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Lomione

Fairfield

5 Reviews   |   5 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )

Drabble/100-Word Potions Under Duress 121 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

A Severus Snape drabble.

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10/10

nagandsev

HA! Lovely, evocative drabble and so exquisitely suggestive, yet direct--lovely work!

Response from Fairfield (Author of Lomione)

Thanks.  It was an attempt to parody that super wordsmith Nabokov.

10/10

mick42

You are a very good wordsmith, thank you for sharing your gift.

Response from Fairfield (Author of Lomione)

Thank you very much.  I'm glad you enjoyed the wordplay.

Response from Fairfield (Author of Lomione)

Thank you very much.  I'm glad you enjoyed the wordplay.

0/10

ladyofthemasque

I like it...  Now, go write some more!~Lotm

Response from Fairfield (Author of Lomione)

Drabble my way through Nabokov? — how very droll.      Was there a precursor to this fey creature, to this — shall we say — witchette?       Yes.  And when?  Oh, about as many years ago as I was older than Hermione.       Count on a pervert for tricksy prose.      In a faraway castle by a lake, over cauldrons steamy as our youth, I met Lily      of the white hands.  Lily white hands that prepared the parts of creatures for      the cauldron, parts magically come to life, parts for the cauldron heated by      our fire and stirred by your humble servant.  And it simmered and glowed      until the human voice of the professor inquired about it, about our potion      hot and bitter … She always wanted a coffee afterwards. Honestly, is this any way for an adult to spend time?

Response from ladyofthemasque (Reviewer)

We don't have to spend it roaming Nabokov's reminiscent id, you know.  We can go romping through a more earthy garden of prose...or should I say, you could.  ('Tis your writing, after all.  Nice Lily vignette, btw.)  I'm just saying--write something else!  Write something more!  Write--something!!*purrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrring*~Lotm

0/10

EverMystique

nice twist to the wording.

Response from Fairfield (Author of Lomione)

Thanks.  I suppse it's the product of a twisted brain.

10/10

amsev

Grin.  Severus and his muse-beetle wing-tips creating frustration in his life!  What a delightful potions ingredient. Wish I had some so I could whip up something to reawaken my slumbering muse.  I enjoy your writing so much!

Response from Fairfield (Author of Lomione)

Wingtips are good for flights of fancy.  If my muse-beetle left, I would get more exercise, fresh air, and sunshine, but I might miss it.Glad you liked the drabble and thanks for reviewing.

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