Chapter Six
Chapter 6 of 17
notsosaintlyA little danger this way comes....
Author's Note: I have had the fortune to have a couple of the best writers as my betas for this story: ladyofthemasque and Southern_Witch_69. I am deeply in their debt.
Disclaimer: My thanks to JK Rowling for having such a splendid imagination and for allowing us to play around with her characters in the fanfiction universe. She gets all the credit for anything you recognize; the plot for this story is entirely mine (though I don't get paid).
Chapter Six
Draco Malfoy Apparated inside the run-down, graffiti-sprayed servants' quarters on the outskirts of his property. It was crude graffiti, definitely not creative in artistic value or literary value for that matter. In fact, the blithering idiots couldn't even spell, for Merlin's sake.
Still, what would normally have fueled Draco's anger seemed to register only barely in his conscious mind. Wrapping his cloak about his body to ward off the chill in the air, he quickly made his way back up to the safety of the mansion. There were still a few lingerers-on who apparently didn't think his family had suffered enough in the war and afterwards, and this made being anywhere outside of the manor a little unpredictable.
He hung his outer cloak in the hallway, no house-elves to take it any longer...they had all been sold...and he walked determinedly into the study to ration himself a shot-glass of Firewhisky. It burned down his throat as he tossed his head back and swallowed it all in one go. The lead crystal glass fell heavily on the heavy oak of the carved bar, and he stared at the bottle. It was half-empty. He really shouldn't have any more; it was his last bottle, and finances were such that Firewhisky was not on the priority list.
"Oh, bugger all," he muttered and, grabbing a larger glass, served himself another, considerably more generous, serving.
He took his time, sipping slowly, deep in thought. The words 'What to Expect When You're Expecting' kept revolving around his mind, affecting his equilibrium. It couldn't be ... but apparently it was. Why else would she be reading a book with that title? She could be counseling a friend...but for some reason, he didn't think so.
Or perhaps, he didn't want to think so. It was the first stroke of luck he had had in five very long years: Hermione Granger was pregnant.
The first smile in months appeared on his lips...and it wasn't a pleasant smile.
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Narcissa looked at her son with apprehension. For the first time in months, he seemed almost happy. She had no idea what he had to be happy about. Her pale hand clutched her robes about her body tightly, trying to keep the frigidness of the manor at bay, keep it from grabbing hold of her heart and squeezing what little life still existed within it. Her hands and shoulders shook as her body reacted to the near freezing temperatures.
She padded softly down to the study to see Draco slowly nursing a Firewhisky ... and more than his usual portion at that. He had gone out earlier to buy yet another bottle. Where he had gotten the money for it, she did not know; their liquid funds were still intact. He had been leaving the manor quite often these past few days, always Apparating from the edge of the property. She didn't know why; he could have done so from the front porch. She was growing concerned.
"Oh, hello, Mother," Draco drawled.
He was so much like his father, sounded so much like his father, looked so much like his father. Her own greeting was lost in a sea of memories that rendered her mute.
Lucius had always been a considerate husband, always looking out for her well-being, making sure she never wanted for anything. She knew what he had planned, though he had never found out that she knew. If he had, he never let on. It was never spoken of. Distasteful things like death were not a proper topic of conversation in their home, at least among family members.
That hadn't stopped Lucius from discussing that very topic with his dear friend Severus less than a week before the battle that had put Lucius in a coma. In hindsight, she wished that she had had enough common sense to keep walking and not eavesdrop after hearing her husband mention her name. But curiosity had bested her, and the partially open door concealed her from being discovered.
"All I'm saying is that I need to have certain precautions in place, Severus, just in case ... well, just in case the Dark Lord falls. I will not leave Narcissa at the mercy of the Ministry."
"Well thought. And how do you plan on ensuring her continued well-being?" Severus had asked, apathetically curious in his usual manner.
"If the Dark Lord's demise is imminent, I will take certain measures to make sure I don't come back. My death would absolve Narcissa of any responsibility for actions I took in support of the Dark Lord."
"It's not as if she didn't fully support them as well, of course."
"True. She's a very supportive wife and has always been behind me...and the Dark Lord...one hundred percent. But the Ministry won't see it that way. If I fall in battle, she can play the part of grieving wife. The estate will be bequeathed to her and Draco, and their lives will go on much like they always have."
"Except without you in them," Severus admonished mildly.
