The Automaton

whitesilence

5 Reviews | 5 Ratings, 0 Likes, 2 Favorites )

Angst Poetry/Prose Alternate Universe Potions Under Duress 258 Words 1 Chapter Complete

Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Not everyone is as they seem...

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Chapters (1)

Chapter 1: The Automaton

About whitesilence

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whitesilence

Member Since 2005 | 15 Stories | Favorited by 4 | 22 Reviews Written | 26 Review Responses

Is marinating herself in Nine Inch Nails...

I often post both working and finished versions of poems on my livejournal. So see it first and dial in at: http://silentpheonix.livejournal.com

Author Website

http://burntpheonix.deviantart.com

Also Archived At

Ashwinder, ff.net

Reviews for The Automaton

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10/10

braye27

Lovely. I read the "less ambiguous version" at Ashwinder, and it did confirm what I thought the meaning of this wonderful prose/poem to be.

It is simply beautiful. Thank you.
Beth

10/10

braye27

Lovely. I read the "less ambiguous version" at Ashwinder, and it did confirm what I thought the meaning of this wonderful prose/poem to be.

It is simply beautiful. Thank you.
Beth

10/10

notsosaintly

So sad ... so full of a lonely boy's hopes and dreams, the boy inside the man.

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

Excellent work. I quite like the ambigus style. Keeps me guessing. Not guessing, but you know what I mean. LOL

Response from whitesilence (Author of The Automaton)

I guess I know what you're guessing but I'm not going to guess that what you are guessing is what I guessed. :-D

10/10

Lyndie578

Very poignant. Of course, very sad, but it shows a depth of character that we HG/SS fans hopes he has. Good Job!

Response from whitesilence (Author of The Automaton)

Thank you, you are the first person to correctly interpret the character telling the story.

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