Unsettling
DeeMichelle8 Reviews | 8 Ratings, 0 Likes, 24 Favorites )
He fell for her during their mystery exchange, although... he was dumbstruck when he found out it was she that he?d been conversing with - Hermione Granger. His Slytherin cunning is more confusing than it should be, and Harry is caught up in the "what if" of love.
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DeeMichelle
Member Since 2006 | 5 Stories | Favorited by 33 | 148 Reviews Written | 117 Review Responses
I'm an avid SS/HG reader, yet I am fascinated with LM and adore DM.
<-- me at home when I have free time to read and/or write my own fanfiction. I love to draw as well. I don't draw people well, but I do all right with animals. Check out www.deemichelle.deviantart.com if you want to.
Reviews for Unsettling
*claps*I usu. don't read a lot of HG/DM but I liked this one! Nicely done! And just as a side note, I don't think the ball scene is confusing, you just have to be focused on reading the story to follow it. ^_^
Response from DeeMichelle (Author of Unsettling)
*bows* gracefullylolThank you for being focused enough to follow it. I've debated for over a year about rewriting this entire fic.What say you??
good job! When will it be updated?
Response from DeeMichelle (Author of Unsettling)
It's finished. However, I'm reworking it ... slowly. The more I beta for others, the more I learn about becoming a better writer. This is one story that has potential, yet it needs work. :-) Thank you for reviewing!
Beautiful story.
Love the horses.
Waiting for more from you.
Thank you for a wonderful one-shot.
Response from DeeMichelle (Author of Unsettling)
thank you again for the nice review.No ideas on a sequel for this one??? I'm kidding of course. I do love your reviews. They make me smile. I'd love to have you as a sounding board when I need help writing!!!
I enjoyed this very much. It was alot of fun to see them work through their mysteries and preconcieved notions. And the date was terribly romantic. I guess I liked it all really. ^.^ Thanks so much for sharing!!
Response from DeeMichelle (Author of Unsettling)
Thank you for the lovely review!
Of course, the last line is perfection. 
I liked this story. You've managed to get Draco and Hermione together in what I feel is a very believable way. So bravo!
The dance scene is not confusing at all. If anything, I thought you could have written more of the dance scene, given Hermione more partners. She was having so much fun and then just went home. The way you wrote it, I could see the masks so clearly in my mind. It played out so well. I just wanted more. (That's a compliment. If a reader wants more, you've done it well!)
Response from DeeMichelle (Author of Unsettling)
*bright smile*Thank you!!!
I'm glad you wanted more. However, I'm not sure I could do it! haha
thanks again ~ for everything &hugs&
That's wicked. I really enjoyed reading this.
Response from DeeMichelle (Author of Unsettling)
:) thank you. I appreciate your review.
Well...the dance scene is somewhat confusing, but I like it that way. Things don't always have to be clear-cut, after all.
Response from DeeMichelle (Author of Unsettling)
Thank you :-)I appreciate your review!!
A very lovely piece that I'd not read before. :D
Response from DeeMichelle (Author of Unsettling)
Thank you. :) I'm thinking about rewriting it. I was a fast piece for an exchange. I appreciate the review.