"I suppose there's that, and I feel terrible about that aspect of things, but I've no wildcards left, old friend. That stint in Azkaban left a sour taste in the mouth of the Ministry. I used my last favor to finagle my way out. If I live, I will be returning to Azkaban, and she will miss me anyway. And more than likely, she will end up serving a stint in Azkaban herself...."
"And you'll manage this how, exactly? It would be rather difficult to use the Killing Curse on yourself. Not to mention how much of the estate would be tied up if it were discovered that you committed suicide."
Lucius had laughed at this, though how he could be so blithe in the face of his own mortality, Narcissa couldn't understand. "No. No, my friend. That would be difficult indeed. No. I will force someone to do it for me, someone who has had a part in plaguing our very existence, someone whom the deed will haunt 'til the day she dies..."
"Ah," Severus had muttered with understanding. "Of course, a Mudblood would be most fitting, one whose sensibilities would prohibit her from using the Killing Curse, making it all that more devastating to her sensibilities."
"My thoughts exactly. When the winning side has been determined, before it is all over, I will find her, and she will play the part of my murderess."
"Simple, yet conniving. I'd expect nothing less from you, Lucius."
She had indeed been approached by the Ministry. They'd come looking for Lucius that long week after the war had ended, and their search of the manor had come up with nothing, of course, because he wasn't there. She'd played the part of grieving wife perfectly. In fact, she was the grieving wife, for she truly believed her husband to be dead.
It wasn't until nearly a month had gone by and the Ministry had lost interest that Severus had shown up at her door. He was paler and gaunter than he had ever been in all the time she had known him. But all impressions of his appearance were soon forgotten as he limped through the door, levitating the limp body of her husband before him.
"Lucius!" she had cried, running to her unconscious husband, weeping over his still-levitating body. But he had not reacted. His eyes had remained closed, his body as still as death, and yet she could still feel the warmth of his body, the light beating of his heart.
"He hasn't awakened since the battle," he told her. "I've done the best that I could, taking care of him, keeping him away from the manor until the Ministry stopped coming, but now his care is up to you."
She had tried to register what he was telling her, but her mind wouldn't wrap around it. She had been so relieved that her husband was still alive, yet a sickening feeling of dread had begun to seep coldly into her heart.
"What is wrong with him?" she had asked weakly, looking up into Severus' eyes with fear.
"He has fallen into a coma. I've tried several potions and spells, but to no avail. I thought you'd rather care for him here. I could have taken him to St. Mungo's...."
"No, no. Of course he's better off here at the manor."
What Severus hadn't told her was that her husband had indeed sought out a Mudblood to take on the role of his murderess, one Hermione Granger, a fact that he did later tell Draco in his father's abandoned study. Narcissa had been listening at the door, quite deliberately eavesdropping, wanting to know what others had deemed she should not.
"Your father had planned this in advance, to force a Mudblood to take his life in the event that the Dark Lord lost the battle. He wanted you and your mother to retain your standing in the community and not be pursued by the Ministry for his crimes. He wanted to make sure that your mother would not go to Azkaban for supporting the Dark Lord, and he wanted to make sure that his estate would fall to the both of you in the event of his death.
"He chose Hermione Granger to perform this deed, and he cast the Imperio Curse on her, forcing her to use the Killing Curse on him. However, as near as I can tell, if someone as strong in her magic as Hermione Granger most certainly is, is so unwilling to submit under the Imperio Curse, any spell she would be forced to cast would be indeterminately altered. That combined with the fact that your father most definitely did not want to die but was attempting to do so because he felt a duty to do so had the unfortunate effect of rendering him comatose rather than outright killing him."
For several months, Narcissa tried to hate this Hermione Granger that her husband had chosen to deliver his fate. She'd tried really hard. Then she'd tried hating Lucius. That was easier to do. After all, if he had just gone into hiding, she would still have her husband. Perhaps he would not be able to take her to all the social functions she was used to attending, but he would be there to love her, and hold her, and talk to her.
Oh, how she missed the way he would attend to her every night. Her baths, carefully jasmine-scented and candle-lit by house-elves would become sensuous foreplay as her husband lovingly washed and then brushed dry her waist-length, ice-blond locks. Her hair was always her weakness, and Lucius knew that. He also knew that such simple foreplay would fuel her desires for an entire evening of lovemaking.
No man had known her like Lucius had. In fact, no man other than him had known her at all. From small children, they had been betrothed to each other, promised by their parents. Oh, she knew Lucius had had his dalliances with several women, and probably a prostitute or two, before they were married, but her mother had told her of the experience a man would gain by doing such, and the knowledge...while it did fuel some jealousy within her...mostly served to fuel her fantasies of her wedding night.
