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Potions Under Duress When The Present Turns Into The Future
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When The Present Turns Into The Future

1: What Happened to the Potions Master?

2: The World Has Changed

3: A New Body For An Old Enemy

4: Odd Behavior

5: Little things

6: That Can't Be My Friend

7: Getting Close To Hermione

8: At Last The Truth

9: Understanding

10: And Now We Plan

11: Being Severus For A Day Or Two

12: Hermione And Lucius Move To Take Control

13: The Mind Is An Open Book

14: A Body Is A Terrible Thing To Waste

15: Not Your Average Gnome

16: An Afternoon With He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Gnomed

17: Starting Over

18: Epilogue - The Future Awaits

When The Present Turns Into The Future

ancientgirl

256 Reviews   |   256 Ratings, 0 Likes, 100 Favorites )

Drama General Potions Under Duress 49,689 Words 18 Chapters Complete
Ginevra Weasley Hermione Granger Lucius Malfoy Severus Snape

*Not HBP compliant* Just before the final battle takes place, Severus is hit with a dark curse and he is asleep for ten years. What's happened since he's been asleep?

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Chapters (18)

Chapter 1: What Happened to the Potions Master?

Chapter 2: The World Has Changed

Chapter 3: A New Body For An Old Enemy

Chapter 4: Odd Behavior

Chapter 5: Little things

Chapter 6: That Can't Be My Friend

Chapter 7: Getting Close To Hermione

Chapter 8: At Last The Truth

Chapter 9: Understanding

Chapter 10: And Now We Plan

Chapter 11: Being Severus For A Day Or Two

Chapter 12: Hermione And Lucius Move To Take Control

Chapter 13: The Mind Is An Open Book

Chapter 14: A Body Is A Terrible Thing To Waste

Chapter 15: Not Your Average Gnome

Chapter 16: An Afternoon With He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Gnomed

Chapter 17: Starting Over

Chapter 18: Epilogue - The Future Awaits


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Just another SS/HG shipper wanting to make the world a Snapey place.

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Reviews for When The Present Turns Into The Future

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10/10

pickles

I think you did well with this chapter.  I'm glad the truth is finally out.  Now how to conteract the situation without voldy knowing.

emergency meeting for the order of the phoenix.

thank you

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Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

Thanks, I'm glad you liked the chapter.  I know it wasn't my usual, but it seemed to work here.  The truth is out and more people will be finding out, so everyone will be aware.I'm working on the next chapter and hope to finish it fairly soon.  Thanks for keeping up with this.

Response from pickles (Reviewer)

excellent news.  thank you.

0/10

Donavon

Very powerful writing ancientgirl.  The scene was hard to read, I am sure twice has hard to write.  The story is darker than usual.  However, is still brilliant.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

I didn't enjoy writing that happening to poor Hermione.  This is darker than my usual stories, but this is actually the kind of work I prefer writing along with my humor.  But everything is out now and from here on out they are going to work on dealing with getting Voldemort out of Severus.  I'm feeling the need to add a bit of humor just to bring things up a bit.  So the next chapter might have a few light moments.Thank you for keeping up with this.

10/10

snapesoulmate

Wow!!  I hope Hermione can forgive him for what happened, even if it wasn't reallt him.  I can't wait for more...

Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

The fact that it wasn't really him will certainly be helpful in her forgiving him.  I should have more some time this week.Thanks for reading.

0/10

harrypotterfan2005

yay now voldy going to get.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

They've figured him out at least, so they will be prepared for him.

Response from harrypotterfan2005 (Reviewer)

at least they can make a potion or use a spell to get voldermort out of severus. and get rid of sould once and for all i was thinking along the lines of a soul eating potion.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

The only problem is that potion might get Severus' soul too.  However, I've got something interesting in store for old Voldy.  LOL.

10/10

mugglemomof3

Ancientgirl, I hated what you had to do to Hermione, but I understand and I feel you did it well. I can't wait to see how they handle this new revelation and how poor Hemione handles it. Very interesting. Please update soon.The waiting is killing me!!!!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

I didn't want to do it, but I needed something dramatic and I had to make them all aware that they are in a dangerous situation.  Severus finally knows that he's not alone in his body, and so does Lucius.  I'm working on and off today on the next chapter.  I hope to be done some time this coming with that new chapter.  I can now begin to involve a few more people so things should move along pretty well.  I also don't plan on inflicting any further physical pain to Hermione.  Thanks for your comment.

0/10

HogwartsHoney

Oh firk !  Double firk ! Hermione sure got the bad end of things, didn't she? Poor thing, and I hope she'll be able to find a way to forgive Severus once she learns the truth.

I felt the horrorrrrrrrrrrr when Severus finally realized who's inside him, but at least Lucius is there to help him. Stresss !! Pls update soon ! 

Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

Yeah, poor Hermione did get the raw end of the deal.  Severus will have to make it up to her in a big way.I'm glad you felt his horror, because I was trying to get that feeling.  Imagine finally realizing the person you had spent most of your life trying to get rid of, is living inside of your body.I've started the next chapter.  Hopefully I'll have it ready to post some time this week.Thanks for keeping up with this.

9/10

septentrion

well, Hermione will probably have a hard time to forgive Severus, even if she knows the truth but things are rarely rational in these kind of matters. But now they'll be able to work on it.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

Hermione will have a hard time.  Not so much in forgiving Sevreus, but its not going to be easy looking at the face of the man who raped her, even though it wasn't really him doing it.  I don't want to get too angsty here, but I also don't think it would make any sense for her to just go running into his arms when she sees him either.It's all out in the open now.  At least its going to be soon.Thanks for reading this and reviewing.

