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Idiot's Repose Chapter 2: Two
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Idiot's Repose

Chapter 2 of 9

PlaidPooka

He'd Avada Kadavra himself if he could move. An Epilogue, what epilogue, in which Severus Snape is not killed by Nagini.

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Chapter Two

Something.

Something.

Voices?

Someone is coming. I hear voices approaching. In my confusion, I try to leap to my feet, but my body remains motionless and out of my control. I was dozing, I think. Or unconscious. Can one fall into a state of unconsciousness when one is comatose? I don't know. I feel frozen and weak. The rhythm of my slowed heartbeat has gone skitterish and unsteady.

I hear voices approaching. Who?

"I can't believe they dumped him out here, he's a hero."

Potter. With that demanding and slightly whinging tone, it could be no one else.

"Everyone we lost are heroes, Harry. They gave everything they had to give to fight for the Light. There's no room inside...too much of the castle has been damaged."

Granger. A thoughtful sentiment, but for once I could use a little special treatment. If they are indeed talking about their nasty old potions professor.

"She's right, Harry. They're beyond caring what happens to them now. The git's in good company. Fred's out here too."

Damn. Of all the blasted Weasleys, I liked the twins the best. Clever and devious, the both of them. How many have we lost? Was Voldemort among the fallen? Did we win?

"Here he is, Harry."

Miss Granger's voice is directly above me. This will be my last chance. I have to move something. If I could even open my eyes the girl will notice.

"They didn't even cover him up. They just dumped him here."

Come on, old man, open your eyes.

"We'll find something to cover him, Harry." Weasley's voice was closer now. "In the castle. A tapestry or something."

That would be warmer, at least, but it wouldn't stop the inevitable. I must make them realize that I'm alive.

"Harry, Ron, give me some more light!"

The girl's voice is brusque and demanding. Immediately I can hear the swoosh of magic and see a bright light behind my closed eyelids. This is my last chance. I struggle with every ounce of my fading strength to open my eyes.

It's no use. My eyelids remain glued shut.

"What is it, Hermione?"

I'm too despondent to even care which of the boys are speaking.

"Look at his eyes. There's movement...like he's dreaming."

"Is it a reflex thing?" Trust Potter to use such specific grammar. "I mean, I've heard that dead bodies can belch and pass wind, and all sorts of things."

"I don't think so."

Warm fingers press against the cold flesh of my neck.

"I don't feel a pulse." Potter again. It's his horrid muggle upbringing getting in the way of his logic. With magical issues such as the Drought of the Living Death, checking for a pulse has never been very useful amongst wizards. I don't blame Potter, he cannot help his unfortunate upbringing, but I do hope that Weasley sets him straight.

"That isn't good enough, Harry. Not with the sort of magical mishaps a wizard can get into." It's Miss Granger that corrects him. As annoying as I've always found her in class, even I admit she's a clever baggage.

"Should we get Madame Pomfrey?"

Yes, Weasley. You absolutely should get Pomfrey. Now.

"I'd hate to disturb her over nothing." Damn it, Miss Granger. Go disturb her! "Give me a moment."

More spellwork, but the trio standing above me continue to be uncertain. If Filius couldn't tell I was alive, I'm not sure what I expect from these students. It's doubtful they would know any of the more precise medical spells which search out signs of life. My best hope is that Miss Granger will be clever enough to fetch Poppy. If Flitwick had done that in the first place, I wouldn't be lying here.

"Sonorus Vitae."

A tingle of magic flows over my body. Damn, but Granger is a clever witch. This isn't a normal medical spell. I'd bet my life that the girl made it up on the spot.

Not that my life is worth much at the moment.

It seems to take forever, but after around thirty seconds pass an audible lub dub of my failing heartbeat is amplified for all to hear.

"G-go," Miss Granger snaps with an uncharacteristic stammer. "Go get madam Pomfrey. Hurry."

"Is he..."

Now is not the time to falter, Mr. Potter. Go get the nurse!

"He's alive, but I don't know for how long. Go on!"

Heavy footsteps rush away from us and I feel a blessed heat as Miss Granger casts a warming charm over me. She follows with a shielding charm, and then a whoosh of warm air to dry my rain soaked form. I begin to feel more myself. I can't move, but I feel less like I'm hovering on the edge of death.

I feel as if I am warm again for the first time in several decades. My hand is lifted, and small fingers wrap around my own. The girl is holding my hand. She did that back in the shrieking shack, when she thought I was dying. At that point, she must have thought me still a traitor, but she held my hand. I knew she was clever, but I hadn't known she was kind.

It is hardly surprising. At any given time there are around three hundred students at Hogwarts. Students and professors rarely socialize aside from the odd ball. As a head of house, I knew many of my Slytherins fairly well, but the students in other houses I only knew from class. Miss Granger had few friends and spent much of her free time on schoolwork. She'd seemed more like an encyclopedia than a person.