Lucius was everything she had imagined...and more. From that very first night, he had paid attention to her needs, making his seem secondary to her own. He never rushed; the first touch was as well-placed as the last kiss. And his fingers! Oh, his long, graceful fingers knew exactly where she wanted to be touched; never hesitant; hard, yet never painful; never lingering long enough to cause her to lose interest.
And his stamina was astounding. In talking with her sister and friends, and even once her mother, she discovered that Lucius was truly skilled in that area too; everyone was jealous. Bellatrix had even threatened once in a fit of despair at Rodolphus's ineffectualness to experience true pleasure just once in her life at the hands of Narcissa's husband. That was until Narcissa jealously hexed her sister's hair sick-green and grew her a few warts that took nearly a month to remove.
Yes, her Lucius was truly endowed, larger and lustier than most. Narcissa couldn't get enough of him, and she discovered early on to keep that fact to herself. Lucius was her first love, her only love ... her last love.
After an exhausting couple years of trying to hate, and failing, she fell into a deep depression. She rarely spoke now. Sometimes she would think she had spoken, but gradually she came to realize that house-elves were neglecting to follow her orders, and her son would often give her expectant looks as though waiting for an answer to a question she had forgotten.
Lucius remained in stasis, his muscles being prodded by charms she had set to automatically massage and flex his limbs twice daily in hopes that he would eventually wake up and begin to use them himself. Even from the depths of her grief, she had never lost hope.
"... Granger." Her son had spoken, and that one name served to bring an abrupt halt to her reverie.
Her throat scratchy after several days of disuse, she asked, "What?"
Surprise peaked Draco's brow and had him walking towards her. "I said, I think I've found a way to get revenge on Hermione Granger."
Suddenly, her mind was crisper than it had been in years. Even her vision seemed to clear up. Draco had lost quite a bit of weight, it seemed.
"How?" she asked, reduced to one-word questions in her shock at being harshly brought back to the present.
"I paid her a visit a few days ago," he began, turning to pace the study floor, glass of Firewhisky still in hand. "I needed to feel her out to see how best to get back at her for father's ... situation."
Like the word 'death,' since Severus brought Lucius home, the word 'coma' had succumbed to the same fate. Draco took a rather long draught of the amber liquid in his cup, draining it and then pouring himself some more. Narcissa wanted to tell Draco he had been drinking entirely too much lately, but what he had to say about Hermione Granger was too important to interrupt.
"Anyway," he continued, clearing his throat of the Firewhisky-burn, "it seems that Miss Hermione Granger is pregnant." He paused to let that settle into Narcissa's wide-eyed comprehension. "And I've just figured out how I'm going to work this to our advantage."
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418 Reviews | 7.02/10 Average
I know it's been a while since you've updated and/or worked on this story, but I missed your writing and was browsing backwards through the pages and remembered how enjoyable Strega Letteraria was. The acceptance between Hermione and Severus is soothing in the midst of all the unsettling circumstance. The fact that I would love to own such a store doesn't hurt, either. Hope you are well and with no shortage of muses.
Hellllooooo out there! Apparently I didn't review this back when I was reading it. So, I will do so now as a shameless ploy to drag you back to this story. I had to pull this off my bookmark list and dust it off a bit ;) Kidding aside, I was really enjoying this and hope that you are just on hiatus, and not gone for good. I am sure you have a million better things to do than work on this story, but just wanted you to know that there are still folks out here who would love to see this finished! And hey, it worked last Christmas... Anyway, have a happy holiday and I'll be looking under my tree for the next installment of this lovely tale.
Excellent story!! Harry what a 'butthead'!! Can't wait to see what Severus is going to do to Draco.
While not wanting to start a flame war and while admiring the insouciance of MHaydn, it must be emphasized that a review of a fan-fiction should respect the value of the genre: all girls think about is that all boys think about is getting in their knickers and it’s never the right boy, damn it, except in fan fiction. Also, it is never fair to chide a female author for not capturing the elements of romance. A little sensitivity in these matters is not amiss.
