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Potions Under Duress When The Present Turns Into The Future
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When The Present Turns Into The Future

1: What Happened to the Potions Master?

2: The World Has Changed

3: A New Body For An Old Enemy

4: Odd Behavior

5: Little things

6: That Can't Be My Friend

7: Getting Close To Hermione

8: At Last The Truth

9: Understanding

10: And Now We Plan

11: Being Severus For A Day Or Two

12: Hermione And Lucius Move To Take Control

13: The Mind Is An Open Book

14: A Body Is A Terrible Thing To Waste

15: Not Your Average Gnome

16: An Afternoon With He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Gnomed

17: Starting Over

18: Epilogue - The Future Awaits

When The Present Turns Into The Future

ancientgirl

256 Reviews   |   256 Ratings, 0 Likes, 100 Favorites )

Drama General Potions Under Duress 49,689 Words 18 Chapters Complete
Ginevra Weasley Hermione Granger Lucius Malfoy Severus Snape

*Not HBP compliant* Just before the final battle takes place, Severus is hit with a dark curse and he is asleep for ten years. What's happened since he's been asleep?

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Chapters (18)

Chapter 1: What Happened to the Potions Master?

Chapter 2: The World Has Changed

Chapter 3: A New Body For An Old Enemy

Chapter 4: Odd Behavior

Chapter 5: Little things

Chapter 6: That Can't Be My Friend

Chapter 7: Getting Close To Hermione

Chapter 8: At Last The Truth

Chapter 9: Understanding

Chapter 10: And Now We Plan

Chapter 11: Being Severus For A Day Or Two

Chapter 12: Hermione And Lucius Move To Take Control

Chapter 13: The Mind Is An Open Book

Chapter 14: A Body Is A Terrible Thing To Waste

Chapter 15: Not Your Average Gnome

Chapter 16: An Afternoon With He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Gnomed

Chapter 17: Starting Over

Chapter 18: Epilogue - The Future Awaits


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Just another SS/HG shipper wanting to make the world a Snapey place.

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Reviews for When The Present Turns Into The Future

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10/10

pickles

oh that was a hoot.  facial cream.... 

i wish everyone could have an opportunity to destroy a room and have it cleaned out to make new.

everything was good.  wonder what filch has in mind for him.  

Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

Oh if only magic were real.  I can't tell you how many times I've wanted to do that to my room.I've got an idea or two what Filch will do, but I'll have to see how it works.Thanks for keeping up with this.

0/10

HogwartsHoney

facial cream!!  Oh that's fab!

I enjoyed Hermione and Severus' redecorating the room together - that surely went a long way in cementing their relationship! Can't wait for more! 

Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

LOL, can you imagine him wanking off a thestral?  Ick!I thought the redorating would be nice, since they did it together.I've got one more chapter to go with this and that's it.

0/10

savvyjune

woohoo...welcome back ancientgirl...i am so glad to see a review...i loved this chapter...the lemons were very sweet...yummy in fact...i'll take lemons and snape anyhow...lol...hagrid having knome voldemort wanking thestrals for semen to sell at the apothecary...lol...too bloody funny girl...i loved it...you take care and keep up the good work...sorry that this story is going to end...but i know you will do another one just as good or even better...

Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

Hey there!  I'm glad you liked the chapter and the lemons.  LOL, I couldn't help having Hagrid have just a little more fun with Voldegnome.It's going to be sad to see it end but it's all played out here so may as well end it and move on to the next one.I do have an idea in my head that I'd like to do next.It's probably going to be an elaboration of the short story I just did for Lucius, Choosing a different path.I still will make it a SS/HG fic, but it will also focus on Lucius too.  As soon as I figure out an interesting plot I'll begin to write on it.Thanks for being supportive of this story though.  I appreciate you having taken the time to read this and review it.

10/10

Sorceress_Sarah

Hahahahahahahahahaha lol pmsl! Very funny!~Sarah

Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

Glad you enjoyed.

10/10

Mrs_D_Radcliffe

NOOOOOO!!! It can't be the epilogue, I DON'T WANT THIS TO BE THE END!!!Crying Loved this chapter by the way! Satisfied  

Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

LOL, glad you liked the chapter.  I think though I've taken this as far as I can.  But I do have a small idea for another fic I may start soon.

0/10

Bravmiki

You are so crazy.  I think I almost feel sorry for Voldemort.  Wading in sh**.   (Laughing like a 1st grader at snot jokes).

Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

LOL, I had to do that to him.  Hell, I was even starting to feel sorry for him.

10/10

Bravmiki

I hate to say it...but I love Voldemort.  He's a great antagonist.  I just love to hate him.  Poor Severus.  How will he get his body back?  Looking forward to reading the rest.  Just had to get a few thoughts outalong the way.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

Oh thanks!  Voldemort really is a great antagonist, and a great character to play off of.  Thanks for taking the time to read this.

0/10

Donavon

Brilliant chapters.  Loved the comedy of Lord Gnome and I thought has I was reading he was going to get the easy way out. With Hagrid being so kind to all animals.  But that was so cruel and funny.The scene in the bedroom with Hermione's anger and the Love from Severus and high respect from the Malfoy elf. Perfect chapters has I have already said. Best wishes.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

LOL, Hagrids kindness will only go so far in Voldegnome's case.  I'm glad it gave you a laugh.I thought Hermione would never want to set foot back in that bedroom, so this was a good way for her to get out her frustrations and together with Severus make their own new sactuary together.  Dari gave them a blank canvas, so now its just a matter of them filling it up.The next chapter will be mostly them since they were so sparse in this one.

0/10

vaega

ah....the "evil" side of Hagrid...not really. :D this is great. i can't wait to see what else you do this poor Lord Gnome!

wind to thy wings,

Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

Yeah, Hagrid is just giving Voldegnome a small bit of payback.I'll have more up next week.Thanks for reading.

0/10

GinnyW

Yes, I agree... a much needed chapter. Things seems to be nicely set up for the next Voldemort encounter. I look forward to the next chapter! :D  ~Ginny

Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

Thanks!  I wanted to get all of this out of the way so that I didn't have to answer any questions later on.  Now I can get down to the business of Voldemort.

0/10

GinnyW

What a horrible revelation. I'm not sure which is worse, feeling completely and utterly betrayed and humiliated by your boyfriend via a rape and the horrid things he said or discovering that it was actually Voldemort that raped you. I think, like Hermione, I'd prefer it to be Voldemort. Though, you're right, it will be hard for her to get over... she does love Snape. Poor girl!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

Yeah, if you think about it that's not something easily gotten over.  That's why I wanted to keep them apart after for a while.  Knowing that it wasn't Severus saying those things helped, but it was still his body.  She will always associate that experience with him.Thanks for reading.

10/10

pickles

thank you for a new chapter. it was enlightening.  waiting for more. p

Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

Thanks.  I wanted to get some planning out of the way.  I'm hoping to begin a new chapter tomorrow.

10/10

MagicAlly

Voldemort is going to have to be very sneaky indeed to hood wink anyone again.  Why am I worried?Great writing as always.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

Well I think he's the one who might get hoodwinked a bit now.  But I've got a few things planned.  He's going to get pissed very soon.Thanks for reading. 

10/10

savvyjune

yes i did enjoy this chapter immensly...i am dying for the action to start...you have me so curious as to how they are going to expel voldemort from severus' body without severus feeling any ill effects...i like the fact that hermione is putting what happened as voldy and not sev...it will take time for her to separate the two...this story is so good...i hope harry doesn't get too snoopy...i hope leaves hermione to her secrets...enough people knows now...i have to say it again...i love this story...keep up the good work...take care...

Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

Thanks, I'm glad you liked the chapter.  I'm going to get things rolling.  I needed this chapter to sort of bridge the past ones. I wanted Hermione to begin to I guess condition herself to thinking it wasn't actually Severus.  The more she has time away from Severus the more she will realize that and the more she will hate Voldemort for it.  As for Harry, I don't plan on him ever knowing what really happened.  We all need our secrets.  The ones we love don't have to know every thing about us or every thought we have.  Harry will respect her privacy.I'm hoping to have a new chapter up some time next week.  I'll begin working on it soon.Thanks for your comments and taking the time to read this.

10/10

DayLightDancer

Haha I thought I was crying during those scene's but then I remembered my sinuses have been acting up for the past three days and was like oh durrr... Cant wait for upcoming chapters!!!  

Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

Thanks for reading.  I should have a new chapter up some time next week.

0/10

harrypotterfan2005

what a cute name draco and harry for there son.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

I almost named him James, but so many stories already do that.  I figured something different would be nice.  Of course if they get a second baby, which they may you know he'll have to be named Salazar.

