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Potter Place Winter 2007 Prompt Challenges One Vital Ingredient
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One Vital Ingredient

1: What's Love Got To Do With It?

2: Making Love Out Of Nothing At All

3: Angel is a Centerfold

4: For Your Eyes Only

5: Misunderstanding

6: All Out Of Love

7: Should I Stay or Should I Go?

8: Heat of the Moment

9: Can't Fight This Feeling

10: Since You've Been Gone

11: Take My Breath Away

12: Don't You Forget About Me

13: Thank God For Kids

One Vital Ingredient

cocoachristy

452 Reviews   |   452 Ratings, 0 Likes, 281 Favorites )

Angst Romance Potter Place Winter 2007 Prompt Challenges 75,549 Words 13 Chapters Complete
Draco Malfoy Ginevra Weasley Hermione Granger Severus Snape

A foul curse cast on Hermione and Ginny leaves them forced to search out one vital ingredient from their soul mates. Will Draco and Severus help them in their time of need? This is my response to a Potter Place Winter Prompt Challenge.

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Chapters (13)

Chapter 1: What's Love Got To Do With It?

Chapter 2: Making Love Out Of Nothing At All

Chapter 3: Angel is a Centerfold

Chapter 4: For Your Eyes Only

Chapter 5: Misunderstanding

Chapter 6: All Out Of Love

Chapter 7: Should I Stay or Should I Go?

Chapter 8: Heat of the Moment

Chapter 9: Can't Fight This Feeling

Chapter 10: Since You've Been Gone

Chapter 11: Take My Breath Away

Chapter 12: Don't You Forget About Me

Chapter 13: Thank God For Kids


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cocoachristy

Member Since 2005  |  15 Stories  |  Favorited by 321  |  313 Reviews Written  |  3,399 Review Responses

Reviews for One Vital Ingredient

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liviconnor

You know, I teared up reading the part about Lucius.  I generally feel very little sympathy for him - he made his bed and quite enjoyed it, so let him sleep there - but somehow seeing the echo of Narcissa in his son really struck a chord in me.  I could feel for him.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)

Thanks! That's what every writer likes to hear! :)

10/10

Morsmordre

Thank God they didn't name her Mary jane. My friend has the last name 'Plants' and thats what he wanted to name his daughter! Good thing his wife smacked him in the head!

Everything turned up roses in the  end and I think it was a great touch there in the last bit having Molly W. working at the orphanage. People always forget she's a forbidable witch (ask Bellatrix) but she always gets relinquished to the role of 'doting grandmother'. Kudos for giving her a creative place! Yes, from the beginning (for the most part) Viktor the crumb did everyone in this story a HUGE favor! Hope it still rankles him in the afterlife! Amazing story, one of my faves!

10/10

Morsmordre

20 Points to your Preffered House for Ginny not being the 'Resident Slag!'

10/10

Morsmordre

Lucius most definitely is a troublemaker, but we still love to hate and love him!

10/10

Morsmordre

Wow! Excellent beginning. I would have guessed from the way Draco has been more solicitous to Ginny than Severus was to Hermione that they (DM/GW) would have a better start than SS/HG. Props for originality!

10/10

Morsmordre

I agree with Southern; Firewhiskey is, to coin a phrase from Ernie Macmillan, 'Old Hat' for us drinking lags. Perhaps Lucius would be kind enough to share some of that 50 year old scotch? I wonder if it's single malt.

10/10

Morsmordre

I can't wait to see what Snape and Malfoy have in store for those %$#@&! I can't even give words to people like that. I realise this is fiction but there is an element of truth behind every fiction to an extent and these things happen every day.
*If you or anyone you know have been the victim of a violent crime DON'T keep it to yourself- get help. The National Victim Center Hotline is 1-800-FYI-CALL (1-800-394-2255).*

10/10

Morsmordre

I'm not a fan of Pansy's at all but I thought that Harry going after her was really touching, the poor thing.

10/10

makaem

I wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed this story. I read it on another site almost a year ago, but I didn't think anyone cared about comments from a stranger-- so I didn't review.  Anyway, I now know the error of my ways and hope to make ammends as I come across stories I loved.   

Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)

Thanks so much! I'm happy you let me know you enjoyed my story!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)

Thanks so much! I'm happy you let me know you enjoyed my story!

10/10

Sampdoria

I have once again enjoyed reading this wonderful story,  I have it on my list over stories that has to bee read more than once (or twicel.....:-))A brilliant piece of work!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)

Thanks so much! I am so happy you enjoyed reading it.

10/10

MadBrilliant

Just wanted to let you know that this story has been rec'd at 'Pushing the Quill.'Feel free to drop by and leave a rec of your own! We'd love to know what you're reading!Madhttp://community.livejournal.com/pushingquill/

Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)

Thanks! That's awesome!

10/10

whitmirec

WTG malfoy and snape

Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)

Thanks so much!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)

Thanks so much!

10/10

whitmirec

getting better and better

Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)

Thanks so much, doll!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)

Thanks so much, doll!

10/10

whitmirec

good, good ,great!!!!!!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)

Thank you, thank you, thank you!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)

Thank you, thank you, thank you!

10/10

whitmirec

Yea they should have kicked some arse!!!!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)

Oh heck yeah! ;-)

Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)

Oh heck yeah! ;-)

10/10

whitmirec

OMG! Puts me in the mind of Moning.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)

Now THAT'S a compliment! Especially since I wrote this before I even heard of her! Whoot!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)

Now THAT'S a compliment! Especially since I wrote this before I even heard of her! Whoot!

10/10

whitmirec

I swear, more impressed by the chapter!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)

Thanks so much! yay!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)

Thanks so much! yay!

10/10

whitmirec

I will say W-H-O-A!!!!!!!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)

Ha Ha Ha! I am so glad you like it, you just don't know!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)

Ha Ha Ha! I am so glad you like it, you just don't know!

9/10

whitmirec

awesome. seemed like one of my classic romance novels. loved it

Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)

Thanks so much, doll! It means a lot that you do!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)

Thanks so much, doll! It means a lot that you do!

9/10

purelush

great story!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)

Thank you!

10/10

Merlinsbeard

Loved it!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)

Thanks!

8/10

Resi

Fantastic!  I love the couples, especially Harry/Pansy, and Peter is a very interesting character.  I hope you update again soon.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)

Thanks! I did like Harry and Pansy in this one! Glad you enjoyed.

10/10

Sylvia

Just an all around wonderful story. Beautiful! I loved every minute.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)

Thanks so much!

10/10

Ems Adara

This was absolutly lovely. (Please forgive typos, this kept me up till a quarter past five in the morning and I'm a bit knackered.) Perfectly wonderful! I thought the characters were superb. You drew out the men's sensitive sides slowly enough to keep it believeable and I ADORED the chapter names. Lucious was spot on and I cried when he and Draco discussed Narcissa. I cried like a baby. My cat now thinks I'm crazier than before. This one is truly a gem and once I've slept properly, I plan on reading a few of your other works.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)

Thank you so much

Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)

!I am happy you liked the sensitive sides and didn't think it was too fluffy.Glad you liked my Lucius. ;-) I like for Severus to have a friend... LOL!Hope you like some of the others!

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Looneyluna

Ha ha! They both had girls! Excellent read! Everyone was in character and the plot rolled along at a good click. Well done!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of One Vital Ingredient)

Tee hee! So happy you liked it!

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