Our frustrated friend would have done better to point out that the exalted lust in this chapter is subtler and deeper than in the previous chapter. The hero protects the heroine from herself in her current unstable mood. She believes she can talk to him – venting before she explodes. He calms her and makes certain she rests. He does better than her parents: he is there for her but gives her space. Words are good, but these are deeds.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
, my dear
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
, oh how I missed you. It is too true that girls do think (once they reach the age of maturity and have been burned quite a number of times) that all boys want is to get in her knickers. The key is to mature first before discovering that MEN aren't always like that. Boys, however ... there are the rare few who are incredibly more mature than the female gender gives them credit for.Don't be too hard on MHaydn. Intentions are all good and I know a hard time when I'm getting one. I'm rather a bit of a masochist and enjoy it. But, at the same time you are correct. There is a level of relationship that goes beyond romance or even physical intimacy, and that is exactly what is occuring in this chapter when Severus weathers her (understandably) violatile mood and fields would-be mood triggers.So ... will I see you around more? I do miss old friends. I should remove your validated status just so I can talk to you more often in queue. (You know I'm only joking, right?)
The author note preceding this chapter ruined my plan for writing a series of sarcastic reviews about a lust-writer trying her hand at romance. They would have begun with the first chapter by pointing out that Hermione should be fuming because she stocked her store with the items everyone should read – <i>Ulysses</i> and <i>Palefire</i> and <i>101 Ways to Improve Your Kitchen</i> – but the ungrateful clots weren’t purchasing the volumes. Next, the reviews would have performed a checklist for a romance novel
Heroine in distress: check.
Mysterious lurking stranger: check.
Pesky and unsuitable suitor: oops.
The reviews would have continued providing unasked-for opinions until arriving at chapter twelve where they would have pointed out that the authoress had written herself into a hole by having the hero declare his undying devotion. For most readers, the relationship has begun, but since the authoress is a non-romantic, the thrill is in the chase, and the chase is over.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
– frustrated evil-reviewer
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
I would have known it was you anyway.
This chapter was worth the wait. Thank you so much for the update.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
I'm happy you thought so! Sometimes plot points need to simmer for a while before they're done. This one needed extra simmering.
Well, darn, I thought that this story was complete. I guess I should pay more attention when I click on something so I won't be disappointed.I really like what you've done here--there aren't many stories around where Hermione and Harry have any sort of sexual involvement and Harry is the one being a jerk (usually Ron has that role). I was so happy when Severus became a partner at the shop. I love him in this story!
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
I really love to try out things that haven't been done much or done before, and I love to toss in the unpredictable wherever I can. No, this story is not quite finished, though I solemnly swear I shall not write a multi-chapter epic. No idea where the cut off will be, but we are certainly past the halfway point. I'm happy that you like it!
Thank you so much!!! This is just what I needed before all these crazy vacations come upon us!Love the tiny cliff you've left us on, but please please just throw us over! Any new writing is appreciated!!! Thank you again!
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
Hmm ... No one's ever asked me to throw them over a cliff before. *lol* And thank you!
yeah! amen! you go, sister! right on! great update. thanks so much
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
Yup, Hermione needed a 'tude ... so I gave her one.
Thanks for the update! The Potter Place wish list really worked. How cool is that? Its nice to see victim!Hermione is gone. Im looking forward to her endind Draco. Its not good to be violent when preggers!
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
Very true. Have to keep positive vibes. I'll have to find a way to make sure Hermione does this intelligently.
Wow. This story is fantastic. I just spent most of the morning reading it. You have interesting characterizations of Snape, Harry, and Hermione. They aren't particularly out of character, just emphasizing parts of the personality that may not have been prominent in canon.I can't wait for the next chapter.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
Thank you. I do try to keep them in canon as much as possible while introducing a storyline which would never be used by JKR. Sort of making the characters more 'real' than fantasy-like.
Harry has proven that his jealously of the situation has rotten his brain. Hermione and Severus are better off with him out of the picture, although I am sure it is very hurtful for Hermione. Severus is a rock He is so wonderful to her and for her. I hope Hermione realizes what she has in him.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
I think she will see. He is a good guy and I don't think there's any danger of her taking advantage of him.
How wonderful! I'm so glad you were able to update and I'm afraid I'm a bit greedy in wanting you to write more... soon... ish :)
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
Well, soon ... ish sounds doable. Who knows? I'm thinking about the story a lot these past couple days, which can only mean more writing is in store.
Thank you so much for the update, I was trilled to see a new chapter!!!I loved that Hermione at the end placed her anger where it belonged; at the Malfoys! Not that she doesn't have reasons to be angry at Harry, but on the other side she should be glad not to have that prat hanging around her child in the years to come, the only looser is Harry, she should find joy in that!I hope we won't have to wait so long for the next update?
