound mashed onto an L than an EE sound.  So Gellért's nickname would technically be Gelli, if you're being linguistically accurate.  Of course, you may not care (or decide that Albus wouldn't know this), which is fine.  /Hungarian cultureI can't wait to hear the rest of Albus' tale and Minerva's reaction to all of it!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Because in English, an "i" is usually considered a feminine ending, I decided on a "y" and making it phonetic, especially since I'm not writing in Hungarian. Unlike when I'm writing in German or French or some other language. Besides, my Grindelwald is from eastern Germany, not from Hungary, and so that is not a real consideration, anyway. (And Germans, just as in other countries, sometimes have names that aren't German -- whether from some of their ancestry coming from another country or because they simply like the other version of the name -- take "Carl," for example. Normally, it would be "Karl," but there are German "Carls." Whatevah! *grin* And I'm also just spelling it as it would be in pronounced.) As I said in my note, I changed his name forthe convenience of having it match what everyone would recognize, otherwise, he'd still be "Gunny" and "Gunther." Anyhow, he ain't Hungarian here and he ain't the DH Grindy and I'm spellin' it phonetically. ;)

10/10

stardragon

This is a much more believable history for Albus than the "other." I firmly believe the betrayal of a friend, especially a kindred spirit, would be more devastating than that based on a romatnic relationship. Not that one couldn't have both in the same person, but it just didn't fit, not for his age, not with the brevity of the relationship or the depth of the experience. This is simply more real-life and hence more believable. At least for me.His kind of brilliance, and magical power, is a gift and a burden. He had to have struggled with how to live with it, and been shaped by those struggles. He had more than his fair share of tragedy, though. I am quite enamored of this particular universe!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Very glad you liked it. (I was so disappointed in DH -- and I did think that she presented it as adolescent hero-worship and adulation & not as a romantic relationship -- even looking at the correspondence -- straight Victorian men wrote more romantic letters to each other than what she put in DH -- not to mention that the rest of the books -- oh, I won't get into all that. I just feel like someone else wrote most of the characters in Book 7, though. Or else in the other books. Poor Lupin -- talk about being made a caricature of oneself. Sigh. And where did Albus's growth, wisdom, and all that disappear to? Even dead, he was dumb as dirt. IMO.)

Anyway, back to the point -- I tend to meander when it gets late, so I hope you can forgive my digressions -- I am glad you like the RaM universe and RaM!Albus. And Albus certainly did go through a lot, and had to learn how to use his heart to inform his choices and to direct his magic. And that with great gifts comes great responsibility. Hmmm, I don't think I'm making much sense, which means it's time to go to bed! 

Thank you very much for your patience and your reviews! (Off to bed so maybe I will be more coherent tomorrow! LOL!)

Response from stardragon (Reviewer)

You were making perfect sense! Absolutely, I agree.I edited out some of my comments because I went off on a digression on DH, and decided that was tmi. :-)  I want to read it again, with first reading Books 1-6 too, before deciding how I feel. I did like the book, but yes, a lot of the characters got short shrift in DH, I agree. Certainly Albus didn't spring from the womb so good and pure, and I really resented that she saved his story until after he was dead, so we could get it all from biased third parties. I know this is not a DH discussion board, so...but I had to comment further!I see the next chapter is up. It's going to be a long day at work...

0/10

alina612

Well, everyone makes mistakes. And I'm sure Albus thinks that Minerva is going to hate him after his tale, but of course she'll only love him more than ever because he is, after all, just an all-too human man. Can't wait for the next update!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Thanks! Glad you liked the chapter. :)

10/10

Fallen_Angel_Mione

Aw, poor Albus having such a downer part of his life of his own creation. Does he ever wonder whether his mom would have lived if he never met Gelly? At least his experiences make him lose some of his arrogance and probably set him on his right path to fulfilling his potential. Excellent, excellent chapter.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

"Does he ever wonder whether his mom would have lived if he never met Gelly?"

Of course. That's precisely the source of his guilt and despair. If she had simply died of natural causes, he might have felt some inadequacies, but not as though he had let a viper into his mother's home, etc. Particularly since he turned down Gelly by telling him he didn't want to leave his mother rather than just telling him he had no desire to join him under any circumstances. If he hadn't been so eager to increase his knowledge, he wouldn't have stayed with Gelly to begin with, and then if he hadn't welcomed Gelly back into his life, despite their previous unpleasant parting, or if he had been truthful to him and told him he had no interest in joining his "elite academy," his mother, he believes, would not have died. (And he would be right, but hindsight is always 20-20, isn't it?)

I'm glad you liked the chapter! The next one will be up soon! 

10/10

Hypnobarb

Sometimes, you have to hit rock bottom before you can start over.  Albus certainly did that.  It is hard to imagine him becoming a bum, but it certainly makes him more human than the Great Albus Dumbledore.Well done.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Thanks!

0/10

bedworm

Very interesting. I really wish I knew what happened to Albus's dad, but maybe it's better not to know.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Sometimes it is better not to know, isn't it? Thanks for reading this far. There will be another chapter up soon.

0/10

bedworm

This story is something of a mammoth is it? Very enjoyable, but it's very long. Can't wait to find out what happens with all these possible couples you're setting up and more of Albus's history.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

It is definitely mammoth, but we are getting very close to the end. I'd say the story is around 85% complete now. I'm glad you're enjoying it.