Response from harrypotterfan2005 (Reviewer)

yes it will

9/10

HogwartsHoney

Very good chapter, and a welcome respite from the angst and violence.  I'm eager to know what the Order do about Voldy, and I'm also interested whether Hermione will ever tell Severus about what Voldy did to her.  Waiting anxiously for the next!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

Thanks.  I felt I needed something to sort of bridge the last few chapters.  I'll be moving things along a bit after this.  Hermoine will have an opportunity to talk to Severus about what happened soon.Thanks for keeping up with this.

10/10

Donavon

Another brilliant chapter.  You bridged the story perfectly.  I just hope Hermione is there to see the last of Voldemort leave Severus's body.  Best wishes.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

Thank you.  While there is nothing real about what is happening as we know, I'm trying to make their reactions as real as possible based on their situation.  I was pretty satisfied with the last two chapters.I'm hoping to have chapter 10 done by this weekend.Thanks for keeping up with this.

10/10

lovingsnape

gods this story is fantastic!! I love it!!! :) I was so worried for HG when Voldybutt took over Severus and raped her *sob* I am glad you didn't send her straight back to him, and I cannot wait for the next chapter!!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

Thank you.  I'm glad you like it so much.  I couldn't see her running back to Severus, even though she knew the truth.  It just doesn't make sense.  She's got to get to a point where she can separate the action of one soul from the body of another.

0/10

Anijade

well done it's hard to evaluate how someone will react to a situation like that. I think you caputured it accurately

Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

Thanks.  I looked at it from the standpoint that Hermione is a logical person.  Knowing that it was not actually Severus controlling his body and the actions then I believe she would find it in her heart to forgive him.  But at the same time she is aware that even though his mind wasn't controlling it, she's got to look at him at some point and see her attacker.

0/10

Sorceress_Sarah

OMG!!! That's so sad! I'm crying   At least it wasn't really Severus, still, I guess it's good that our Severus has worked it all out....~ Sarah x

Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

Sorry I made you cry, but something drastic needed to happen for the truth to come out.  Things will begin to get sorted out soon.Thanks for reading.

10/10

pickles

thank you for a new chapter.  yes i believe you did it well with hermione.  one would think what is wrong with her if she jumps back in his bed so quickly. 

waiting for more p 

Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

Thanks.  I tried to look at it from her POV as well as my reaction.  It just made sense.I hope to have more either by the end of the week or the weekend.  I started chapter 10 yesterday.

Response from pickles (Reviewer)

woo hoo

8/10

HogwartsHoney

Actually, I think that Hermione's reaction is pretty correct for her.  On the one hand she's physically and emotionally battered, but intellectually she knows the truth.  I wouldn't imagine that she'd recover quickly, but their love for each other and her strength of character should help her greatly. Very good chappie... anxiously awaiting the next.

Oh. love Lucius, by the way, when he stepped back from Severus!  Fabulous reaction!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

I thought this would be her natural reaction too.  Hermione strikes me as a very level headed person.  She obviously thinks things through, so no reason for her not to do so here as well.LOL, and as for Lucius reaction, hell that's how I'd react too.Thanks for keeping up with this and for your comments.

0/10

savvyjune

its me again...what a great chapter...i can understand the way hermione reacted to the news that it was voldemort and not severus that did this to her...she has feelings for severus, they had just made love and then her turns into this brutal force and hurts her emotionally and physically in the worse possible way it is going to be hard to take...i hope she can separate the actions of voldemort from the feelings she had for severus...i so love this chapter and this story...i am so looking forward to the next chapter...cannot wait to see that bugger get his ass kicked...until next update...keep up the good work...take care...

Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

Hi.  I'm glad you liked the chapter.  I was hoping I would be able to convey what the felt so that readers would understand why I wrote it this way.  LOL, Volde won't exactly have his ass kicked, but he will get his in the end.Thanks for reading and taking the time to review.  I appreciate your comments.

10/10

mugglemomof3

Its getting very angsty. I really feel bad for them. That was a great analogy with Ginny's experiences with Tom. I just love your writing. More pretty please!!!!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

I think these last few chapters might be about as angsty as I want to get.  As I told another reviewer, I feel the need for some humor.  I'm going to try to work some in soon.  I think Ginny is the one person who will really be able to help Hermione see that Severus is just as much a victim here as she is. Thank you for your wonderful compliment.  I'm glad you enjoy reading my writing.I'll have more soon.  I started the next chapter yesterday.

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