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Night of the Nargles (complete)
Chapter 2 of 5
PlaidPookaDecades after the war, a special Auror taskforce is ready to take down the last five Death Eaters as they meet in a old forest in the middle of nowhere. Before the mission, Hermione learns of a danger no one had anticipated. If she doesn't warn Harry in time, everyone in the forest will die, including a tall, black-robed figure no one has seen since the end of the war.
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"Harry," Hermione said, her tone of voice getting a bit demanding, "I haven't gotten through the entire passage yet, but it's clear that there's a stern warning about magical creatures in Frogspawn Wood. It's tied to the lunar cycle in conjunction with the aligning of several planets. That exact alignment is happening tonight. You have to call off the mission."
"Call it off? After decades of wild goose chases and misinformation, we are finally given a chance to round up the last of the Death Eaters and you want me to call it off? I'm sorry, Hermione, but this mission is going to happen. We're going into the wood in four hours, and I'm not calling it off when you don't even know what the threat is."
"I'm working on it. The warnings are dire, Harry. They speak about Goblins being eaten alive."
"I understand. Even so, that book is older than the hills, you said so yourself. For all we know, the threat was some creature that died off long ago. Maybe it was a dragon that got taken to the reserve. You said that the only creature there in any numbers was probably Bowtruckles, and they don't eat people."
"What happens if the warning isn't wrong? You're going into that wood, into a dampening field, and you won't even be able to use magic if this threat manifests. Is it worth losing your entire team? Why can't you turn the dampening field on and wait for the Death Eaters to leave the wood? You can catch them without even stepping foot inside."
"No. I won't risk those bastards getting away. We'll leave a team of Aurors outside the field, but we're going in tonight. Unless you can give me some concrete evidence before the mission starts, I'm not changing the plan."
"You're so stubborn!"
"Look who's talking!"
The discussion went downhill from there, and Hermione soon fled Harry's office to return to her research. She had to find out more from the dusty old tome and she was running out of time.
Three hours and one headache later, Hermione wasn't any closer to understanding what the book was talking about. It was clear that the tome spoke of a rare creature that lived in clusters of extended family. Normally shy and harmless, the creatures lived to be over three hundred years old, and rarely procreated. However, certain astrological events encouraged in them a sort of mating frenzy. It was after this frenzy that the new generations of the creature were born. The book also warned that during the mating frenzy the creatures became ravenous, and would swarm over any living creature they found and strip it to the bones if not fought off. The description was much like that of a school of hungry piranhas, or a swarm of locusts that ate meat instead of plants.
If these creatures existed, the time for the mating frenzy was tonight. Under the light of a blue moon, while Jupiter, Venus, and Mars were visible in the sky in the shape of a triangle, the creatures would lose their little minds and go all crazy for protein.
Her main problem was that, for the life of her, Hermione could find no translation for the Goblin word "Sulmas-Dhaub." There was a literal translation of the phrase, "aggressive agony," which seemed apt under the circumstances, but it was clear that this was their name for the creature itself. Hermione had no clue what the name of the creature was in English. If it even existed. Perhaps Harry was right. She could be worried over a magical animal that went extinct decades ago.
The only other clue was yet another untranslatable phrase about what the creatures normally ate when they weren't attacking things in a mating frenzy. "Lavozagh Nagransham." The closest she could get to the meaning of that phrase was "tree-eater," and that didn't make any sense. One might call a giraffe a tree eater, but the book was clearly talking about a plant. What kind of plant could eat giant old trees?
Wait a minute. She'd seen it. When she visited the wood to look for signs of magic. She'd peered up into the tree canopy, trying to get a glimpse of what the magical creature detector had spotted. Standing at the foot of a massive old oak, Hermione had peered through its branches and seen the gigantic clumps of mistletoe hanging in the tree. While they would never consume the entire tree, they were parasitic. They bored into the branches and sucked water and nutrients from the host plant. Tree eaters.
In all her life, she'd only heard of one creature that ate mistletoe.
Her cozy flat had no fireplace. Hermione spun on the spot and apparated.