0/10

bedworm

“Subverting the Hogwarts house-elves, are we, Minerva?”

lol

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

glad you liked that! Thanks for your reviews!

0/10

bedworm

“I am very fond of you, too, my dear.” Ouch!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

"Ouch!" is right!

10/10

stardragon

 It's hard for me to find words about this (isn't that a switch, ha!). I think the most interesting revelation is how deeply this is affecting him in regards to Minerva, his fear that she might reject him because of it, as well as  his need to make sure she knows all of him.The contrast between who we know Albus to be now and his inner conflict is sooo powerful. i was totally in his point of view while reading this. "My ray of sunshine"--ah, that cut right through me. What a terrible loss. This is so believable--it's right on his character, and I can see fully how this shaped who he has become.And the worst is yet to come. On a more upbeat note, yay for Quin! Subtle and overt at the same time--neat trick! Love he slipped in "She's yours." Ogg?? That certainly gives "blinded by love" a new twist!Loved his thoughts on falling in love with Minerva. (Did we see that letter? Hmm, is it as honest as his thoughts were just then?)Looks like I found my words after all! Wonderful piece of writing!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

We saw him write the parchment -- it was back in one of the Gamp party chapters, in "Shall We Dance," I believe.

I'm glad you are enjoying reading of Albus's personal history so far. I look forward to your thoughts on the next couple chapters.

I'd write more, but it's late, I'm falling asleep, and there will be a new chapter up sometime tomorrow.

Thanks very much for your thoughtful reviews! I really appreciate them. :) 

0/10

bedworm

Wonderful title, I love Mary Poppins. Guests never do what you want them to at parties do they? Best to go with the flow.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

No, they don't, and it's probably for the best, isn't it?

0/10

bedworm

Sounds like those robes were meant for Albus. I'd love to see them for real. I'm glad Minerva has someone to give her a little kickstart. Someone has to make the first move and neither one looks likely to do it anytime soon.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

I'd love to see them for real, myself -- I imagine a planetarium show sort of on the robes. :)

0/10

bedworm

Well, I'm not sure how you could have nightmares over a shaved beard, but it would be a huge shock. He'd certainly get everyone talking if he kept that look.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

I do believe she was teasing him. And he certainly would get everone talking!

10/10

Fallen_Angel_Mione

Aw, poor Albus. At least Minerva finally gets the tale. Good work! :D

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Ta very much. :)

10/10

Hypnobarb

A carefully placed word or two from Quin may just be the key to getting Albus to take one step through that curtain he has set up that blinds him to the nature of Minerva's affections.You really do need to get Quin those wings.  Doesn't Cupid wear a loin cloth, too?  Oh, the possibilities.Thank you for giving us more backstory on Albus.  Obviously, this Albus and another author's Albus are totally different characters.  Her's was born much later.  Perhaps a distant relative, but that's all.Your muse is not only on overdrive, it is consuming energy drinks 

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Coffee is the energy drink of choice for this Muse -- she's a traditionalist! LOL!

Yup, I think the author's Albus  is a sort of AU-Albus. What if he hadn't stayed born in 1840 and had been born forty-one years later and what if his parents were younger and what if he had a sister and what if . . .

RaM!Grindelwald is also not the author's Grindelwald. Although I did change his name from "Gunther" to "Gellert" so that people wouldn't be too confused. Although RaM is so non-DH-compliant, I don't know how confusing it would have been!

My Muse has informed that she wants to take a holiday, and I may give her one! 

10/10

stardragon

Ouch, poor Minerva!   Albus is not going about this the right way at all, although the dinner invitation is a hopeful sign. He needs to be put out of his misery--some hot sex should do it! Masterful writing, as usual. Albus is not saying anything out of the ordinary, but the distance he is keeping from Minerva is painfully obvious. Quin is wonderful, as always. Looking forward to the next chapters--maybe we're going to find out why Albus is so insecure about loving Minerva? Can't wait!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Albus thinks he's going about it all the right way because he really doesn't understand completely how Minerva feels about him. So he's trying very hard, but he's always just a bit . . . off of where he should be, I suppose one could say.

We will find out all kinds of things about Albus in the next several chapters. I'll be especially interested in your reactions to the next three chapters. 

I'm glad you like the writing! (plus *blush!*)

Thanks, as always, for reviewing! 

10/10

alina612

Chapter 100! What a milestone! Congrats!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Vielen dank!

0/10

bedworm

Honestly, he gives flowers, chocolates(a torte is better than most box chocolates anyway), and sends loving little notes, which she also sends. They share meals and go out to a concert. They are doing all the typical date things without actually dating. Rather cute of them, in a very blind to the truth way.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Yes, there are dates that aren't dates, and there are non-dates that are dates. ;)

0/10

bedworm

Blue pee, lol.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Purple pee, actually -- the blue pee comes later! LOL!

10/10

Fallen_Angel_Mione

Great chapter!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Thanks!

0/10

bedworm

Huh, not so sure I want to know much about Hagrid's sex life. Poor guy though, he's another that's gotten the shaft in life.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

I loved people's reactions to that chapter! LOL

0/10

bedworm

A committee? How could she suggest that, horrible things.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Utterly. Gives me a headache merely comtemplating the word. ;P

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