10/10

savvyjune

oh god i love this story...what a scary chapter...but like you said in your a/n something had to happen for them to find out...well i so love this story...now i want to see how hermione takes this and how they are going to get rid of old voldemort...how long do you expect this fic to be...i so love it...keep up the good work...

Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

Thank you.  I'm very happy you are enjoying this.  While I can't see Hermione being suddenly okay with what happened, I think the fact that it wasn't actually Severus performing the rape will help in avoiding any hatred she might feel for Severus.  I've got an idea of how I want Voldemort to be taken out of Severus' body, but I just have to figure out how and when to work it all in.I'm hoping not to make this a super long story.  Certainly I'd like it to be less than 15 or 20 chapters long.  I appreciate you taking the time to review.

10/10

MagicAlly

That was awesome.  How on earth are they going to get rid of Voldemort without hurting Severus?

Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

Thanks.  I was afraid I'd turn some people off with that chapter, but it was important.  I've got a plan to get Volde out, I've also got a few more things to figure out too.  But at least I've got an idea of how I want to move ahead.

0/10

harrypotterfan2005

kill that ass Voldemort.

Response from harrypotterfan2005 (Reviewer)

you are getting gbetter at writer smut i told you could do it.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

LOL, thanks!  I was telling someone else, the odd thing about this is I wrote it at work!  I'm thinking maybe being somewhere else helped.  Hell, I should write all my smut at work.

Response from harrypotterfan2005 (Reviewer)

good for you don't get caught writering it

0/10

Sorceress_Sarah

Woot!!!! Hi, I'm reviewing again! I love your story, I'm so happy now, yey! Hermione stopped Voldy coming through! *does a strange dance thing*I hope Lucius does work out what's going on, he could help Hermione to help Severus, although she's helped him unknowingly... lolCan't wait till the next chapter!~ Sarah x

Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

Yeah, they were able to keep him back this time.  I did manage to get the next chapter written out.  Boy, what you can accomplish when you get bored at work.I might even be able to post it this weekend.Thanks for reading.

0/10

HogwartsHoney

*Whooooot* Poor man, it's been fifteen years indeed!  I'm interested to see how angry Voldy is going to twist things around!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

Yeah, he beat my record for sure.  I'm writing the next chapter.  Things are slow here at the office, so I'm hoping that I can have it up by the beginning of next week.

0/10

GinnyW

:) Very nice. Things don't sound all that good for Hermione by now. Will Dumbledore and Lucius warn her or work together to solve this problem?

Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

Hmm...all I can say is your question will be answered in the next chapter.  As far as how it looks for Hermione, no things don't look good for her at all.Thanks for keeping up with this. 

9/10

septentrion

I knew it ! their love is keeping Voldemort at bay

Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

Just for a little while.  I've started writing the next chapter.  Hopefully it will be ready to post by next week.Thanks for reading and reviewing.

10/10

DayLightDancer

Hopefully Severus stays near Hermione more for now on -.-Haha Voldie-butt's stuck na na na na.... hmmmCant wait for the next chapters!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

They have made a connection so they will be around each other more often.  Voldy will figure out how to get out very soon though.

10/10

pickles

good smut.

it seems the way to defeat oldy moldy is to have multple orgasms...  

well an lets not forget about love.  will moldy take over while he's sleeping or will he be so blissful that moldy won't make it through..  

i know lalala i can't hear you. lalalalala 

Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

Well if mulitple orgasms doesn't work it would be fun trying.I'm glad you liked the smut.  I was actually happy this time with the way it came out.I wrote that here at work too.  LOL, I guess I should write all of my smut at work.

Response from pickles (Reviewer)

how about old moldy finally feeling what love is and it just poof vanishes him.  too easy i guess.  glad everyone is picking up the difference in him.

waiting for more.  it's off to a playdate for the kids then taking hubby is late lunch at work.

have a wonderful week. 

10/10

pickles

is the malfoy couple going to confide in each other about said incident.  will dumbledore be contacted.  oh hopefully soon.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

LALALALALALLA!  I'm not saying

10/10

pickles

oh please don't voldy pop in during an intimate moment...

Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

I'm not saying a word.

10/10

pickles

That's good Luc keep a close eye on him..

Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

Yeah, he's got to.

10/10

pickles

Lucious is sensing the dark one.  does their marks have anything to do with it.  will percy's child play into this story somehow.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

No, I'm not going to have much about him, other than a mention here or there.Lucius is sensing something very off about Severus and the mark will serve to alert him even more.

10/10

pickles

Oh no!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

Yes!

10/10

pickles

excellent beginning

Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

Thanks, I hope you continue to enjoy the rest.

0/10

savvyjune

update update update....i so love this story...i can't wait to see how you solve this...i hope it doesn't get too angsty for our couple...take care...

Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

I'm hoping to start a new chapter at some point today.  If all goes as planned I should have something to post by the beginning of next week.Thank for reading.  I'm glad you are enjoying this.  I don't want this to get too angsty, but it's going to have some drama that's for sure.

10/10

mick42

I suppose that the dark mark would give Lucius a heads up.

10/10

mick42

SHIT!!! I did not see that coming, I hope Severus is still in there somewhere. 

Response from ancientgirl (Author of When The Present Turns Into The Future)

That's good! lol

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