Together forever, just as it should have been.

The was heartbreakinly wonderful (I don't know if that is a word but I'll use it anyways.)

magnificent!

I have tears in my eyes. This is perfect. Absolutely perfect.

Oohhhh, its so sweet. Sad, but so poignant. Just one night a year for them to return.... do they see each other in the afterlife, one wonders. Wonderful work, a beautiful story.

I looked inside and saw two ghosts, Severus and Miss Granger, dancing in the middle of the floor. The music wasn’t playing, but there was a song in the air, just like… now! There it is! Do you hear it, Minister? It’s ghostly music. They’re coming. Oh, there! Do you see them? I am so glad they found each other. I only wish that they had had more time together…

When I read these words I felt the biggest chill I have ever felt run rampant over me.

This is one of the most moving stories I've read about the love Severus and Hermione had for each other.  You have written with a perfect balance between pathos and joy.

Very Well Done! 
Beth

What a gentle and poignant piece. Great writing. Thankyou.

When I joined TPP in July 2006 I tried to read prior SS/HG stories. I don't know how I missed this one, but I'm glad I found it. I'm now going to see if there are any more of your stories I've missed.

sad and lovely.  thanks

Sad and sweet at the same time. Great work!

wow. i can't believe i missed this...very well written. well done!

nice

Touching tale. LIke the approach.

Loved it, and loved the conversational telling by McGonagall. It was touching to have them in an "endless waltz." I guess being together was their unfinished business, eh?

awwwww It reminds me of Ramos' Unfinished Business in a way. A lovely little tale. Thank you!

that was sad and beautiful at the same time!

Very moving. I simply loved the narrative, it is so rare to find something that hasn't been written these days. Good job, keep it up!Pixie.

Beautiful..

Please write a sequel.  You've left it to our imaginations but I would love to see what your's had in mind.

Thank you,

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Great POV. Very well told. Hauntingly bittersweet. Excellent work!

Very moving and bittersweet.... thank you.

That was so lovely. Haunting, eerie, and beautifully told. Love survives and that gives us all hope, doesn't it?

That was so beautifully heart-wrenching. I like the point of view and the story-telling.   An excellent vehicle to deliver a snapshot in Hogwarts' existence.

Lovely!  Now I'm a little choked up...

Absolutely, heart-wrenchingly, lovely!  :)

I agree with Southern, lovely story.  Very sad but not...