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
I hope you won't have to wait long too. If it's any consolation, the story is very much on my mind. So much so that I think Tutoring Session won't get updated because of it (and that was on the wish list too).My whole theory, when I feel irritated and ornery, is that the only people who should benefit from my ire are people who deserve it (i.e. the jerk who speeds out of his driveway without stopping and looking, nearly causing an accident, or the woman who ties up the handicapped spot for five minutes as she walks her kids into a rehearsal, leaving someone who needs the space driving around in circles and waiting because she can't walk 2 blocks). I thought I'd let Hermione do the same.
meeps! well, no romantical thoughts about Severus in this chapter, but I'm glad she at least has realized that it's futile to try to knock sense into Harry's head, and glad Severus stopped her from sending the owl to Ellie. still suspicious about the Aurors, although surely someone would remember that she "killed" Lucius, whose widow and son are still zipping around. thanks for the new chapter - very good to see you again!!
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
Good to see you too! *waves* Nope, no romantic thoughts this chapter; her anger won't allow her to concentrate on anything else. But hopefully it will all be resolved soon and we can get back to the more loving feelings. ;)
Glad to see this updated. Hope Hermione doesn't go off on her own, whether in person or not, to seek revenge on the Malfoys. Not only could that put her in more danger or get her caught and arrested herself, but it could interfere with whatever Severus has planned... Team vengence would be a lot less messy. (Of course, I don't want my petty little mutterings to influence your plot in anyway. I'm sure whatever you have planned is much better than what I could come up with...) Enjoyed this thoroughly! Looking forward to the next.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
Anything is possible at this point. Hermione hasn't entered that 'planning' stage yet (in my mind), and you know how she loves to plan.
*sighs in relief* oh my goodness, I am so happy that you did not give up on this one! And what a great chapter it was... I hope it got you in the mood for more!
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
No no no ... I would never give up on a story. Sometimes the plot stagnates and I don't know what to do. I've deviated from my original plan; it seems as if the story writes itself at times. I thrive on suggestions since it gets those creative juices flowing. I am definitely in the mood for more.
I'm with Severus on letting him take care of them. Harry is a jerk, they don't need him. Great chapter, i'm really glad to see an update.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
Thank you. I was glad to be able to update.
poor hermione ~pats~ if she likes i can string harry up by his unmentionables over a meat grinder? ooo! or better yet! inform his wifey of his misconduct and how hermione is sooo sad and what an awful person harry's being ~nods and sends lots of little helpful goblins to get right to work!~
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
Well, let's see... if you string him up by the unmentionables, then those won't be the first to hit the meat grinder. We'll have to think on that a bit....
Response from keske (Reviewer)
no...they wouldn't be...but i imagine it would still hurt quite a bit, no? ~is...perhaps a little too vindictive...but oh well! lol~
Nice chapter, I suspect our Hermione is in the plotting stage. I wonder what she will do to make the Malfoy's suffer?
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
Hopefully Hermione is as creative as she is smart. She's still working on the particulars. ;)
Glad to see this updated. Looking forward to seeing what Hermione and Severus have in store for the Malfoy's. More soon please.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
I hope I'm able to write more soon. Perhaps with Christmas vacation coming up, I will.
Oh yeah, have at those Malfoys, girl! :)
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
Uh-huh. I'd lke to have at them, but not in the way this story is making them out to be....
Oh, that was so perfect. So sweet that my eyes welled with tears. I cannot wait to see what happens now that Harry is there. And I'm glad her parents are there, too.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
I loved the various responses to this chapter. It really was interesting. Aren't you glad you waited for chapter 15 to be posted instead of it ending at 14, though? Now that might have gotten me a sound scolding, I think.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
I loved the various responses to this chapter. It really was interesting. Aren't you glad you waited for chapter 15 to be posted instead of it ending at 14, though? Now that might have gotten me a sound scolding, I think.
I did love the mirror idea. I also really like how you described the potion's characteristics. I'll have to check out lotm's books soon! You do a really wonderful job at story-telling. I enjoyed also the public persona, Samuel Prince, that you created for Severus.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
Hehehe ... I sort of like how he mildly (?) resembles Lucius myself.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
Hehehe ... I sort of like how he mildly (?) resembles Lucius myself.
Hehe! This is so exciting!
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
Glad you thought so. Boy, was that difficult trying to find the right way to make this happen.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Strega Letteraria)
Glad you thought so. Boy, was that difficult trying to find the right way to make this happen.