Stumbling only briefly on the pink and purple welcome mat she landed on, Hermione turned to the front door of the charming yellow and blue house and knocked loudly. In a moment, it opened.
"Hermione!" Luna Lovegood Scamander smiled at her warmly and waved her inside the cheerfully painted house. "Was I expecting you? Did we have an appointment? I swear, I can't remember anything these days."
Luna hadn't changed much over the years. She remained thin and ethereal, her voice retained its dreamy sing-song quality, and she still wrote articles for The Quibbler. Luna was the editor of the paper, now her father had retired. Over the years, Hermione had grown very fond of the odd woman, and she reminded herself that she should visit Luna more often. Her friend had seemed so shocked to find Hermione on her doorstep.
"No, we didn't have an appointment." Hermione gave her friend a tight hug. "I was working on some Ministry business and I need your help."
"How lovely! Come in, sit down, and I'll get us a cuppa."
"Is Rolf home?"
"Oh, no, not at the moment. He's gone over to Tullaroan to help with an infestation. Chizpurfles."
"What a shame. I hope he does a fumigation on himself before he comes home."
"I won't let him in until he does!"
Once the tea was poured, Hermione got down to business.
"Luna, what can you tell me about Nargles?"
"Oh, they are sweet little shy things. They live in mistletoe bunches, and they move from clump to clump so that they don't eat all of the leaves from any one plant."
"Have you ever seen one?"
"I did actually. Back when we were in school, I used to sneak out to go walking in the Forbidden Forest."
"Really?" Hermione was shocked the gentle Ravenclaw had broken the rules to go to the forest. "Wasn't it dangerous?"
"No, not really. I never went into the forest very far. Around the edges it's quite pretty. The more dangerous denizens stayed deeper in the wood. I think they were afraid of Hagrid."
"Probably afraid he'd want to keep them for a pet."
They had a good laugh before Luna continued. If felt wonderful. Since her divorce, Hermione had spent too much time with books and not enough with her friends.
"And you saw a Nargle if the Forbidden Forest," Hermione prompted when their laughter had died down.
"I did. I climbed this big oak tree to look for one. I wanted to make a realistic sketch for my dad to put in the paper. I had to search a few mistletoe clumps before I found one. It was a funny little thing. Rather like a Bowtruckle, with long limbs and fingers, only they're green and Bowtruckles look like brown bark."
"Did you touch it?"
"Oh, Merlin, no. They're shy, and they aren't aggressive, but they have very sharp teeth. Nargles have been known to nip people if they are messed with. I didn't want to get bitten. I'd have had a hard time explaining that to Madam Pomfrey!"
"I suppose so. Luna, have you ever read or heard anything of Nargles attacking people?"
"No. I can't say that I have. They are very shy and very rare. Most wizards don't even believe they exist. There's nothing in the lore that suggests they would hurt anyone."
Hermione stayed for a short chat, and then excused herself to return to her work. Time was running out, and she had one more task to complete before she decided if Nargles were a threat to the mission. It seemed too fantastical to possibly be true.
An astronomy book and several Arithmancy spells later, and Hermione had the last piece of the puzzle. The configuration of moon and planets happening that night had not occurred in recent memory. The last time had been over three hundred years ago. Back then, there were very few written accounts of natural happenings in the wizarding world. It was quite possible that Nargles had swarmed over three hundred years ago, and no written account of the event had survived. The information may have been spread by word-of-mouth and fallen by the wayside when the event didn't repeat itself.
The written history of the Goblins went back much further that human records. She had no choice but to accept the tome's warning at face value. Looking at the clock, she realized the mission was starting. She was out of time. Throwing a dark cloak over her muggle t-shirt and jeans, she rushed into the flat's tiny kitchen and grabbed a butcher knife. A quick transfiguration of a kitchen towel, and she had a sheathe for the impromptu weapon. Her wand was in its pocket, but if the dampeners had already been set, it would be useless. She wasn't certain how useful the knife would be against a swarm of Nargles, but it was better than nothing. Sliding the sheathe through her belt, she turned on her heel and apparated.
