So far, So very good. I love the characterization and plot just sweeps me away. I especially like ch.13, It was just a little rushed but considering everything it was understandable.

I really do enjoy the insites into other characters minds. Its very interesting, I enjoy everything and couldn't wait to read what was comming next.

 So excillent so far and I can't wait for the next installment!

Marvellous how you catch these character. An exciting plot, too!!

It took long enough!!!!! Moving on...Great chapter... can't wait for more!

Excellent! I can't wait for more! :D

I simply cannot wait for more! Wonderful work!!

I simply cannot wait for more! Spledid work!!

I'm amazed how you can manage this cast of characters and the various threads running with this so well. I particuarly did like the undercurrents and repercussions here for actions both in this story and JKR's own of the Ministry. 

Just so you know, I love this story so much I've rec'd it on a Rec Site, Know-it-Alls--it was one of the first I rec'd there. 

http://mujaji.net/kia/?p=12

And I also intend to nominate it for Best AU on a new Awards site, Quill and Parchment, despite my wanting to avoid doing so for a WIP. That's how highly I think of your story. Sorry about the dead computer, and I hope we'll see a new chapter soon.

http://quilltoparchment.com/indexx.html 

Petunia doesn't want to unpack a sister she might then have to mourn.

And in one line you do the impossible--make Petunia human while keeping her in canon character.

I'd been away from this story for a while, I hadn't seen the notice it had been updated or perhaps was just crazed in RL at the time. (I just got notice Chapter 15 was updated so I have two more to look forward to Yay!) I just want to say that even after the time away I was transported back instantly, and this story is still very much a favorite. Intelligent, insightful--I love your Phineas almost as much as your Remus and your Sirius--and the last two are not usually favs of mine. Nor is slash. But here they are.

Bill is a little genius, isn't he? Harry would've tried to hex the pantts off of them, not escort them to Dumbledore. Brave and intelligent, now that's a good combination. And Lucius is right to be angry. They're endangering his family -- and without his consent too. Polyjuicing as him, and then attacking the Dursleys.

Great job on this chapter. I love how you brought the Dursleys into it and had Petunia getting annoyed at the cat. LOL I also enjoy seeing how she is aware of things in the wizarding world, but not willing to admit them.

There were so many other wonderful things in this chapter. It was so action packed and really moved the plot along nicely. And it was a nice tie in to have Bill there to find Sirius and Remus. LOL I really enjoyed that and can't wait to read the next one. 

Love your story! PLease update quickly.

I am just so damn tickled with your twist on the tale. Reading the story through Moody and Lupin and Black is really rocking my world! I found myself grinning at Lucius and Naccissa’s loving marriage. Then I got annoyed because they should have attended to crying baby Draco and not let a servant comfort him. But then I remembered, they are both narcissists, so it makes perfect sense!

I am most impressed with the depth of Alster's character. At most he is usually a raving 2 dimensional parody. But your Moody has thoughts and feelings that show depth of character, a man working within the system for the truth. I like that.

I love all the talk of blood magic. It reminds me of Wendy Nat's Cloak of Courage. I thought the blood wards potential to go fereal was especially creative of you. Well done!

I am reading this on the recommendation of Harmony_Bites. She has it right this story grabs you from the get go! Sirius is not my favorite character. I tend to ship HG/SS. But its good to try new things. So here I am! Good start!

I like the idea of the tracking spell very much--sounds very much like something the Ministry would do. I'm glad to read that the next chapter is half-way written--I'm looking forward to reading it.

I loved the glimpse you gave us of Peter's thoughts here. This is an instance where the AU really makes more sense to me than canon--giving a reason as to why he wouldn't dare return to his human form.

I'm still loving this. I think much of what makes it so enjoyable are certain turns of phrase here and there that bring things so vividly to life. Just to pick out one:

Forgiveness, apology – all of it is easier while canine, most likely because he can't open his mouth and cock things up further.

I could point out others--the confrontation between Remus and Sirius was wonderful.

I very much like your Remus and how you're pulling all the threads together here. Your portrait of a Kissed Bella thru Remus' eyes was chilling.

Moody is another character I never much liked in canon--I think because I suspected he'd be one that would go over the line--I like your characterization of him here very much--its one of the standouts of this fic.

I wanted to be let out of this story even though I gave it a try. I'm no fan of Sirius Black and I usually don't find AUs appealing but this one has completely sucked me in until I can no longer resist leaving a review or putting it on my favorites list. I think it's obscene a story this good has so few reviews.

Ah, evil cliffie at the end that. Now that means I won't be able to wait to read the next chapter. Great scene between them both--I liked your observation about what the other pair--even Peter--added to their group.

*feels sorry for por Sirius*

Again... holy lord! I am humbled by your writing... mine is so... typical slashy... (with unexpected twisty things sometimes) but still, typical. 

I love how you've gone into the Black Family, ad described the wards, and the flow of magic in and around Grimmauld place when Sirius goes there... it's beautiful.