Not that I can complain about that at the moment. Miss Granger's intelligence seems to be all that kept me from dying of exposure in a pile of corpses.

The hand holding mine squeezes briefly.

"Don't worry, Professor. We'll get you sorted soon. So many dead, I don't think I could bear losing one more person. It's over now. Voldemort's dead. We won, thanks to you."

Thank you, Miss Granger. At least I know the bastard is dead. For good this time, surely. Now, no matter what happens to me, I can at last be at peace.

I drift off, to sleep or unconsciousness, I'm not certain which.

I awaken to a veritable din of noise. There's no way of telling how much time has passed. Near me, someone is retching over and over. A sound that, had I the ability to move, would tempt me to join in. Farther away a man keeps shouting.

"It's here! The monster is here at last!"

I can hear weeping, banging, and a buzz of conversation. The sounds echo, as if I am in a large area filled with people.

The Great Hall. Hadn't someone mentioned that the wounded were in the Great Hall because the infirmary had been destroyed? By the sound of things, there were a large number of wounded. How much time has passed? I would have thought the wounded would have been moved to St. Mungo's by now. Certainly the school and the Order had been on their own during the battle, but the Ministry was always more than willing to jump in and help once the danger was passed in an effort to grab some of the glory.

Perhaps with the fall of Voldemort, the Ministry was too busy sorting themselves out and rousting the Death Eaters from their ranks. Even so, the healers should have come by their own accord.

"Miss Granger, how is he doing? Any change?"

"No, Madam Pomfrey. His vitals have grown stronger, but he remains unresponsive."

"The next wave from St. Mungo's should arrive shortly. There's nothing more I can do for the poor man, I think he'd better go with the next group."

That explains it. There were enough wounded that they hadn't been able to transport them all at once. The people in most immediate need would have been taken first.

If I could move, I would drag myself out of here. Potter's word on my loyalties would be enough to sway most in the Order, but the Wizengamot won't be so forgiving. Once I'm in St Mungo's it will be a matter of time before they find me. I'll be tried and judged while I cannot speak one word in my defense.

Not that I have much to say in my defense.

"Are you sure I have to?"

It's Potter's voice, but I've lost track of the conversation around me.

"You're the only one who can. It will happen soon, I'm certain of it."

Miss Granger, but I remain clueless about the conversation.

"All right. Yeah, all right."

"You remember what I told you?"

"We went over it twenty times, Hermione. I may be thick, but I'm not that thick."

"You aren't thick, Harry. You might have a terrible tendency to rush into things, but you aren't stupid."

"I don't know. I feel like I'm always wrong about everything."

"Nonsense. All you have to remember is which tact to use based on who they send. You can do this."

"I'm not certain I can."

"Harry, you're tired is all. Get some rest. I'll wake you when it's time."

My former students fall silent. While I've known for some time that Potter is not quite the arrogant prat his father was, I'm surprised the boy seems to have so little sense of self worth. Potter was so stubborn and self assured in my classes, I assumed he was that way at all times. We truly do not know our students well.

Merlin, but I do not want to be taken to St. Mungo's. There's nothing I can do about it. I haven't managed to so much as open my eyes. I'm too exhausted to worry and my throat is so dry it seems a far more serious problem than the judgment of the thrice damned Wizengamot.

Despite the noise and chaos surrounding me in the Great Hall, I slip back into unconsciousness.

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A/N

Thanks to everyone for reading, and for the kind comments. I'm having a lot of fun writing this. I'm not sure how long it will end up, maybe 6-8 chapters.

I have a new Kindle Scout Campaign for a paranormal mystery named Wyrd House. If you go to Amazon[dot]KindleScout[dot]com and nominate it, you get a free advance copy if it's selected for publication. If it's not selected, I'll self publish, so you'll get a chance to read it either way. I think my fanfic readers will enjoy it. It's contemporary, and has magic and romance as well as a mystery to solve. All the things I enjoy writing best! Thanks to those who have already supported. It means a lot to me.

And you can visit me at my blog where I share writing news and ramble on about writing by googling Julianne Q Johnson.

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Latest 25 Reviews for Idiot's Repose

40 Reviews  |  6.38/10 Average

10/10

kass42

I love how you write this pair!

0/10

Clara Songthrush

Very nice! (for the record, Poppy's infirmary and Severus' infirmity are two different things...)

10/10

loreen77

Yippee, just as fun the second time around.  But sadly it's an hour past my bedtime and I got to work tomorrow. Thank you for sharing your wonderful story that's so great that I stayed up late reading it again!!