On the edge of Frogspawn Wood, Hermione saw an Auror nearby with one of the spheres that created the dampening field. There were ten spheres in all, circling the forest, every one aimed in toward the wood. The plan had been simple. Wait until after the secret Death Eater meeting was scheduled to begin, so that the Death Eaters could apparate to their meeting point, and then turn on the field so they couldn't apparate away.
"Excuse me, Spanton is it?"
"Yes, Ms. Granger, how can I help you?"
"Has the dampening field been engaged?"
"Yes, Ma'am."
"You have to turn it off."
"I'm afraid I can't do that, Ms. Granger. Order's from Mr. Potter himself. No matter what happens, we are not to turn off the dampening field."
"But there's a problem Harry doesn't know about. I have to find the taskforce and get them out of the woods before moonrise. I can't do that without magic."
"I'm sorry, Ma'am, but orders are orders."
Turning from the stubborn Auror, Hermione checked the sky. The sun was already fading behind the hills to the west. Her calculations earlier had pinpointed moonrise at less than an hour after sunset. There wasn't much time to warn the others. If they were to get any warning at all, she would have to do it herself. She must find Harry. Only he could give the order to drop the dampening field.
Double checking her wand and her knife, Hermione strode into the forest.
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A/N
A big, ginormous thank you to everyone reading so far, and also thank you for the kind comments. It's nice to be a part of the fandom again. I'd said last time that I would post a chapter every few days, but I seem to be too impatient. I think I'd rather do one a day.
I will add a short pitch for my novel, Descending. It's nearing the end of its Kindle Scout campaign. My campaign ends 12/15/2016. If you enjoy my writing, and want a chance at a free e-book of Descending, stop by Kindle Scout check it out, and nominate it if you like what you see. You can find it in the romance section. If it's chosen for publication, everyone who nominates it gets a free advance copy. Free books! Nothing wrong with that.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Night of the Nargles (complete)
43 Reviews | 7.23/10 Average
This was wonderful. Thank you so much!
Response from PlaidPooka (Author of Night of the Nargles (complete))
Glad you enjoyed it!
Yay! No one was eaten. This ended perfectly. But, you know, if you wanted to give us a teensy glimpse into the future, I certainly would read it with gusto.
Response from PlaidPooka (Author of Night of the Nargles (complete))
Thanks for reading!
Surely after this gentle reunion, they won't end as a Nargle dinner, but never say never. Off to find out!
Yikes, those Nargles are scary. I know it is Hermione we're talking about, but I had sort of expected her translation to be wrong. Guess not. What a way to be saved though. Let the mating begin!
Oh, this chapter felt way too short! I love Luna (and the idea of her breaking the rules). If I were Hermione, I'd probably gone with bee keeper garb and a can of raid, but you know, she may posses some mad knife skills. Or she was just in a hurry. I'm going with mad knife skills. :)
Hey, welcome back and congrats on your original work. I am completely intrigued by this start, so rather than sit here and chat, I must move on to chapter two. I would be remiss if I didn't say that I'm giggling at the fact that Hermione is out to find two things by the end of this chapter: handcuffs and a date.
I thought they were going to be goners for a minute there. Glad they aren't! Thanks for sharing your story, I do hope that you'll continue and do more!
I'm about a week too late to help with your book, but I really do hope you'll continue writing in the potter world! I was hoping it would be Snape killing off the death eaters, and I wasn't disappointed. Now, lets go see who's screaming and why!
Yay! Snape is here to save the day! Now what? Lol.
I really like this so far! Hermione's"accidental" choice of SPOON was great, and I love that some assumed vigilante is dropping dead death eaters at their feet. I'm thinking I can guess who that might be! Also, I've got the feeling already that her book and that forest can have nothing good in store..
Loved it! Happy to see a new story from you - thank you.
Response from PlaidPooka (Author of Night of the Nargles (complete))
Happy to have a new story! Thanks for reading!
What a lovely endding, Severus has the honor he has always desevered, and Hermione. Hermione has her freedom, is still friends with Harry and Ron, and has Severus, and hope for a bright future. And last but not least memories of Bob in a forrest long ago, { I sobed my heart out }. Thank you so much for returning, a big bunch of carrots for the plot Bunnys.
