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artyx80This is my answer to the Potter Place Fall 2006 Prompt Challenge, Subject 19: George and Hermione share a pot of tea at the Burrow and end up discussing relationships (past or present lovers. Late Night Confessions will follow, and maybe more.
Reviewed“Why the heck do you scream like this?” Hermione had not meant to let it sound like that. She had intended to make it a nice but firm question, but what had come out of her mouth seemed to be more of an irritated shout. Now, everyone was looking at her. She tried to calm down a bit and continued in her usual teacher-like voice.
“It’s a library after all.”
“She’s right, you know,” someone said from behind.
Hermione turned around to see the Bulgarian Seeker every girl was salivating about. What was he doing here; shouldn’t he be giving out autographs or showing off his great flying skills? She eyed him suspiciously. It was the third time this week he had appeared in the library and tried to start a conversation with her, for no apparent reason. Although Hermione couldn’t really see why he would talk to her – duh, he was an international Quidditch star – the thought to give him a chance crossed her mind. Why not talk to him; maybe he wasn’t dumb like other Quidditch players?
She noticed with satisfaction that after he spoke, the library had gone quiet, and everybody had returned to his or her silent activities.
“Thank you,” she replied with a little smile.
“You’re welcome,” he said and turned again to his book.
For a few minutes there was complete silence. In fact, it startled Hermione when she heard him speak again, only now he was whispering almost inaudibly.
“With whom do you go to the ball?”
“Nobody. I’m not going.”
“Why not? I cannot imagine that you have anything more important to do.”
“Well, I do!”
“I do not believe you,” He was chuckling now.
“Nobody asked me, okay? What exactly do you want, to rub it in that I don’t have a date for the ball, or what?” Hermione was furious now. Who did he think he was to ask her questions like that?
“Well, then go with me. I don’t have a partner yet, and I think it would be nice not to have someone who doesn’t drool over me all the time, and who is at least a bit intelligent. Of course, you are more than “at least a bit intelligent.” You’re the perfect person. Say yes, please.” He was ranting now; Hermione could clearly see that he was a bit nervous. She decided to give him a chance. She looked up at him since he had stood up during his little speech.
“Let me think about it. I’ll tell you tomorrow, okay?” she told him, packing her things up. Hermione looked into the face of the eighteen-year-old Quidditch player. He merely nodded, and having acknowledged this, she stormed out of the library.
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Hermione sat in her room, a box on her knees. It contained photos, a Bulgarian scarf, and other unpleasant memories that came with the end of a relationship. She stared at it and still couldn’t believe what had happened. Beneath her, on the bed, lay the letter she had received that very morning. She took it and began to read it for what must have been the millionth time.
Dear Hermione,
I’m sorry I didn’t write to you this last month, but I’ve needed a little time for myself to sort out my thoughts and feelings, and I have to tell you something. I think we should stop seeing each other, as you call it in England. It is not that my feelings for you have changed, but I received a letter from one of your friends, which said quite clearly, even if not directly, that he has more than friendly thoughts for you. As I know that you never could return my feelings, I think we can end it at this point, so nobody will be hurt, and you can be happy with him. I also think that it would be best if we didn’t write each other for some time. Goodbye, Hermione, and please don’t be angry with me.
Love, Viktor
Hermione folded the letter and put it in the box, silent tears trickled down her cheeks while she wondered who had sent that blasted letter to Viktor. No, she wasn’t sad, furious would describe her state much better. She closed the box and put it under her bed so she wouldn’t have to see it for a long time. Her little romance with Viktor had lasted a bit more than half a year, and the only thing she regretted was the fact that she had really started to fall in love with him. With a last sigh, Hermione grabbed her cloak and left for a new school year in the magical world.
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“That was my first relationship, with one of the best Quidditch players this world has ever seen. So, what do you think? In my opinion, it’s a nice plot for a soap opera,” Hermione said, looking across from her, directly into the blue eyes of George Weasley.
“What’s a soap opera? No, don’t explain it; I can imagine it is something that involves dramatic stories, crying and other unfortunate events you women seem to enjoy,” he replied with a slight smile on his lips.
“Well, if your story is more interesting, then please, go ahead.”
“Of course, it is far more interesting than yours! Just let me see… my first real relationship was with…” George rubbed his chin while pretending to think.
“Oh, come on. There can’t have been that much!”
“There weren’t. My first relationship was with Angelina.”
“GEORGE WEASLEY. She was your brother’s girl, ever since I’ve known her. How could you steal her from him?” Hermione wasn’t smiling anymore; a look of sheer disbelief was on her face. That didn’t apply to George, who was quite oblivious to her reaction.
“I didn’t steal anything, she seduced me. We were quite drunk when all that happened. Anyway, it didn’t last long, just a few hours or so, as someone told Fred and I had to give her up. You want to hear it or not?”
“Sure, go ahead…” she said, and helping herself to more tea, she listened to George Weasley as he began to reveal the story of his first love...
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14 Reviews | 4.64/10 Average
I'm guessing Ron?
Oh well onto the next chapter.
Just found this on a random story search so I see there is more and will continue after such a promising start. Hmmm.....Hermione and a Hufflepuff?
Nice ending! Good work.
Response from artyx80 (Author of Late Night Confessions)
Thanks :P I wouldn't have made it in time without your help.
excellent.
i love the spin on this. wasn't quite what i was expecting. thank you for that.
more stories please...
Response from artyx80 (Author of Late Night Confessions)
Oh, it's so good to have a fan....thanks for reading, I'm glad you liked it
nice cover. i prolly would have said the same thing she did. hahaha
One… Two… Three!” HEY!!!!!!! Well????
funny chapter poor guy. sounds like ron is up to no good.
waiting for more. p
Response from artyx80 (Author of Late Night Confessions)
Why do you think it's ron? :-D
Response from pickles (Reviewer)
Or is it Harry?
Would like it to be Snape... lol
Response from artyx80 (Author of Late Night Confessions)
Neah, you'll see next(and last btw) chapter who it is. ;-D
Nice Story.
Nice Story.
Poor Fred. I wonder if he didn't still feel something for Angelina.
Well, Viktor's love couldn't have been all that strong if he just took someone's word for it and broke things off. I'd say she's better off without him. :)
Good start to the story. It catches the reader's attention and makes her curious. :)
I liked this. I would like to know what the prompt was, though. And you've made me very curious about hermione marrying a hufflepuff? I could see another chapter, definitely.
Response from artyx80 (Author of Late Night Confessions)
Glad you liked it. As for the second chapter, I know how you feel, I could see one too, but this won't work until I get the corrections from my charming beta :-)
A very promising beginning. Looking forward to reading more!
Response from artyx80 (Author of Late Night Confessions)
Thanks, as soon as I get the corrections back, you'll be able to read more.
NIce set up. I have to say, the ending was slightly unexpected. Nicely done, well written, and I like how you brought about each of their histories here. Thank you for sharing.