10/10

loreen77

 I've already read this over at Ashwinder.  But was so happy to see it posted here also  that I decided to enjoy it a second time and leave you more happy reviews. The idea of being trapped frozen inside one's own body is truly horrifying. It's the stuff of nightmares as far as I'm concerned. 

7/10

ladyljd

Well that was nice.  Abrupt but nice.  Sorry to see you giving up on Potterverse story telling.  Good luck with your writing.

10/10

Sampdoria

Such a wonderful story. Well plotted and well written as always:-)

10/10

mick42

A lovely ending, thank you.

10/10

mikimoto

It is nice to see everyone with a hope and a future... and a bit of peace and calm.  Thanks so much for sharing your imagination with us.

0/10

Severus00

I am enjoying this story a lot. Thank you for sharing it 

10/10

HBAR

Been reading this while under the weather, so lack of reviews for other chapters has nothing to do with the story and everything to do with me being tired and lazy.  I love that her potion worked and that they have a budding relationship forming.  I do think the direct approach is best with these two.  If there are too many misunderstandings, you would need a lot more than a couple chapters to resolve this thing.  Not that I'm complaining about more chapters ...

10/10

HBAR

Poor Severus!  Being in the dark and not being able to communicate must be maddening.  Still, I hope it works out well in the end.

10/10

HBAR

Oh no!  If he is buried alive this would surely be a shorter story, right?  Right?!  Sigh.  Could someone just get Poppy so Severus (and I) can rest easier?  Glad to see another new story from you!

0/10

Javoher

This is a fantastic little story! I do hope this will have a happy ending - one in which Severus goes utterly insane with infrequent flashes of lucidity and dies in eighty years would be grim. But I have hope. He is strong and clever.

I'm happy to see a story from you again. You have always been one of my favorite writers and I have several of yours in my favorites. Thank you!

10/10

Emerald Eyes and Moonstones

Great story so far!! Oh, I was wondering if you meant to put 'infirmity' where you used "infirmary'? I think maybe you're auto correct changrd the word on you.Can't wait to read the rest of this!!!

0/10

mistresscosmos

Dear sweet Merlin,  the mental image of Shape listening to a romance novel is epic! 

0/10

lockhart36

Really enjoying this so far. So glad to have you posting again. 

10/10

mick42

Sorry you are not feeling the best at the moment, I hope you feel better soon. { I wish the flowers were real } Another wonderful chapter look forward to more soon.

10/10

countrymouse

Dear Plaid Pooka:Indeed, NEVER say Never!  I do hope that---as this iteration of Severus changed his mind about Hermione, you will change your mind about writing again (and again) in the Potterverse!  Do you know what you've done for me?  I dragged myself here tonight (after many years' absence) thorougly disheartened and discouraged by life in general, and ran across a notice you'd posted a new tale.   Began reading.  My dear--by the end of your story, I felt as rejuvenated as your Severus after Hermione's doses of antidote.  YOUR stories ARE an "antidote"--to life's stresses and depressors--by lifting us just for a few moments OUT of it all into the magic of your world.  PLEASE---NEVER say Never!  And THANK YOU for this little uplifting tale--I needed it, so much!  What a great Christmas gift (as I just discovered it here at Christmas).  You're a love!

Author's Response: Hi Countrymouse!  Well, honestly I should never say never, because I totally wrote another story after this one, lol!  I'm so happy my story could cheer you up during a hard time.  A writer can't ask for anything better than that.  Smooches!  Pook

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TheCopperDragon2004

Aww, yea for a happy ending for our poor potions master! He definitely moved faster than I figured he would Lol.
I know you said you'll likely not be writing anymore potterverse fics, but I'd love it if you considered adding to this (or a short sequel) in the future! I'd love to hear all about his potions for George, and maybe even see a friendship develop there as well. Thank you for sharing your story with us!

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TheCopperDragon2004

Yay!! He's finally able to tell Potter to sod off, or Neville to stop blathering about his plant, or tell Hermione her loves the voices she uses when she reads to him. ❤

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TheCopperDragon2004

Hmm.. I'm left with the ongoing curiosity I what, exactly, is  Hermione's big project? I wonder if they managed to find a journal of Snape's (potions notes, not a personal journal) that described what he'd previously made and taken that's landed him in this predicament?

0/10

TheCopperDragon2004

Poor Snape, falling slowly for Hermione but unable to do a damn thing about it. Or anything else.
Hope he's brought out of it soon!

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TheCopperDragon2004

Yes!! I've been looking for this storey for ages! I started reading it a good while ago then lost it apparently. All I could remember was Snape lying, dying, on a pile of bodies.
This chapter stuck in my head for a very long time. I can't wait to finally see what happens to our hero!

10/10

the dragon and the rose

I absolutely loved this one, what a great story! 

0/10

kimjo2

Pookamypooka!!  Loved it!  Thanks so much

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