That last line is fantastic!  Isn't everything just better with Chocolate?

A 'slight modification' indeed! Hardly slight! LOL Great story. I really like this one.

Author's Response: lol  To Severus it was 'slight.'  Making her appear in the flesh would've been less slight! 

Personally, I would have loved to have seen them have one more encounter before Severus' reaction to her like this, but that's just because I always write drawn-out fics with the lemony goodness at the end! Not quite sure about Sev's calling himself 'mate' (hehe), but I love the snarkiness at the end!

Author's Response: *warm smile*  Again, thank you for reviewing!  I'm currently in the process of writing Hermione's POV.  Hopefully you'll enjoy that as well.


Angel Mischa's response: Oh, that would be so very interesting. I'll enjoy reading it when it's done. I wonder if she, too, will be making a 'slight' modification to her book!

Hehehe. Lost in a good book... sort of! ;-)

Author's Response: ain't it great???

I've read this before, but apparently never reviewed. That's because I'm an awful reviewer. However, I'm back now, reading it again, and you should know that I think it's truly lovely! This is just the sort of routine I dream of having one day! Good coffee, good books, good chocolate! :-D

Author's Response: *beaming*  I think it's flattering that you though it good enough to read again!!! 

&hugs& thanks!

That was a very sexy story.  Loved it.

WAAAAAAAAAH!!  You ENDED it there!!  Bad Author--WRITE MORE!!~Lotm...I have a  and I'm not afraid to use 'em!

DeeMichelle,                Great story! I especially like the part where Severus uses the mint chocolate on himself. Also, the idea of them 'brewing' chocolate together was delicious.                                         Sincerely,                                                     

Another thought.

Hopefully Severus would tell Hermione she's doing it wrong because according to her picture this is what needs to be done to get things accomplished.

Couldn't help that evil thought.  It just bounced out there.  Especially since Hermione goes by "book knowledge".

Please write an epilogue.  Sequel would be excellent too. 

excellent!

in the back of my mind is asking for a sequel.  

but the rest of me is quite content with it as it.

thank you for writing a wonderful story.  

i hope to see more from you.

also had a fun thought.  

poor severus is so bored or quite peeved with albus that he goes around to the different bookstores and makes the pictures animated.  it could take place anytime anywhere.   an if the pictures are animated he makes the stand still like in the muggle books. lol

OMFG!!!!

Author's Response: Umm... thank you, again???  :-)

Once you've come up for air, please let me know how you like the rest of the story. 

Thank you for the comments.

OMFG!!!!

Author's Response: Umm... thank you???

This was just lovely!!  The mental imagery that the word chocolate conjures - light and dark, sweet and bitter - was thoroughly entwined within the story and your characterizations of Severus and Hermione.  I really enjoyed it.

Great fic, I really loved the ending!  Thoroughly enjoyable.  Thanks for the lovely read!

Ahh!  Lovely finale!  Great story, but... now I want some chocolate.  Figures!  Cheers!

NO NO YOU CANT FINISH IT THERE!

thats evil and cruel! it a fantastic chapter but hoestly I WANT MORE!!! perhaps an epilogue at least... Please dont make me beg... fine I'm begging please please please!!!

ok now i need to breath...lol please write more I would be most happy, if you did.

-KarlaMarie 

Great chapter.  I can only imagine the look on Hermione's face when she saw herself in the book *lol*  I can't wait to see what happens.

Noooooooo!  Please don't end it there.  Such a great story.  Sorry to see it end.  Thanks for sharing it with us.

Woohoo! Smooth move Severus.

*sniffle*  Severus, you ginormous idiot, don't just run off!What a dork.

Bravo!!!

It's a cute premise, just watch the tendency to make Snape sound Juvinile he's a man in his 40's not his 20's.  Elen

Is it hot in here or is it just me? *lol*  Great story so far and I'm looking foward to finding out what happens between these two and the book :-)

Okay a few thoughts for you....

When Severus was having the "pleasure" of "viewing" - It's a wonder that a few "droplets" didn't touch the page.  As well as the page didn't try to "absorb" the "taste" of the droplets.  An possibly say something like "very tasty".

Is there a spell that he could attach to Hermione that would  insure the next time she touches the book it would become active and possibly do or say what Severus edition said and did?  Of course it would be up to you as the author of this very fun story to have a wonder in thought and it would activate the spell - speculate he did something - or something else.

waiting for more hopefully soon

p 

autoeroticism fan fic... theres one ive never read. oh, for the chapter where they explore it (im hopin they will) you might wanna put a disclaimer along the lines of "dont try this at home uness you know what ur doing" there are far too many autoerotic deaths/sexual asphyxiations. just fyi. moving on... i loved the line: "coffee. black." so Severus-y (is that a word?). Cant wait to see where this leads!