Response from PlaidPooka (Author of Night of the Nargles (complete))
So glad that you enjoyed it! Thanks for the kind words! :)
So many questions, who is outside? how will they rescue them, without getting eaten themselves? if it is a deatheater will they even try, on to the next chapter to find out.
Response from PlaidPooka (Author of Night of the Nargles (complete))
Who could it be? :)
Well! Severus and Hermione trapped in a cabin in the woods all alone, what good can come of this? You have no idea how much I am enjoying reading one of your storys again.
Response from PlaidPooka (Author of Night of the Nargles (complete))
I had big fun writing a story again! :)
Well, that was fun. :-) I actually haven't read any Potter fiction in years, but it was great to get back to it for a little while. Good luck with your Kindle nomination!
Response from PlaidPooka (Author of Night of the Nargles (complete))
Thanks for reading and thanks for the luck! :)
Nibbled to death by Nargles, what a horrible way to go.
Response from PlaidPooka (Author of Night of the Nargles (complete))
I know they were barely mentioned in the books, but I never could get the Nargles out of my mind.
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I got your shutout via the yahoo group and finally managed to catch up today. So happy, to see more fanfic from you with my beloved pairing. Can't wait to read the moment they finally meet. First chapter is exciting, as it should be (and I think I know who gifted those remaining deatheaters...)This fic is the first SSHG fic I am reading since Jan 14th, 2016. 2016 has been a terrible year...Christmas is slowly creeping in and with it the prospect of a better year, though Alan will be terribly missed forever.
Response from PlaidPooka (Author of Night of the Nargles (complete))
I loved Alan Rickman in all his roles. I still find it hard to accept he's gone. 2016 was a f**cker. I'm looking forward to 2017!Thanks for the kind words!
Welcome back oh great one , you have been sorely missed, you have lost none of your brilliance in your long absence. Looking forward to reading the rest of this very intriguing story.
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Awwww! You're sweet! Thank you for reading, it's good to be back. :)
Awww. Gentle Snape.
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I'm a sucker for snarky but not a complete wanker Snape myself.
That was both terrifying, funny and adorable, which i completely associate with you. Lovely!
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Yay! That's what I like to write best! :)
It's good to see you back with a lovely little tale.
Response from PlaidPooka (Author of Night of the Nargles (complete))
Thank you Shiv! Nice to see you too!
Great finale. The unicorn makes an appearance without being lunch! Just got to assume the DEs were not so lucky.
Good writing. You evoked that feel of the zombies relentlessly trying to get in and eat the humans inside without using real zombies.
Considering Severus did not have much of an afterplan, I think he came out of the night well ahead: a place to live and a person who cares. All he needs now is to find something to do.
Thanks for foraying back into this universe. I really enjoyed your story.
Response from PlaidPooka (Author of Night of the Nargles (complete))
Thank you so much Mikiomoto for all of your kind reviews. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :)
Hmm. As I suspected. Luring folks to be eaten in a once-in-three-hundred-years phenomenon is SO Severus. He has no moral qualms about it. He has done all kinds of planning and preparation (just as Hermione has done). I can just see the death eaters apparating in to a place where they are the main menu item. Like a roah motel: they check in but don't check out.
I do wonder a bit about the unicorn-sized creature Hermione found on her look-see. Was that Severus or is a unicorn going to get eaten (wouldn't want that ever since falling in love with Bob).
Fun story. Glad he was more prepared than her or else they would both be sitting there, bleeding, clutching a kitchen knife.
Response from PlaidPooka (Author of Night of the Nargles (complete))
Ha! They check in but don't check out! Made me laugh out loud. I think of Severus as an always prepared sort of fellow. I imagine it makes him mad when his plans go awry.
Response from mikimoto (Reviewer)
Yes. And now a dilemma. Keep the door closed and the screamer gets eaten or open the door and all three get eaten. I can't tell you how amusing I find it that you tapped nargles as being the bad guy. So funny.